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Potions Under Duress The Philosopher's Fate
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The Philosopher's Fate

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter Two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

5: Chapter Five

6: Chapter Six

7: Chapter Seven

8: Chapter Eight

9: Chapter Nine

10: Chapter Ten

11: Chapter Eleven

12: Chapter Twelve

13: Epilogue

The Philosopher's Fate

peskipiksi

91 Reviews   |   91 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Friendship Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 22,169 Words 13 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Alecto Carrow Amycus Carrow Dennis Creevey Dolores Jane Umbridge Filius Flitwick Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lavender Brown Minerva McGonagall Neville Longbottom Parvati Patil Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Draco Malfoy Seamus Finnigan Scabior Yaxley (Death Eater)

Ginny's eighteenth birthday present to Hermione causes no end of trouble.

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Chapters (13)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Chapter 13: Epilogue


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10/10

HBAR

Yay!  A lovely ending to a great story.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

Thanks!

10/10

blue artemis

Lovely.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

Thank you.

10/10

Elou

Awwww. *sniff* So wonderful!Thank you, thank you for sharing~

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Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

So glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing. :)

10/10

sunny33

Good that she gave Lily back. :)

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

I think she's too good a person not to. :)

10/10

HBAR

The whole memory thing never really occurred to me.  Thank goodness you fixed it so quickly.  I love the page that he tore out of the book.  I think they will both be very happy.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

I think so too. Thanks for your unfailing reviews and support. :)

0/10

reader76

How clever.  Of course he had no memory.  They took them all out!

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

Thank you!  I've seen so many fics where Severus is saved from Nagini, with no mention of his memories still floating in the Pensieve, and I always wondered how he got them back,

10/10

blue artemis

Awwwww.  And I'm glad she could figure out how to fix his memories.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

I couldn't leave him in St Mungo's; he's been through enough, poor bloke! :)

10/10

LIKO

I almost cried at the end :)

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

From relief or happiness, I hope! Thank you :)

0/10

pookah

I laughed when I read the names of those bad baronets!  Their names DO fit in perfectly with JKR's nomenclature.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

They're great, aren't they?  Thank you, Mr Gilbert!

0/10

snapify52

Oh. Poignant bit at the end there. I wonder what will happen next?

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

Oh, it gets more poignant! Stay tuned.

0/10

Phyllidia

Love those coins--early versions of text-messaging!  Hermy just needs to get a house elf to pop her into the RoR for a little visit is all.  Of course, then she'd feel guilty for using a house elf...

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

She really is her own worst enemy at some times.  Oh, how we all miss poor Dobby. :(

10/10

sunny33

She would feel alone with them all hiding or in captivity.  Can't she go and see them in the RoR? :)

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

Didn't actually think of that! But I guess she can't risk being seen arond the 7th floor, putting all those inside in danger.  And Harry's got the invisibility cloak!

0/10

Severus49

At least they got through the Legillimency pretty easily!

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

Hermione is a grade A (or O) student!

10/10

blue artemis

The Carrows seem to me to be one of Voldie's greatest mistakes.  They gave the Order a fighting force.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

Oh, I agree! But Voldie, for all his brilliance, is a bit thick. :)

10/10

HBAR

I love how Severus sees Hermione differently then she sees herself.  I suspect it is that way for all of us.  I hope that the fact that they are both alone, for all intents and purposes, just serves to bring them closer together.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

I must admit I got that idea from The Black Magician trilogy, but you're right, I think it's true of everyone.  I thibk they're over their little hiccup now and are united in the face of evil.

10/10

HBAR

It's really frightening how the Carrows don't seem to fear Snape either as their boss, as a fellow Death Eater, or just as a wizard in general.  Hermione has had too many close calls.  Surely now that they've had a talking to, they will realize he means business.  Still, it could go the other way and make them mad at him so they will be even more intent on doing bad things to his wife.  I hope that is not the case.A lion patronus?  Poor guy.  But what a way to show his wife where his priorities lie.  I loved that he went to Voldemort which is quite scary indeed, to keep her safe, and that in that errand, he realized her importance in his life.  I think things just might work out ok for these two.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

I reckon both the Carrows are just totally psycotic! Yeah, I thought a lion would be funniest for a Slytherin, but also a fitting tribute to his bravery.

