The Plan
Chapter 13 of 15
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He falls into a pit. Misfortune.
But if there is faithfulness in his heart, he will be blessed.
And along the road, he will rise.
I Ching
The Plan
"Meowr."
Narcissa flicked her wand.
"I hope you didn't do permanent damage," said Jack.
"I'm not dumb. I'm not a dumb blonde. And when did you become a cat lover?"
"Okay, I'm nervous. I've never burgled a flat before. Let's find where Miss Granger hides her drugs, get a sample, and get out of here. Are you sure Bellatrix will keep watch?"
"Bella will do fine," said Narcissa. "She went through a wayward period, but she's recovering."
"You're telling me the Dark Lord was a bad influence on her," said Jack.
"That's one way of putting it." Narcissa looked around. "This flat is something of a mess."
Narcissa was standing in the middle of the room, watching Jack.
"Are you trying to reason through where she might have hid it?" he asked.
"I'm thinking Miss Granger is young, intelligent, and good looking," she said. "She has a scar, but after a while, a lover wouldn't notice it."
Jack was annoyed she was wasting time instead of searching. "Are you trying to be jealous?"
"Should I be?" she asked.
"Miss Granger is an over-achiever with her head full of what's right and wrong," said Jack. "Miss Granger has no time for romance ... unless some paragon of virtue and industriousness should appear."
"Do you observe her that closely, think about her that much?"
"Others have observed her closely, I've talked to them, she's the enemy, and I think about everything," said Jack.
He wished Narcissa would stop talking about Miss Granger. He wanted to get in her drugs, not recall getting in her knickers.
"Wait, there's something out of place. Most of this stuff is duff, but that's a fancy wine rack," he said.
He went over the collection. "I bet this is it. It's an inefficient method of delivery, but it's safe and usually unnoticed. Let's get a small sample from each bottle."
He had brought various types of containers to hold whatever they might find.
"I'm glad you're standing calmly in the middle of the room and not helping," said Jack. "I'm a middle-class twit committing a felony, and my hands are shaking enough that I'm going to break something."
He bit back the rest of his thought that she was calm because she was an aristocrat who robbed people every day.
He heard her say, "I'm not a dumb blonde."
He filled the vials and turned to her. She was very close. It sent him over the edge and he said, "What are you on about?"
'I can't do it,' he thought. 'I can't risk loving her and losing her again. The first time nearly killed me.'
A mean spirit rose in him as he fought her tempting him with her proximity, teasing him with her sexuality, taunting him with the desperate remnants of his hopeless love and passion. His images of what he could do to her in the exciting privacy of a crime scene shamed him and reminded him he was a toad, a divorced toad deprived of the love of his life. He clamped down on his thoughts.
"Let's get out of here," he said. "And resurrect that dumb cat."
* * *
Jack was sitting at his desk, surrounded by student essays and preoccupied by the problem of the Black sisters, when Harry knocked and entered. Maybe Harry could reciprocate and offer some good ideas. Too bad he couldn't ask. Then he noticed that Harry looked devastated.
"The Ministry sent me a restraining order," said Harry. "I'm not to enter Patil Potions and Apothecary."
Jack nodded for him to continue.
"It declared me a public nuisance, and then it stuck itself to my office wall. I tried peeling it off, but it resisted. I left before I went into a rage and blew a hole in the wall."
"Someone is very angry at you, angry enough to want to embarrass you," said Jack.
"Paddy and Parvy wouldn't ...," began Harry. He stopped, realizing he had let slip his pet names for them. What would Jack think?
"If they're still 'Paddy' and 'Parvy' to you, they probably didn't," said Jack. "In fact," he said, going over to a window and opening it.
In flew two owls, each dropping a letter in Harry's lap. Harry tore them open before Jack could politely leave the room.
"It's okay," said Harry. "Everything's okay."
Jack noticed the neat and curly handwriting on the two envelopes and concluded that 'Paddy' and 'Parvy' had expressed their feelings about the matter ... and about Harry, who was enjoying rereading the letters.
Jack picked up his wand. "Let's go get that insulting piece of junk off your wall."
* * *
'Let them think I'm guilty of nepotism,' he thought. 'Let the lesser crime hide the greater.'
