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The Godfather Chapter 34: Epilogue
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The Godfather

1: The Visit

2: The Christening

3: Happy Holidays?

4: Christmas Eve

5: Christmas Eve continued

6: Christmas morning

7: Ending the Holiday Spirit

8: The Potion Prince's Petty Payback

9: Gone for Good

10: Much Ado about Something

11: Birthday Party

12: Return to Hogwarts

13: Alumni Ball

14: A Dance

15: Denial

16: Scales are falling

17: Babysitting and other Catastrophes

18: Havoc

19: Hope and Despair

20: Waiting

21: Relief

22: Profound Communication

23: The Dance

24: Relapse

25: Aftermath

26: A Pensieve Memory

27: Career Advice

28: Family Affairs

29: Where are you?

30: Reciprocating

31: Earthquake

32: Constant Dripping...

33: Housewarming

34: Epilogue

Epilogue

The Godfather

Chapter 34 of 34

Muggline

Obviously, this is where the story comes to an end.

Drama Angst Romance General Alternate Universe Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 85,367 Words 34 Chapters Complete
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This is a story by the great Marisol, a German FF writer whose stories can be found at http://www.harrypotter-xperts.de/fanfiction?author=17037

Translated from German into English by Muggline

Disclaimer: Neither Marisol nor Muggline are making any money out of this. Everything you recognise belongs to J.K. Rowling.

A/N: That's it, folks – the very last chapter of a story that fascinated me right from the start. I am aware that there are flashier and saucier stories galore, but I loved this one exactly because it seemed to stand out in its subtlety and excruciatingly slow pace. I, Muggline, would like to thank Marisol for her wonderful original that has been part of my life for quite a while now, as well as to ladyinthecloak and Professor M McGonagall for their unwavering patience and much appreciated help as beta-readers.

The Godfather – Chapter 34 – Epilogue

The first of September had been unusually warm. Years later, Hermione would still remember that she had worn a t-shirt while sitting across from the open window next to Severus, waiting for the well-known sound of Albus's owl, Vince, arriving. It was near midnight until when the barred owl* finally landed softly on the sill and dropped the letter from his beak to Severus's hand.

They would both bite their tongues before admitting it, but they had waited for its arrival in near painful excitement. The last months and weeks before Albus's first year at Hogwarts had seen a heated debate about whether he would be in Gryffindor or Slytherin.

Of course, all parties involved pretended to not care at all which house he would be in when the boy was present – Harry and Ginny in particular, but as soon as he was not there, they all tried to trump one another with arguments why Al should be in one house or the other.

Severus did not move an inch from his conviction that his godson would be a Slytherin, and deep inside, Hermione also feared that this would be the outcome, even though she hoped that Al would be in Gryffindor. She had spent hours telling him about the common room, the parties they had had after a victory of the Gryffindor Quidditch team, the many advantages of being a Gryffindor.

"Are you ready to finally get the proof that he is in Slytherin?" Severus asked her with a mocking grin.

"Never! Harry Potter's son? You must be kidding!" She made a grab for the letter, but he was faster and ripped it open.

Hermione bent towards him, and they started reading together.

Dear Severus,

I hope Vince will not collapse underway and the letter will reach you very quickly.

I am at Hogwarts now! During the whole train ride, I asked myself which house I might be in. James kept pulling my leg, telling me that I would probably get put into Beakgrunt, which was the fifth house for those nobody else wants, but that was nonsense, of course.

The Great Hall is even larger than you told me! When Professor McGonagall got the Sorting Hat, I almost didn't see anything, there were so many students. And suddenly, it was my turn. Everybody started awkwardly when she called my name, but then I was on the stool in no time and had the hat on my head. I can tell you, it took an eternity to make a decision!

It said (its voice was inside my head!) that I was fussing too much over how I could please everybody and that I was very clever and talented.

