hogwarts was def his 'real' eygpt.  too bad jkr didn't 'save' him earlier.

Snakeface xDPoor Draco...but he seems rather nicer (ok, less evil) than canon Draco.

I don't know how old is the author but he already shows great writing talent. Keep it up Little Man.

This young man has a wonderful way wiht words. Well done.

Good Job, lad! Surprizingly good for one so young!

Great drabble Little Man.  I like the banana, very nutritious!

Dear Little Man, I don't blame Draco for preferring Egypt to the Dark Lord. I am curious about one thing... What does the goblet refill itself with?~

That is so sweet that he wrote you a drabble. :) I like it--it has a bit of humour, and I think he captured Draco well.

Very nice, Little Man. I am impressed. This is adult-quality writing and I hope you will keep up the good work.

A banana and a water goblet? Well, at least he is better off than those facing old snakeface.  As others have said you should continue this on.Irish

Haha. The perfect punishment!

Wonderful job! I agree with NSS, I would love to see what else happens to Draco.

Congratulations, Little Man, on your first drabble.This is marvelous.  I loved the banana and the refilling goblet, and there was something very touching about Draco's desire to remain in hostile Egypt rather than return to face the Dark Lord.I look forward to reading more of your work.

Great job, Little Man!  You have a very vivid imagination and a great way of telling a story--and I want to hear more!  Draco could use your help in keeping away from the snakeface.  Bravo!

This is a wonderful drabble!  I am really impressed. If I didn't know how old you were, I'd think an adult had written it.  Excellent job!You should write more drabble chapters for it, I think.  Let your mind just imagine how he is feeling, what he is doing—does he ever eat the banana? maybe it's poisonous and he gets sick from it—and does he want to give up or try to escape?  Just dream about it for a while.  See if you feel like writing more for it.  You write so well, people would enjoy it.

He did well. :)

I found this so fascinating that I read it through three times. I sincerely hope that when Little Man is old enough, he gets his own account. I believe we have a wonderful up-and-coming author here!

delightful. i liked that he was sent on his mission with nothing but a banana and a magical goblet. *giggles* paints a vivid picture of how unpleasant it is - and yet, better than facing old snakeface!

this is so awesome, and for someone to be able to write like this at 10 years old, bodes very well for the future! keep writing, keep rocking!