Beatrice LaGrange, one of Jack's relatives from Canada, had received a position in the Department of Mysteries. She would help Jack in the Potions Lab as he edited, revised, and published the old manuscripts: 'Principles of Potions' and 'Analytical Potions.'
This served several purposes. Beatrice could mingle instead of being confined to the Manor. They could use an existing lab instead of installing one at the Manor. If Miss Granger were to raid the Manor, a lab would be difficult to hide from her. If Miss Granger were to conduct a raid, it would explain why three people were living at the Manor since Miss LaGrange may as well use the spacious mansion and help Jack watch Mrs. Malfoy.
The Ministry, highly budget conscious, was content it was getting double-duty from Miss LaGrange. They had explained the situation to her. She had been reluctant to spy on an acquaintance who might be Jack's friend, but she had finally agreed that Mrs. Lestrange should be caught.
Jack had been honest with the Ministry about one thing. He could not face working in the lab alone. His partner, Edwin Fisher, had been by his side in the battle when they surrounded the Dark Lord. Edwin had vanished in a white, searing bolt. He hadn't intended to mention that to Beatrice, but she had watched him enter the lab and meander through it in remembrance.
"He was a good friend, wasn't he," she had stated.
Jack had always thought it was against the rules for a villainess to be perceptive and sympathetic.
They would begin by practicing with the lab equipment, reviewing the manuscripts, and trying versions of the stasis spell. They were certain Severus had protected his potion from mundane analytical chemistry...he would not want his clients to produce their own version of his product. Jack and Beatrice would need spells to keep the compounds from disintegrating while they analyzed them. They hoped Severus had not had enough time while developing his potion to give it protection from spell-chemistry.
* * *
Jack, like Harry, had protested spending all his time watching Mrs. Malfoy. The three reached an agreement with the Ministry. Jack would spend his mornings in the lab, his afternoons at school, and his nights guarding the suspect. Beatrice would spend her days in the lab and her nights helping Jack. Narcissa would confine herself to the school during the day and be escorted by Jack or Beatrice otherwise.
And dutifully escorted she was: to the masked ball on Fridays and on trips of well-mannered frivolity on Saturdays. Very dutiful were her escorts.
* * *
"There are Professors Higgins and Malfoy," said Harry, pointing out a pair walking to lunch. "These days, they're civil to each other at least."
Hermione was visiting the school. She told others it was to check on Mrs. Malfoy. She told herself it was to visit Harry. A chance meeting with Jack didn't figure in her plans at all.
Hermione watched the pair stroll casually through the corridor with Professor Malfoy chatting and looking at Professor Higgins. She remembered chatting and looking at Jack that way. She blushed as she remembered more. A sharp sensation stabbed through her as she watched Narcissa. 'She's fawning over him,' thought Hermione. Harry seemed not to notice. 'How thick can you get?' thought Hermione.
"Let's go to the village. It's my treat," said Hermione, suddenly aware that she could not endure the sight of Jack having lunch with that purebred feline in heat.
Halfway through his corned beef sandwich, Harry said, "What are you brooding about?"
Hermione had been thinking about Jack and Narcissa, and this had led to other thoughts. "I'm thinking that witches and wizards can't stay away from wizard society or their relatives forever. Eventually, if Bellatrix is still alive, she'll come to Malfoy Manor to be with her sister. We can catch her."
Harry shrugged.
"She killed your godfather," said Hermione.
"I haven't forgotten that," he said. "She killed and tortured a lot of people. I'm not going to live my life for revenge."
"This is justice," said Hermione.
"What's justice?" asked Harry. "Revenge by a third party? Revenge by the state, by divine intervention?"
Hermione fought off feelings of despair. Everybody was spending too much time around Ravenclaws and thinking everything to death. Harry, who she once counted on, was obviously letting himself be influenced by the Patil sisters, who didn't want to look beyond their cash register.
'Jack Higgins is hopeless, too,' she thought. 'And I expended all that effort on him, thinking he would help capture Bellatrix.' It was obvious that Jack was in the clutches of a lady without morals and no decent woman could compete. It was up to her, and her alone, to put things right. She changed the topic and asked Harry about his Defense courses.