Hermione felt a wave of guilt roll over her when she read what the Sorting Hat had said. She had seen how pale Al had been when he had boarded the train, and she suddenly realised how much pressure they had all put on him. The poor boy must have felt sheer panic over the fact that he would disappoint either his parents and her or his beloved godfather, no matter whether he got into Gryffindor or Slytherin.

And then it said that I would be best suited to Ravenclaw! I hope you are not too disappointed that I did not make it into Slytherin. I know how happy you would have been... but to be honest, I am glad I am a Ravenclaw now. Maybe you can find it in you to be happy for me... at least a little bit? I don't want you, Mom, Dad and Hermione to have arguments because of me.

Severus lowered the letter, and in one perfectly synchonised movement, he and Hermione looked up at each other. "Ravenclaw," they both said in unison. In all those months, nobody had ever considered Ravenclaw as an option. Not once. They both resumed reading, flabbergasted.

My schedule says that my first lesson tomorrow morning will be Potions. I can hardly wait to tell the others that you are my godfather! They will certainly look surprised! I bet they don't know half as much about Potions as I do.

Please say hi to Hermione and write back soon.

Again, Severus lowered the letter.

"When you write him," Hermione finally said after a while, "don't forget to tell him that I am very happy for him."

"Ravenclaw," was all Severus said.

She took his hand. "He is a very clever boy, Severus. And he is so sensitive. He must have realised how everybody made a fuss about which house he would be in, and he did not want to disappoint anybody. Neither his parents nor you."

Severus said nothing for quite a while. Then, very softly and doubtfully, "Do you think a Ravenclaw can be the best student in Potions?"

"I think that not even his parents will be as proud as you when he earns glory for the house of Ravenclaw for the first time in many, many years." She grinned.

When Severus did not answer, she got up slowly. "I guess I'd better go home. It's late, and I have to be at work rather early tomorrow."

"Stay," he said, holding her hand. As she always did when he said this, she did not even try to turn him down.

Later, when she woke up to the sound of a quill scratching on parchment, she opened her eyes and saw him sitting on the bed, a candle floating in the air before him. Softly, she touched his shoulder and said, " Be proud of him."

He gave her hand a little squeeze and said, "I have always been, and I always will be."

Then he put the letter aside, blew out the candle and lay down next to her. After a while, he wrapped his arms around her and buried his face in her hair.

THE END

If you don't know what a barred owl is, you can read about it here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barred_Owl

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828 Reviews  |  7.15/10 Average

6/10

deedeebug95

Well the story was great. The epilogue not so much it felt rushed and unfinished, I would never be in a relationship with that kind of limbo...are they a couple or are they friends with benifits?

10/10

deedeebug95

Finally!!!!

10/10

deedeebug95

This chapter brought tears to my eyes!

10/10

deedeebug95

This is a wonderful chapter!!

10/10

deedeebug95

VERY powerful chapter!!
very well written,thank you!

0/10

Montara

Well, I loved all the story except the epilogue. I mean, after all she went trough they just share a bed once in a while? They're not married, they don't have children or a life together even though they love each other? Come on, it's been 11 years from Al's birth, things should have moved on!

It's like he keeps her in a limbo, not exactly in or out of his life. I know he's affraid of commitment but 11 years and she still lives somewhere else...I'm so disapointed because I thought things will be ok!!!

Great story but, as I've said, the epilogue disapointed me very much. :(

0/10

ilsa

Oh this was brilliant - in particular your characterisation of Snape was brilliant.  He was so absolutely true to what I think canon Snape must be like in his insecurity and depression and self-doubt. And Hermione - full of passion and determination to slowly chip away at his layers - they are very happy together at the end in their quiet way and it suits them, I think.

Beautifully written and crafted - I was very moved by Hermione's emotions - you wrote the emotional aspect of this fic so well.

This fic is great on so many levels - I loved the rather original angle of Snape as Albus' godfather - really liked seeing more of Harry and Ginny in this fic too!

And I applaud all the work that has gone into this - the translation was extremely good and I would not have known it was originally written in German if you did not put it at the top of the story!

