The Revelation
Chapter 8 of 15
FairfieldBe good and you'll be lonesome.
Mark Twain
The Revelation
Harry arrived early at the masked ball the Friday following the raid. He was surprised at the disappointment he felt when he didn't see the two sisters. He danced with several girls, glad for the distraction.
As he finished one dance, he saw the two sisters walking toward a table in the back. 'They're not even looking around,' he thought, feeling snubbed. He went to the bar and waited. Surely, they could see him. He was hoping they would approach him. After all, he had approached them last week, and there were two of them...practically a pack. But the only action was an increase in his anxiety level. Another girl approached him and smiled, and he asked her to dance. It reminded him that he had a fallback. 'If the worst happens, I can dance the night away with the available girls,' he thought as he walked over to the two sisters.
"Hi," he said, sitting down.
"Hello," they said coolly.
"I'm glad you came this evening," he said, wondering if it had been a mistake to approach them.
"Thank you," they said, still cool.
He paused to see if they wanted to start a conversation. He was thinking his social skills were not up to this.
"Where's your blonde?" asked the one with a cane.
"She's around," he said. He was annoyed by their coolness. He had tried to be friendly. And there were plenty of other women. "I told you she's not 'my blonde.' I can tell you the story if you like, but you seem to want me to go away. Let me wish you a good evening." He stood.
"You may as well tell us the story," said the sister with the full mask. "We're not doing anything else."
"I'm sure a lot of blokes would like to dance with you," he said, sitting back down.
He told them he didn't know if it was proper to reveal names, but he was Harry Potter. They said they had guessed. He offered that it was his dancing skills that gave him away. They agreed. They were the Patil sisters as he had guessed. The one with the cane was Padma, and the one in the full mask was Parvati. He said he was thirsty. They all decided on apple juice, and he went to the bar.
On the way to the bar a thought occurred to him that would not have occurred to him under ordinary circumstances: the two sisters were jealous of the blonde lady. 'It must be all these girls around that are making me think like that,' he surmised.
"We didn't think you would come back," said Parvati as he placed the drinks on their table.
"Would you rather I hadn't?"
"No. Please sit down," they both said.
He told them about his assignment: keeping watch on Mrs. Malfoy in case her husband, son, or sister appeared. They told him about the family apothecary and potion store. He preferred talking about their store to talking about Mrs. Malfoy. He found himself attracted to them again, and he remembered they were at a ball. Yes, he was dancing, but he was also with one sister at a time and holding her.
"Oh, Harry, we have to open early tomorrow," said Parvati.
"We have to open early every day," said Padma sadly.
"You haven't told us what you're doing at school," said Parvati.
"We'd like to hear," said Padma.
"Will you be here tomorrow evening? We really hate it that we have to rush off," said Parvati.
Harry told them he would be back tomorrow if he possibly could, saw them to the street, and waved goodbye. He resigned himself to waiting until Mrs. Malfoy wanted to leave. This evening she and the bloke had both worn a fleur-de-lis patch. After a few dances, Harry was sitting at a table reminiscing about raven hair, dark eyes, warm smiles, and the calm self-assurance of businesswomen.
He hadn't given much thought to the long hours of retailing. 'It's like teaching, but without the flexibility.'
- * * *
Parvati helped her sister limp to the tub and listened to her moan as she sank into the water. "Did milady have one dance too many?"
"Milady could have danced all night," replied Padma. "Did mademoiselle enjoy throwing herself at the young man?"
"Mademoiselle was most restrained," said Parvati as she joined her sister.
Their high-caste thoughts turned the tub steamy and the vapors aromatic.
- * * *
Certain incidents of the battle had come back to Jack Higgins, and they were disturbing, especially considering his current circumstances. 'Should I get it out and take the consequences, or should I live with it and take those consequences,' he wondered.
Professor Higgins had been pondering this problem for several days when there was a knock on his office door that he recognized. He pushed the problem to the back of his mind. It was easy to forget the world's problems in the company of Professor Malfoy.
"Jack, I've been thinking about something, but I don't know what to do," she said after she entered and seated herself.
"Okay," he said, thinking it must be serious. She had been entering and giving him a discrete embrace since their escapade at the masked ball.
"Can I trust you, Jack?" she asked. "I mean really trust you. Can I tell you something bad about myself?"
"I already know you have something of a past. Just being a Black sister and married to a Malfoy guarantees that."
"This is not a past problem," she said. "And it's serious."
"How serious? At one end of the scale, would it put you in prison?"
"Yes," she said.
"I couldn't put you in prison. You know that." He wondered if he could approach her problem carefully. "Does it have anything to do with the battle with the Dark Lord?"
"Yes," she said.
"Let me guess. I may be wrong, but let me guess. You were at the battle."
She sat silent.
"The Ministry is being punitive," he said. "I admit that if they released everyone from prison, some of them would cause trouble, but the Ministry is creating more problems by keeping everyone in prison." He paused. "There were many reasons for fighting for one side or the other."
"My husband and son were there," she said.