* * *
Jack was afraid breakfast would be awkward, and he paid extra attention to his attire and grooming as he braced himself to play the self-possessed gentleman. He found the two women on the patio having coffee. First Bellatrix and then Narcissa caught his eye. "Good morning, Trixie. Good morning, Narcy."
They rose, embraced him, and whispered, "Good morning, dear," in his ear. They had him sit between them.
Narcissa placed her hand on his shoulder and looked content as she sipped her coffee and remembered how considerate he had been to her early last evening. When she had wrapped herself around him and pulled him close, he had asked her to make love to him. She still felt peaceful even though he had left her to spend the rest of the night with her sister. Tonight, the roles would be reversed...except she didn't want to wait until tonight. Perhaps after lunch he would be kind, and they could revisit the part of her life she had thought gone forever. She would be happy with being cuddled.
Bellatrix was determined to act proper. She held her cup with one hand and her saucer with the other, her face was composed with a calmness she had never felt before, but her knees had a mind of their own, and they were pressing into his leg. Last night, her whole body had had a mind of its own. When she had been half way to mindlessness, he had asked her to make love to him. She had not been prepared for her response. She was looking forward to this evening when he would, once again, torment her with the piercing agony that led to ecstasy. But she didn't want to wait. Perhaps after breakfast he would be considerate enough to spend some more intimate time with her. He didn't have to be superhuman...just holding her would be sufficient. She didn't think she could wait until this evening to relive what she had believed to have died forever.
'There was no help for it,' thought Jack as he recalled yesterday afternoon. It had been Friday, and he and Narcissa had returned from school. Bellatrix had raged about being left all alone. Narcissa had raged about unruly kids and stupid faculty. Jack had wanted something stronger than tea for tea. Both sisters had complained about his unfeeling attitude. He had snapped and shouted that he would take care of their tender feelings as soon as he could feel something himself. He had braced himself for being hexed by both of them. But they had each taken one of his arms, had led him to the couch, and had sat on either side of him.
"We're asking a lot from you," Bellatrix had said.
He had immediately felt bad about shouting at them. He had taken their hands and said, "We have rough patches, but I'm glad I'm here with the two of you."
"We've been wondering," Narcissa had said. "Do you like both of us?"
"Very much," he had said. He groped for his feelings. What were they?
"I know I shouldn't feel this way, and I shouldn't say it, but I want both of you around." He had paused. "Life would be empty without the two of you."
"You could take care of us," Narcissa had said softly.
"Yes," Bellatrix had said. "But I don't know if I can. A lot of me is dead. I don't know if I can anymore."
It had gradually dawned on Jack what they were talking about: there had been tension and frustration. He had been keeping his growing attraction for the two hidden because he had assumed he was a crazy divorced male.
"I am very fond of both of you," he had said. He hadn't told them he was falling in love with them because it was weird to say it to two women at once. 'Perhaps when we're alone,' he had thought.
'I'm a mess, love," Bellatrix had said. "If you're going to care for us, it might be better to start with Cissy."
"We're not going to leave you out," Jack had said, surprising himself.
'I don't know if I can deliver on that promise or not,' he had thought.
It had been an important occasion, and they were adults, not twittering adolescents. Jack had remembered to treat them as ladies. They had had tea where they reaffirmed their social relationship. What was going to happen would be a normal part of their everyday lives. They had listened to Bellatrix and the day's adventures in spell-chemistry, to Narcissa and the dense faculty, and to Jack and the mountain of papers to grade. Jack and Narcissa had walked hand in hand to Jack's room. The three had had dinner. Jack and Bellatrix had walked hand in hand to Jack's room where Bellatrix had spent the night.
Jack was certain he was committing suicide: two women ... two sisters ... the two Black sisters. Lovely suicide, though.
* * *
Jack was in his office, thinking of the pit he was sliding into. 'I'm busy helping Trixie escape and Narcy recover the Malfoy fortune. I don't have any time to work for my own future well-being. The romance phase will wear off, and their gratitude will vanish. How long before they revert to type? How long before they want things I cannot afford? How long before they become their mother's daughters? My only hope is to make them no promises, give them no reason to believe I will stay with them, and leave as soon as I graciously can.'
