I had to laugh at Severus trying to get to Neville while he hung from the ceiling lamp!I loved the way you described Severus' mind slipping away.

I am so glad Ron figured it out, and was willing to stay withhim, even if it meant leaving his best friend.

I can imagine Severus as a magnificent Unicorn.i can only hope he can find a way to save Hermione.

At least Severus has finally told Hermione about Bob. I can just imagine a secluded wood, a nice, firm tree and Severus Snape....Mmmmmm *wipes away drool*

Such sexual tension between the two. I'm glad he finally let that formidable control snap!

I still can't believe Snape obliviated her out of his own insecurity. I love that Hermione was smart enough to have Occluded it and used it to her advantage to make him realise how much she does want him.

Oh what a poetic ending with him going back and creating a proper burial site for Bob and the love story between Severus and Hermione was just fantastic - very good fanfiction and great original thinking.

I loved the eat your wand and transform. The tranformation back to wizard was great and the reunion with Hermione was off the charts romantic and sensually hot. Loved Severus's note to Albus - good chapter

I love how you have them all treating Severus like he is a man so he does not forget and become the unicorn. I loved the whole set-up of his rooms to accomidate him but not let him feel like a beast - good chapter

Oh my gosh - the scene where Severus as a unicorn charges Neville was too funny - I loved the way you described it: "To Neville, it seemed as though a demon from the depths of Hell itself had risen from Hermione’s bed." - LOL Then Albus calling him a mad thing - I nearly fell out of my chair... wipes eyes. Ahhh little unicorn kisses - too cute

Oh man - so heartbreaking. Well I am glad Ron figured it out and they were all found - poor poor Severus and poor Hermione.

Oh man - this chapter was so tragic - I cannot believe that she is beyond repair but Severus being forever a unicorn - oh my. No wonder the unicorns loved him so - they knew what he could tranform into.

Oh crap - a minotaur - you have thrown almost every deadly creature at them and now this. I cannot wait to see what happens - morbid - I know. Oh an by the way - the sex scenes are steamy -Severus oh Severus - what a man.

I cannot believe he cast an Oblivate but when he realized that it did not work it was priceless. The way the chapter ended with him holding her and telling her that she was his - that was great

The sex scene was off the charts hot. I loved all the little affectionate words he called her throughout this chapter - oh so very seductive. Life with Severus is a very passionate one.

oh the sexual tension - it is great. I loved how you had her pretend to be asleep. I hate to think what Dumbledore is reading on both of their clock hands right about now - LOL

I wonder now what Severus hand is reading since he is thinking all those thoughts about Hermione. I loved them cuddling on the pallet and again Severus taking points - snarky snarky man. He protested but loved every minute of it.

The Hag was terrifying and when Bob died - I was so sad. I fell in love with him in only a few chapters and felt so bad for Severus. I laughed again when Severus ran into Hermione in the middle of the forbidden forest and said:“Miss Granger, that will be twenty points from Gryffindor for behavior unbecoming a student.” He then collapsed unconscious at her feet. That was gold - LOL.
Cried, laughed, joy and all emotions were present from this chapter - good job

You are a funny writer - I got more good laughs from this chapter - my favorite:
"Beware Severus Snape, your fate comes stalking...and it's wearing hiking boots."
The creatures that you have them running into are great - love you thinking.
Seventeen more miles - oh my gosh - that will take forever

Good chapter - loved that Hermione stuck to her guns - someone she loved needed her and nothing - threat or no could stop her from going after them.

Oh my gosh - I laughed so hard at this one line that I had tears...
"Tall, Naked wizard, a string of eight floating apples, and a prancing, nickering unicorn" - the vision that I had in my head was hysterical. Bob protecting him was great and the Lost to in danger to asleep was a good thing to throw in.

I cannot believe Dumbledore threatened explusion - If he has been paying attention (which Dumbledore always seems to know stuff in advance) - he knows Hermione clock is "In Love." I am glad she smacked Ron - that one is long overdue even from the books. I was shocked that Harry commented "you are doomed - not much tact on Harry's part with his words but it sound so authentic which is great. Loved this chapter.

I cannot believe Dumbledore threatened explusion - If he has been paying attention (which Dumbledore always seems to know stuff in advance) - he knows Hermione clock is "In Love." I am glad she smacked Ron - that one is long overdue even from the books. I was shocked that Harry commented "you are doomed - not much tact on Harry's part with his words but it sound so authentic which is great. Loved this chapter.

The 2nd chapter - were to begin. I loved that it was not canon and that Dumbledore is alive. I loved the hand clock in his office - it was sweet. I was shocked that Hermione's read in love been was very happy. It was great thinking to have the unicorn come to Severus to stay with him while he was out. I LMAO at the image of Severus being unicorn catnip - great idea. This was a good read

Loved the first chapter - the exploding cauldren was a well written scene. I know he cannot just be dead because the story is too long so I am setting on the edge of my chair wondering what twists and turns you will give us in this story - I like a mystery