"Then you were brave," he said.
'If it's confession time, then it's time for me to speak,' he thought.
Narcissa stood. He thought she was going to approach him, and he motioned for her not to, but instead she said, "I have to show you something."
She removed her cloak and unbuttoned the bottom of her shirt to show him part of the scar. "I'm disfigured, horribly disfigured."
"Does it hurt?" he asked.
"Sometimes. Potter used to swipe potions from the school infirmary for me."
"Hell's bells, I'll have to follow his good example."
'There was no reason for her to show me that scar unless she wants us to be close,' he thought. 'Damn, things are going well, things are promising, and I'm going to ruin everything.'
"I have something even worse to tell you," he said. He waited till she was dressed and seated before saying, "I was at the battle, and I remember part of it that is going to make you hate me."
"I know we were on opposite sides, love."
"This is worse than that. This is personal."
Narcissa turned pale from his tone of voice.
"I remember your husband," he said. "He was in a cone of light. He raised his wand. I threw two hexes...one to his chest and one to his head."
Professor Malfoy left his office, strode down the corridor, entered the lavatory, and was violently ill.
- * * *
Two mornings after the ruckus at the masked ball, Hermione Granger stepped out her front door to discover four bottles of wine and a note suggesting a small glass morning and evening.
She spent the next two days greeting people at work and noticing everyone recoil from her. 'I don't bite,' she thought. 'I have been biting,' she realized.
During the two days of clarity, she connected the dots: her rescuer at the masked ball, the appearance of the miraculous potion, and the disappearance from the wizard world of a chemistry genius.
Several evenings later, Hermione Granger stood in front of her kitchen sink. She was full of determination. She was determined to do what was right, not what was easy. "I. Will. Not. Be. A. Drug. Addict. I. Will. Not. Be. Beholden. To. The. World's. Foulest. Traitor."
She poured the contents of the bottles down the drain.
- * * *
'Everything was going well, and I ruined it,' thought Jack Higgins. 'Everything was going well, and I ruined it.'
He was on his way to his first class of the day, repeating what he had told himself this morning and all last night. 'I didn't have to say what I did. There was no reason for me to tell her I killed her husband. If I had kept quiet, I could have had a wonderful relationship.'
He couldn't stop comparing his wife to a companion who would fight by his side...who had fought by his side.
'Everything was going well, and I ruined it.'
- * * *
'It's such a simple thing,' thought Harry.
All Monday and Tuesday he had wrangled with the impulse to visit the Patil sisters at their store. 'I'll be bothering them while they're working ... I'll just poke my head in and greet them ... They didn't invite me ... They might like it that I took the trouble to see them ... What makes me think they want to see me? ... I'll be a customer; I'll buy something.'
Wednesday he decided that it was perfectly okay to drop in as a customer, but then he lost his nerve. He decided to go Thursday. 'This is ridiculous. I'm going to see them tomorrow at the Ball. This is terrible. They'll be angry I'm bothering them. They'll be angry I waited till Thursday to see them.'
After lunch on Thursday, Harry arrived at the Patil store, entered, and found Padma on her knees cleaning a shelf. "Hello, Padma."
She looked up in shock.
Parvati stepped out of a storage room.
"Hello, Parvati," said Harry.
Parvati gasped, covered her scar with her hand, and backed into the storage room.
Padma was flustered enough that she had forgotten how to get to her feet with her lame leg. Harry helped her up. He was thinking his visit was ill-considered.
"You caught us without our disguises," said Padma.
"I'm sorry," said Harry. He noticed Parvati had come out of the storage room. "Wait, you see other people as you are now. What's wrong with me?"
Parvati spoke up. "I suppose we wanted you to think we were pretty. We wanted to hide the fact that we're scared."
Parvati had touched a sore spot. He said, "Has it ever occurred to you that I might feel bad that I don't have one?"
"You do have one."
"I was a baby and had no choice."
The three looked at each other.
"I'm sorry," he said. "I thought I'd drop in and see you."
He stood looking at the floor, not wanting to leave, not wanting to stay.
"Harry," said Parvati.
He looked up.
"I'd ...." Parvati looked at her sister. "We'd like you to stay ... please."
"Yes," said Padma, "but we might be busy."
The two sisters brightened. "Can you work the cash register for us?"
- * * *
Jack Higgins was thinking of ending his marriage. The gap between them was growing, and his in-laws' bitterness wasn't helping. A week ago, he had discovered he could have his wife whenever he liked. The influence of her parents had her acting like a conquered lady. The first several times it had been spicy, but it wasn't what he wanted.
His thoughts turned to Professor Malfoy. She was a member of a defeated army, but she was not a conquered lady.
Professor Higgins and Professor Malfoy were polite and professional towards each other, but that only reminded Jack of how much he had lost.
Jack Higgins tried to stop his thoughts, but they kept coming. 'I was weak. I wasn't strong enough to keep my mouth shut and live with what I did. I can tell myself she would have found out eventually and that would have been worse, but I don't know that, and being willing to risk eventual discovery is part of being strong enough to live with an aristocratic lady. Everything was going well, and I ruined it.'