* * *
Jack and Narcissa left school, arrived at the Manor gate, and stopped in alarm. Something was wrong. The wards had been breached. They looked at each other with the same question, "Is Bellatrix okay?"
They stood in a small clearing, Jack standing guard with his wands out and Narcissa casting for intruders and signs of her sister. Finally, Narcissa called out, "I think it's safe, Beatrice."
Bellatrix stepped out from behind a tree. They decided Jack should enter the house because he was not a fugitive. He would give it a quick once over and then return. He told the sisters to escape if they heard a commotion.
"Not a chance, love," they said.
He told them they were being foolish, but they gave him a disdainful look that said they weren't listening to any nonsense about abandoning him.
Jack made a tour and found nothing. Narcissa, more familiar with the Manor, made an inspection and found nothing. The three gave the mansion a thorough search and decided the intrusion had been an attempt to search the place without triggering any alarms. But they knew it was the first raid and more extensive raids would follow. Miss Granger was on the move. England was no longer safe.
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56 Reviews | 8.48/10 Average
Fantastic ending--Severus as a wonderful anti-hero subversive deus ex machina sweeping in and offering Hermione a life and livelihood--glad to see that she is a fast thinker, accepting the odds are against her (if she stubbornly sticks to her story) but able to assess what he is offering her--it's doubly delicious the irony of her being now a fugitive (well, soon to be) and that she remains naive to Jack, being her attacker, harbouring fugitives all along, Bellatrix and Narcissa--it's sort of a poetic justice that the know-it-all has been forced to experience some humbling humanity, albeit of a subversive nature--again, a brilliant twist (and for some reason makes me think of Bob Dylan's lyrics to 'Like a Rolling Stone'... Anyway...)I'm tickled pink that Harry and Parvati and Padma have also established a wholesome threesome paralleling Jack, Narcissa, and Bellatrix--also love the final capper per Jack then Harry's section: ‘I’m in for it now,’ he thought.' to each wizard's situation--I suppose we should give our best wishes to each guy, as each will never have a moment's peace satisfying the wishes and whims of the partners, but I suppose that is what will keep life interesting, engaging, and fulfilling for them. Thank you for a fantastic tale!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Severus had positive thoughts about Hermione when he rescued her. A lapse in the story is not introducing and sustaining this throughout the intermediate chapters. Her flaw is bitterness and intensity, but since these are understandable and her heart is in the right place, her tragedy is only partial. Besides, if she wishes to be with Severus, she will have to abandon normal society.It is true all the wizards have demanding partners, but aside from being careful what one asks for, it might be the best outcome for them once they have adapted.Thank you for all the insightful reviews.
Fantastic twists in the plot--and it is a miracle that the Black sisters did not murder Hermione, but thought of what Jack would have done--and on a side note, I think Jack underestimates Narcissa and Bellatrix and their love and need for him, one that eschews and has transcended the narrow category of 'aristocrat' that seems to constantly trouble him. Yes! Finally, Harry! You see, threesomes can be embraced and work out! Oh ye of little faith--but now he has his own experience to believe and take strength from, instead of the musings and encouragement of an older, more experienced wizard such as Jack. Jack seems to be embracing and enjoying his threesome arrangement with more strength and commitment, in the sense that he is not entertaining the idea of running off and disappearing but rather coming to terms with and believing/wanting this arrangement on a deeper, more sincere level--great chapter! Must read on to see what actually will happen!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thank you for the kind review of a climatic chapter where everything comes together. A standard goal is to have the ending be both unexpected and a logical consequence of previous events.The Black sisters exercised great restraint in deference to Jack, especially since they believe their safety depends on eliminating Hermione.Jack is a strange combination of arrogance and self doubt.Harry wins over the Patils with a business deal.
