The Assignment
Chapter 9 of 15
FairfieldOnly gods and heroes can be brave in isolation.
No one may ask for valor from one who is outcast and alone.
The Assignment
Hermione Granger used the Ministry connections to locate wealthy mundanes with medical problems. She asked for interviews and explained she was hunting a fugitive who was a wizard at chemistry. She thought that was a clever way to phrase it. The people she met were friendly and gracious to her. 'Not at all like the Malfoys,' she thought.
She paid no attention to the distinguished gentleman carrying his briefcase in his left hand as he walked by her on her left. Nor did she see his distinguished pivot that whipped the edge of his right hand to the base of her neck. She was not conscious when the distinguished gentleman helped a damsel in distress into the back of a distinguished automobile.
She woke to find two masked men holding her and a third in front of her.
"Smart girls don't bother their betters," said the one in front of her, and then he applied his truncheon fast enough and hard enough that she could not form a spell in her head...only scream until she passed out. She woke in an alley to find her pockets empty and her purse and wand ("What in the hell is this?") gone. They hadn't said it, but she knew the next time they would not stop until she was dead.
She made it to hospital and told them that she had suffered a bad broom accident.
* * *
'What a mess,' thought Jack Higgins. 'My wife and daughter are living with my wife's parents, the divorce is final the day after Christmas, Narcissa will never speak to me again, and now some Ministry supervisors want to see me.'
"Have a chair, Jack. Harry Potter ... you know Harry Potter, don't you? Mrs. Malfoy ... you know Mrs. Malfoy, don't you? You should. They teach at school, too. Potter has been watching Mrs. Malfoy, but he wants to quit...watching Malfoy that is...says he'll quit his job before he'll watch her anymore."
"I'm acquainted with them both," said Jack.
"Just acquainted? That's good. You've been doing splendid work, Jack, really splendid. We thought we would detail you to another department and you could watch Mrs. Malfoy...look for any signs of her husband, son, or sister. Actually, it's her sister that we really want. We think you can handle this. You've been doing splendid work ... splendid. We wouldn't offer this assignment to anyone. Will you accept it?"
"Okay," said Jack.
'Why the hell not? Let's make a total mess of my life,' thought Jack.
"When do I start?" asked Jack.
"Splendid ... splendid, we knew you were our man. What's today?"
"It's the first of December," said Jack.
"Splendid ... splendid, it's a good day to start. Here are the papers. They'll let you confiscate any property of the Malfoys, and they'll let you place any of the Malfoys or Lestranges in custody. And good luck, Jack"
* * *
"Would you like some fresh air?" asked Parvati.
"Would you?" asked Harry.
Harry had been talking and dancing with the two sisters. After working the cash register and observing the store operation one afternoon, he could relate to the ordinary events of their day. Now, Parvati was taking him to a balcony with a breeze and a view of the stars. She was still holding his hand even though they were no longer dancing.
"Your blonde lost her companion," said Parvati.
Even Harry had noticed. He had even figured out who her companion was. "Something happened. He's a fellow professor at school. They're cool towards each other now."
"A lovers' quarrel," sighed Parvati.
"Do you think so?" asked Harry. Then he noticed Parvati was looking at him as though he were dense. "Something's upsetting her," he said, remembering the evening rages that, one night, had ended with a pile of broken dishes.
"They'll get back together, I hope," said Parvati.
"I'm in favor of it if it calms her down. I've told the people at work that I'm not going to watch her anymore. Five months of that woman is enough."
Harry thought Parvati would chide him for dereliction of duty, but she softened and smiled.
"What will you do next year?" she asked.
"I don't know. The person teaching the first three years of Defense wants to leave. She says she's had enough of unruly students and 12 hour days. Teaching doesn't pay much, but I have room and board, and I'm tired of the Ministry." Parvati simply listened and nodded. Harry had an attack of conscience. "It's nice out here, but we can't neglect your sister."
Harry went to the bar for more iced fruit drinks while Parvati, with mixed feelings about his chivalry, joined her sister. He danced with Padma, and she wanted some fresh air. She rested her hand on his shoulder as she limped to the balcony.
"Are you going to leave the Ministry and go into teaching?" she asked him.
'If you tell one sister something, you tell them both,' he reminded himself. They were sitting on a bench. Somehow, Padma's knee was touching his. 'Oh, well,' he thought, but the contact had its effect. He felt close enough to Padma to talk to her. "I've lived my life thinking it was about facing the Dark Lord, but that's over, and I'm directionless."
Padma gave him an encouraging nod. 'Talk to me,' she thought.
"Maybe school just gives me a routine. It's easy to fill the day with lectures and grading papers." He paused. "And I can always tell myself that I'm doing something useful."
"But you are," she said, placing a reassuring hand on his shoulder.
Harry remembered Professor Higgins' observations on the downside of teaching. 'Where do those Ravenclaws get that stuff?' he wondered.
Padma interrupted his musings. "Tell me more," she said.
"I'm not certain about anything," he said. "Some professors are looking at other schools and revising our courses. Maybe I should do that for our Defense courses."
"Teaching is a challenge," said Padma sadly, "not like the routine of a store."