- * * *
'I've got the easiest job,' thought Harry as he sat at the cash register and watched the two sisters stock the store. He was surprised when they closed the store for afternoon tea. "I thought retailers never quit."
"We usually close for tea," said Padma. "We need a break, or we would collapse."
"But today went much better," said Parvati. You really helped, Harry."
He sent a message to the school. The reply came back amazingly fast from Professor Malfoy that there was no problem: She had been invited to stay for dinner. 'Are Flitwick and Higgins flirting with her, or are the old Herbology professor and the coach watching her like a hawk?' wondered Harry. He told the sisters he was free.
"You've helped so much we should fix you dinner," said Parvati.
"We're getting a lot more done since we don't have to stop and take care of customers," they told him.
"Do you like Indian food?" asked Padma. "We can make it mild."
"Would you like a little spice in your life?" asked Parvati.
The shop took up most of the ground floor; the next floor was storage; and the top floor was the living quarters. It had retained the rugged qualities of their uncle, a bachelor businessman. Harry sipped his tea and appreciated how the simple furnishings complimented the gentle curves of the two young women. They told him they had to come up here for tea. If people saw them in the store, they would bang on the door even if the shop was closed. "People may be banging on the door now," they told him.
After tea, Padma went back to stocking and arranging the shelves, occasionally checking to see how Harry was doing. He found himself fascinated by the aristocratic curves of her face and her bright eyes. "Don't stare," he reminded himself. Parvati, warm from shifting inventory, was also thoughtful enough to regularly see if he had any questions. Her perfumed aroma, patrician face, and sharp eyes had him struggling to maintain decorum. 'I don't get out often enough,' he concluded.
They closed at seven. "Dinner at eight," announced Parvati.
"It'll be simple," said Padma.
Padma looked at Parvati. "Should we show him our uncle's old room? It has a separate bath, and there are still some casual robes that our uncle liked to wear in the evening."
A half-hour later, freshly scrubbed and wearing a silk robe, Harry lounged in front of the fireplace with a glass of wine. He would have to fake his way through tomorrow's lectures. Reflecting on his current surroundings, he reviewed the Defense courses. No, they didn't include keeping your mind from going wild in the presence of friendly women. The curriculum had a huge gap.
There was murmuring from the kitchen. "Not that much," he thought he heard Parvati say. "You'll burn his tongue."
"I thought I'd melt a little cool exterior," said the other sister.
"Okay, you're right, add more," said the first sister.
He thought he heard some giggling.
Parvati appeared in the kitchen doorway with a big spoon in her hand. "We have some really spicy, I mean really spiffy, leftovers."
Padma appeared beside her. "We're going all out in here."
The sisters decided to arrange the dishes on a low table in front of the fireplace. Parvati sat on his right with her scarred side towards him, but with her hair down, it was not visible. She noticed him looking and parted her hair to show him the scar. "I think it's slowly healing," she said, "but half of it is always going to show, and the hair over the other half is going to grow back white." She sighed. She recovered and looked at him. "Want a little burlesque?" She looked at Padma. "Show him yours."
Padma lifted her robe past a shapely calf to her ruined right knee. "It doesn't bend very well, but I'm lucky I can limp around with a cane."
"We usually hide our scars," said Parvati.
"Not show them off," said Padma.
"You didn't mind, did you, Harry?" they both asked, concerned about his opinion.
Harry shook his head and looked into the distance.
Padma cocked her head. "Are you still thinking about not facing the Dark Lord?"
He nodded.
"Let's see the palm of your right hand," said Padma.
He held it out.
"Confused," said Parvati.
"It's really complicated," said Padma.
Padma took a breath. "We had to have an army to face the Dark Lord's forces. It's not your fault the army did better than expected." She paused before saying, "It would have been personal for you to have killed the Dark Lord. It wasn't personal for the army. It was kill or be killed to protect their families."
"You may have avoided a great evil," said Parvati, thinking about what she had seen in his palm.
"I'll think about that," said Harry.
'Yes, that's worth thinking about,' he thought, 'if I can stop obsessing about Padma and Parvati.'
"I propose a toast," said Padma, raising her glass, "to avoiding great evils."
"To avoiding great evils," echoed the other two.
- * * *
Hermione stumbled into the women's lavatory and gripped the toilet bowl. She was sorry she had eaten breakfast. Then she was sorry she didn't have more breakfast to give back. She sank to the floor. If she vomited on the tiles, that was just too bad. She wrapped herself around the cool porcelain. She reached up and flushed the toilet to keep the porcelain cool. She clutched the cool porcelain.
An hour later, she was still dizzy but coherent enough to be glad she was a witch with cleaning spells. She took the rest of the day off and went home.
Two mornings later, she stepped out her front door to discover four more bottles of wine.
"I'm bad," she said as she violated all the rules and had a glass of red wine with an omelet.
'Good job, Severus, you evil genius,' she thought as her throbbing pain began decreasing at the first sip.
