I have to admit, I started reading out of a pitiful inability to sleep/find updates on WIPs that had already hooked me.  After a rough day trying to update my computer's security programs, I needed something fun.  This is it!  Thank you!  Combining the Twins and Lee AND Snape and Hermione, it's just--mind boggling!  I can't wait to see what's next!

Awesome story! Delivering th whole decrete 309 must have left you with a vacous mind for at least 45 minutes!! Love it. Every piece of it! More please?

Great story. Very funny. Looking forward to more.

I just love the setup for the Snape/Hermione relationship and the way that Back in Black (BiB? ) recruits new members.    It's such an enjoyable read!

Now you've done it!  I have a smile on my face that far exceeds Proper

Will there be reference to the correct amount of grip suitable when throttling Umbridge and her minions? 

Stencils for smiles, reconditioning camps and proper shades of grey, what a truly nightmarish existence.  I'm surprised that any variation of grey is allowed at all.Another funny and interesting chapter.  I enjoyed the inclusion of Lee and the twist with the sign.  Looks like Hermione is in for one wild ride.Viva La Resistance!!

Quite a bit indeed. Looking forward to more! :)

Ah, a romance is brewing?  This is really funny in a totally horrifying way.  

Well, I wrote something for the first chapter but I do have to save you from Thinking Pink, so I'll write again.  Please don't tell us what being Pinked actually entails -- it will give us nightmares.  So where are the centaurs when you need them?

Poor Hermione is confused.......will she overthrow the government dressed as Severus?Or, do you have something else in mind? Impressive, most impressive.

I feel suddenly inspired to wear charcoal grey tomorrow.  Interesting charm.  It seems they do have rather a lot in common.  Curioser and curioser!

Lee Jordan is another awesome choice.

Aside from the humor, the writing was also a joy to read. The flow was perfect with the chapter just being mostly dialogue.

Love it, Love it ,Love it. So original and so funny - I very rarely laugh at intentionally humorous fan-fiction but you made me giddy with laughter. An absolute joy to read, I very much look forward to the next installment...

This makes me want to wear full black...er.. not to be rude.. but more please...ok that's not rude enough...more more!and can they wear neon green?

OMG I am loving this more and more.

The stencil for proper smiles, the shades of acceptable grey, pink parchment, reconditioning camps - fabulous details and I'm finding it all to be terribly amusing and terrifyingly horrible at the same time.

I'm insanely curious to see why the sign above the door was the same for both Hermione and Snape.

I just can't wait to see what is next!!! JOIN THE RESISTANCE!

Ewww!  This new Ministry is even worse than I thought.  Makes me want to go all black! (or charcoal grey? teehee!)Good story, hoping to see more soon.  :)

You are so creative.  I never would have thought of stencils for smiling practice.  I look forward to more, but please don't abandon Ladder.  I love that too, and look forward to more of those sensational rungs.

Ooh, this promises to be an excellent story! Big Brother in the wizarding world, mixed with Umbridge. Can't wait for more!

Im here by way of SSHG316's LJ and she was right! This is hilarious!! Please tell me there is more coming? The pink must be fought against!! Write Write!

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

 How did I ever miss this?  Brilliant!

This is jsut the type of Alice-in_wonderland Potterverse that I love to see. Everything ON its head and over the top.

Can't wait to read more. This was enthralling.
naomi

Author's Response: Thanks!  I so very glad you enjoyed it!  Although if I followed a white rabbit to get here, it was probably the one from The Holy Grail!  (grins)  More very soon!

I'm gonna have to dye my Browncoat black. :) :) Hurrah for another resistance movement to join.

This is awesome -- seriously, I'm in awe.   I can't wait to find out what's going on with that sign!!

Wow!  This is a truly fabulous take on that prompt! It's rare these days to something so fresh and different.  It's enough to make a fangirl squee to the heavens!

I love the Pink Lord and her decrees.  LOL  The Seriousy Serious Alarm had me in giggles, and everyone running around with their Proper Smiles and correct shades of pink was both highly amusing and very scary!

Yay for Back in Black!  As if we don't know who would head up that resistance.  :) The thought of Snape in pink, either Pink #1 or Pink #2, does two things to me:  1.  Giggle hysterically; 2.  Make me want to hurl.  LOL

Fabulous start - oh, I can't wait for more!!!  Tell me you'll be updating soon - but don't forget about Ladder!  I could seriously just squish you to death for this story!

Very intriguing premise. Snape, Hermione, the Twins? Umbrige won't know what hit her...

Fabulous start! You managed to make it frightening as well as funny.Fred, George and Snape as leaders of a resistance movement - they're really desperate, arent' they? I hope there'll be more soon.

Fabulous! So creative and funny, I actully snorted out loud. Am I the only one who could hear the opening chords of an AC/DC song in my head at the end of the chapter? Can't wait to read more, rock on!