Poor Harry... He has accepted his attraction to them fully and yet is now banished; Jack has accepted his attraction to both and is feeling overwhelmed yet committed to doing what he can for them, on all levels--Narcissa and Bellatrix are unconcerned about how demanding their attentions and expectations of Jack are... But they continue to enjoy and appreciate his efforts and protection and heroic actions on their part... Hermione is on the move and it seems she hasn't developed any tolerance or empathy and is sticking to her guns and moral code in regards to her professional work and agenda--enjoying everyone's dilemmaGreat chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Yes, everyone is being blindsided. Harry is banished, Hermione discovers Jack and Narcissa are a couple, Jack succumbs to the Black sisters, the Ministry is fooled by Beatrice LaGrange, and the Malfoy manner is raided. The couples (more accurately, triples) are working their way through the problems while Hermione devotes herself to her work.
Intriguing look into the Patil family and all of the pros and cons the parents are weighing and struggling with, the loss of tradition and honour being huge impediments... but maybe there will be a clear break with tradition in a choice that could lead to happiness for both of their daughters with Harry. I have a feeling Hermione has not given up on her notion of capturing Severus Snape, whether that be to turn him in or to have him for her own clandestinely. Perhaps her liason with Jack will help strenthen her and his own resolve one way or another with decisions regarding the truant fugitives in their lives--lovely, informative chapter while still leaving many questions to be answered!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Glad you liked it. The premise is that romance does not take place in a vacuum, and we have an extended business family, not to mention high caste and pure blood, to whom propriety is important. There are the fiery females and the calmer Mr. Patil who has more depth than one might think.Parvati and Padma with Harry might be more like their parents than they realize.Yes, Hermione is as determined as ever.
Great developments--whether Hermione and Jack's afternoon delight development will benefit her or him more remains to be seen--in particular the aspect that he truly would have roused suspicion by avoiding her and her need to have someone listen to her, be with her, appreciate her, make love with her, etc.--then there are the Black sisters, who need anything to be a decoy in order to keep Bellatrix being safely harboured with Narcissa. Will Jack be able to juggle all of the witches, opposing sides with opposing objectives? Will their be some bargaining going on between Jack and Hermione regarding the fugitives Severus and Bellatrix? Great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. The bargaining is an interesting suggestion full of possibilities. Would Jack help catch Severus to save Bellatrix, or would he try to save both? Would he form an alliance with Severus and Bellatrix? Could either one, or anyone, trust Jack? Would the ruthless Hermione keep the agreement in the first case? Would she be able to thwart his efforts in the seoond? Would her efforts be derailed if she fell in love with Jack? As dramatic background, all of this is a matter of life and death for Severus and Bellatrix and Narcissa. It might become a matter of life or death for Hermione.
Hmmm, Harry does have a dilemma... Twill be difficult unless he chooses both The same goes for Jack, although at this rate, the decision(s) may be made for him, with Bellatrix being the more assertive, although Narcissa has declared herself on some level, allowing an opening of sorts... Love the further exploration of Bellatrix's more human needs, Jack's vulnerability, and Narcissa's verbalisation of what she wants.Lovely contrasts of Harry muddling along, discovering the female sex as it were versus Jack's experience, having been married and divorced, but he is still discovering things about the opposite sex with his two particular witches. Lovely work and great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Yes, a chapter in which Harry and Jack are being drawn in deeper - the shop's storeroom where Harry participates in retail that is important to the Patils and becomes more intimate - the castle's storeroom where Jack participates in family history that is important to the Blacks and becomes more intimate.
Hermione is being warned, if she doesn't back down, she will be done away with; Jack offers her polite and considerate company; Severus is very direct--she is confronted with truths. Harry enjoys helping Parvati and Padma out and they all continue to discover further and enjoy each other's company. Harry has tired of his watching, and Jack accepts the responsibilty feeling he has nothing to lose and wishing for some different dynamics in his life, taking a risk whether Narcissa will reciprocate or ignore him, unsure. The inclusion of Bellatrix, the riskiness of harbouring a top Undesireable has placed him in a dilemma, as both Black sisters are found to be needing him, each in her own way. There is a sadness and vulnerability brought out regarding Bellatrix and with that more complex natures revealed of who they were and have been during their lives as sisters--and now there is Jack having to deal with more volatile possibilities--whose side will he choose? The loyalty to the Ministry? Or a very private newfounded loyalty to the Black sisters? Harry, Severus, and jack, each in his own way, are having to be very selective in how much and/or which way he is interacting with his particular witch(s)-great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Another good review: this time of a chapter where everyone is becoming entangled. It tries for some contrast - the mild bickering and jealousy of the Patil sisters, the more insistent demands of the Black sisters, the different reactions of Bellatrix and Narcissa when they learn Jack has killed someone dear to them, the companionable visit of Jack versus the hard-edged visit of Severus. Because of the witches, Harry is neglecting professorial duties, Jack ministry wishes, and Severus his survival.
