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Potter Place Winter 2007 Prompt Challenges Back in Black
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Back in Black

1: Pale-Pink #1

2: Pale-Pink #2

3: Pale-Pink #3

4: Pale-Pink #4

5: Purple-Pink #5

6: Purple-Pink #6

7: Purple-Pink #7

8: Purple-Pink #8

9: Dove-Grey #9

10: Charcoal-Grey #10

11: Back in Black #11

Back in Black

ubiquirk

487 Reviews   |   487 Ratings, 0 Likes, 186 Favorites )

Humor Drama Romance Action/Adventure Potter Place Winter 2007 Prompt Challenges 18,683 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Dolores Jane Umbridge Fred Weasley George Weasley Ginevra Weasley Hermione Granger Lee Jordan Severus Snape

The Dark Lord has fallen, but an even more terrible force has arisen to take over the Ministry of Magic – the Pink Lord. Ruling with an abundance of ruffles and terrifyingly sharp stiletto heels, Umbridge’s Think Pink Brigade terrorizes a populace grown weary of decrees designed to enforce sweetness. Unexpectedly, Hermione Granger joins the resistance, the sarcastically snarky Back in Black. Award winner.

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Pale-Pink #1

Chapter 2: Pale-Pink #2

Chapter 3: Pale-Pink #3

Chapter 4: Pale-Pink #4

Chapter 5: Purple-Pink #5

Chapter 6: Purple-Pink #6

Chapter 7: Purple-Pink #7

Chapter 8: Purple-Pink #8

Chapter 9: Dove-Grey #9

Chapter 10: Charcoal-Grey #10

Chapter 11: Back in Black #11


About ubiquirk

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ubiquirk

Member Since 2006  |  10 Stories  |  Favorited by 212  |  89 Reviews Written  |  1,629 Review Responses

I am a longtime fanfic fanatic, having entered the realm via Buffydom.  One day I read a Willow/Severus crossover and I was hooked – on Snape that is!  He's been in every HP story I've done so far.

I write in multiple fandoms on LJ, esp. BtVS and Firefly. If you're interested in reading my fic for other/crossover fandoms, it can be found at:

http://community.livejournal.com/ubific/

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Reviews for Back in Black

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9/10

Marelle

All the while I was reading - especially the description of the terse smiles, most people "going along", and the absurdity of it all - I kept thinking of the Prisonner. The vibe I am getting from your writing reminds me of the vibe of that cult Brit show. Is it intentional?

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm really glad you enjoyed it!  Hmm - I love The Prisoner but I haven't seen it in over 1o years.  Most recently I've taught 1984 and read V for Vendetta - and I'm thinking of the movie Brazil.

10/10

Keladry Lupin

It's even better than I thought it would be!  Umbridge's world is just scary.  And of course, who better to lead the resistance than the Bat himself?  Wonderful! 

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm really glad you liked it!  Love the twins thingy!

0/10

Cerydden M_Layne

Can I join Back in Black, too?  I have way too much forced cheerfulness in my life.   OK, OK, start my own movement; I get it.  I was a bit dubious about the story from the summary; the potential for my favorite characters being forced to do horrid pink things seemed high.  I'm one of those people who squirm with embarrassment for the characters sometimes and even have to stop reading certain stories because I can't stand it any longer.  But I liked this beginning very much!  You set the tone of a fascist, Umbridge-led society very well.  And thanks for hopping to the Resistance right away instead of making the rest of us despair for chapters and chapters, hoping for relief.  But your stories tend to move along very well, wihich people who hate suspense (like me!) appreciate greatly.  You know, I hadn't even thought about Fred and George when I read the summary but of course they'd have to just about be founding members of movement, wouldn't they?  Thanks for your work! 

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm so very glad you liked it!  You can join anytime you like!  I'm going to need to show some dystopic elements, but the humor will soon follow (I hope).

10/10

mizangua

Laughs out loud.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter - funniest fic I've read in ages.

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm really glad you liked it and found it funny!

10/10

rachaelmona

interesting.. i hope you do add a few chapters soon...

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm really glad you liked it!  More very soon.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I love your sense of humor. Excellent imagery.

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  And thanks for the hand holding!

0/10

AJS

This amused me no end - a really promising start!

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm really glad you liked it!

0/10

Mama Weasley

Heh heh heh...what a good start!  ***shivers at the thought of Umbridge in charge***  Can't wait to read more...

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm really glad you enjoyed it!  Terryfying, eh?

10/10

ccrawley10

This is too funny.  Would love to see more, so that I can laugh my butt off.

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm really glad you liked the chapter and found it so funny!

0/10

I Dance In Shadows

I love your story!!! Keep up the good work.

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm really glad you like the story!

0/10

remy

Oooh, shivers!

Great chapter, even greater pranks!

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm so glad you liked the chapter and the pranks!

10/10

Shishkeberry

*squee*  This is just getting better and better.

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter!

9/10

leffe

counterblossom and malmentis - funny names! I always thought Umbrige was the most original villain of the Potterverse. I like your story.

10/10

LovesRickman

Excellent story! I really enjoyed this in spite of loving pink.
Missy/LovesRickman

0/10

LovesRickman

Don't care if Umbitch likes it too...I an drooling over Pink # 5 on the chart at beginning of chapter!!! Wouldn't dress in it for a entire outfit nor add other shades, but it would be great in shoes or a purse or a sweater.  Yep I'm hopeless!  

10/10

LovesRickman

Hot pink patent leather over the knee/thigh high stiletto boots...heck yeah!!Alas the boot length would no doubt violate several decrees. Would still make awesome ankle booties tho. What can I say? I love pink in moderate amounts. Skip the ruffles and minimal lace. Fringe is good.  Really am enjoying this story!Missy/LovesRickman

10/10

sinbad

Well, I just had to read it again.  I still enjoyed every word of every chapter.  My first chapter of my newest story is with my beta.  Merlin I'm nervous I needed to read this to calm down.  Does this feeling still hit you when you post new stories?  Keep in touch, Carla.

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  It's wonderful to hear that it stands up to another read through!  And I just submitted my sshg_exchange fic yesterday, thinking, "Everyone's going to hate it."  So, yes, the tummy rumblings still happen.

10/10

lunar47

awesome story so far

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  It's great to hear that you like the story!

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  It's great to hear that you like the story!

10/10

lunar47

this is definitely a unique premise

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and find it unique!

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and find it unique!

10/10

Merlinsbeard

This story is bloody brilliant!

Vive La Resistance! 

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  It's wonderful to hear that you enjoyed it!  Thanks for joining the resistance!

10/10

ClayPotter

I found this by clicking "Radom Story." What a delightful read. I can visualize the whole thing as some avant-garde David Lynch-like movie. Scary, absurd, and hysterical in its bizarre story line.

The idea of seeing Severus Snape in Pale Pink #1 would be worth the price of a ticket.

Well done.

10/10

elsolel

Lovely.  I liked it very, very much!

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  It's great to hear that you liked it!  Thank you for all of your reviews!

10/10

elsolel

Excellent. 

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm so very happy that you're enjoying the story so much!

0/10

elsolel

Freedoms are all important.Especially from pink.

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm very glad you're on the side of the fight for freedom - join the resistance!

0/10

elsolel

Hot pink patent leather is just to scary to contemplate.  I refuse.

Response from ubiquirk (Author of Back in Black)

Thanks!  I'm glad you find the hot pink patent leather disturbing because it stands for something horrible!

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