Not to the Manor Born
Good_Witch88 Reviews | 7.17/10 (88 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
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Written for nothingness101, as her SSHG Exchange BINGO prize. She requested: "A slightly fluffy Christmas romance which is a call back to the pureblood Snape of pre HBP. Basic story line about how Snape and Hermione get together, and I'd prefer a post war story. Thinking formal ball(s), formal courting, curtseys, formal address (Lord and Lady), maybe some family jewels (and maybe some Snape family to go with them). Please feature a frisky drunk Snape and lots and lots o' lemons."----I did my best!
AU post OotP, the tale of how Snape and Hermione helped defeat the Dark Lord, how their relationship developed, and how Snape Manor came into play.
Thanks to Gelsey for always being there to help me with this whole writing thing!
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I have completed my Master's of Science degree in Marriage and Family Therapy and want to focus on serving the LGBTQIA community and the Alt/Kink/Poly communities in my work. I used to be a poker tournament director and floorperson at the world famous Binion's Gambling Hall in downtown Las Vegas. Before that, I was high school Spanish and Theatre teacher. I am happily married and (thankfully) have NO kids. I have an original short story published here: http://www.elm-books.com/ProductDetails.asp?ProductCode=R01%2DChristmasBadGirls under my penname, Jess Alynn. Thanks for taking a chance and reading my stories! :)
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Reviews for Not to the Manor Born
These two are killing me! When are they going to realize they want one another? I was hoping she'd be bold enough to demand he come home with her. But alas ...
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Alas, earwax. LOL There may be desire, but there's also such fulfilling friendship that it's scary to take the chance and risk losing the latter in pursuit of the former. ;) (And I'm just a queen of UST, apparently. *snerk*) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Alas, earwax. LOL There may be desire, but there's also such fulfilling friendship that it's scary to take the chance and risk losing the latter in pursuit of the former. ;) (And I'm just a queen of UST, apparently. *snerk*) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't believe so much jealousy was put out on the table, and yet neither of them seem to recognize it. This was handled with more grace than I've ever seen in this situation. Somehow, I think their game is going to backfire.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Perhaps it's the dawning of a new era. Mmm, "grace"... that made me smile a lot! Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Perhaps it's the dawning of a new era. Mmm, "grace"... that made me smile a lot! Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I don't know what go think of this mysterious relative and a Snape fortune. Either there is something shady going on, or it is all legitimate but it is going to take a lot of getting used to. Perhaps he'll find someone to share it with. ;). Except they seem to dance around being friends vs something more. I don't know whether the potion they are taking is a good idea or not. But I'm about to find out!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It is rather a paradigm shift for dear Snape, isn't it? Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It is rather a paradigm shift for dear Snape, isn't it? Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What a relief! And he survived with something to look forward to. Could it be this easy?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It's about time something be easy for dear Snape, isn't it? ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It's about time something be easy for dear Snape, isn't it? ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
This chapter is full of so many wonderful moments, but perhaps my favorite is where he tells her about his excitement for a possible future and a friend to go with it. It was a lovely exchange.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*blush* Aww, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I was indeed trying to show the tender beats of a growing friendship. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*blush* Aww, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I was indeed trying to show the tender beats of a growing friendship. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
She's got him wrapped around her little finger without even being aware, I think. It really is a brilliant plan. I can't wait to see what goes wrong, lol.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*snerk* Yeah, I daresay you weren't the only one waiting for the other shoe to drop. Thanks again for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*snerk* Yeah, I daresay you weren't the only one waiting for the other shoe to drop. Thanks again for reviewing! :)
I love how these two have a slow-growing relationship; it makes it more realistic for me. And if she keeps up her displays of gratitude, he is going to be so wrong-footed, he won't be able to walk.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
ROFL!!! You just made my day with "realistic" since that's what I'm always striving for! *beams* Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
ROFL!!! You just made my day with "realistic" since that's what I'm always striving for! *beams* Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I swore I wasn't going to start another WIP, but here you are and here I am. Love the concept of this potion already. And that Harry's friends agreed with no question. Especially Ron who would have a much harder time living as a Muggle.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*blush* Welcome, darlin! :D I'm glad you're enjoying the start. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*blush* Welcome, darlin! :D I'm glad you're enjoying the start. Thanks for reviewing! :)
That is quite a game they have going, I hope the bedposts can hold up under the strain.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*snort* Too right. They're definitely intent on making the most of their chance to have some fun! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*snort* Too right. They're definitely intent on making the most of their chance to have some fun! Thanks for reviewing! :)
uncle Lazarus was a surprise, and he filled in some missing pieces for Severus. The ball is going to be a funny disaster, or disastrously funny, can't wait.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL! I hope it measures up to your expectations for either way. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL! I hope it measures up to your expectations for either way. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Wow he's gone at last, 