'With a sound body and a clear mind, I can track down the traitor,' she thought. 'I know he has weaknesses: he wants social interaction, he will rescue the brave, and he has compassion for the afflicted. And I know where to look for him. The wine is a superb vintage that makes me dissatisfied with anything I can afford. He is providing pain relief to the wealthy.'
She was resolute. 'It would be easy to let him continue providing pain relief to the unfortunate. It would be easy to ignore him and let his fertile mind concoct more beneficial potions for mankind.'
She raised her glass for a toast. 'We must be brave and strong in these troubled times.'
She washed the breakfast dishes and cleaned part of the flat she had been neglecting.
She was counting the feathers in her cap. 'I will hunt down the nemesis of the witch world as befits the most brilliant witch of my age. I only have to locate him: both sides will kill him on sight.'
As she set out for work with a light step, she thought, 'But not so fast.'
- * * *
"I'm having lunch with an old student of mine tomorrow," said Flitwick. "Well, not that old. Why don't you join us?"
"I may as well," said Jack. "Do I know him?"
"Her. Hermione Granger, a brilliant student. But I should warn you she was injured in the battle. She's often in pain, and it's made her abrasive."
Flitwick had chosen a mundane village restaurant that was an unusual combination of rustic and sophisticated. The specialties were several stews, but Flitwick assured him the broth was nicely seasoned and the meat was braised, not boiled. The aroma of frying onion and garlic wafted out of the kitchen. The wines were decent. The two had arrived early and were having a glass to brace themselves for the abrasive Hermione Granger.
"Hi," she said pleasantly, appearing behind them. Flitwick introduced them.
"I'm glad you didn't wait for me," she said. "It feels like I'm dropping in on friends. How many glasses have you had?"
"This is our first," said Jack.
"Then it won't take me long to catch up," she replied. The menus arrived. "The stews are great," said Hermione, "but if you don't mind waiting, I was thinking of having the grilled chicken." She looked at Jack. "It comes with flat bread, humus, and tabouli."
"The owners came from the Near East by way of France," explained Flitwick.
"The grilled chicken sounds good," said Jack.
"Flitwick says you're teaching part time," said Hermione.
"A number of people volunteered," he said. "I'm surprised you're not teaching."
"Maybe someday," she said. "I hear they even drafted Mrs. Malfoy and she and you are friends."
"Just acquaintances, really," he replied.
He must have given away something by the way he said it because Hermione was looking closely at him.
Flitwick intervened. "Jack and Narcissa were on opposite sides. It takes time to forget all the old wounds." He looked at Hermione. "Is your group at the Ministry still active?"
"Don't tell anybody," she said, "but they have me going to the masked ball in case some ex-disciples are lurking there."
"There was a raid several weeks ago," said Flitwick. "Were you there? How did you get out?"
"It's all pretty confused," said Hermione, looking into the distance and tossing her hair. She wanted to change the topic. She addressed Jack. "Are you still in the Department of Mysteries?"
Jack felt as though the ball had been tossed into his court. "I've done several things. Eight years ago, there was a movement to revitalize Potions."
"Revitalize?" asked Flitwick.
"Our name for the school Potions course was 'kitchen-aid,'" said Jack. "'Stir twice clockwise; stir once counter-clockwise.' There's no information in those instructions."
"What did you do?" asked Hermione.
"We spent three years putting making potions on a conceptual basis," said Jack, "then we asked ourselves how one would reconstruct how a potion was made. We spent three years on what we called 'Analytical-Potions.'"
"I never heard about any of that," said Hermione.
"Sometimes, Jack's department is too mysterious," offered Flitwick.
"We wrote it up," said Jack, "but by that time we were burned-out on potions and the school was in turmoil. We took a rest break. I went into examining unusual artifacts."
- * * *
Reflecting on the luncheon later, Hermione decided that Jack Higgins was aloof, distant, and arrogant. She considered a witch in a relationship with him. 'She would spend her life looking into those bright, shining eyes and wondering what he was thinking,' thought Hermione.
'I've got to write a nice note to Flitwick,' she thought, 'that thanks him for inviting Jack. If I offer to treat them, the three of us can meet for another lunch. Maybe something informal...we can fly out of the village to a picnic spot. I'm sure it's part of my job to learn more about the Department of Mysteries, and I'm certain Jack is a good source.'
- * * *
Jack, his senses heightened because of his encounter with Mrs. Malfoy, had noticed that Hermione had been unconcerned about her scar and had been pain-free. She had been vivacious and sensitive to other people. Despite her joke about catching up, she had only sipped at her wine. She had been evasive about what happened during the raid and had given a flirtatious hair flip.
'Romance,' thought Jack, 'or drugs or both.'
Later, he mentioned having had lunch with Hermione Granger to people at work, and one co-worker responded that the holy terror of law enforcement had undergone a transformation during the last two weeks.
'Definitely drugs,' thought Jack. 'Probably pain relief. And romance, too, I think.'
