From Assistant to Friendly
Chapter 3 of 11
Good_Witch*Now Complete*
Written for nothingness101, as her SSHG Exchange BINGO prize. She requested: "A slightly fluffy Christmas romance which is a call back to the pureblood Snape of pre HBP. Basic story line about how Snape and Hermione get together, and I'd prefer a post war story. Thinking formal ball(s), formal courting, curtseys, formal address (Lord and Lady), maybe some family jewels (and maybe some Snape family to go with them). Please feature a frisky drunk Snape and lots and lots o' lemons."----I did my best!
AU post OotP, the tale of how Snape and Hermione helped defeat the Dark Lord, how their relationship developed, and how Snape Manor came into play.
Thanks to Gelsey for always being there to help me with this whole writing thing!
ReviewedJuly 20, 1997
The school year had finished, Harry was once again ensconced in Grimmauld Place, and the potion was at its final stage. In less than two weeks, Harry would turn 17, and everyone was starting to worry what the Dark Lord would do once Harry was of age.
Hermione sat at the workstation with Snape, watching him adding the ingredients they had just gathered. As soon as the delicate work was done, she said, "Professor, may I ask you a question?"
Still focused on the potion he was stirring, Snape said, "You mean another one? When has permission ever stopped you before?"
Hermione wrinkled her nose and huffed. "Is it working? Did we do everything right?"
Snape snorted and said, "Those were two questions, and yes, it looks right so far. Was that it?"
Hermione leant closer, trying to peer into the cauldron. "Actually, no. I was really wondering if you knew what You-Know-Who might do once Harry is 17."
Snape's expression settled into a blank mask and he meticulously removed the stirring rod, watched the potion drip off the end, then wrapped it in a clean towel before laying it on the tabletop. Finally, he lifted his gaze to meet Hermione's.
"I wish I knew exactly what he'll do, Miss Granger, but he has been courting ideas from Death Eaters for weeks now, so who knows what he will decide?"
Hermione bit her lower lip, brow furrowed in thought. Over the past year, she and Snape had developed a friendlier relationship, actually being able to engage in conversations, but anytime it came to his Death Eater spying, she never knew how much she could push before he retreated into his former cold aloofness.
"I had an idea, but I don't know whether it might work."
"Well, how would I know unless you tell me? Spit it out, girl!"
"All right... now that the potion is ready for Harry, what's to stop us from using it right away and going after You-Know-Who?"
Snape's expression darkened and he uttered a clipped, "No. That is not a good idea. At all."
"Why not?"
Leaning forward, he growled, "Mr. Potter hasn't even finished school. There is much he still needs to learn if he is to go against the Dark Lord. Besides, the longer we wait, the stronger you all will be when you join together via the potion. We must wait."
"But that's the thing...you managed to convince You-Know-Who to wait this past year, can't you convince him to wait another year?"
Lips curling, Snape snarled, "And how do you propose I do that, pray tell?"
Hermione took a deep breath and said, "Tell him about the potion."
Snape's brows shot up and his eyes widened in incredulity. "Are you mad?"
Hermione lunged forward and clamped a hand on his wrist in her earnestness. "No! Listen...if you tell him about the potion, then he'll want to use it too, right? But you said yourself first off that he couldn't use it effectively because he can't love. So, if you tell him about it now, then that would give us another school year at least for Harry and the rest of us to learn what we need to know while you make another potion for him to use!"
She paused, gasping for breath after reciting all that without stopping. Snape stared at her in wonder. She could see him making rapid calculations, his eyes unfocused and darting back and forth. After a long silence, he zeroed in on her again, and she twitched at the intensity of his gaze.
His voice was barely above a breathy rasp as he said, "Miss Granger, you are indeed the brightest witch of your age. Do you know what you've just done?" Hermione, owl-eyed, shook her head. "You may have just handed us the method we can use to not only defeat the Dark Lord but to also destroy his ranks of Death Eaters in one fell swoop!"
Hermione jerked back in astonishment. "I did?"
Snape shot to his feet, pacing and gesticulating wildly in his exultation. "The potion will not function for the Dark Lord, yes, and Mr. Potter will be able to destroy him once you and Mr. Weasley are joined with him through the potion. But, the Dark Lord will undoubtedly use his tendency toward excess and bind as many of his Death Eaters to him with the potion as he can, thinking to use their combined powers. And once he finally dies, all of those who were tied to him will be left as Squibs...practically obliterating the Death Eater movement all at once!" He paused, his head thrown back as he let loose a great bellow of delighted laughter, leaving Hermione completely gobsmacked. "You darling, brilliant girl...what would I do without you, Hermione?"
He finally looked at her again, seeing her face blotchy from going pale and blushing in quick succession. Her dazed look brought him back from his transports of triumphant joy, and he realized what he had just said out loud. His radiant smile wilted in horror, and he quickly averted his face, shaking his hair forward to hide his warming cheeks.
"I beg your pardon, Miss Granger. I quite forgot myself. I do hope I haven't offended you."