"Running a store looks complicated enough to me," said Harry. But Padma's friendliness had emboldened him, and she sounded wistful. "Have you thought about teaching?"
"We both have. But we didn't get a chance to try it. Maybe we wouldn't like it."
"Am I interrupting anything?" Padma and Harry looked up to see Parvati standing beside them.
"We were talking about teaching," said Harry, feeling a twinge at having neglected Parvati. 'Poor show, old chap,' he thought. 'They want to teach but can't.'
Parvati sat down beside Harry. "I think teaching Divination would be fun."
"I never could get the hang of that," he said.
"It's part intuition and part pattern-recognition, the arrangement of the cards or the planets," said Parvati.
"I hadn't thought about pattern-recognition," said Harry, thinking that Parvati may have been a social butterfly but that didn't mean she wasn't smart.
"Plus a lot of practice," said Padma. Padma was looking at Parvati. "It's pleasant out here, but it's a little cool. Some tea would be nice."
"Yes," said Parvati, looking at Padma, "some tea would be nice."
'Have I upset them?' wondered Harry, thinking they sounded a bit annoyed.
"I'll get some tea," he said. "You both like sugar but no cream, right?"
The organizers of the masked ball were eager for it to be a success. They provided complimentary tea, coffee, and sweet biscuits. 'I wish Parvati would just wear an eye mask,' thought Harry, pouring the tea. 'I'm used to her scar, and she's attractive. Padma's limp isn't that bad. I don't know why both of them believe they're ruined for life. Are high-caste Indians that finicky? They're missing out. The girls are good company.' He arranged three cups of tea and three biscuits on a small tray. 'I miss them when I'm not with them. I wouldn't mind spending tomorrow in their store, but I don't know how to ask.' He sighed. 'I wish I knew what they were thinking.'
The few minutes getting tea had given him some perspective. "I've been thinking about the store and teaching," he said as he handed out the tea and biscuits.
Padma and Parvati looked interested.
"The Ministry is nearly broke; the pay for teaching is abysmal. The older instructors are hanging on, waiting for it to get better. The new instructors have their regular jobs and are teaching part-time as a community service."
"You're saying we wouldn't be able to live on a teacher's salary," said Padma.
"You would have room and board, but you would have to wear old clothes, and you wouldn't have a social life," said Harry.
"You think we would have to quit and go back to work at the apothecary and potion shop," said Parvati. "But then the goblins would own it, and we would be slaving away for the goblins."
"We're slaving away now, but it's for our own store," said Padma.
"That's what I've been thinking," said Harry to two happier girls.
"Speaking of slaving away in the store, we have a big favor to ask you," they said.
"Okay."
"Our relatives have told us that the Holiday season will be very busy and we'll need help in the store," said Padma.
"But we don't know anyone who could help us, who we could trust," said Parvati, "except you."
"Would you?" asked Padma.
"I'll be glad to," said Harry.
* * *
"They tell me you'll be out of here tomorrow morning, but I brought you some stuff anyway," Jack told Hermione. "Here are some magazines, a book of puzzles, and a deck of cards."
"Thank you, Jack. Can you stay? No one else has visited." She immediately regretted complaining. "I'm sorry. I shouldn't have said that."
"You're injured and full of potions," he said, sitting down. "You're not yourself."
Jack had an hour before he had to return to school. They worked a few puzzles and played several hands of cards. He promised to return for afternoon tea.
He returned for tea, bringing gourmet chocolate-chip cookies. He thought Hermione was isolated but decided not to mention that. They played cards while Jack talked about teaching Charms, described a few strange artifacts, and mentioned his latest assignment.
"That's marvelous," said Hermione. "Perhaps you can catch Lucius or Bellatrix. I'm glad they assigned someone capable. I mean, Harry is capable enough, but his heart isn't in it." She spoke confidentially to a fellow enthusiast. "No one's heart seems to be in it."
"Isn't your department dedicated to finding fugitives?" he asked.
"They're playing at catching Dark Lord sympathizers," she said. "The prisoners supply us with lots of names, almost all of them innocent. People at work shadow some of them...mostly the pretty witches or handsome wizards. They gather enough information to chat them up. Any lack of progress is explained by the heavy workload of investigating all the suspects."
"Are you the only one who's serious?" he asked. He was beginning to doubt the broom-accident story and beginning to think she was hurt because she was acting as a lone agent.
She nodded yes.
"Can't you let it go?" he asked.
"Let it go?" she asked. "They tortured and killed people for sport. We catch and punish petty thieves who hardly do any harm at all. We let the high and mighty get away with murder."
"Yes, you're right," he said. "But I was thinking that your acting alone was dangerous for you."
"That's not the point," she replied.
"Your courage is admirable. It's more courage than I have," he said.
"You might surprise yourself," she said.
At that, she relaxed. She asked for his help on some difficult cross-word puzzles; and finally she became comfortable enough to talk about growing up in a mundane household and her adventures at school. He left to resume his second job of watching Mrs. Malfoy. She was thinking that perhaps the arrogant bastard had some redeeming features.
She pulled out her wand and banished the gourmet chocolate-chip cookie crumbs.
* * *
It was after lunch when Parvati stepped out of the back room and said, "Padma, can you watch the store? I need Harry to help me move some stuff."
