The Parents
Chapter 12 of 15
FairfieldJourneys end with lovers’ meetings.
Arthur Conan Doyle
The Parents
"He's just a friend who's been helping in the store."
"Even your father knows better than that, dears," said Mrs. Patil to her two daughters.
Padma and Parvati had brought Harry to a family social occasion. Their mother's sister and her husband ran an import-export business of both magic and mundane items. The Brit wizard economy was down, but the mundane items were doing well, and the Brit wizard jewelry was selling at a number of mundane locations. They were celebrating their success by a catered buffet.
Padma and Parvati had been worried about Harry and the spicy food, and they had been worried about his fitting in, but he had sampled the food carefully, and he and their male relatives were deep into sports and the poor economy.
Trouble is always the unexpected.
"He's taking advantage of you," said Mrs. Patil.
Parvati recalled the time she had cornered Harry for a snog when he had helped her move some heavy jugs of extract. It was becoming more and more natural to corner him.
Padma recalled the time she had lured Harry into a snog when he had helped her fetch several boxes of herbs. It was getting easier and easier to lure him someplace.
"His chasing both of you is going to ruin your reputations and break your hearts," said Mrs. Patil.
Parvati remembered pressing her breasts against Harry and feeling extra tingly knowing that within the hour Padma would be pressing her breasts against him.
Padma remembered holding Harry and feeling warmer and damper knowing that an hour ago Parvati had been holding him and feeling all warm and damp.
"Well, as unsuitable as he is, maybe he will be decent enough to choose one of you," said Mrs. Patil.
Padma thought about Harry never again giving her sister that mischievous grin. The light left the room.
Parvati thought about Harry never again giving her sister that special smile. The air left the room.
"Be that as it may," said Mrs. Patil, "your father is still negotiating with Mr. Chanda. He might take Parvati, but he's asking more than your father can afford now."
"He's only forty years older than I am, and he can put a bag over my head at night," sighed Parvati. "Then he can go count my dowry."
"Parvati, your father is doing his best," said Mrs. Patil.
The two sisters had a contingency plan for such an occasion. The sister in question would tell her fiancé that they should marry soon because she was pregnant but didn't know who the father was. A week later, she would say the wedding needn't be rushed because she wasn't pregnant after all and she was in no hurry to change her life. If that didn't do the trick, she would reconsider and suggest an early wedding because although she wasn't pregnant it could happen anytime and if she were married the child would have a father.
Mrs. Patil patted Padma's hand. "Your father is trying his best for you, too."
The three women knew what the problem was. Padma's injury was hidden, but she could become a cripple, unable to perform her domestic and wifely duties. The two girls recalled that Harry, emboldened by their growing intimacy, had been insisting that they rest at the cash register while he stocked the shelves and brewed potions. Padma, freed from over-exertion, was moving around better these days.
"We should rejoin the party," said Mrs. Patil, rising to leave. "But you two need to freshen up. You look like your best friend just died."
Padma and Parvati wanted to locate Harry for a hug.
After their mother left, Parvati spoke first. "Do you think we're immoral, that we're perverts?"
Padma was a bit depressed and spoke quietly. "I've never asked you. It just happened. Do you mind that I snog him? I like it that he likes you."
"I'm glad that he likes you," said Parvati.
"I am jealous sometimes," admitted Padma. "You have the bubbly personality that he likes.
"I'm the one who's jealous," said Parvati. "You have the serious personality that he likes."
"Hmm," went the two girls, thinking their parents were pushing things too far and too fast, thinking their parents were too eager to get their daughters married off.
Their mother had driven them to a gloomy outlook about the two of them and Harry. "This shouldn't be possible. This shouldn't be happening," said Padma. "Do you think he's playing with us, leading us on?"
Neither of them had noticed any evil intent or mendacity. Harry was the opposite of a smooth seducer, and the sisters appreciated that. They were equal partners in a great adventure.
"It would be a great adventure if Harry really likes us," they both worried. "Maybe our parents are right. He can't like both of us, and his being with both of us means he doesn't really like either one of us."
