Choices of the Heart
luvscharlie9 Reviews | 6.67/10 (9 Ratings, 0 Likes, 26 Favorites )
Ron has returned to resume his place with the trio. Harry has forgiven him, but Hermione needs a bit more convincing. AU as to what happens later that night, though it certainly could have happened.
Start ReadingChapters (1)
About luvscharlie
Author
luvscharlie
Member Since 2008 | 6 Stories | Favorited by 8 | 0 Reviews Written | 40 Review Responses
33 year old single mom w/ a serious Weasley obsession, particularly Charlie Weasley. Perfect imagination accredited beta reader.
I've only been writing since February 2008, having been a late entry into the Harry Potter Universe. Now, I wonder what I did w/ my time before.
Reviews for Choices of the Heart
Congratulations for a lovely fic!
Sigh. That warmed my heart. Thank you for writing it!
You know, for a RW/HG it was surprisingly good. Actually, that's not fair. The writing is really good, it's just the pairing that screws it up for me. I can't really take a RW/HG seriously, sad to say. That said, I think you did a very good job. Good writing, well crafted.
Response from luvscharlie (Author of Choices of the Heart)
Thank you, I think. I adore writing Ron, so I guess it boggles my mind that others don't find him as charming as I do. Which is, of course, personal preference. I appreciate the comments on my writing style. That means a lot. It means even more that you read the story even though you disliked the pairing.
Response from luvscharlie (Author of Choices of the Heart)
Thank you, I think. I adore writing Ron, so I guess it boggles my mind that others don't find him as charming as I do. Which is, of course, personal preference. I appreciate the comments on my writing style. That means a lot. It means even more that you read the story even though you disliked the pairing.
well written first time. I ususally don't favor Ron / Hermione , but it is canon after all.
Response from luvscharlie (Author of Choices of the Heart)
Thank you. First time sex is never easy to write. This story garnered me a lot of flames for writing Ron as other than a virgin. It's nice to see him as the more knowledgeable of the two for once.
Response from luvscharlie (Author of Choices of the Heart)
Thank you. First time sex is never easy to write. This story garnered me a lot of flames for writing Ron as other than a virgin. It's nice to see him as the more knowledgeable of the two for once.
This is a brilliant addition to The Silver Doe chapter. I understand what you mean when you say there are situations that sometimes deserve further development. You took an excellent advantge of one of those.
Response from luvscharlie (Author of Choices of the Heart)
Thank you. I definitely think there are many places in these stories that require further development. I think we might have gotten more if these books were not labeled children's books. (Shame really)
Response from luvscharlie (Author of Choices of the Heart)
Thank you. I definitely think there are many places in these stories that require further development. I think we might have gotten more if these books were not labeled children's books. (Shame really)
Oh, wow. . . this is such an amazing little story. . .The part where Hermione was crying was so powerful. . . how she told him she had run after him, had begged and pleaded and stood in the rain trying to find him. . . *sniff*This was a wonderful read. Thank you so much for writing it and letting everyone read it!~Katie
Response from luvscharlie (Author of Choices of the Heart)
I'm glad you liked it. Ron is my favorite character to write (even though my heart remains w/ Charlie). I'm glad you enjoyed the story and appreciate your letting me know what you thought. We writers feed on the comments.
Response from luvscharlie (Author of Choices of the Heart)
I'm glad you liked it. Ron is my favorite character to write (even though my heart remains w/ Charlie). I'm glad you enjoyed the story and appreciate your letting me know what you thought. We writers feed on the comments.
"I wish there were words I could saythere probably are, and you probably know them all, but I don't."
That is so very Ron, and in the very best of ways.
I'm an SS/HG shipper but this was hot and lovely. Very real, the progression from anger to lovemaking. You didn't hit a wrong beat. Lovely.
Response from luvscharlie (Author of Choices of the Heart)
Wow! Thank you. This is one of those chapters in DH that most disappointed me. I needed more from his return. Thanks to fanfiction, I just made it myself.
Response from luvscharlie (Author of Choices of the Heart)
Wow! Thank you. This is one of those chapters in DH that most disappointed me. I needed more from his return. Thanks to fanfiction, I just made it myself.
Wow! That was an amazing story! I could sooo see that in the book (if J. K. included such intimate scenes, of course). Wonderfully marvelous job!! Keep up the great work. ~Jen
Response from luvscharlie (Author of Choices of the Heart)
Thank you. I appreciate the review. It was a pleasure to write.
Response from luvscharlie (Author of Choices of the Heart)
Thank you. I appreciate the review. It was a pleasure to write.
This is just brilliant! Really I'm out of words, I love Ron/Hermione fics, and this is now one of my favorites.