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And the Tree Cried

1: Evil In the Garden

2: Nature's Heartbeat

And the Tree Cried

Bardsdaughter

24 Reviews   |   24 Ratings, 0 Likes, 11 Favorites )

Drama Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 3,117 Words 2 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape

Her heart breaks for the boy she sheltered as she becomes the tool of his torture.

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Chapters (2)

Chapter 1: Evil In the Garden

Chapter 2: Nature's Heartbeat


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Bardsdaughter

Member Since 2012  |  5 Stories  |  Favorited by 52  |  23 Reviews Written  |  325 Review Responses

Old enough. I'm a writer by heart, using the wonderful HP universe (specifically Severus Snape and Hermione Granger) as a canvas for my imagination as I learn the craft and strive to be published one day. In real life, I am a professional with a doctorate in my chosen field.

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Reviews for And the Tree Cried

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0/10

Gemini Sister

So beautifully written. It made me cry!

0/10

TheCopperDragon2004

I really shouldn't read stories like this while pregnant, you have me crying like a baby lol. I almost didn't read the second chapter, thinking you'd killed severus and now built a coffin for him out of the tree or something, but I'm glad I did. Good story, unique from anything I've read before.

10/10

Lkmaide

that was beautiful.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you.

10/10

jenidralph

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you.

0/10

Stella Stargazer

And I cried along with the tree. Beautiful.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

While I'm sorry for causing the tears, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

While I'm sorry for causing the tears, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

10/10

sunny33

Very evocative. :)

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you.

10/10

sunny33

Fascinating use of POV. :)

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you!

10/10

just harry

what a beautiful story.  I cried with the tree.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you.

10/10

JudithsFancy

And so did I...cried that is.  It is a pleasure to know there are other humans who treasure nature, who sits patiently while others destroy it.  Save the green.  Jf

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you for reading.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you for reading.

0/10

sandlapper

Beautiful!  Just beautiful...

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you. And thanks for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you. And thanks for reading!

10/10

arynwy

And I had to blink back a few tears for the tree...Lovely.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you. 

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you. 

10/10

reader76

Stunning.  Absolutely beautiful.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Sorry for being so long in responding. I'm glad you took the time to read this little tale.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Sorry for being so long in responding. I'm glad you took the time to read this little tale.

10/10

jenidralph

Oh... this broke my heart.  It was beautiful and I can't stop crying.  (Runs off to find a fluffy cure.)

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Sorry for the tears, but I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Sorry for the tears, but I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

0/10

cmwinters

Ack!This reminded me of Shel Silverstien's Giving Tree.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Talk about making someone cry. That is a classic that makes me tear up just by looking at the cover.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Talk about making someone cry. That is a classic that makes me tear up just by looking at the cover.

0/10

linlawless

Made me cry in the best possible way.  Your use of language is almost lyrical.  Lovely!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

rosebladeaurelius

This is a beautifully written fic with one of the best perception-shifts I've read.  Poignant without becoming trite, tripe, or, worse, disgustingly, sappily, melodramatically sentimental; evocative without being explicit.  Your writing rivals professionals with this fic.  Given the strength of this single chapter--it could stand on its own as finished--I will definitely be reading as updated. 

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you! I certainly hope the final chapter lives up to the first.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you! I certainly hope the final chapter lives up to the first.

0/10

reader76

This is very well written, powerful, and touching.I almost didn't read it due to the warnings, but I'm glad I did. 

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you! I'm glad you read it, too.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you! I'm glad you read it, too.

9/10

goddess knight

This is a WONDERFUL story!!!!

10/10

mick42

And so the world keeps on turning.

10/10

mick42

Heartbreakingly beautiful.

0/10

jectex

Wow, just wow.  So. so very touching.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you. 

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you. 

10/10

deedeebug95

Just found your work...lovely, absolutely breathtaking!!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

phoenix

So very sweet. I loved it. Thank you.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you for reading!

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you for reading!

10/10

phoenix

So very touching and moving. I love how this is from the tree's POV. So very unique.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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