They concluded none of them knew what they were doing but it felt right. They decided they should pry Harry loose from the party and take him home early. They needed some quality time with him before he returned to his school lodgings.
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Mrs. Patil was upset. Her sister and others had informed her that her daughters' behavior was shameful. Mr. Chanda had haughtily announced he was no longer seeking Parvati's hand. She had done the best she could to stop the public scandal by having the Ministry issue an edict banning Harry Potter from the store. Now, other friends were telling her she was driving her daughters straight into Harry Potter's bed. The worst of it was her husband had been no help in the first place and was not supportive now.
"We can protect our daughters from Harry Potter if they want to be protected from him," he said. "Otherwise, not."
He tried to console her. "They're not going to do anything foolish. The two of them always talk everything over."
"Are you telling me my daughters will talk about it and decide to sleep with him?" wailed Mrs. Patil, who was not the least bit consoled by her husband's infuriating reasonableness.
It came to Mr. Patil that the household was quieter and life easier since his two daughters had moved to the store. He would never admit that to his wife although he was certain she was thinking the same and didn't want to admit it. He thought about someone voluntarily living with both of his daughters. 'Not if he has half a brain,' he thought. But even he had to acknowledge his daughters were lovely and could be most gracious. 'Young men don't have half a brain,' he thought. 'I know I didn't. What does that Australian bloke on the telly say? "That's nature's way."'
"I'll talk to them," he told his wife.
"And what will you tell them? Be sure to talk it over before you sleep with him and ruin the family reputation?" asked his exasperated wife.
"If they were sons instead of daughters, no one would fuss," he reminded his wife. "But we had daughters, not sons. Our daughters, not our sons, went to war. Our daughters, not our sons, are running a family business."
His wife wondered what in the world he was carrying on about. She, more than anyone, knew they had daughters instead of sons.
Mr. Patil had arranged to have lunch with his daughters at their store. He walked to the shop, once again grateful that his wife and daughters were no longer under they same roof...saving his eardrums and his nerves from another assault. He couldn't say that of course, no more than he could say he was glad he no longer had to tolerate Mr. Chanda.
* * *
"He helps in the store," said Parvati as soon as they had closed the shop and taken their father upstairs for lunch. "He saved us by brewing potions and stocking shelves during the Holidays. We thought everyone would be grateful."
"He reads and grades papers and watches the cash register," said Padma. "He can't do as much this term as last term because this term he's teaching the first five years of Defense Against the Dark Arts. It's a lot of work for a beginning teacher. We thought the family would appreciate that he's still trying to help us."
"He feels bad that he didn't face the Dark Lord. He's adjusting to living an ordinary life," said Parvati. "We wanted him to feel welcome with our family."
"We hoped you and Mum would accept him as a friend," said Padma, "not insult him."
"You two are becoming more like your mother every day," said Mr. Patil.
"Dad!"
"How can you say that!"
He reminded his daughters how protective their mother was, how the malicious rumors had hurt her, and how she would probably rescind the Ministry restraint herself once she had calmed down.
Mr. Patil listened as his daughters protested that they had behaved properly, as they agreed they could try to be more careful, and as they asserted there was nothing they could do if people wanted to spread malicious gossip. He agreed they had behaved properly. He did not mention the main problem: it was obvious both of them were attracted to Harry and Harry to both of them. He did not think there was any way the three could hide that.
Mr. Patil returned to his office. His wife had vented; his daughters had vented. He calmed himself by walking around and chatting to various co-workers. He reflected that by listening to his daughters talk about Harry without protesting, he had given his tacit consent to the relationship, but he realized there was no alternative. The restraining order from his wife had jeopardized family relations, and he had had to make concessions.
Back at his desk, Mr. Patil remembered that he had met Harry Potter before. During the battle, he and his wife had been part of the escort for Potter, Weasley, and Granger. The escort would make the final effort to get Potter to the Dark Lord. The Opposition army had chosen mature witches and wizards for the task, thinking they would see the task through to its bitter end. They had experienced the first rise of the Dark Lord, and they knew the terrible consequences of failure.