Thoroughly enjoying the unfolding intimacy of trust with Padma and Parvati becoming comfortable enough with Harry to share and show each one's scar; Harry is not scared off, rather commiserates and is accepting--he's lived with physical and emotional/pyscological scars his entire life and so can understand; likewise, an interesting light is shone on Narcissa revealing her physical/traumatic scar to Jack, and he revealing his psychological/traumatic scar to her (hexing/killing her husband). With the Patil sisters and Harry, it draws them closer together; with Jack and Narcissa, the revelations asunder them. Hermione is in a dilemma, conflicted; her physical scar and discomfort impeding her; her resistance against Severus' curative painfully crumbling, giving into it, but is it only to strengthen her resolve and aid her to capture him? She must partake in that which she despises and has vowed against--and then there is Jack, in fluctuation, unhappy and wishing for a fuller companionship and fulfillment when reflecting on Narcissa--looking forward to seeing if meeting Granger draws him one way or another--she seems a bit miffed at him, and yet intrigued on some level--great chapter! Love how the plot is thickening! Also, I've meant to comment on that I love it that you have written the female characters with explicit and metaphorical scars (not just the wizards), and this is being explored, layered on, informing & influencing character's decisions and hesitations--again, wonderful work!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
A good review of a chapter that attempts the depiction of conflicting emotions. There's not much left to say. Their attraction overcomes the shyness and obstacles for Harry, Padma, and Parvati. An unfortunate event shatters Narcissa and Jack. Readers might be disappointed that Hermione decides to use an illicit drug supplied by an outlaw, but I think it is an understandable response to chronic pain. Hermione is both repelled and intrigued by the mysterious, perhaps unknowable, Jack.
Mmm, love Severus and Hermione on the underground, his observations--Sev in quite a predicament, and Hermione being sick, getting cleaned up by him, and all fussy and defensive--that is until the last second when she gets her instrument of power back in her hands, fully aware and with a gleam in her eye--Severus has had a narrow escape in more ways than one!Love also the narrow escape of Jack, Narcissa, and Harry--thoroughly enjoyed them passed out under cardboard in an alley without their wands (having not brought them (nor allowed) to the masked dance), having to rough it, Muggle style--HA! Love the inner thoughts and commentaries--something is brewing--great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Two clumsy rescues - complete with unchivalrous thoughts, ingratitude, sarcasm, and betrayal.
Conjures up thoughts and reflections about military maneuvers from the great World Wars, in particular, WWI (although the infamous battle of Stalingrad of WWII flitters through my thoughts), some utterly futile, some more effective, etc. Brilliant, love the detailed movement and strategies explained and developed, and then the fallout and segue into the subversive drug clientele and trafficking, as the wizard goverment & officials turn a decisive blind eye, having other seeming priorities... As with anyone who may have to resort to being involved in procuring the way and assessibilty for self-and society-destructing illicit drugs, it brings out a conflicting melancholic feeling knowing that Severus seems to have no choice but to do so--to be a part of this... Great chapter!
Response from nagandsev (Reviewer)
Ooops, reread the summary--Gettysburg/Civil War flank maneuvers and strategies referenced! Just had the impact of great strategic plans occurring while reading--in my excited state, sorry to not have reread the summary for the significant great war/battle reference!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Your thinking WW! is not wrong. Glad you enjoyed the strategy. The Longstreet quote is a despairing comment on any high attrition conflict. A subtle element is that, proportionally, the loss of six Arithmancers is equivalent to a conflict killing most of the PhD mathematicians and physicists in the UK. The war has hollowed out and scared society, and the story is about people coping. Thanks for all the commentary.