Hermione blinked rapidly, gathering the wits that had been scattered at the sight and sound of Snape laughing so uninhibitedly. "Certainly not, sir. I'm pleased to have been of use to the cause. Do you really think it could be so perfect?"
Snape cleared his throat. "With such a desirable outcome, it is my job to make sure that the Dark Lord believes and follows the plan. I will do everything in my power to persuade him."
Hermione dared to grip his arm again and murmured, "I have every faith in you, sir."
Snape's insides squirmed again, and he covered her hand with his, clasping it to pull her along with him. "Let's go. We need to tell the headmaster the news and have him call an Order meeting."
Hermione jogged to keep up with his long strides, trying not to acknowledge how much her pulse was racing at the feel of her hand captured in his grasp.
***** *****
July 31, 1997
Harry's 17th birthday party was held in Grimmauld Place, and the dark house was filled with laughter and conversation. It wasn't until later that evening, long after the cake had been served, that Snape appeared, black eyes gleaming with accomplishment. He made a beeline to Hermione where she stood leaning against the wall, giggling as she watched Hagrid and Lupin attempting to sing a drunken duet.
Her smile fell away at the sight of Snape charging toward her, but returned in blazing force at his hissed, "It's done; it worked! The Dark Lord wants me to start the potion at the next full moon. We have another year to prepare!"
Fortunately, Snape's face was hidden between Hermione's bushy hair and the wall when she launched herself at him, hugging him, and no one could see the look of sheepish satisfaction that flashed over his face before he studiously crafted an expression of stern reprimand and pried himself from her embrace.
"Miss Granger! Are you drunk?"
Hermione laughed, utterly unaffected by his scolding tone. "Nothing of the sort, Professor! Unless you count being high on life...does that sort of euphoria count? Because I don't think I could be more thrilled at what you've done...again! It's the best present ever, and it's not even my birthday! And I'm not even going to apologize for hugging you, sir. You deserve much more than that."
Snape swallowed at her declaration, wishing he wasn't reacting to the adoration shining in her eyes. Coughing slightly, he rumbled, "Yes, well, let's just leave it at that, shall we? Where is the headmaster; I need to let him know what's happened."
Hermione continued beaming at him and said, "Last I saw him, he was in the library with Tonks and McGonagall. I'll go find Harry and Ron and tell them how amazing you are."
Snape snorted. "I doubt that will stand you in good stead, Miss Granger. You'd be much better served just telling them what happened, without making any assertions as to my character."
Tilting her head and smirking, she murmured, "Fine. I'll just keep how amazing you are all for myself. See you later, Professor."
Snape watched her bounce away, disappearing through the door and leaving a very flustered and flattered Potions Master in her wake.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Not to the Manor Born
88 Reviews | 7.17/10 Average
Not quite what I had expected it to be (figured Lucius would make a big appearance, actually, because of the title), but overall I liked it. The whole uncle thing kinda came out of left field for me, but otherwise I enjoyed it. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL Sorry, no Lucius this time. The prompter wanted Snape Manor, pre-HBP Snape speculation, riches, "Lord" and "Lady" talk, intoxicated, flirtatious Severus, and eventual SSHG lemons. So, this is the best I could come up with to try to get all that in. ;) Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from TheCopperDragon2004 (Reviewer)
Lol, I'm actually glad Lucius was left out, I don't like him! With all the prompts, that's really good! That is a lot to mash together into one cohesive story lol.
At some point all that tension has to burst. I know I can't be the only one screaming for the two of them to just kiss and get it overwith, that friendships can become more.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!!! You're definitely not the only one. But, the fear of ruining their friendship is a very real one, so it'll take more time and circumstances to get where we want them. *snerk* It's barely been a few months since she finished school! *hides* Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!!! You're definitely not the only one. But, the fear of ruining their friendship is a very real one, so it'll take more time and circumstances to get where we want them. *snerk* It's barely been a few months since she finished school! *hides* Thanks for reviewing! :)
Boy, they both are thick, aren't they? Rather than bantering jealously like that, they could have had a real conversation. Something tells me they have both agreed to a competition neither of them really wants to participate in.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It's all new territory for both of them, so they've got to dope it out as best they can. ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It's all new territory for both of them, so they've got to dope it out as best they can. ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)
I love the lord/lady act they use to mask their feelings. Hopefully the Elixir will help him 'let his hair down' and have some fun and realize she might be more than a friend. Great backstory on the Snape family. I love the idea his father and grandfather were Squibs.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*bounces* I'm so pleased you liked the backstory. It took some wrangling for me to come up with a way for Snape Manor to exist! LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*bounces* I'm so pleased you liked the backstory. It took some wrangling for me to come up with a way for Snape Manor to exist! LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Yay! The potion worked, Hermione's plans worked and that part is over. Now Severus can get on with his life and not feel guilty about any emotions he might have for anyone.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Exactly! *happy dances for him* Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Exactly! *happy dances for him* Thanks for reviewing! :)
I would definitely say that he's definitely been thrown out of his element. I con wholely imagine hiim feeling guilty about the spur of the moment mistletoe kiss.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Not really his area, y'know? ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Not really his area, y'know? ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
Oh, poor Severus. He's developing a friendship and possibly a crush. Wonderful how Hermione thought of buying time.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Then again, I daresay he's not the only one. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Then again, I daresay he's not the only one. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Poor Snape. Hermione is making him confront the fact that he is a human and has emotions just like everyone else. It's nice to see him find someone he confide in and who cares about him, seeks to understand him, as uncomfortable as that will make him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*beams* Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*beams* Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Dang, that is a powerful potion. Hopefully nothing happens to Harry and that Hermione doesn't drive Snape too mad.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