But the escort was not needed. When they heard the Dark Lord was dead, Mr. and Mrs. Patil, like others in an inexperienced army, had broken ranks to search for their friends and relatives. They had found their daughters with the few survivors of Forlorn Hope One and had taken them to hospital. Mr. Patil had returned to the battle field to help others. He had arrived to find a nervous army back on the alert after a surprise attack from an unknown quarter.
He had followed the trail of the Forlorn Hopes, sinking deeper into despair as he had passed the still bodies. 'The Department of Mysteries is gone,' he had thought. 'They were crazies, but they'll be missed.' Mr. Patil had reached the spot where the Dark Lord had met his end. Mr. Patil had stood there, staring blankly ahead, overcome by the loses. He had become aware that Flitwick and Higgins were standing on either side of him and trying to rouse him from his stunned state. Together, the three of them had mustered enough fortitude to search for those still living and take them to hospital. 'There's a reason there's only one war per generation,' he had thought.
* * *
"Did you talk to your daughters?" asked Mrs. Patil when her husband arrived home.
"Yes, but you need to talk to them about contraceptives."
"Oh my gods, has that Potter brat defiled them?"
"No," said Mr. Patil. "And he may never, but we want to be safe. Besides, 'defiling them' may not be the right way to describe it."
"I get to do the hard part," said Mrs. Patil. "And what do you mean that's not the right way to describe it?"
"They may be serious about each other."
'Men,' she thought. 'They're useless. Of course it's serious. That's what I've been trying to tell him. How can he calmly stand by while his daughters are defiled and the family humiliated.'
Mr. Patil, having used up his emotional reserve for the day, settled into his chair with the evening paper. His afternoon reminisces about the battle had given him a somber perspective that was immune to scandal. If they were going to have a threesome, there was precious little he could do about it. What precious little he could do was to keep the fiery females of the family together. He ran through what he knew. His daughters had become re-acquainted with Potter at the dance four months ago. His best guess was that the two of them were snogging the living daylights out of the poor bloke. Under normal circumstances, if it were a pair, he would expect them to start having sex in about two months. A threesome would create more barriers to cross. If they remained together, they would start having sex in about four months...plenty of time for their mother to calm down and for everyone to be reasonable and prudent about the whole affair.
Mr. Patil was a moderate man who was careful what he asked of the gods and fate. He had asked that his daughters live through the war. He would not make another request until it was time to ask that his grandchildren be healthy. He would work out the rest himself.
Propelled by forces that baffled her, Mrs. Patil began massaging her husband's shoulders. She had been doing this almost every evening for several months, and the consequences were always the same. When his shoulders were relaxed, she changed to massaging his chest. He took her hand and led her around the chair to his lap. When she was younger, she would let an argument interfere with this.
She took it slow, beginning with stroking his temples. Her fingers let him know she was a gentle soul who was ready for any affection he would like to bestow upon her. Her lips and tongue showed a willingness to reciprocate any attention he decided to give her. Her body moving against his said she was a warm-hearted person who would return any passion he felt for her. Her whispered words said she was ready to receive him any time he desired her. Her tender embraces displayed an eagerness for him to take her any way he wanted to have her. Her deep moans let him know that he could do her...right here and right now would be fine.
Some time later, a contented lady served a simple evening meal. But times were hard, and she could not spend the hours after dinner relaxing with her husband. The two worked in the Ministry instead of in any of the family businesses, but they were experts at accounting and paperwork. After dinner, because the family could not afford to hire help, she and her husband did accounts and completed official forms for several shops.
Mr. Patil, not much the worse for wear and tear, was more convinced than before that saying someone had "defiled" or "taken advantage" of two Patil women would not be an accurate description.
Mrs. Patil was reconsidering. 'Maybe he's not completely useless. He talked to them, and the family is still together. He loves his daughters, and he's not going to abandon them. I hadn't considered how terrible it would have been if he had gone into a rage and disowned them. If they have feelings for each other, perhaps I should let romance and passion take its course. That's what my husband and I did. It's a struggle now, but we're okay because we have each other.' She sighed. 'Oh, this is going to be so embarrassing.'
