oohh, interesting!

While I find the premise a bit unconvincing (the two fools would be dead sooner than later on their own), it`s a nicely written story, and I look forward to reading how you develop the Hr/S relationship. Thank you.

So no ministry enforced coitus,eh? Poor Herms and Snape, this could be a long year. ~eyes warnings worredly~

Ah, nice setup for a MLC fic. I like a Headmaster!Snape who's getting some :-)

Wow- really interesting start to this story.  Snape seems to be workign pretty hard to be nice.  I'm interested to see where this goes.

I like your version of the chapter better :). Hoping Severus remembers Hermione soon.

Oh noes! :0

Leave it to Ron to freak about the wrong thing.

What?!?!  Oh, I do hope his confusion at the end is temporary.  After all that, he doesn;t remember her ... that would be awful, and you wouldn't do that to us, right?  I almost feel bad for Ron and Harry, having such news thrown their way in a moment of crisis, and they can't even get their questions answered.  It will be a miracle if they actually make it to a pensieve.  Great chapter!

That last line really threw me for a loop. Totally unexpected twist!A very exciting chapter. Well written. I like the way you simply skimmed over the parts from the book. We all know what happened. No need to dwell on it.

Oh that was scary! What's even scarier is he doesn't recognize her.  I wonder why?

Wonderfully handled.  Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Poor Hermione and poor Severus.  She wants everything to work out now and he can't win for losing... Another fabulous chapter, my friend!

Well, it was good while it lasted, eh?  It is hard to fault either of them here as they both have valid points.  I hope their age difference doesn't become a source of contention.  But then, despite the fact that Severus is all grown up, he has only ever loved teenaged girls, so he really knows no difference, right?  Great chapter, as always.

Yep, honeymoon is over.

Oh, poor Hermione. The age difference is going to be hard on her.

I like their developing relationship.

Hermione's finally figuring out how difficult Snape's life is. :)

I liked how Herms combined the dentention essay with that week's homework.  Multi-tasking at its finest! Tho' I wish I had that sort of memory (to remember what assignment I had 3-4 years prior)--I'm lucky to remember what I did last week.

Very interested to see where this goes- I like the idea of hermione not already knowing Severus is good. I have yet to see a  version of the challenge that takes place during DH - now I'm off to read more! 

Lovely!  I can't wait to see how lessons progress as well as their relationship.Thank you for sharing~

He's being so gentle an patient with her.  Probably the smartest way to go about it at the minute.Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Lovely tension and the carrows are just menacing.

I like your take on the MLC in canon.  Glad to see they're not falling all over themselves and hopefully have a chance to build their relationship up.

Nice start to the story!