Parvati took him to an aisle in the storeroom where an amorphous bag was wedged between some boxes on the top shelf. "I don't know what's in the bag, and when I try to get it, the boxes start to fall down. Can you hold the boxes in place while I wiggle the bag out?"
Harry pointed his wand at the boxes in turn while Parvati waved her wand, extracted the bag, and levitated it over to a table.
She was standing at the entrance to the aisle. She smiled and said, "I have you trapped now, Harry"
"What?" Incredible thoughts raced through his head.
"You're not going to escape," she said.
"Huh?" Those incredible thoughts couldn't be possible, could they?
"Jiminy Cricket, Mr. Potter, what do you come to the store for? Do you get off on retailing? Is it just Padma?"
"No ... no ... I ... I'm ... I'm in shock at being trapped."
She smiled and stepped toward him. "How shocked?"
"A lot," he said. 'What warm eyes she has,' he thought. He hadn't thought about it before, but he noticed Parvati was as tall as he was. He liked that.
She was as close to him as when they were dancing, but there was no music, only Parvati putting her arms around him.
More time than they realized slipped past.
Parvati stepped back from his embrace. "Thanks for helping me," she said.
"Did you get everything moved?" asked Padma when Harry returned to the cash register.
Harry was tending the register and remembering Parvati. He was also admiring Padma. He wasn't sure it was right to do so, but he wanted to hold Padma the way he had held her sister. Was Padma interested? Padma had always been the more aloof and serious of the two. Holding Parvati had made him more confident. He let himself watch Padma and nod at her whenever she noticed. She smiled back.
"It's tea time," announced Padma at four o'clock. She locked the store door, told her sister she was going to prepare tea, and turned to Harry. "Would you like to help?" she asked.
He followed Padma upstairs. Once upstairs, she put the tea water on with quick, jerky movements, seemed hesitant when she asked what kind of biscuit he would like, and stood fidgeting when she said she would like some yogurt and asked if he would. She flung open a cupboard door, tapped her fingernails on the counter, and said, "Could you help me choose a tea?"
He had to stand close to her to see into the cupboard. "What's your favorite?" he asked.
'I want to calm her down,' he thought. 'I want her to be relaxed and happy. Can I tell her that?'
"I'm not used to a variety of tea," he said. "I'm sure I'll like whatever you pick for us. You've always made good choices."
She turned to face him. "Do you think so?"
"I've always admired you," he said. 'Wow, I actually said that,' he thought.
"Really?" she asked, gripping his elbows.
"Yes," he said as her arms went around him. 'She's as tall as her sister,' he thought. He felt her warm breath on his neck. He felt her breathing become slower and deeper.
All too soon, they heard Parvati come up the stairs.
The sisters parceled out the tea, sweet biscuits and yogurt, and asked a favor, "Can you watch the store for us the rest of the day, love?" The two of them needed to brew more 'Calm Repose,' a popular potion over the holidays for kids excited by visiting relatives and returning older siblings, wives driven to distraction by company and holiday demands, and husbands weary of irritated wives and bickering in-laws. The two sisters knew they were saving life, limb, sanity, and marriages.
* * *
On the morning Hermione Granger was to leave hospital, she woke to find a priest by her bed.
"Am I going to die?" she asked.
"No, my child." He paused. "Not this time."
Hermione tried to cry out but couldn't. She was lying relaxed, peaceful and silent. 'Has he grown this powerful?' she wondered. It seemed natural for her to reach out and hold his hand. When she touched him, an electric shock ran through her.
"Do you hate me so much?" he asked.
She shook her head no. She couldn't even dislike someone at the moment.
"You do realize that I find you admirable," he said.
She turned her head to show her scar.
"That would not bother any one who knows you and admires you." He leaned over and gave her a chaste kiss on her forehead...a chaste kiss that expressed all the nonsexual love and admiration a wizard could have for a witch. "You now realize how careful you must be. You need a team. If you are careful and persistent, you are talented enough that your team will eventually catch me."
Hermione Granger found that she could speak. "Will you come see me again?"
Hermione Granger was thunderstruck. 'What am I saying?'
"A kind invitation," he said. "But soon after I leave, your head will begin to speak. It will tell you about duty. It will remind you of what is right." He paused. "It will feed you nonsense that you are disfigured and unfit for a companion."
For a fatal moment, the accuracy of his accusations left her speechless.
Then he was gone, leaving her feeling empty.
* * *
He could ignore Narcissa's hypothetical lament. "If my sister is still alive and hiding somewhere, then I'm going to go crazy pretty soon if I can't see her."
He could ignore her hypothetical threat. "If my sister is still alive and hiding somewhere, then she's going to go crazy pretty soon and hurt a lot of people."
It was the, "Jack, I love my sister," that touched him.
They would bring Bellatrix Lestrange to the Manor during the hubbub of the Holidays. On the Saturday morning before Christmas, Jack and Narcissa arrived at a mundane flat in Birmingham.
When they entered, Bellatrix stood. She and Jack looked at each other. Narcissa felt a sudden emptiness inside her.
"You killed the Dark Lord," said Bellatrix.
"I was among the group of people that killed him, yes," replied Jack.
Bellatrix sank to her knees in front of Jack. "I pledge you my fealty."