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Author and Beta Note: And so, dear reader, our characters are at the crossroads. Can Hermione locate Severus? Can Severus trust Hermione? Will Hermione pursue Jack? Who will Harry choose? Will the Patil family accept him? Will Jack survive the Black sisters? Can he protect them from Hermione? Can he learn French?
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56 Reviews | 8.48/10 Average
Fantastic ending--Severus as a wonderful anti-hero subversive deus ex machina sweeping in and offering Hermione a life and livelihood--glad to see that she is a fast thinker, accepting the odds are against her (if she stubbornly sticks to her story) but able to assess what he is offering her--it's doubly delicious the irony of her being now a fugitive (well, soon to be) and that she remains naive to Jack, being her attacker, harbouring fugitives all along, Bellatrix and Narcissa--it's sort of a poetic justice that the know-it-all has been forced to experience some humbling humanity, albeit of a subversive nature--again, a brilliant twist (and for some reason makes me think of Bob Dylan's lyrics to 'Like a Rolling Stone'... Anyway...)I'm tickled pink that Harry and Parvati and Padma have also established a wholesome threesome paralleling Jack, Narcissa, and Bellatrix--also love the final capper per Jack then Harry's section: ‘I’m in for it now,’ he thought.' to each wizard's situation--I suppose we should give our best wishes to each guy, as each will never have a moment's peace satisfying the wishes and whims of the partners, but I suppose that is what will keep life interesting, engaging, and fulfilling for them. Thank you for a fantastic tale!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Severus had positive thoughts about Hermione when he rescued her. A lapse in the story is not introducing and sustaining this throughout the intermediate chapters. Her flaw is bitterness and intensity, but since these are understandable and her heart is in the right place, her tragedy is only partial. Besides, if she wishes to be with Severus, she will have to abandon normal society.It is true all the wizards have demanding partners, but aside from being careful what one asks for, it might be the best outcome for them once they have adapted.Thank you for all the insightful reviews.
Fantastic twists in the plot--and it is a miracle that the Black sisters did not murder Hermione, but thought of what Jack would have done--and on a side note, I think Jack underestimates Narcissa and Bellatrix and their love and need for him, one that eschews and has transcended the narrow category of 'aristocrat' that seems to constantly trouble him. Yes! Finally, Harry! You see, threesomes can be embraced and work out! Oh ye of little faith--but now he has his own experience to believe and take strength from, instead of the musings and encouragement of an older, more experienced wizard such as Jack. Jack seems to be embracing and enjoying his threesome arrangement with more strength and commitment, in the sense that he is not entertaining the idea of running off and disappearing but rather coming to terms with and believing/wanting this arrangement on a deeper, more sincere level--great chapter! Must read on to see what actually will happen!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thank you for the kind review of a climatic chapter where everything comes together. A standard goal is to have the ending be both unexpected and a logical consequence of previous events.The Black sisters exercised great restraint in deference to Jack, especially since they believe their safety depends on eliminating Hermione.Jack is a strange combination of arrogance and self doubt.Harry wins over the Patils with a business deal.
Poor Harry... He has accepted his attraction to them fully and yet is now banished; Jack has accepted his attraction to both and is feeling overwhelmed yet committed to doing what he can for them, on all levels--Narcissa and Bellatrix are unconcerned about how demanding their attentions and expectations of Jack are... But they continue to enjoy and appreciate his efforts and protection and heroic actions on their part... Hermione is on the move and it seems she hasn't developed any tolerance or empathy and is sticking to her guns and moral code in regards to her professional work and agenda--enjoying everyone's dilemmaGreat chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Yes, everyone is being blindsided. Harry is banished, Hermione discovers Jack and Narcissa are a couple, Jack succumbs to the Black sisters, the Ministry is fooled by Beatrice LaGrange, and the Malfoy manner is raided. The couples (more accurately, triples) are working their way through the problems while Hermione devotes herself to her work.
