From Friendly to Friends
Chapter 4 of 11
Good_Witch*Now Complete*
Written for nothingness101, as her SSHG Exchange BINGO prize. She requested: "A slightly fluffy Christmas romance which is a call back to the pureblood Snape of pre HBP. Basic story line about how Snape and Hermione get together, and I'd prefer a post war story. Thinking formal ball(s), formal courting, curtseys, formal address (Lord and Lady), maybe some family jewels (and maybe some Snape family to go with them). Please feature a frisky drunk Snape and lots and lots o' lemons."----I did my best!
AU post OotP, the tale of how Snape and Hermione helped defeat the Dark Lord, how their relationship developed, and how Snape Manor came into play.
Thanks to Gelsey for always being there to help me with this whole writing thing!
ReviewedAugust 18, 1997
Two and a half weeks later, Hermione joined Snape again in the warm summer night. "Gee, Professor, we're right back where we started."
Snape quirked a half-smile at her impish grin. "On the contrary, my dear, we are much further along than where we were when we started."
Hermione clapped her hands and bounced in excitement. "You're right, as usual."
"What do you mean, 'as usual'? You should rather say 'as always'!" He glared at her, visibly affronted.
Hermione laughed. "No one is right all the time, Professor, so spare me the indignation."
Snape rolled his eyes and growled, "Such cheek..."
Hermione giggled again, but settled down to dig, letting a companionable silence fall between them.
***** *****
September 16, 1997
The following month, Hermione was about to leave Snape's office after their latest foray, but stopped at Snape's soft, "Miss Granger."
Turning to gaze attentively up at him, she was surprised when he withdrew a long slim box from his desk drawer and presented it to her. It was wrapped and tied with a ribbon, and Hermione's brows drew closer in confusion. "Sir?"
Snape twitched the box, inclining his head toward it. "Here. Take it." Hermione grabbed the box, but just stared at it. "Go on, girl, open it!"
Blinking, Hermione unwrapped it and opened the box, unfolding tissue paper to find a new pair of high quality work gloves. Mystified, she said, "Thank you, of course, but... what are these for?"
Tossing his head, Snape bit out, "Working, Miss Granger. They are work gloves, after all."
Hermione heaved an exasperated sigh and said, "I know that, Professor; I meant why are you giving them to me as a present?"
Snape muttered, "I saw that your current pair have been getting too tattered with all the extra work we've been putting them through in the past year, and I thought you should have a new pair. And... it'syourbirthdaycomingup."
Hermione shook her head at the final rush of words. "Beg pardon?"
Drawing himself up ramrod straight, he said, "Miss Granger, is it or is it not your 18th birthday this Friday? Learn to accept a gift with some grace, for mercy's sake."
Comprehension dawned, and her puzzled expression changed to one of flattered delight. Smiling, she picked up the gloves and tried them on. "They fit beautifully, sir." Then, grinning at him, she darted forward and hugged him again. "Thank you."
Snape's cheeks warmed, and he struggled out of her arms, growling, "Miss Granger, that is not necessary!"
Hermione backed away and bit her lip, amusement and affection flashing from beneath her lowered lashes. "Oh, come now, Professor, learn how to accept a thank you with good grace!"
Snape pursed his lips and narrowed his eyes, glaring at her as she laughed and twirled away toward the door. "That's enough, you impudence. Off with you!"
"Good night, sir. And thank you again. I love them." She had tugged the gloves off and then clutched them to her heart, bowing in farewell before lifting them to drop a kiss on the dragon scales, eyes twinkling as she disappeared into the corridor.
Snape swallowed hard and sucked in a breath to steady the pounding of his heart.
***** *****
December 14, 1997
Three months later, they were back outside in the wintry night, searching for ingredients, but this time, Snape was wearing the cap Hermione had knitted for him the previous year. Christmas was a week and a half away, and Hermione was wondering what to give Snape for a present this time. He was currently stationed up on a thick branch, trimming twigs from the tree and dropping them down to Hermione's waiting hands, which were enveloped in the gloves he had given her.
Racking her brain, she couldn't decide, so she ventured, "Professor?"