'Bloody hell,' thought Jack. 'Narcissa, you pillock, you didn't warn me about this.' He looked at Narcissa. She had a desperate, pleading look. 'Bloody hell,' he thought.
Jack looked Bellatrix in the eye. "I accept, Bellatrix Lestrange. I accept your fealty." He held out his hand and helped her to her feet.
"Do you want my wand?" she asked, holding it out to him.
He found it easy to look into her eyes. "No. You have pledged not to harm me."
She met his gaze lightly. "I have pledged to defend you with it."
"Bella," cried Narcissa, looking around. "You're not packed. You're not ready to go."
"I ...," began Bellatrix, still looking at Jack.
"You've been under stress and strain," said Jack. Bella nodded.
"We've time," said Jack to the fuming Narcissa. "We'll pack your sister's belongings, and we'll all go back to the Manor."
"It shouldn't take too long," said Narcissa.
'Relax,' thought Narcissa. 'It's over. He's accepted my sister. Everything else is incidental. Why do I feel as if I've been gutted?'
The two sisters embraced each other. Then Jack watched as they packed like any two women: pausing to admire the garments and arranging them carefully, remembering the sources of the knickknacks and wrapping them safely...two evil, deadly, dangerous women engaged in the sisterly completion of a domestic routine. How easy it was to accept their humanity and wonder how things had gone so tragically wrong.
'What's the charge, old bean?' he mused. 'Harboring a fugitive, old chap,' he answered.
He escorted Narcissa and Bellatrix back to the Manor and returned to school to give them a chance to settle. When he arrived for tea the next morning, he discovered the two of them had prepared a broom route that wound from the ground floor to the cellar to the attic back to the ground floor and that ran through all the halls. They insisted he join them, and the three swooped and whooped their way through the rooms, stairways, and halls for the next hour.
"Oh, Jack, you're such a good sport," said Bellatrix.
They would retire to their rooms and shower before having a late tea.
"And why isn't Jack in the master bedroom?" asked Bellatrix.
Jack stepped out of the shower to discover Narcissa in his room.
"You'll visit us often, won't you?" she said. "After all, you're now my sister's liege lord. She needs you."
"I haven't thanked you enough for trapping me like that," he replied. "I'll gladly set her free."
"Please don't," pleaded Narcissa. "She's more fragile than she looks. This is helping her cope." Narcissa offered inducement. "She asked me what you wanted. I told her you wanted her to recover and to be on her good behavior."
"That's not fair," said Jack.
Narcissa smiled the smile of the cunning.
Early Christmas morning, Jack, Narcissa, and Bellatrix, all in disguise, visited the grave of Andromeda Black Tonks. The headstone honored her for having fallen in the battle. Bellatrix fell to the ground and wept. Narcissa soon joined her. The sisters held each other as Jack fought to keep his composure.
* * *
New Year's Eve passed quietly at the Manor. Jack had left the office party early, having avoided the spiked punch. He arrived at the Manor two hours before midnight to discover Bellatrix and Narcissa waiting for him, the champagne unopened. They had time for a breakneck broom ride through the mansion. That was followed by a shower and changing into silk robes. They started a fire in the fireplace and opened the champagne.
Jack had told the sisters about the papers the Ministry had given him. They had agreed the papers were 'Letters of Marque and Reprisal.' He was a land pirate.
"Galleons on the port bow. Give them a shot of grape, me hearties," he said as he handed glasses of champagne to Bellatrix and Narcissa.
"Jolly good joke, love. Let's raise the Black flag," said Narcissa.
"Should we heave-to for boarding?" asked Bellatrix.
He thought fast. "No, we're impoverished pirates. We'd prefer your finest silver."
"Bought off with a few trinkets," declared Narcissa.
"What have pirates come to?" lamented Bellatrix.
They put on the music and danced. When the clock struck midnight, they toasted each other and the New Year. A few minutes after midnight, Jack was resting in front of the fireplace.
Bellatrix stretched out beside him and asked, "Are you tired, love?"
"I think all the new instructors are sleeping through the Holidays," he replied.
Bellatrix curled up around Jack; Narcissa curled up on the couch; and the flames curled up around the logs.
Jack woke briefly in the early hours. He stroked Bellatrix's hair. 'How can a witch look so peaceful and innocent and radiate so much power? It's raw, reckless power with no place to go, unless it's serving me, which it may very well be doing.' He looked at Narcissa on the couch. 'She looks peaceful and powerful, but it's power controlled by a calculating mind.'
He sighed. 'Bellatrix wanted to serve a reigning lord. Narcissa wanted to establish an influential family. Both plans came to nothing. Most plans do. Better than my plans though. I set out to fight for right and justice; I destroyed my life; and now I'm harboring the two deadliest witches on the other side. I was in love with the calculating one, and I'm falling in love with the reckless one. Sometimes, I think I'm still in love with the calculating one.'
The ashes of the consumed logs stirred as the currents of air moved them.
New Year's Day began bright and brisk as they made the pilgrimage to Andromeda's grave. The two sisters placed flowers by the headstone, spread a blanket, and motioned for Jack to sit between them while they passed the time in remembrance. As subtly as only women can, they shifted until they were close to him, until their fingers were intertwined with his, until they were resting their heads on his shoulders.