Other ideas occurred to him. 'It has to be an illicit drug because other people are suffering without relief. Hermione must be getting the drug from someone else because she's not the type to keep a painkiller secret. What is this drug, and why is it a secret? Are the drug and the romance connected?'
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56 Reviews | 8.48/10 Average
Fantastic ending--Severus as a wonderful anti-hero subversive deus ex machina sweeping in and offering Hermione a life and livelihood--glad to see that she is a fast thinker, accepting the odds are against her (if she stubbornly sticks to her story) but able to assess what he is offering her--it's doubly delicious the irony of her being now a fugitive (well, soon to be) and that she remains naive to Jack, being her attacker, harbouring fugitives all along, Bellatrix and Narcissa--it's sort of a poetic justice that the know-it-all has been forced to experience some humbling humanity, albeit of a subversive nature--again, a brilliant twist (and for some reason makes me think of Bob Dylan's lyrics to 'Like a Rolling Stone'... Anyway...)I'm tickled pink that Harry and Parvati and Padma have also established a wholesome threesome paralleling Jack, Narcissa, and Bellatrix--also love the final capper per Jack then Harry's section: ‘I’m in for it now,’ he thought.' to each wizard's situation--I suppose we should give our best wishes to each guy, as each will never have a moment's peace satisfying the wishes and whims of the partners, but I suppose that is what will keep life interesting, engaging, and fulfilling for them. Thank you for a fantastic tale!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Severus had positive thoughts about Hermione when he rescued her. A lapse in the story is not introducing and sustaining this throughout the intermediate chapters. Her flaw is bitterness and intensity, but since these are understandable and her heart is in the right place, her tragedy is only partial. Besides, if she wishes to be with Severus, she will have to abandon normal society.It is true all the wizards have demanding partners, but aside from being careful what one asks for, it might be the best outcome for them once they have adapted.Thank you for all the insightful reviews.
Fantastic twists in the plot--and it is a miracle that the Black sisters did not murder Hermione, but thought of what Jack would have done--and on a side note, I think Jack underestimates Narcissa and Bellatrix and their love and need for him, one that eschews and has transcended the narrow category of 'aristocrat' that seems to constantly trouble him. Yes! Finally, Harry! You see, threesomes can be embraced and work out! Oh ye of little faith--but now he has his own experience to believe and take strength from, instead of the musings and encouragement of an older, more experienced wizard such as Jack. Jack seems to be embracing and enjoying his threesome arrangement with more strength and commitment, in the sense that he is not entertaining the idea of running off and disappearing but rather coming to terms with and believing/wanting this arrangement on a deeper, more sincere level--great chapter! Must read on to see what actually will happen!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thank you for the kind review of a climatic chapter where everything comes together. A standard goal is to have the ending be both unexpected and a logical consequence of previous events.The Black sisters exercised great restraint in deference to Jack, especially since they believe their safety depends on eliminating Hermione.Jack is a strange combination of arrogance and self doubt.Harry wins over the Patils with a business deal.
Poor Harry... He has accepted his attraction to them fully and yet is now banished; Jack has accepted his attraction to both and is feeling overwhelmed yet committed to doing what he can for them, on all levels--Narcissa and Bellatrix are unconcerned about how demanding their attentions and expectations of Jack are... But they continue to enjoy and appreciate his efforts and protection and heroic actions on their part... Hermione is on the move and it seems she hasn't developed any tolerance or empathy and is sticking to her guns and moral code in regards to her professional work and agenda--enjoying everyone's dilemmaGreat chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Yes, everyone is being blindsided. Harry is banished, Hermione discovers Jack and Narcissa are a couple, Jack succumbs to the Black sisters, the Ministry is fooled by Beatrice LaGrange, and the Malfoy manner is raided. The couples (more accurately, triples) are working their way through the problems while Hermione devotes herself to her work.
Intriguing look into the Patil family and all of the pros and cons the parents are weighing and struggling with, the loss of tradition and honour being huge impediments... but maybe there will be a clear break with tradition in a choice that could lead to happiness for both of their daughters with Harry. I have a feeling Hermione has not given up on her notion of capturing Severus Snape, whether that be to turn him in or to have him for her own clandestinely. Perhaps her liason with Jack will help strenthen her and his own resolve one way or another with decisions regarding the truant fugitives in their lives--lovely, informative chapter while still leaving many questions to be answered!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Glad you liked it. The premise is that romance does not take place in a vacuum, and we have an extended business family, not to mention high caste and pure blood, to whom propriety is important. There are the fiery females and the calmer Mr. Patil who has more depth than one might think.Parvati and Padma with Harry might be more like their parents than they realize.Yes, Hermione is as determined as ever.