"Hmm?" Snape's gaze was focused on the wood he was sawing.
"I'll just be blunt... what would you like for Christmas?"
Snape's movement stopped, and he peered down at Hermione's pink face with a puzzled look. "Excuse me?"
Tossing her head, she repeated herself. "What would you like for Christmas? You know, as a gift?"
His face went blank. "I don't need anything..."
She cut him off, her tone scathing as she said, "I didn't ask what you need. I asked what you would like." She softened her voice at his warning glare and added, "It's not like I know what you have already or what you enjoy. But it's Christmas, and I want to be able to give my friends something they like!"
Snape shifted at her words, and he gripped the branch to keep from falling off. He stared at her and mumbled, "You already have."
Hermione's nose wrinkled in confusion, but she caught the twigs he tossed down to her. As she put them away, he dropped from the branch, sending up a cloud of powdery snow when he landed very close to her. She grimaced and said, "I gave you that cap last year."
Snape's voice was very low as he said, "That's not what I meant."
Hermione looked up and was surprised by how close they were. "Oh! Then... what did you mean?"
Cheeks reddening to join his chilled nose, Snape averted his eyes and faltered, "You've... already given me something I like. We're very close to ending this war. And I'm facing the possibility...no, probability that I will actually have a future beyond it." He locked eyes with her and continued, "And I like that I have a friend to look forward to being in that future with."
Hermione's pulse sped up, and she stared up at him, rapt. Her stomach was knotting and fluttering, and when he shoved a hand into his pocket and lifted a sprig of mistletoe he had trimmed from the tree branch, she gasped. She saw his jaw twitch as he clenched his teeth and then he was there, in her personal space, pressing a gentle kiss to her flushed cheek. Her eyelids drooped closed of their own accord, and she let out a soft sigh, her breath wafting over the side of his head.
After a beat, he straightened, eyes wide at his temerity, and he dropped the mistletoe at their feet. Voice rough, he said, "We're done here," and stepped back, Disapparating.
Hermione fell back a pace, stunned at the riotous feelings that left her heart pounding and at Snape's abrupt departure. One hand rose to touch the spot on her cheek that seemed to tingle with the sensation of his lips on her skin, and when she looked down to pick up the carrier, she saw the mistletoe he had dropped. She fell to her knees in the snow and snatched it up, pressing it to her chest as she heaved a calming breath. After a long moment, she pocketed the mistletoe and stood, cradling the carrier as she Disapparated.
As soon as she appeared with the carrier, Snape Flooed away, only willing to wait long enough to see that she arrived safely. Hermione followed quickly, but when she emerged in his office, she only heard his retreating footsteps echoing down the corridor.
***** *****
December 25, 1997
Christmas morning, Snape found a small pile of presents on his dining table. One was from Hermione, and when he opened it, he couldn't help but smile fondly at the contents. There was a tin of loose-leaf tea, a teapot with two matching teacups and saucers, and a mesh tea infuser beside a package of chocolate biscuits. On top of the items, there was a note that read, "Happy Christmas, Professor. The enclosed is for us to use in the not-too-distant future, when friends can share a cuppa or two in safety and comfort. Just know that if you eat the biscuits before then, I'll hold you responsible for replacing them for our date."
His gut squirmed at her choice of words.
"I'll be waiting for you when the war is over. I have no doubt you'll find me. By next Christmas, You-Know-Who will be gone, and you'll be lauded as the hero you truly are. Thank you again for all you've done.
With love,
Hermione"
***** *****
January 12, 1998
Two and a half weeks later, Snape collected Hermione for the next full moon, and as they crunched through the snow on their quest, Snape said, "I...ah...see you received your Christmas gift."
Hermione patted her head and beamed at him. "Obviously. It's lovely, sir; thank you. Surely you didn't make it, so where did you find it?"
Snape glanced again at the knit cap with the longer scarf-sides like what she had made for him, only hers was a rich russet colour that picked up that shade in her hair. "I took mine to a craftsperson and asked for a copy in that yarn. Are the Warming Charms working correctly?"