The strands of their hair stirred as the currents of air moved them.
'I'm giving aid and comfort to the enemy, and I want to,' thought Jack.
Back at the Manor, Narcissa cleaned and put away the blanket. When she approached the reading-room door, she heard Jack and Bellatrix.
"Jack, promise me you won't be here when they take me."
"What?"
"The wizard world will never stop hunting me. Never. My staying at the Manor means they'll find me sooner rather than later."
"We could go to the continent," he said.
"I could go to the continent and be alone. If you went to the continent, you would leave behind your job, your livelihood. I won't ask that. They would find me on the continent, and I'm not going to spend the last days of my life alone."
"There has to be something," he said.
"There's your promising not to be here when they take me. They're not going to let me live. I hope to die fighting. I'll put the wand to my head if I must. If they take me alive, they'll truss me like a chicken and slowly slaughter me while I squirm."
"Bellatrix!"
"However it happens, I don't want you to watch me die."
"I want you to remember me like this. And visit my grave."
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56 Reviews | 8.48/10 Average
Fantastic ending--Severus as a wonderful anti-hero subversive deus ex machina sweeping in and offering Hermione a life and livelihood--glad to see that she is a fast thinker, accepting the odds are against her (if she stubbornly sticks to her story) but able to assess what he is offering her--it's doubly delicious the irony of her being now a fugitive (well, soon to be) and that she remains naive to Jack, being her attacker, harbouring fugitives all along, Bellatrix and Narcissa--it's sort of a poetic justice that the know-it-all has been forced to experience some humbling humanity, albeit of a subversive nature--again, a brilliant twist (and for some reason makes me think of Bob Dylan's lyrics to 'Like a Rolling Stone'... Anyway...)I'm tickled pink that Harry and Parvati and Padma have also established a wholesome threesome paralleling Jack, Narcissa, and Bellatrix--also love the final capper per Jack then Harry's section: ‘I’m in for it now,’ he thought.' to each wizard's situation--I suppose we should give our best wishes to each guy, as each will never have a moment's peace satisfying the wishes and whims of the partners, but I suppose that is what will keep life interesting, engaging, and fulfilling for them. Thank you for a fantastic tale!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Severus had positive thoughts about Hermione when he rescued her. A lapse in the story is not introducing and sustaining this throughout the intermediate chapters. Her flaw is bitterness and intensity, but since these are understandable and her heart is in the right place, her tragedy is only partial. Besides, if she wishes to be with Severus, she will have to abandon normal society.It is true all the wizards have demanding partners, but aside from being careful what one asks for, it might be the best outcome for them once they have adapted.Thank you for all the insightful reviews.
Fantastic twists in the plot--and it is a miracle that the Black sisters did not murder Hermione, but thought of what Jack would have done--and on a side note, I think Jack underestimates Narcissa and Bellatrix and their love and need for him, one that eschews and has transcended the narrow category of 'aristocrat' that seems to constantly trouble him. Yes! Finally, Harry! You see, threesomes can be embraced and work out! Oh ye of little faith--but now he has his own experience to believe and take strength from, instead of the musings and encouragement of an older, more experienced wizard such as Jack. Jack seems to be embracing and enjoying his threesome arrangement with more strength and commitment, in the sense that he is not entertaining the idea of running off and disappearing but rather coming to terms with and believing/wanting this arrangement on a deeper, more sincere level--great chapter! Must read on to see what actually will happen!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thank you for the kind review of a climatic chapter where everything comes together. A standard goal is to have the ending be both unexpected and a logical consequence of previous events.The Black sisters exercised great restraint in deference to Jack, especially since they believe their safety depends on eliminating Hermione.Jack is a strange combination of arrogance and self doubt.Harry wins over the Patils with a business deal.
Poor Harry... He has accepted his attraction to them fully and yet is now banished; Jack has accepted his attraction to both and is feeling overwhelmed yet committed to doing what he can for them, on all levels--Narcissa and Bellatrix are unconcerned about how demanding their attentions and expectations of Jack are... But they continue to enjoy and appreciate his efforts and protection and heroic actions on their part... Hermione is on the move and it seems she hasn't developed any tolerance or empathy and is sticking to her guns and moral code in regards to her professional work and agenda--enjoying everyone's dilemmaGreat chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Yes, everyone is being blindsided. Harry is banished, Hermione discovers Jack and Narcissa are a couple, Jack succumbs to the Black sisters, the Ministry is fooled by Beatrice LaGrange, and the Malfoy manner is raided. The couples (more accurately, triples) are working their way through the problems while Hermione devotes herself to her work.
Intriguing look into the Patil family and all of the pros and cons the parents are weighing and struggling with, the loss of tradition and honour being huge impediments... but maybe there will be a clear break with tradition in a choice that could lead to happiness for both of their daughters with Harry. I have a feeling Hermione has not given up on her notion of capturing Severus Snape, whether that be to turn him in or to have him for her own clandestinely. Perhaps her liason with Jack will help strenthen her and his own resolve one way or another with decisions regarding the truant fugitives in their lives--lovely, informative chapter while still leaving many questions to be answered!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Glad you liked it. The premise is that romance does not take place in a vacuum, and we have an extended business family, not to mention high caste and pure blood, to whom propriety is important. There are the fiery females and the calmer Mr. Patil who has more depth than one might think.Parvati and Padma with Harry might be more like their parents than they realize.Yes, Hermione is as determined as ever.