now they can start to live their lives without the threat of war hanging over their heads.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
About time, eh? LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
About time, eh? LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
The Christmas gifts were just right, the friendship is developing fast now, but not too fast.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*bounces* Yay! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and that it's not developing too fast. Thanks again for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*bounces* Yay! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and that it's not developing too fast. Thanks again for reviewing! :)
A very good idea, ti buys them more time, and gets rid of the Death Eaters as well, I just hope that Severus isn't one of them.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
They do manage some good ideas sometimes. ;P hehehe Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
They do manage some good ideas sometimes. ;P hehehe Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I guess no one has ever worried that Severus might be cold, or uncomfortable, a hand knitted gift is very special.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*blush* Dear Severus, he deserves something special. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*blush* Dear Severus, he deserves something special. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Once they had heard about the potion, there would be nothing on earth that would stop Ron and Hermione from helping Harry. Great start.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
I don't know how on earth I missed this review; I'm so sorry! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
I don't know how on earth I missed this review; I'm so sorry! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :)
Once they had heard about the potion, there would be nothing on earth that would stop Ron and Hermione from helping Harry. Great start.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*beams* Indeed! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*beams* Indeed! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
This was such an easy read. Thanks for posting! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*beams* I hope you continue to find it easy and enjoyable as I get to post more. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*beams* I hope you continue to find it easy and enjoyable as I get to post more. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
ut oh
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Aww, no worries! I know I've previously been one to angst things up for our fave couple, but I'm gonna keep things pretty light for them this time (it's about time they deserve some fun, right?). Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Aww, no worries! I know I've previously been one to angst things up for our fave couple, but I'm gonna keep things pretty light for them this time (it's about time they deserve some fun, right?). Thanks for reviewing! :)
Loved the update:-))
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*curtseys* Yay! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*curtseys* Yay! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm glad Severus has some family but their was just something off about Lazarus Snape. Loved the shopping trip, it was so like Severus to think nice clothes would not make a diffeence. I could see in my mind that they made a lovely couple. And now onto the ball I bet they will make a grand entrance.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*grin* I can see them so clearly in my mind--I wish I could make art of them! ;D Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*grin* I can see them so clearly in my mind--I wish I could make art of them! ;D Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love your Severous & Hermione sometimes i just like when they get along. Each chapter was so good I could not stop reading till I got to chapter 5. so hence only one review for all chapters, please update soon i have added this stoty to favorites so I don't miss any updates
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Oh, wow! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so much already. *beams* I already have a lot of the next chapter written; I just need to finish it off at the right place. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Oh, wow! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so much already. *beams* I already have a lot of the next chapter written; I just need to finish it off at the right place. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I really adore this so far. It is like snapshots of an evolving friendship over time, and I just am in love with the way you are writing this.The way that it is slowly evolving from student-teacher to a romantic relationship is very realistic, and it just makes me ache to read more.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Yay! My biggest "thing" when writing is striving for plausibility, and that you find the evolving relationship realistic is the highest compliment you cna give me. *beams* Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Yay! My biggest "thing" when writing is striving for plausibility, and that you find the evolving relationship realistic is the highest compliment you cna give me. *beams* Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I absolutely love it and I cant wait to read the rest:-))
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*bounces* Yay! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*bounces* Yay! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What a intriguing plot, I look forward to read more of it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*beams* Thank you! I hope you enjoy it. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*beams* Thank you! I hope you enjoy it. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
This is a very interesting beginning of the ending of 'You-Know-Who.'Beth
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL! I'll admit, I took a bit of inspiration from Joss Whedon's Buffy, but made it a potion instead of jsut a spell. Hope you enjoy it, and thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL! I'll admit, I took a bit of inspiration from Joss Whedon's Buffy, but made it a potion instead of jsut a spell. Hope you enjoy it, and thanks so much for reviewing! :)