Hermione brandished her gloved hands as well and declared, "I'm snug as can be! And it's a lovely warm colour too."
His voice was low as he said, "It suits you." He waited for a moment and added, "Thank you for the tea set."
Laughter colouring her voice, she said, "You've already eaten the biscuits, haven't you?"
Snape scowled, wishing his hair were free to tumble forward and hide his guilty flush. "None of your business."
Her hearty laughter left a visible cloud of vapour to trail behind her when she rushed to catch up with him as he stomped ahead.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Not to the Manor Born
88 Reviews | 7.17/10 Average
Not quite what I had expected it to be (figured Lucius would make a big appearance, actually, because of the title), but overall I liked it. The whole uncle thing kinda came out of left field for me, but otherwise I enjoyed it. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL Sorry, no Lucius this time. The prompter wanted Snape Manor, pre-HBP Snape speculation, riches, "Lord" and "Lady" talk, intoxicated, flirtatious Severus, and eventual SSHG lemons. So, this is the best I could come up with to try to get all that in. ;) Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from TheCopperDragon2004 (Reviewer)
Lol, I'm actually glad Lucius was left out, I don't like him! With all the prompts, that's really good! That is a lot to mash together into one cohesive story lol.
At some point all that tension has to burst. I know I can't be the only one screaming for the two of them to just kiss and get it overwith, that friendships can become more.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!!! You're definitely not the only one. But, the fear of ruining their friendship is a very real one, so it'll take more time and circumstances to get where we want them. *snerk* It's barely been a few months since she finished school! *hides* Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!!! You're definitely not the only one. But, the fear of ruining their friendship is a very real one, so it'll take more time and circumstances to get where we want them. *snerk* It's barely been a few months since she finished school! *hides* Thanks for reviewing! :)
Boy, they both are thick, aren't they? Rather than bantering jealously like that, they could have had a real conversation. Something tells me they have both agreed to a competition neither of them really wants to participate in.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It's all new territory for both of them, so they've got to dope it out as best they can. ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It's all new territory for both of them, so they've got to dope it out as best they can. ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)
I love the lord/lady act they use to mask their feelings. Hopefully the Elixir will help him 'let his hair down' and have some fun and realize she might be more than a friend. Great backstory on the Snape family. I love the idea his father and grandfather were Squibs.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*bounces* I'm so pleased you liked the backstory. It took some wrangling for me to come up with a way for Snape Manor to exist! LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*bounces* I'm so pleased you liked the backstory. It took some wrangling for me to come up with a way for Snape Manor to exist! LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Yay! The potion worked, Hermione's plans worked and that part is over. Now Severus can get on with his life and not feel guilty about any emotions he might have for anyone.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Exactly! *happy dances for him* Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Exactly! *happy dances for him* Thanks for reviewing! :)
I would definitely say that he's definitely been thrown out of his element. I con wholely imagine hiim feeling guilty about the spur of the moment mistletoe kiss.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Not really his area, y'know? ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Not really his area, y'know? ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
Oh, poor Severus. He's developing a friendship and possibly a crush. Wonderful how Hermione thought of buying time.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Then again, I daresay he's not the only one. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Then again, I daresay he's not the only one. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Poor Snape. Hermione is making him confront the fact that he is a human and has emotions just like everyone else. It's nice to see him find someone he confide in and who cares about him, seeks to understand him, as uncomfortable as that will make him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*beams* Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*beams* Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Dang, that is a powerful potion. Hopefully nothing happens to Harry and that Hermione doesn't drive Snape too mad.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
I shamelessly stole the idea from BuffytVS and kinda twisted it a bit from a spell into a potion. *shifty eyes* Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
I shamelessly stole the idea from BuffytVS and kinda twisted it a bit from a spell into a potion. *shifty eyes* Thanks for reviewing! :)
How many declarations of undying friendship will these two make before the penny drops? Lol, get them moving!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Well, they don't want to screw up that very same friendship... (Give them time, it's only been a few months since she finished school!) LOL Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Well, they don't want to screw up that very same friendship... (Give them time, it's only been a few months since she finished school!) LOL Thanks for reviewing! :)
Cos neither of them is the least bit bothered.... I hope they get their priorities worked out soon!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!!! Aww, they're just having a bit of fun, right? ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!!! Aww, they're just having a bit of fun, right? ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)