Highly enjoyed the introduction and development of Jack and his background and broadened livelihood into the story and in particular his interaction with Narcissa--seems they are both going to do well as professors along with developing a mutual relationship of sorts--hmmm, the plot is thickening deeper and richer as each scenario sheds light on the different perspectives of each character--lovely, intriguing, engaging work!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. Two lost people intellectualizing their alienation and thereby finding a kindred spirit.
Lovely and engaging inclusion of Padma and Parvati, two rarely written about/underwritten characters in the HP canon, their family business situation, war scars, and the biting reminder of their high-caste pure-blood status having had and currently affecting their life decisions and sacrifices. Love it that Harry has initiated some interest and has enjoyed their company, longing for more--the intertwining of these characters with the catalytic event during the mask dance is so wonderful--it's not a secret that I love your brilliant, unique quality of writing and fine style, both one-shots and multi-chapters--just with the multi-chapter ones, there's more to enjoy!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
The central thought was thst the Patils would be family oriented and business oriented. The impression from canon is that the twins are well mannered but with emotions seething beneath the surface. Yes, they are hemmed in by economic circumstances, war scars, and fami;ly honor. And thank you for all the kind words.
Titillating development between Narcissa and Harry, only to be thwarted by a mysterious saboteur--brilliant! Looking forward to finding out who Narcissa has absconded with, intentionally or unintentionally... Hmmm... Love it that the dance hall is a vortex of intrigue and action in which these different characters' tales are intertwining and springing forth from--brilliant, just brilliant--and of course as seductive and engaging as ever!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thank you very much. This chapter attempts scenes that illustrate the attraction and tension between them. She is a brave and intelligent lady whose background and experiences place her in a world different from his. The masked ball appears to be bringing the community together.
Hmmm, one could say a wizard's got to do what a wizard's got to do to survive--Brilliant evolution of trade and commerce by Severus, keenly observing his choices and acting with astuteness and practicality about the ways of the world, who has seemingly been caught between a rock and a hard place to survive with his head above water in matters; I can only cheer him on with accepting all that life is offering him, regarding the ladies at the dance who equally seem to be in need of companionship and/or some social interaction, whether that be merely conversation and dancing on the dance floor and/or dancing from the waist down clandestinely elsewhere. Love the unexpected ending with the attacke and Hermione in the midst in need of his intervention/interaction--great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. Part of the chapter attempts a rational explanation of the wizard economy which canon presents as a collection of artisans and shopkeepers untouced by the industrial revolution with a bloated ministry and a large number of sports teams. The story takes a benign attitude toward pain-killing drugs. Society's prejudices and Severus's fugitive status keep him from offering this benefit to all. Severus's social efforts do seem to be appreciated.
Mmm, love her dilatory contemplations and hesitancy in this detailed, engaging intro, establishing Hermione's seeming lull in life after surviving the war, scarred inside and out... and a disturbing (but excellent, intriguing) cliffie of an ending!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
On a personal note, I have been hoping you would discover 'Cross Roads.' The first chapter depicts a post conflict society through the eyes of a damaged veteran. The story experiments by extending a cliff hanger for five chapters.
I like the sneaky necklace is a wand. This is a wonderful beginning!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. If you glanced at the reviews, you know that readers find this story difficult and different. If it helps, the first five chapters introduce the characters, hopefully in an entertaining manner. Good luck.
This was extremely disjointed and hard to follow. Couldn't figure out what was going on from one moment to the next. I am sorry, but I had to give up only 1/3 of the way through.It reminded me of Pulp Fiction, with its unchronological disjointedness, only without the good acting to distract me from the fact that I didn't know what the hell was going on from the beginning of that movie to the end of it! :)Perhaps it's just that I don't appreciate your avant-garded style or what-have-you, but this story was simply too much work to read for my tastes.Thank you for sharing it, and I hope you find other audiences who are more receptive to it. Cheers.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
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ohhhh Jack is heading into a dark path. He is so creepy! Good job!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
After some hesitation, I decided to take the story to where few fans would want to follow. Even Bellatrix, who trusts him with her life, wonders what Jack is thinking and feeling. Thanks for the reviews.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
After some hesitation, I decided to take the story to where few fans would want to follow. Even Bellatrix, who trusts him with her life, wonders what Jack is thinking and feeling. Thanks for the reviews.