Great developments--whether Hermione and Jack's afternoon delight development will benefit her or him more remains to be seen--in particular the aspect that he truly would have roused suspicion by avoiding her and her need to have someone listen to her, be with her, appreciate her, make love with her, etc.--then there are the Black sisters, who need anything to be a decoy in order to keep Bellatrix being safely harboured with Narcissa. Will Jack be able to juggle all of the witches, opposing sides with opposing objectives? Will their be some bargaining going on between Jack and Hermione regarding the fugitives Severus and Bellatrix? Great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. The bargaining is an interesting suggestion full of possibilities. Would Jack help catch Severus to save Bellatrix, or would he try to save both? Would he form an alliance with Severus and Bellatrix? Could either one, or anyone, trust Jack? Would the ruthless Hermione keep the agreement in the first case? Would she be able to thwart his efforts in the seoond? Would her efforts be derailed if she fell in love with Jack? As dramatic background, all of this is a matter of life and death for Severus and Bellatrix and Narcissa. It might become a matter of life or death for Hermione.
Hmmm, Harry does have a dilemma... Twill be difficult unless he chooses both The same goes for Jack, although at this rate, the decision(s) may be made for him, with Bellatrix being the more assertive, although Narcissa has declared herself on some level, allowing an opening of sorts... Love the further exploration of Bellatrix's more human needs, Jack's vulnerability, and Narcissa's verbalisation of what she wants.Lovely contrasts of Harry muddling along, discovering the female sex as it were versus Jack's experience, having been married and divorced, but he is still discovering things about the opposite sex with his two particular witches. Lovely work and great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Yes, a chapter in which Harry and Jack are being drawn in deeper - the shop's storeroom where Harry participates in retail that is important to the Patils and becomes more intimate - the castle's storeroom where Jack participates in family history that is important to the Blacks and becomes more intimate.
Hermione is being warned, if she doesn't back down, she will be done away with; Jack offers her polite and considerate company; Severus is very direct--she is confronted with truths. Harry enjoys helping Parvati and Padma out and they all continue to discover further and enjoy each other's company. Harry has tired of his watching, and Jack accepts the responsibilty feeling he has nothing to lose and wishing for some different dynamics in his life, taking a risk whether Narcissa will reciprocate or ignore him, unsure. The inclusion of Bellatrix, the riskiness of harbouring a top Undesireable has placed him in a dilemma, as both Black sisters are found to be needing him, each in her own way. There is a sadness and vulnerability brought out regarding Bellatrix and with that more complex natures revealed of who they were and have been during their lives as sisters--and now there is Jack having to deal with more volatile possibilities--whose side will he choose? The loyalty to the Ministry? Or a very private newfounded loyalty to the Black sisters? Harry, Severus, and jack, each in his own way, are having to be very selective in how much and/or which way he is interacting with his particular witch(s)-great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Another good review: this time of a chapter where everyone is becoming entangled. It tries for some contrast - the mild bickering and jealousy of the Patil sisters, the more insistent demands of the Black sisters, the different reactions of Bellatrix and Narcissa when they learn Jack has killed someone dear to them, the companionable visit of Jack versus the hard-edged visit of Severus. Because of the witches, Harry is neglecting professorial duties, Jack ministry wishes, and Severus his survival.
Thoroughly enjoying the unfolding intimacy of trust with Padma and Parvati becoming comfortable enough with Harry to share and show each one's scar; Harry is not scared off, rather commiserates and is accepting--he's lived with physical and emotional/pyscological scars his entire life and so can understand; likewise, an interesting light is shone on Narcissa revealing her physical/traumatic scar to Jack, and he revealing his psychological/traumatic scar to her (hexing/killing her husband). With the Patil sisters and Harry, it draws them closer together; with Jack and Narcissa, the revelations asunder them. Hermione is in a dilemma, conflicted; her physical scar and discomfort impeding her; her resistance against Severus' curative painfully crumbling, giving into it, but is it only to strengthen her resolve and aid her to capture him? She must partake in that which she despises and has vowed against--and then there is Jack, in fluctuation, unhappy and wishing for a fuller companionship and fulfillment when reflecting on Narcissa--looking forward to seeing if meeting Granger draws him one way or another--she seems a bit miffed at him, and yet intrigued on some level--great chapter! Love how the plot is thickening! Also, I've meant to comment on that I love it that you have written the female characters with explicit and metaphorical scars (not just the wizards), and this is being explored, layered on, informing & influencing character's decisions and hesitations--again, wonderful work!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
A good review of a chapter that attempts the depiction of conflicting emotions. There's not much left to say. Their attraction overcomes the shyness and obstacles for Harry, Padma, and Parvati. An unfortunate event shatters Narcissa and Jack. Readers might be disappointed that Hermione decides to use an illicit drug supplied by an outlaw, but I think it is an understandable response to chronic pain. Hermione is both repelled and intrigued by the mysterious, perhaps unknowable, Jack.
Mmm, love Severus and Hermione on the underground, his observations--Sev in quite a predicament, and Hermione being sick, getting cleaned up by him, and all fussy and defensive--that is until the last second when she gets her instrument of power back in her hands, fully aware and with a gleam in her eye--Severus has had a narrow escape in more ways than one!Love also the narrow escape of Jack, Narcissa, and Harry--thoroughly enjoyed them passed out under cardboard in an alley without their wands (having not brought them (nor allowed) to the masked dance), having to rough it, Muggle style--HA! Love the inner thoughts and commentaries--something is brewing--great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Two clumsy rescues - complete with unchivalrous thoughts, ingratitude, sarcasm, and betrayal.