Great developments--whether Hermione and Jack's afternoon delight development will benefit her or him more remains to be seen--in particular the aspect that he truly would have roused suspicion by avoiding her and her need to have someone listen to her, be with her, appreciate her, make love with her, etc.--then there are the Black sisters, who need anything to be a decoy in order to keep Bellatrix being safely harboured with Narcissa. Will Jack be able to juggle all of the witches, opposing sides with opposing objectives? Will their be some bargaining going on between Jack and Hermione regarding the fugitives Severus and Bellatrix? Great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. The bargaining is an interesting suggestion full of possibilities. Would Jack help catch Severus to save Bellatrix, or would he try to save both? Would he form an alliance with Severus and Bellatrix? Could either one, or anyone, trust Jack? Would the ruthless Hermione keep the agreement in the first case? Would she be able to thwart his efforts in the seoond? Would her efforts be derailed if she fell in love with Jack? As dramatic background, all of this is a matter of life and death for Severus and Bellatrix and Narcissa. It might become a matter of life or death for Hermione.
Hmmm, Harry does have a dilemma... Twill be difficult unless he chooses both The same goes for Jack, although at this rate, the decision(s) may be made for him, with Bellatrix being the more assertive, although Narcissa has declared herself on some level, allowing an opening of sorts... Love the further exploration of Bellatrix's more human needs, Jack's vulnerability, and Narcissa's verbalisation of what she wants.Lovely contrasts of Harry muddling along, discovering the female sex as it were versus Jack's experience, having been married and divorced, but he is still discovering things about the opposite sex with his two particular witches. Lovely work and great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Yes, a chapter in which Harry and Jack are being drawn in deeper - the shop's storeroom where Harry participates in retail that is important to the Patils and becomes more intimate - the castle's storeroom where Jack participates in family history that is important to the Blacks and becomes more intimate.
Hermione is being warned, if she doesn't back down, she will be done away with; Jack offers her polite and considerate company; Severus is very direct--she is confronted with truths. Harry enjoys helping Parvati and Padma out and they all continue to discover further and enjoy each other's company. Harry has tired of his watching, and Jack accepts the responsibilty feeling he has nothing to lose and wishing for some different dynamics in his life, taking a risk whether Narcissa will reciprocate or ignore him, unsure. The inclusion of Bellatrix, the riskiness of harbouring a top Undesireable has placed him in a dilemma, as both Black sisters are found to be needing him, each in her own way. There is a sadness and vulnerability brought out regarding Bellatrix and with that more complex natures revealed of who they were and have been during their lives as sisters--and now there is Jack having to deal with more volatile possibilities--whose side will he choose? The loyalty to the Ministry? Or a very private newfounded loyalty to the Black sisters? Harry, Severus, and jack, each in his own way, are having to be very selective in how much and/or which way he is interacting with his particular witch(s)-great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Another good review: this time of a chapter where everyone is becoming entangled. It tries for some contrast - the mild bickering and jealousy of the Patil sisters, the more insistent demands of the Black sisters, the different reactions of Bellatrix and Narcissa when they learn Jack has killed someone dear to them, the companionable visit of Jack versus the hard-edged visit of Severus. Because of the witches, Harry is neglecting professorial duties, Jack ministry wishes, and Severus his survival.
Thoroughly enjoying the unfolding intimacy of trust with Padma and Parvati becoming comfortable enough with Harry to share and show each one's scar; Harry is not scared off, rather commiserates and is accepting--he's lived with physical and emotional/pyscological scars his entire life and so can understand; likewise, an interesting light is shone on Narcissa revealing her physical/traumatic scar to Jack, and he revealing his psychological/traumatic scar to her (hexing/killing her husband). With the Patil sisters and Harry, it draws them closer together; with Jack and Narcissa, the revelations asunder them. Hermione is in a dilemma, conflicted; her physical scar and discomfort impeding her; her resistance against Severus' curative painfully crumbling, giving into it, but is it only to strengthen her resolve and aid her to capture him? She must partake in that which she despises and has vowed against--and then there is Jack, in fluctuation, unhappy and wishing for a fuller companionship and fulfillment when reflecting on Narcissa--looking forward to seeing if meeting Granger draws him one way or another--she seems a bit miffed at him, and yet intrigued on some level--great chapter! Love how the plot is thickening! Also, I've meant to comment on that I love it that you have written the female characters with explicit and metaphorical scars (not just the wizards), and this is being explored, layered on, informing & influencing character's decisions and hesitations--again, wonderful work!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
A good review of a chapter that attempts the depiction of conflicting emotions. There's not much left to say. Their attraction overcomes the shyness and obstacles for Harry, Padma, and Parvati. An unfortunate event shatters Narcissa and Jack. Readers might be disappointed that Hermione decides to use an illicit drug supplied by an outlaw, but I think it is an understandable response to chronic pain. Hermione is both repelled and intrigued by the mysterious, perhaps unknowable, Jack.