I shamelessly stole the idea from BuffytVS and kinda twisted it a bit from a spell into a potion. *shifty eyes* Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
I shamelessly stole the idea from BuffytVS and kinda twisted it a bit from a spell into a potion. *shifty eyes* Thanks for reviewing! :)
How many declarations of undying friendship will these two make before the penny drops? Lol, get them moving!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Well, they don't want to screw up that very same friendship... (Give them time, it's only been a few months since she finished school!) LOL Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Well, they don't want to screw up that very same friendship... (Give them time, it's only been a few months since she finished school!) LOL Thanks for reviewing! :)
Cos neither of them is the least bit bothered.... I hope they get their priorities worked out soon!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!!! Aww, they're just having a bit of fun, right? ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!!! Aww, they're just having a bit of fun, right? ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)
An uncle, a medal, a fortune and a girl in stocking and suspenders! I just hope this isn't too good to be true!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*giggle* It's like karma showed up all at once! ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*giggle* It's like karma showed up all at once! ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
I didn't even think about Severus being at risk... thank goodness Hermione could help there, too! And yay, that was much better than an extended Horcrux hunt!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*snerk* I daresay there are many things better than the extended Horcrux hunt (complete with interminable camping!). Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*snerk* I daresay there are many things better than the extended Horcrux hunt (complete with interminable camping!). Thanks for reviewing! :)
I love that Hermione managed to mirror Severus' hopes for the future in her gift. That was a really lovely moment.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*blush* Aww, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*blush* Aww, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing! :)
A whole other year? I think I like this idea better than the ones that Dumbledore had!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!! I'll take that as a huge compliment. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!! I'll take that as a huge compliment. Thanks for reviewing! :)
I want a hat like that! How sweet is it that she noticed his frosty ears?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Maybe you can convince Hermione to knit one for you too. ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Maybe you can convince Hermione to knit one for you too. ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)
That's a really interesting idea... with possibly awful consequences. Is it too early to start panicking?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It's never too early to start panicking! LOL Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It's never too early to start panicking! LOL Thanks for reviewing! :)
Hmmm, I have a feeling this "enlightened" attitude might not really be what either of them wants... I foresee conflict.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Ah, but do they know what they really want (or are they willing to admit it)? *huge grin* Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Ah, but do they know what they really want (or are they willing to admit it)? *huge grin* Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm curious to see if Uncle Lazarus and Snape Manor/fortune are for real or turn out to be some sort of scam. I loved the descriptions of Severus and Hermione's respective outfits. Just how much euphoria are we talking about, here? ;)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
I wish I could draw what I see in my head of what they look like in their finery. Alas, earwax. ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
I wish I could draw what I see in my head of what they look like in their finery. Alas, earwax. ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
Wow! Seeing the battle scene from the standpoint of Severus and Hermione sitting out of the battle at the Grangers' house seemed a little anti-climactic at first, it keeps the focus of the story on the burgeoning relationship between Severus and Hermione. Has Kingsley noticed that Severus seems to be paying special attention to Hermione, or will he just attribute it to the after-the-battle shock?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
I admit, it was a sort of cop-out, partly because I just didn't know if I had it in me to write a battle. *sheepish* Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
I admit, it was a sort of cop-out, partly because I just didn't know if I had it in me to write a battle. *sheepish* Thanks for reviewing! :)
There were some lovely scenes in this chapter, especially the "You've already given me something I like" scene. And they seem ready to move on from the friends stage, don't they? :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*blush* I'm so pleased you enjoyed them. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*blush* I'm so pleased you enjoyed them. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Pretty good plan. But as I said before, a lot can happen in a year... Hermione's last comment made me giggle.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It made me giggle too--I could totally see it in my head. *snerk* Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It made me giggle too--I could totally see it in my head. *snerk* Thanks for reviewing! :)
These brief snippets of their monthly potions work help us see the tentative growth to their relationship.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Glad it worked for you! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Glad it worked for you! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I was just watching some HP fan videos before starting this story, so watching Dumbledore's very "twinkly" behavior made me giggle. Having said that, this is an intriguing premise. A lot can change in a year, however...
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Very true... ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Very true... ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
I wasn't going to start another WIP, but...yup. You got me! What a very interesting premise. :-)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!! Sorry! Hopefully it won't take too long to finish this one up. I've been working on it fairly consistently in the past week or so. There are another couple chapters to go, at least. ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!! Sorry! Hopefully it won't take too long to finish this one up. I've been working on it fairly consistently in the past week or so. There are another couple chapters to go, at least. ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)