Conjures up thoughts and reflections about military maneuvers from the great World Wars, in particular, WWI (although the infamous battle of Stalingrad of WWII flitters through my thoughts), some utterly futile, some more effective, etc. Brilliant, love the detailed movement and strategies explained and developed, and then the fallout and segue into the subversive drug clientele and trafficking, as the wizard goverment & officials turn a decisive blind eye, having other seeming priorities... As with anyone who may have to resort to being involved in procuring the way and assessibilty for self-and society-destructing illicit drugs, it brings out a conflicting melancholic feeling knowing that Severus seems to have no choice but to do so--to be a part of this... Great chapter!
Response from nagandsev (Reviewer)
Ooops, reread the summary--Gettysburg/Civil War flank maneuvers and strategies referenced! Just had the impact of great strategic plans occurring while reading--in my excited state, sorry to not have reread the summary for the significant great war/battle reference!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Your thinking WW! is not wrong. Glad you enjoyed the strategy. The Longstreet quote is a despairing comment on any high attrition conflict. A subtle element is that, proportionally, the loss of six Arithmancers is equivalent to a conflict killing most of the PhD mathematicians and physicists in the UK. The war has hollowed out and scared society, and the story is about people coping. Thanks for all the commentary.
Highly enjoyed the introduction and development of Jack and his background and broadened livelihood into the story and in particular his interaction with Narcissa--seems they are both going to do well as professors along with developing a mutual relationship of sorts--hmmm, the plot is thickening deeper and richer as each scenario sheds light on the different perspectives of each character--lovely, intriguing, engaging work!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. Two lost people intellectualizing their alienation and thereby finding a kindred spirit.
Lovely and engaging inclusion of Padma and Parvati, two rarely written about/underwritten characters in the HP canon, their family business situation, war scars, and the biting reminder of their high-caste pure-blood status having had and currently affecting their life decisions and sacrifices. Love it that Harry has initiated some interest and has enjoyed their company, longing for more--the intertwining of these characters with the catalytic event during the mask dance is so wonderful--it's not a secret that I love your brilliant, unique quality of writing and fine style, both one-shots and multi-chapters--just with the multi-chapter ones, there's more to enjoy!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
The central thought was thst the Patils would be family oriented and business oriented. The impression from canon is that the twins are well mannered but with emotions seething beneath the surface. Yes, they are hemmed in by economic circumstances, war scars, and fami;ly honor. And thank you for all the kind words.
Titillating development between Narcissa and Harry, only to be thwarted by a mysterious saboteur--brilliant! Looking forward to finding out who Narcissa has absconded with, intentionally or unintentionally... Hmmm... Love it that the dance hall is a vortex of intrigue and action in which these different characters' tales are intertwining and springing forth from--brilliant, just brilliant--and of course as seductive and engaging as ever!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thank you very much. This chapter attempts scenes that illustrate the attraction and tension between them. She is a brave and intelligent lady whose background and experiences place her in a world different from his. The masked ball appears to be bringing the community together.
Hmmm, one could say a wizard's got to do what a wizard's got to do to survive--Brilliant evolution of trade and commerce by Severus, keenly observing his choices and acting with astuteness and practicality about the ways of the world, who has seemingly been caught between a rock and a hard place to survive with his head above water in matters; I can only cheer him on with accepting all that life is offering him, regarding the ladies at the dance who equally seem to be in need of companionship and/or some social interaction, whether that be merely conversation and dancing on the dance floor and/or dancing from the waist down clandestinely elsewhere. Love the unexpected ending with the attacke and Hermione in the midst in need of his intervention/interaction--great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. Part of the chapter attempts a rational explanation of the wizard economy which canon presents as a collection of artisans and shopkeepers untouced by the industrial revolution with a bloated ministry and a large number of sports teams. The story takes a benign attitude toward pain-killing drugs. Society's prejudices and Severus's fugitive status keep him from offering this benefit to all. Severus's social efforts do seem to be appreciated.
Mmm, love her dilatory contemplations and hesitancy in this detailed, engaging intro, establishing Hermione's seeming lull in life after surviving the war, scarred inside and out... and a disturbing (but excellent, intriguing) cliffie of an ending!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
On a personal note, I have been hoping you would discover 'Cross Roads.' The first chapter depicts a post conflict society through the eyes of a damaged veteran. The story experiments by extending a cliff hanger for five chapters.
I like the sneaky necklace is a wand. This is a wonderful beginning!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. If you glanced at the reviews, you know that readers find this story difficult and different. If it helps, the first five chapters introduce the characters, hopefully in an entertaining manner. Good luck.