Mmm, love Severus and Hermione on the underground, his observations--Sev in quite a predicament, and Hermione being sick, getting cleaned up by him, and all fussy and defensive--that is until the last second when she gets her instrument of power back in her hands, fully aware and with a gleam in her eye--Severus has had a narrow escape in more ways than one!Love also the narrow escape of Jack, Narcissa, and Harry--thoroughly enjoyed them passed out under cardboard in an alley without their wands (having not brought them (nor allowed) to the masked dance), having to rough it, Muggle style--HA! Love the inner thoughts and commentaries--something is brewing--great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Two clumsy rescues - complete with unchivalrous thoughts, ingratitude, sarcasm, and betrayal.
Conjures up thoughts and reflections about military maneuvers from the great World Wars, in particular, WWI (although the infamous battle of Stalingrad of WWII flitters through my thoughts), some utterly futile, some more effective, etc. Brilliant, love the detailed movement and strategies explained and developed, and then the fallout and segue into the subversive drug clientele and trafficking, as the wizard goverment & officials turn a decisive blind eye, having other seeming priorities... As with anyone who may have to resort to being involved in procuring the way and assessibilty for self-and society-destructing illicit drugs, it brings out a conflicting melancholic feeling knowing that Severus seems to have no choice but to do so--to be a part of this... Great chapter!
Response from nagandsev (Reviewer)
Ooops, reread the summary--Gettysburg/Civil War flank maneuvers and strategies referenced! Just had the impact of great strategic plans occurring while reading--in my excited state, sorry to not have reread the summary for the significant great war/battle reference!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Your thinking WW! is not wrong. Glad you enjoyed the strategy. The Longstreet quote is a despairing comment on any high attrition conflict. A subtle element is that, proportionally, the loss of six Arithmancers is equivalent to a conflict killing most of the PhD mathematicians and physicists in the UK. The war has hollowed out and scared society, and the story is about people coping. Thanks for all the commentary.
Highly enjoyed the introduction and development of Jack and his background and broadened livelihood into the story and in particular his interaction with Narcissa--seems they are both going to do well as professors along with developing a mutual relationship of sorts--hmmm, the plot is thickening deeper and richer as each scenario sheds light on the different perspectives of each character--lovely, intriguing, engaging work!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. Two lost people intellectualizing their alienation and thereby finding a kindred spirit.
Lovely and engaging inclusion of Padma and Parvati, two rarely written about/underwritten characters in the HP canon, their family business situation, war scars, and the biting reminder of their high-caste pure-blood status having had and currently affecting their life decisions and sacrifices. Love it that Harry has initiated some interest and has enjoyed their company, longing for more--the intertwining of these characters with the catalytic event during the mask dance is so wonderful--it's not a secret that I love your brilliant, unique quality of writing and fine style, both one-shots and multi-chapters--just with the multi-chapter ones, there's more to enjoy!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
The central thought was thst the Patils would be family oriented and business oriented. The impression from canon is that the twins are well mannered but with emotions seething beneath the surface. Yes, they are hemmed in by economic circumstances, war scars, and fami;ly honor. And thank you for all the kind words.
Titillating development between Narcissa and Harry, only to be thwarted by a mysterious saboteur--brilliant! Looking forward to finding out who Narcissa has absconded with, intentionally or unintentionally... Hmmm... Love it that the dance hall is a vortex of intrigue and action in which these different characters' tales are intertwining and springing forth from--brilliant, just brilliant--and of course as seductive and engaging as ever!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thank you very much. This chapter attempts scenes that illustrate the attraction and tension between them. She is a brave and intelligent lady whose background and experiences place her in a world different from his. The masked ball appears to be bringing the community together.
Hmmm, one could say a wizard's got to do what a wizard's got to do to survive--Brilliant evolution of trade and commerce by Severus, keenly observing his choices and acting with astuteness and practicality about the ways of the world, who has seemingly been caught between a rock and a hard place to survive with his head above water in matters; I can only cheer him on with accepting all that life is offering him, regarding the ladies at the dance who equally seem to be in need of companionship and/or some social interaction, whether that be merely conversation and dancing on the dance floor and/or dancing from the waist down clandestinely elsewhere. Love the unexpected ending with the attacke and Hermione in the midst in need of his intervention/interaction--great chapter!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. Part of the chapter attempts a rational explanation of the wizard economy which canon presents as a collection of artisans and shopkeepers untouced by the industrial revolution with a bloated ministry and a large number of sports teams. The story takes a benign attitude toward pain-killing drugs. Society's prejudices and Severus's fugitive status keep him from offering this benefit to all. Severus's social efforts do seem to be appreciated.
Mmm, love her dilatory contemplations and hesitancy in this detailed, engaging intro, establishing Hermione's seeming lull in life after surviving the war, scarred inside and out... and a disturbing (but excellent, intriguing) cliffie of an ending!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
On a personal note, I have been hoping you would discover 'Cross Roads.' The first chapter depicts a post conflict society through the eyes of a damaged veteran. The story experiments by extending a cliff hanger for five chapters.
I like the sneaky necklace is a wand. This is a wonderful beginning!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Thanks. If you glanced at the reviews, you know that readers find this story difficult and different. If it helps, the first five chapters introduce the characters, hopefully in an entertaining manner. Good luck.