Well, Jack is certainly interesting. I can't believe all the things going on on so many levels.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I did promise that paths would cross: the resolution depends on all paths crossing. At first, I thought there was no canon character like Jack. Now, I think there could not be a canon character like Jack.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I did promise that paths would cross: the resolution depends on all paths crossing. At first, I thought there was no canon character like Jack. Now, I think there could not be a canon character like Jack.
AHHH! Hermione had better find severus!!!! ;) Can't wait to find out! Great chapter, by the way!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Glad you liked the chapter. There was concern about it being a 'guicco piano' about two non-canon characters.Perhaps the story should be more emphatic. Hermione has located Severus twice but failed to capture him. If he is captured, or merely located, he is a dead man since both sides wish to kill him. Both Hermione and Severus know this. At one time, Hermione thought that made her job easier--she need only locate him. Bringing the traitor to justice would be a feather in the cap of the most brilliant witch of the age. The question is whether or not she is having second thoughts about doing the right thing. Of course there is also the question of how the story is going to resolve this little dilemma.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
My reply may have been too emphatic. It was late at night, and I'm currently punching a project through a bureaucracy. At any rate, I did like your review.
Response from baseballbabe122 (Reviewer)
Haha, that's oky. I enjoyed that little insight. :)
Harry first, why does he have to chose one over the other, why can't he have both? Now Jack, can anyone really survive the Blacks, not just Narcissa and Bella? lol. If he plays his cards right he will be ok, I think. Then there is Hermione, please give her, her spirit back. She seems so unhappy and Jack is not the answer. I truly hope she find Severus. And he finds it in his heart to come to trust her. The twins' parents need to allow their daughters to make their own decisions and when they make a mistake let them learn from it and move on. Just be there for them either way.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Quite a lot to think about, but an author should keep most of it to himself.One thought is that canon-Hermine at school had lots of spirit, but it required the Mountain Troll incident for her spirit to form bonds. Is adult canon-Hermione similar?
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Quite a lot to think about, but an author should keep most of it to himself.One thought is that canon-Hermine at school had lots of spirit, but it required the Mountain Troll incident for her spirit to form bonds. Is adult canon-Hermione similar?
Wow, this story is aptly named. I am impressed at all the twists and turns you are making. I suggest Jack gets killed, Harry marries one of the twins and Severus and Hermione hook up with a happy ending
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Okay, Jack is toast. But not so fast. All the things reviewers want depend on Jack.Thanks for the comments. Not everyone likes this type of story.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Okay, Jack is toast. But not so fast. All the things reviewers want depend on Jack.Thanks for the comments. Not everyone likes this type of story.
now now girls no fighting over the man I'm sure he would be more than able to take the both of you lol
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Ah, yes, who gets to French him? Glad you were amused.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Ah, yes, who gets to French him? Glad you were amused.
Jack is certainly the popular fellow. What is Snape up to?
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
With the current social conditions, even Harry is popular. Hermione is puzzled that Jack and Harry aren’t doing better for themselves.
Perhaps aristocratic ladies and brainy girls have limited compatible choices.
Severus is hiding from Hermione who would do the right thing and put him in prison.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
With the current social conditions, even Harry is popular. Hermione is puzzled that Jack and Harry aren’t doing better for themselves.
Perhaps aristocratic ladies and brainy girls have limited compatible choices.
Severus is hiding from Hermione who would do the right thing and put him in prison.
Hmmm, I hope Hermione and Jack don't hook up. Something about him raised my neck hairs. Food for thought, at the beginning of the chapter it seemed to me that Hermione is having some growing pains. She seems to be acting like a teenager (wich would be normal in these circomstances) worrying about boys. Very nice, a very 'human' chapter.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I appreciate your comments since I rewrote the chapter several times trying to give complexity and depth to Hermione, a character with mixed motives.
It would be great if, in Jack, we have a character that is always kind and understanding but is a character that readers recognize as sinister.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I appreciate your comments since I rewrote the chapter several times trying to give complexity and depth to Hermione, a character with mixed motives.
It would be great if, in Jack, we have a character that is always kind and understanding but is a character that readers recognize as sinister.