Intriguing look into the Patil family and all of the pros and cons the parents are weighing and struggling with, the loss of tradition and honour being huge impediments... but maybe there will be a clear break with tradition in a choice that could lead to happiness for both of their daughters with Harry. I have a feeling Hermione has not given up on her notion of capturing Severus Snape, whether that be to turn him in or to have him for her own clandestinely. Perhaps her liason with Jack will help strenthen her and his own resolve one way or another with decisions regarding the truant fugitives in their lives--lovely, informative chapter while still leaving many questions to be answered!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Glad you liked it. The premise is that romance does not take place in a vacuum, and we have an extended business family, not to mention high caste and pure blood, to whom propriety is important. There are the fiery females and the calmer Mr. Patil who has more depth than one might think.Parvati and Padma with Harry might be more like their parents than they realize.Yes, Hermione is as determined as ever.
Great developments--whether Hermione and Jack's afternoon delight development will benefit her or him more remains to be seen--in particular the aspect that he truly would have roused suspicion by avoiding her and her need to have someone listen to her, be with her, appreciate her, make love with her, etc.--then there are the Black sisters, who need anything to be a decoy in order to keep Bellatrix being safely harboured with Narcissa. Will Jack be able to juggle all of the witches, opposing sides with opposing objectives? Will their be some bargaining going on between Jack and Hermione regarding the fugitives Severus and Bellatrix? Great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. The bargaining is an interesting suggestion full of possibilities. Would Jack help catch Severus to save Bellatrix, or would he try to save both? Would he form an alliance with Severus and Bellatrix? Could either one, or anyone, trust Jack? Would the ruthless Hermione keep the agreement in the first case? Would she be able to thwart his efforts in the seoond? Would her efforts be derailed if she fell in love with Jack? As dramatic background, all of this is a matter of life and death for Severus and Bellatrix and Narcissa. It might become a matter of life or death for Hermione.
Hmmm, Harry does have a dilemma... Twill be difficult unless he chooses both The same goes for Jack, although at this rate, the decision(s) may be made for him, with Bellatrix being the more assertive, although Narcissa has declared herself on some level, allowing an opening of sorts... Love the further exploration of Bellatrix's more human needs, Jack's vulnerability, and Narcissa's verbalisation of what she wants.Lovely contrasts of Harry muddling along, discovering the female sex as it were versus Jack's experience, having been married and divorced, but he is still discovering things about the opposite sex with his two particular witches. Lovely work and great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Yes, a chapter in which Harry and Jack are being drawn in deeper - the shop's storeroom where Harry participates in retail that is important to the Patils and becomes more intimate - the castle's storeroom where Jack participates in family history that is important to the Blacks and becomes more intimate.
Hermione is being warned, if she doesn't back down, she will be done away with; Jack offers her polite and considerate company; Severus is very direct--she is confronted with truths. Harry enjoys helping Parvati and Padma out and they all continue to discover further and enjoy each other's company. Harry has tired of his watching, and Jack accepts the responsibilty feeling he has nothing to lose and wishing for some different dynamics in his life, taking a risk whether Narcissa will reciprocate or ignore him, unsure. The inclusion of Bellatrix, the riskiness of harbouring a top Undesireable has placed him in a dilemma, as both Black sisters are found to be needing him, each in her own way. There is a sadness and vulnerability brought out regarding Bellatrix and with that more complex natures revealed of who they were and have been during their lives as sisters--and now there is Jack having to deal with more volatile possibilities--whose side will he choose? The loyalty to the Ministry? Or a very private newfounded loyalty to the Black sisters? Harry, Severus, and jack, each in his own way, are having to be very selective in how much and/or which way he is interacting with his particular witch(s)-great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Another good review: this time of a chapter where everyone is becoming entangled. It tries for some contrast - the mild bickering and jealousy of the Patil sisters, the more insistent demands of the Black sisters, the different reactions of Bellatrix and Narcissa when they learn Jack has killed someone dear to them, the companionable visit of Jack versus the hard-edged visit of Severus. Because of the witches, Harry is neglecting professorial duties, Jack ministry wishes, and Severus his survival.