0/10

ilsa

This chapter was very powerful and disturbing at the same time. I quite detest Snape for behaving as he did - using Legilimency on Hermione like that is a completely disproportionate reaction to her 'eavesdropping' on him and quite unforgiveable.  I am glad that Hermione has 'lost any respect' for him and am interested to see where you will take this story next!!

0/10

RachyW

This fic was just so lovely! Severus' characterisation was perfect! 

10/10

Bellaluna38

I don't think I've read a FF yet that captured the essence of Snape so perfectly. Wonderful story and thank you for translating it.

0/10

seruchan21

That was the most awesome harry potter fanfiction Ive ever read. I mean, I dont even LIKE snape that much, and a pairing between him and Hermione made me raise eyebrows, but that was REALLY good.

9/10

mekareami

A very enjoyable story. Thank you to both the original author as well as a very fine translator. Honest there were only a couple of spots in the entire story where it showed at all.

I hope you both continue working in the genre/translating non english fanfics. I am sure there are a pleathora of wonderful stories us silly english only speakers are missing.

10/10

Nessa

Lovely ending. I will assume that both Hermione and Severus were very happy together.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Oh yes, even though it's probably not the "princess and prince married, had loads of children and lived happily ever after" kind of thing.

10/10

mimmom

YAY!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Thanks!

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mimmom

Whoa.  Earthquake is right.  I'm a bit tearful at the moment.  I'm so glad you translated this Muggline and so glad Marisol wrote it.  I'd love to read more of her stuff.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I can understand that. This was her longest (and in my opinion also her best) fanfiction, though. As my RL is getting real busy at the moment, I will probably not do as much leisure translation work as I used to (and I still have 90 chapters of "Loving the Enemy" to consider...).

10/10

joyfulheart

What a great story, it never disappointed. The ending was so sweet. While they still had separate living spaces I got the sense that they spend more time together than separate.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Yes, that's what I think, too. But with those two, it would certainly be good if every one had his/her own space to withdraw sometimes.

10/10

mimmom

OH GOD!  Hagrid and the weird stuff he has around.  Now WHY would anyone turn their heads on the kids in that hut?!  LOL.  OMG.  Severus is gonna have a cow.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Could you please explain the expression "to have a cow"???

9/10

mimmom

LOL.  Prove it!  Snape just loves to say that.

10/10

mimmom

I haven't reviewed for a few chapters because I keep forgetting to stop reading long enough to write!  WOW!

0/10

cmwinters

I really think it was brilliant and I'm so glad you translated it for us!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

I can assure you - it was great fun!

10/10

Battle of Lissa

OH MY FLIPPIN GOODNESS, that was amazing. Great ending to this incredibily well thought out fic. Marisol is amazing and you are amazing for translating this for us. THank you!

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

*takes a very deep bow* thank you! I just saw that "Godfather" made it to the top ten of most reviewed and most read stories - WOW! Not bad for a first attempt!

10/10

keske

awww ^^

8/10

mimmom

I'm going to read the next chapter.  I'm enjoying it so far. 

0/10

Javoher

One of the most beautiful stories on the entire Web.  Thank you to Marisol, and thank you to Muggleline for the wonderful translation.

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Oh my, that's a HUGE compliment. Wow

0/10

orm irian

Great finish. A thoughtful portrait of a deeply scarred character.  I thought that the slow pace was necessary considering how incapable Snape was of dealing with life, emotions or much of anything.  Hermione's commitment to him and patience were, I think, quite extraordinary-which makes for a great romance, but in real life, few people would 'stay the course' after such rejection and pain.My compliment to Marisol for her story and to you for rendering it into enjoyable and entertaining English prose. 

Response from Muggline (Author of The Godfather)

Now the "enjoyable" compliment should go to all the ladies at TPP for  beta, gamma and further reading, editing and correcting. I am horrible at English punctuation, you know...

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