This was extremely disjointed and hard to follow. Couldn't figure out what was going on from one moment to the next. I am sorry, but I had to give up only 1/3 of the way through.It reminded me of Pulp Fiction, with its unchronological disjointedness, only without the good acting to distract me from the fact that I didn't know what the hell was going on from the beginning of that movie to the end of it! :)Perhaps it's just that I don't appreciate your avant-garded style or what-have-you, but this story was simply too much work to read for my tastes.Thank you for sharing it, and I hope you find other audiences who are more receptive to it. Cheers.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Does this mean you're not going to list this story as a favorite?
ohhhh Jack is heading into a dark path. He is so creepy! Good job!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
After some hesitation, I decided to take the story to where few fans would want to follow. Even Bellatrix, who trusts him with her life, wonders what Jack is thinking and feeling. Thanks for the reviews.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
After some hesitation, I decided to take the story to where few fans would want to follow. Even Bellatrix, who trusts him with her life, wonders what Jack is thinking and feeling. Thanks for the reviews.
Well, Jack is certainly interesting. I can't believe all the things going on on so many levels.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I did promise that paths would cross: the resolution depends on all paths crossing. At first, I thought there was no canon character like Jack. Now, I think there could not be a canon character like Jack.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I did promise that paths would cross: the resolution depends on all paths crossing. At first, I thought there was no canon character like Jack. Now, I think there could not be a canon character like Jack.
AHHH! Hermione had better find severus!!!! ;) Can't wait to find out! Great chapter, by the way!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Glad you liked the chapter. There was concern about it being a 'guicco piano' about two non-canon characters.Perhaps the story should be more emphatic. Hermione has located Severus twice but failed to capture him. If he is captured, or merely located, he is a dead man since both sides wish to kill him. Both Hermione and Severus know this. At one time, Hermione thought that made her job easier--she need only locate him. Bringing the traitor to justice would be a feather in the cap of the most brilliant witch of the age. The question is whether or not she is having second thoughts about doing the right thing. Of course there is also the question of how the story is going to resolve this little dilemma.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
My reply may have been too emphatic. It was late at night, and I'm currently punching a project through a bureaucracy. At any rate, I did like your review.
Response from baseballbabe122 (Reviewer)
Haha, that's oky. I enjoyed that little insight. :)
Harry first, why does he have to chose one over the other, why can't he have both? Now Jack, can anyone really survive the Blacks, not just Narcissa and Bella? lol. If he plays his cards right he will be ok, I think. Then there is Hermione, please give her, her spirit back. She seems so unhappy and Jack is not the answer. I truly hope she find Severus. And he finds it in his heart to come to trust her. The twins' parents need to allow their daughters to make their own decisions and when they make a mistake let them learn from it and move on. Just be there for them either way.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Quite a lot to think about, but an author should keep most of it to himself.One thought is that canon-Hermine at school had lots of spirit, but it required the Mountain Troll incident for her spirit to form bonds. Is adult canon-Hermione similar?
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Quite a lot to think about, but an author should keep most of it to himself.One thought is that canon-Hermine at school had lots of spirit, but it required the Mountain Troll incident for her spirit to form bonds. Is adult canon-Hermione similar?
Wow, this story is aptly named. I am impressed at all the twists and turns you are making. I suggest Jack gets killed, Harry marries one of the twins and Severus and Hermione hook up with a happy ending
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Okay, Jack is toast. But not so fast. All the things reviewers want depend on Jack.Thanks for the comments. Not everyone likes this type of story.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Okay, Jack is toast. But not so fast. All the things reviewers want depend on Jack.Thanks for the comments. Not everyone likes this type of story.
now now girls no fighting over the man I'm sure he would be more than able to take the both of you lol
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Ah, yes, who gets to French him? Glad you were amused.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
Ah, yes, who gets to French him? Glad you were amused.
Jack is certainly the popular fellow. What is Snape up to?
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
With the current social conditions, even Harry is popular. Hermione is puzzled that Jack and Harry aren’t doing better for themselves.
Perhaps aristocratic ladies and brainy girls have limited compatible choices.
Severus is hiding from Hermione who would do the right thing and put him in prison.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
With the current social conditions, even Harry is popular. Hermione is puzzled that Jack and Harry aren’t doing better for themselves.
Perhaps aristocratic ladies and brainy girls have limited compatible choices.
Severus is hiding from Hermione who would do the right thing and put him in prison.
Hmmm, I hope Hermione and Jack don't hook up. Something about him raised my neck hairs. Food for thought, at the beginning of the chapter it seemed to me that Hermione is having some growing pains. She seems to be acting like a teenager (wich would be normal in these circomstances) worrying about boys. Very nice, a very 'human' chapter.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I appreciate your comments since I rewrote the chapter several times trying to give complexity and depth to Hermione, a character with mixed motives.
It would be great if, in Jack, we have a character that is always kind and understanding but is a character that readers recognize as sinister.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Crossroads)
I appreciate your comments since I rewrote the chapter several times trying to give complexity and depth to Hermione, a character with mixed motives.
It would be great if, in Jack, we have a character that is always kind and understanding but is a character that readers recognize as sinister.