An uncle, a medal, a fortune and a girl in stocking and suspenders! I just hope this isn't too good to be true!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*giggle* It's like karma showed up all at once! ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*giggle* It's like karma showed up all at once! ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
I didn't even think about Severus being at risk... thank goodness Hermione could help there, too! And yay, that was much better than an extended Horcrux hunt!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*snerk* I daresay there are many things better than the extended Horcrux hunt (complete with interminable camping!). Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*snerk* I daresay there are many things better than the extended Horcrux hunt (complete with interminable camping!). Thanks for reviewing! :)
I love that Hermione managed to mirror Severus' hopes for the future in her gift. That was a really lovely moment.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*blush* Aww, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*blush* Aww, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing! :)
A whole other year? I think I like this idea better than the ones that Dumbledore had!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!! I'll take that as a huge compliment. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!! I'll take that as a huge compliment. Thanks for reviewing! :)
I want a hat like that! How sweet is it that she noticed his frosty ears?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Maybe you can convince Hermione to knit one for you too. ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Maybe you can convince Hermione to knit one for you too. ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)
That's a really interesting idea... with possibly awful consequences. Is it too early to start panicking?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It's never too early to start panicking! LOL Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It's never too early to start panicking! LOL Thanks for reviewing! :)
Hmmm, I have a feeling this "enlightened" attitude might not really be what either of them wants... I foresee conflict.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Ah, but do they know what they really want (or are they willing to admit it)? *huge grin* Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Ah, but do they know what they really want (or are they willing to admit it)? *huge grin* Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm curious to see if Uncle Lazarus and Snape Manor/fortune are for real or turn out to be some sort of scam. I loved the descriptions of Severus and Hermione's respective outfits. Just how much euphoria are we talking about, here? ;)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
I wish I could draw what I see in my head of what they look like in their finery. Alas, earwax. ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
I wish I could draw what I see in my head of what they look like in their finery. Alas, earwax. ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
Wow! Seeing the battle scene from the standpoint of Severus and Hermione sitting out of the battle at the Grangers' house seemed a little anti-climactic at first, it keeps the focus of the story on the burgeoning relationship between Severus and Hermione. Has Kingsley noticed that Severus seems to be paying special attention to Hermione, or will he just attribute it to the after-the-battle shock?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
I admit, it was a sort of cop-out, partly because I just didn't know if I had it in me to write a battle. *sheepish* Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
I admit, it was a sort of cop-out, partly because I just didn't know if I had it in me to write a battle. *sheepish* Thanks for reviewing! :)
There were some lovely scenes in this chapter, especially the "You've already given me something I like" scene. And they seem ready to move on from the friends stage, don't they? :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*blush* I'm so pleased you enjoyed them. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
*blush* I'm so pleased you enjoyed them. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Pretty good plan. But as I said before, a lot can happen in a year... Hermione's last comment made me giggle.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It made me giggle too--I could totally see it in my head. *snerk* Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
It made me giggle too--I could totally see it in my head. *snerk* Thanks for reviewing! :)
These brief snippets of their monthly potions work help us see the tentative growth to their relationship.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Glad it worked for you! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Glad it worked for you! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I was just watching some HP fan videos before starting this story, so watching Dumbledore's very "twinkly" behavior made me giggle. Having said that, this is an intriguing premise. A lot can change in a year, however...
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Very true... ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
Very true... ;P Thanks for reviewing! :)
I wasn't going to start another WIP, but...yup. You got me! What a very interesting premise. :-)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!! Sorry! Hopefully it won't take too long to finish this one up. I've been working on it fairly consistently in the past week or so. There are another couple chapters to go, at least. ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Not to the Manor Born)
LOL!! Sorry! Hopefully it won't take too long to finish this one up. I've been working on it fairly consistently in the past week or so. There are another couple chapters to go, at least. ;) Thanks for reviewing! :)