0/10

Severus49

I'm glad that they did come to some kind of understanding.  Let me explain about last chapter's review: The reason I was so angry at her last chapter is that it seems that Hermione is really the most logical and rational out of most of the students in Hogwarts, but deliberately realizing that what she was doing by her tears was manipulating Severus, instead of using her intellect to explain to Severus her exact reasons for wanting to come along with him, though it was dangerous, showed that she was capable of book-smarts, but not of real-life smarts, which makes her come across just plain irrational and illogical. I really expected better of Hermione's character and propriety.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

I see. I just wanted her to be a teenager for once. She's usually 17 going on 35, and we know from canon she can sulk and be irrational.  She could see he was seriuos about not taking her along and panicked that her only chance of seeing H&R was literally walking out the door. I'm sorry it upset you.

Response from Severus49 (Reviewer)

I understand better of where you were coming from with her. I appreciate that, and I'm glad we cleared it up. Sorry about the humongous run-on sentence there!

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

Reading it again, I finally understand what upset you so much.  (Took me long enough!) The tears were real and her only manipulation of him was not making any attempt to hide them from him.  I've edited the chapter and hope you approve.  Thanks for your reviews; I feel happier with the chapter now. :)

10/10

sunny33

A lion. LOL! :)

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

Dumbledore as good as said he should've been in Gryffindor! :)

9/10

Jinxie

Too funny about Severus' patronus.Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

Poor little Slytherin, eh? But appropriate for 'the bravest man Harry ever knew'.

9/10

Jinxie

Well, I think the last line summed it up well.  Love the angst!

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

I just knew that had to be the last line. Glad you liked it!

0/10

Severus49

The fact that she deliberately manipulated Severus into letting her come with him under the pretext of seeing Harry and Ron makes her seem like a spoiled brat, and I'm extremely angry with her. However, the fact that Severus deliberately told Hermione that he would always be in love with Lily is extremely callous and unfeeling of him. Whether or not it is true is beside the point. To any woman that he would have married - be it young or old - there isn't many that would be understanding of his answer. The point is how lousy he handled the subject instead of being considerate of her feelings on the answer. He could have handled it a billion different ways that it wouldn't have hurt her - including lying to save her feelings: "I really don't understand why it didn't. I would have thought it would considering how I feel about you." But, he didn't. By admitting he still loves Lily, of course it undermines everything Hermione thought about their affection for each other, and being that Hermione's Patronus did change only exacerbates the fact that Hermione feels all the affection has been only one-sided. Poor girl, I hope Severus realizes how badly he botched it up, and I hope he is willing to do whatever he can to rectify things.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

I didn't mean her to have a pretext. She honestly wanted to see H & R, not to talk to them, just to see for herself that they were OK. I'll admit the tears were a manipulation, but I really don't see why you're so angry with her.Yes, Snape was callous and unfeeling and I needed him to be. The reason is, he can't cope with this any better than she can.  He's never had a girlfriend and doesn't know how to relate to women.  I think the strength of his feelings for Hermione scares him, and he feels disloyal to Lily.  He always was a callous bastard (although we all understand why) and I don't think he could change completely just because he was forced to get married.

9/10

Jinxie

Cute change of patronus for Hermione.  Finally, they're completely together. 

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

Glad you liked it. Thought it was about time he got some action!

10/10

blue artemis

I didn't figure she could stew like a baby for too long. 

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

Yes, she's too clever and sensible for that, even if she does fly off the handle and sulk sometimes (thinking of rows with Ron in canon here). Thanks!

0/10

PHONELADY

i really hate that umbridge lady she always get away with stuff and keeps her job!!!! no justice!!!! phyllidia has it right! i see she called for her husband humph took her long enough!! teehee princ charming got some hahahaha! great chapter.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

Glad you liked it! Yeah, SO unfair Umbridge survived.  And Prince Charming deserved some after that, I thought!

0/10

Phyllidia

You know I really hate Umbridge.  I mean an unreasonable amount of negative emotion for a fictional character.  I think it's because JKR killed & maimed the 'good guys' left, right, and center but Umbridge, other than a little Centaur scare, got away.  If anyone deserved a gruesome end, it was her. Having said that, I thoroughly enjoyed Severus hexing the snot out of her. (I'd have given her a few more for good measure but I know, time was short).Enjoying the story.  Looking forward to the next installment.

Response from peskipiksi (Author of The Philosopher's Fate)

Yeah, I'd've liked to see her dead in canon. But Sev killing her here would've meant an awful lot of Ministry interference and hampered their escape. But believe me, I wanted to write it! Going to put next chapter in queue now.

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