This was extremely disjointed and hard to follow. Couldn't figure out what was going on from one moment to the next. I am sorry, but I had to give up only 1/3 of the way through.It reminded me of Pulp Fiction, with its unchronological disjointedness, only without the good acting to distract me from the fact that I didn't know what the hell was going on from the beginning of that movie to the end of it! :)Perhaps it's just that I don't appreciate your avant-garded style or what-have-you, but this story was simply too much work to read for my tastes.Thank you for sharing it, and I hope you find other audiences who are more receptive to it. Cheers.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Does this mean you're not going to list this story as a favorite?
ohhhh Jack is heading into a dark path. He is so creepy! Good job!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
After some hesitation, I decided to take the story to where few fans would want to follow. Even Bellatrix, who trusts him with her life, wonders what Jack is thinking and feeling. Thanks for the reviews.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
After some hesitation, I decided to take the story to where few fans would want to follow. Even Bellatrix, who trusts him with her life, wonders what Jack is thinking and feeling. Thanks for the reviews.
Well, Jack is certainly interesting. I can't believe all the things going on on so many levels.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I did promise that paths would cross: the resolution depends on all paths crossing. At first, I thought there was no canon character like Jack. Now, I think there could not be a canon character like Jack.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I did promise that paths would cross: the resolution depends on all paths crossing. At first, I thought there was no canon character like Jack. Now, I think there could not be a canon character like Jack.
AHHH! Hermione had better find severus!!!! ;) Can't wait to find out! Great chapter, by the way!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Glad you liked the chapter. There was concern about it being a 'guicco piano' about two non-canon characters.Perhaps the story should be more emphatic. Hermione has located Severus twice but failed to capture him. If he is captured, or merely located, he is a dead man since both sides wish to kill him. Both Hermione and Severus know this. At one time, Hermione thought that made her job easier--she need only locate him. Bringing the traitor to justice would be a feather in the cap of the most brilliant witch of the age. The question is whether or not she is having second thoughts about doing the right thing. Of course there is also the question of how the story is going to resolve this little dilemma.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
My reply may have been too emphatic. It was late at night, and I'm currently punching a project through a bureaucracy. At any rate, I did like your review.
Response from baseballbabe122 (Reviewer)
Haha, that's oky. I enjoyed that little insight. :)
Harry first, why does he have to chose one over the other, why can't he have both? Now Jack, can anyone really survive the Blacks, not just Narcissa and Bella? lol. If he plays his cards right he will be ok, I think. Then there is Hermione, please give her, her spirit back. She seems so unhappy and Jack is not the answer. I truly hope she find Severus. And he finds it in his heart to come to trust her. The twins' parents need to allow their daughters to make their own decisions and when they make a mistake let them learn from it and move on. Just be there for them either way.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Quite a lot to think about, but an author should keep most of it to himself.One thought is that canon-Hermine at school had lots of spirit, but it required the Mountain Troll incident for her spirit to form bonds. Is adult canon-Hermione similar?
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Quite a lot to think about, but an author should keep most of it to himself.One thought is that canon-Hermine at school had lots of spirit, but it required the Mountain Troll incident for her spirit to form bonds. Is adult canon-Hermione similar?
Wow, this story is aptly named. I am impressed at all the twists and turns you are making. I suggest Jack gets killed, Harry marries one of the twins and Severus and Hermione hook up with a happy ending
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Okay, Jack is toast. But not so fast. All the things reviewers want depend on Jack.Thanks for the comments. Not everyone likes this type of story.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Okay, Jack is toast. But not so fast. All the things reviewers want depend on Jack.Thanks for the comments. Not everyone likes this type of story.
now now girls no fighting over the man I'm sure he would be more than able to take the both of you lol
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Ah, yes, who gets to French him? Glad you were amused.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Ah, yes, who gets to French him? Glad you were amused.
Jack is certainly the popular fellow. What is Snape up to?
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
With the current social conditions, even Harry is popular. Hermione is puzzled that Jack and Harry aren’t doing better for themselves.
Perhaps aristocratic ladies and brainy girls have limited compatible choices.
Severus is hiding from Hermione who would do the right thing and put him in prison.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
With the current social conditions, even Harry is popular. Hermione is puzzled that Jack and Harry aren’t doing better for themselves.
Perhaps aristocratic ladies and brainy girls have limited compatible choices.
Severus is hiding from Hermione who would do the right thing and put him in prison.
Hmmm, I hope Hermione and Jack don't hook up. Something about him raised my neck hairs. Food for thought, at the beginning of the chapter it seemed to me that Hermione is having some growing pains. She seems to be acting like a teenager (wich would be normal in these circomstances) worrying about boys. Very nice, a very 'human' chapter.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I appreciate your comments since I rewrote the chapter several times trying to give complexity and depth to Hermione, a character with mixed motives.
It would be great if, in Jack, we have a character that is always kind and understanding but is a character that readers recognize as sinister.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I appreciate your comments since I rewrote the chapter several times trying to give complexity and depth to Hermione, a character with mixed motives.
It would be great if, in Jack, we have a character that is always kind and understanding but is a character that readers recognize as sinister.