Thoroughly enjoying the unfolding intimacy of trust with Padma and Parvati becoming comfortable enough with Harry to share and show each one's scar; Harry is not scared off, rather commiserates and is accepting--he's lived with physical and emotional/pyscological scars his entire life and so can understand; likewise, an interesting light is shone on Narcissa revealing her physical/traumatic scar to Jack, and he revealing his psychological/traumatic scar to her (hexing/killing her husband). With the Patil sisters and Harry, it draws them closer together; with Jack and Narcissa, the revelations asunder them. Hermione is in a dilemma, conflicted; her physical scar and discomfort impeding her; her resistance against Severus' curative painfully crumbling, giving into it, but is it only to strengthen her resolve and aid her to capture him? She must partake in that which she despises and has vowed against--and then there is Jack, in fluctuation, unhappy and wishing for a fuller companionship and fulfillment when reflecting on Narcissa--looking forward to seeing if meeting Granger draws him one way or another--she seems a bit miffed at him, and yet intrigued on some level--great chapter! Love how the plot is thickening! Also, I've meant to comment on that I love it that you have written the female characters with explicit and metaphorical scars (not just the wizards), and this is being explored, layered on, informing & influencing character's decisions and hesitations--again, wonderful work!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
A good review of a chapter that attempts the depiction of conflicting emotions. There's not much left to say. Their attraction overcomes the shyness and obstacles for Harry, Padma, and Parvati. An unfortunate event shatters Narcissa and Jack. Readers might be disappointed that Hermione decides to use an illicit drug supplied by an outlaw, but I think it is an understandable response to chronic pain. Hermione is both repelled and intrigued by the mysterious, perhaps unknowable, Jack.
Mmm, love Severus and Hermione on the underground, his observations--Sev in quite a predicament, and Hermione being sick, getting cleaned up by him, and all fussy and defensive--that is until the last second when she gets her instrument of power back in her hands, fully aware and with a gleam in her eye--Severus has had a narrow escape in more ways than one!Love also the narrow escape of Jack, Narcissa, and Harry--thoroughly enjoyed them passed out under cardboard in an alley without their wands (having not brought them (nor allowed) to the masked dance), having to rough it, Muggle style--HA! Love the inner thoughts and commentaries--something is brewing--great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Two clumsy rescues - complete with unchivalrous thoughts, ingratitude, sarcasm, and betrayal.
Conjures up thoughts and reflections about military maneuvers from the great World Wars, in particular, WWI (although the infamous battle of Stalingrad of WWII flitters through my thoughts), some utterly futile, some more effective, etc. Brilliant, love the detailed movement and strategies explained and developed, and then the fallout and segue into the subversive drug clientele and trafficking, as the wizard goverment & officials turn a decisive blind eye, having other seeming priorities... As with anyone who may have to resort to being involved in procuring the way and assessibilty for self-and society-destructing illicit drugs, it brings out a conflicting melancholic feeling knowing that Severus seems to have no choice but to do so--to be a part of this... Great chapter!
Response from nagandsev (Reviewer)
Ooops, reread the summary--Gettysburg/Civil War flank maneuvers and strategies referenced! Just had the impact of great strategic plans occurring while reading--in my excited state, sorry to not have reread the summary for the significant great war/battle reference!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Your thinking WW! is not wrong. Glad you enjoyed the strategy. The Longstreet quote is a despairing comment on any high attrition conflict. A subtle element is that, proportionally, the loss of six Arithmancers is equivalent to a conflict killing most of the PhD mathematicians and physicists in the UK. The war has hollowed out and scared society, and the story is about people coping. Thanks for all the commentary.
Highly enjoyed the introduction and development of Jack and his background and broadened livelihood into the story and in particular his interaction with Narcissa--seems they are both going to do well as professors along with developing a mutual relationship of sorts--hmmm, the plot is thickening deeper and richer as each scenario sheds light on the different perspectives of each character--lovely, intriguing, engaging work!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. Two lost people intellectualizing their alienation and thereby finding a kindred spirit.
