Kittens and Snakes
carley934 Reviews | 4.82/10 (34 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
It starts with a kitten and ends with a snake.
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carley9
Member Since 2006 | 8 Stories | Favorited by 9 | 47 Reviews Written | 94 Review Responses
I'm a 20-something-year-old wanna-be author. Unfortunately real life doesn't leave much time for anything. I'm married with two dogs and a cat and work helping the mentally disabled.
I joined the Harry Potter fandom a few years ago and it's pretty addictive!
Reviews for Kittens and Snakes
You did an excellent job on this prompt. What a cute story. You have made everyone fit perfectly. Well done.
LOL I love that. What a wonderful way to use the prompt. Sweet and touching but not overly so.
Aww that was very cute. I really like your take on this prompt. Very nicely done.
*applause* <- I actually did that for real.That was so sweet! I love the names you picked for everybody, I want to name my next cat Phoebe now. Ten minutes ago it would have been Luna, so see what you've done to me. :D
Cute and unique interpretation of the challenge!
lovely...full of fluffy goodness but not cloying. thanks so much
Made me smile for a very long time. Well done.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :)
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :)
I don't believe that I missed this one till I was reading the fic recs in Potter Place! I though I'd read every single challenge fic, but I somehow missed this!Thank you for sharing this with us. WHat a sweet picture of family life, (a much better future than that mean ol' JKR gave SS) Snape deserves darling children who ask lots of questions. This is a precious and enjoyable tale.
I do hope the sequel won't include the kitten being eaten by the snake. XDWell done!
This is really cute. Almost speechless from the cute.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :)
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :)
Lovely. I really can see Severus and Hermione's daughters having such different personalities.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :)
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :)
Very nice! I love that Hermione's and Snape's children reflect their own personalities - well done
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you!
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you!
This is so nice!!
Very nice! And you used the prompt very well, I thought.Thanks for sharing.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you for reviewing! :)
Awwwww! So sweet! And I love their names.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :) I happen to be partial to the names myself :)
Oh, well done. This was very cute :)
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :)
Very nice. What color(s) is the snake? I just wondered, since you specify the color of the kitten.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Green with a yellow belly, kind of like the little garter snakes. :)And thank you for the review :)
Ooh, that was cute. Just what I needed to read after a long day 
Response from carley9 (Reviewer)
Thank you :) Nice to know that I made someone's day :)
This was so cute! I love how you were able to bring out both of the adults in the children. Good job!
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you! And I wasn't really thinking of how the twins mirror qualities in the adults. More like how they mirrored different facets of me as a child. :)
Cute. Although I think Sev and Hermione have quite a few similarities as well. ;-)
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
*grins* I do too. The thing is I happened to place a little of myself in both Rowena and Freyja.
I loved it. Hermione and Severus having twin girls with as different personality as they have is brilliant!
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
I have a set of cousins whose personalities are as different as night and day. They don't even look like they're related. :)
Oh, how sweet... that certainly brought a smile to my face. :) I didn't predicted the twins, so it's nice to be surprised. And I like the way you using the differences between Severus and Hermione and imposed it in their twins also. Very good! :)
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
That was the story that popped into my head as I saw the prompt. If you go back and look, there's also mention of an older brother as well. :)
Response from zyra (Reviewer)
Yes, I saw you mentioned an older brother and the first thing I thought was, 'Ooh, how sweet, they're one big happy family!', lol. But what does that has anything to do with the prompt? The mention of older brother I mean ... *scratches head*
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
He was just thrown in for the whiner :) But after the contest, I might do another story to go with this, so I sort of added him for future use :)
Response from zyra (Reviewer)
Oh, okay. :)Ooh, a sequel! Good luck with it! :)
This is really sweet. The twins are delightful. It'd be a cute story to see their first day at Hogwarts.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Maybe once the contest is over. I'm trying to squeeze out another story for another prompt :)
Such a cute story! I loved the idea of Severus and Hermione having twins with such different personalities.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you! :)I have cousins that are twins and they are as different as night and day.