Lovely and engaging inclusion of Padma and Parvati, two rarely written about/underwritten characters in the HP canon, their family business situation, war scars, and the biting reminder of their high-caste pure-blood status having had and currently affecting their life decisions and sacrifices. Love it that Harry has initiated some interest and has enjoyed their company, longing for more--the intertwining of these characters with the catalytic event during the mask dance is so wonderful--it's not a secret that I love your brilliant, unique quality of writing and fine style, both one-shots and multi-chapters--just with the multi-chapter ones, there's more to enjoy!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
The central thought was thst the Patils would be family oriented and business oriented. The impression from canon is that the twins are well mannered but with emotions seething beneath the surface. Yes, they are hemmed in by economic circumstances, war scars, and fami;ly honor. And thank you for all the kind words.
Titillating development between Narcissa and Harry, only to be thwarted by a mysterious saboteur--brilliant! Looking forward to finding out who Narcissa has absconded with, intentionally or unintentionally... Hmmm... Love it that the dance hall is a vortex of intrigue and action in which these different characters' tales are intertwining and springing forth from--brilliant, just brilliant--and of course as seductive and engaging as ever!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thank you very much. This chapter attempts scenes that illustrate the attraction and tension between them. She is a brave and intelligent lady whose background and experiences place her in a world different from his. The masked ball appears to be bringing the community together.
Hmmm, one could say a wizard's got to do what a wizard's got to do to survive--Brilliant evolution of trade and commerce by Severus, keenly observing his choices and acting with astuteness and practicality about the ways of the world, who has seemingly been caught between a rock and a hard place to survive with his head above water in matters; I can only cheer him on with accepting all that life is offering him, regarding the ladies at the dance who equally seem to be in need of companionship and/or some social interaction, whether that be merely conversation and dancing on the dance floor and/or dancing from the waist down clandestinely elsewhere. Love the unexpected ending with the attacke and Hermione in the midst in need of his intervention/interaction--great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. Part of the chapter attempts a rational explanation of the wizard economy which canon presents as a collection of artisans and shopkeepers untouced by the industrial revolution with a bloated ministry and a large number of sports teams. The story takes a benign attitude toward pain-killing drugs. Society's prejudices and Severus's fugitive status keep him from offering this benefit to all. Severus's social efforts do seem to be appreciated.
Mmm, love her dilatory contemplations and hesitancy in this detailed, engaging intro, establishing Hermione's seeming lull in life after surviving the war, scarred inside and out... and a disturbing (but excellent, intriguing) cliffie of an ending!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
On a personal note, I have been hoping you would discover 'Cross Roads.' The first chapter depicts a post conflict society through the eyes of a damaged veteran. The story experiments by extending a cliff hanger for five chapters.
I like the sneaky necklace is a wand. This is a wonderful beginning!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. If you glanced at the reviews, you know that readers find this story difficult and different. If it helps, the first five chapters introduce the characters, hopefully in an entertaining manner. Good luck.
This was extremely disjointed and hard to follow. Couldn't figure out what was going on from one moment to the next. I am sorry, but I had to give up only 1/3 of the way through.It reminded me of Pulp Fiction, with its unchronological disjointedness, only without the good acting to distract me from the fact that I didn't know what the hell was going on from the beginning of that movie to the end of it! :)Perhaps it's just that I don't appreciate your avant-garded style or what-have-you, but this story was simply too much work to read for my tastes.Thank you for sharing it, and I hope you find other audiences who are more receptive to it. Cheers.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Does this mean you're not going to list this story as a favorite?
ohhhh Jack is heading into a dark path. He is so creepy! Good job!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
After some hesitation, I decided to take the story to where few fans would want to follow. Even Bellatrix, who trusts him with her life, wonders what Jack is thinking and feeling. Thanks for the reviews.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
After some hesitation, I decided to take the story to where few fans would want to follow. Even Bellatrix, who trusts him with her life, wonders what Jack is thinking and feeling. Thanks for the reviews.
Well, Jack is certainly interesting. I can't believe all the things going on on so many levels.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I did promise that paths would cross: the resolution depends on all paths crossing. At first, I thought there was no canon character like Jack. Now, I think there could not be a canon character like Jack.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I did promise that paths would cross: the resolution depends on all paths crossing. At first, I thought there was no canon character like Jack. Now, I think there could not be a canon character like Jack.
AHHH! Hermione had better find severus!!!! ;) Can't wait to find out! Great chapter, by the way!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Glad you liked the chapter. There was concern about it being a 'guicco piano' about two non-canon characters.Perhaps the story should be more emphatic. Hermione has located Severus twice but failed to capture him. If he is captured, or merely located, he is a dead man since both sides wish to kill him. Both Hermione and Severus know this. At one time, Hermione thought that made her job easier--she need only locate him. Bringing the traitor to justice would be a feather in the cap of the most brilliant witch of the age. The question is whether or not she is having second thoughts about doing the right thing. Of course there is also the question of how the story is going to resolve this little dilemma.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
My reply may have been too emphatic. It was late at night, and I'm currently punching a project through a bureaucracy. At any rate, I did like your review.
Response from baseballbabe122 (Reviewer)
Haha, that's oky. I enjoyed that little insight. :)
Harry first, why does he have to chose one over the other, why can't he have both? Now Jack, can anyone really survive the Blacks, not just Narcissa and Bella? lol. If he plays his cards right he will be ok, I think. Then there is Hermione, please give her, her spirit back. She seems so unhappy and Jack is not the answer. I truly hope she find Severus. And he finds it in his heart to come to trust her. The twins' parents need to allow their daughters to make their own decisions and when they make a mistake let them learn from it and move on. Just be there for them either way.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Quite a lot to think about, but an author should keep most of it to himself.One thought is that canon-Hermine at school had lots of spirit, but it required the Mountain Troll incident for her spirit to form bonds. Is adult canon-Hermione similar?
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Quite a lot to think about, but an author should keep most of it to himself.One thought is that canon-Hermine at school had lots of spirit, but it required the Mountain Troll incident for her spirit to form bonds. Is adult canon-Hermione similar?
Wow, this story is aptly named. I am impressed at all the twists and turns you are making. I suggest Jack gets killed, Harry marries one of the twins and Severus and Hermione hook up with a happy ending
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Okay, Jack is toast. But not so fast. All the things reviewers want depend on Jack.Thanks for the comments. Not everyone likes this type of story.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Okay, Jack is toast. But not so fast. All the things reviewers want depend on Jack.Thanks for the comments. Not everyone likes this type of story.
now now girls no fighting over the man I'm sure he would be more than able to take the both of you lol
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Ah, yes, who gets to French him? Glad you were amused.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Ah, yes, who gets to French him? Glad you were amused.
Jack is certainly the popular fellow. What is Snape up to?
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
With the current social conditions, even Harry is popular. Hermione is puzzled that Jack and Harry aren’t doing better for themselves.
Perhaps aristocratic ladies and brainy girls have limited compatible choices.
Severus is hiding from Hermione who would do the right thing and put him in prison.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
With the current social conditions, even Harry is popular. Hermione is puzzled that Jack and Harry aren’t doing better for themselves.
Perhaps aristocratic ladies and brainy girls have limited compatible choices.
Severus is hiding from Hermione who would do the right thing and put him in prison.
Hmmm, I hope Hermione and Jack don't hook up. Something about him raised my neck hairs. Food for thought, at the beginning of the chapter it seemed to me that Hermione is having some growing pains. She seems to be acting like a teenager (wich would be normal in these circomstances) worrying about boys. Very nice, a very 'human' chapter.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I appreciate your comments since I rewrote the chapter several times trying to give complexity and depth to Hermione, a character with mixed motives.
It would be great if, in Jack, we have a character that is always kind and understanding but is a character that readers recognize as sinister.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I appreciate your comments since I rewrote the chapter several times trying to give complexity and depth to Hermione, a character with mixed motives.
It would be great if, in Jack, we have a character that is always kind and understanding but is a character that readers recognize as sinister.