There was something about the plot and the idea that struck me. I admit that I liked the girl and her mystery very much - that was one draw for me as a reader. The second was the 'stories' about Voldemort and Severus. The girl's perspective about things was delightful and unique. I think with soooo many SS/HG and the 'norm, this one was entirely refreshing. That's the best I can say - it was so unique and refreshing. I admit that I don't understand the comments about the style you keep making, it's nice/fun to step outside boxes and if you did - congrats. That's not easy to do. I did enjoy this story very much and wonder what happened to her - if something did, because in the books Severus is alone ( or seems alone.)  Regardless, it's a wonderful tale. Thank you for it.

Wow, this was cool! I loved how you used K to tell stories we already know in such a fresh way. The style is totally different to other fanfic I've read - I would like to see more in the same kind of style, its a cross between some of the old stories my granda tells and a kind of eastern influence that stands out. Also liked the interaction between S & K, more of their relationship would be cool and maybe how she was able to change what came next?

I've not read any of your other stories yet, so I am not able to compare them.  What drew me back to this story was the cadence of the prose.  It reminded me of Arabian Nights, and it felt luxurious.  The tone of the story felt hypnotic and restful.  I appreciate the mood you created.  I don't think the way this story was written would necessarily work for telling different kinds of stories, but I appreciated it for this one.

Severus Snape has loyalty down to an art form. It does not suprise me that he would view sleeping with his wife as a betrayal of Lily. ((sighs)) I really hate Lily. Go Kalinda Go!

Severus certainly needs someone to take care of him. However we should beware of anything that was around Riddle. It cannot be safe.

Hi!  You already know how much I enjoy your work.  I like the different style here; very Arabian Nights of you.  I like the OC, even though I don't find her strong enough.  Not weak, per se, just not enough of a 'presence'.  I don't know how to explain it better than that.  I don't want to call her a pushover, as she doesn;t cave in at all really, she seems stronger than that, but...maybe 'assertive' is the word I'm looking for.  Although, now that it occurs to me, she does come off as slightly Slytherin in her ability to get her way by dissembling.  Over all, I enjoyed it very much.  If I'm completely honest, it feels...unfinished.  What happens to Kalinda?  What is the baby's name?  How does this particular AU differ from canon as time passes?  Does Severus get to live?  Does his new family?  Methinks I need more of this.  Which is a good thing, no?So, to wrap it up, I liked the story, (quite a lot, actually), I liked the OC, (apparently, more than I even thought I did!) I liked how Severus softened up slightly over time, and I'd like more, pleasethankyouverymuch.

I don't think I've read this anymore than any of your other stories, but I'll try to answer your question anyway. First I like it because it is Severus. But I like other characters, too so this not exactly relevant. He is so often paired up with the usual people that Kalinda is a refreshing change. I don't think it's her OFC status that counts. I'd read it if it were Pomona or Luna or any other male/female character that he is not often or never paired up with. Plus there is the mystery around her persona, the spell she's under. I even think you could have develop her a bit more and made the story a bit longer. Sorry I digress. Anyway, I hope it helped.

Roseof thewest, I love all of your work, your Severus stories outstandingly, but due to your note, perhaps, the things which went hand-in-hand in this story were: Severus placed to interact with an 'eastern' OC which incurred the lovely mythologies and tales of eastern lore which is rare to come across; you touch many childhood nerves with including the djin & the hairy heart, etc. the whole schaheradzad/1001 Nights, etc, all the elements of tale/myth-telling... as most writers are trying to portray the Anglo-Saxon or continental European Wizarding world and/or strictly Canon confines, so this OC allowed a more exotic dilemma tied in with Canon events, and intertwined with Voldemort's and Snape's lives; once the OC's profile is accepted, reading of Severus engaged with such a unique, different OC of a magical but different/exotic background is very engaging.Of course, as a Snape/OC fan, I love seeing Severus' personal journey from detaching himself or rather giving himself permission to feel and experience life and relations beyound a maudlin, stalemated tie to Lily, especially when it is shown, as here, his sincere display & ability to love and be loved... which again, is why I love ALL of your work!

Lovely evolvement of their relationship - lovely to see that there is some true pleasure and joy they sincerely share and enjoy from each other; their is a mutual affection and desire.

Well-done depiction of her dilemma, as well as his... not until the very last line could a glimpse of hopefulness for Sev be truly allowed, although there still seems to be a tinted, ambiguous sadness surrounding Kalinda, perhaps an attached effect of the spell upon her; reading on to see if it'll be lifted!

Great story!  I loved the whole premise of the secrets and his falling for her, but being unwilling to admit it until it was blatantly thrown in his face through her story.  I like all your stuff, Rose.  I do think that the mystery of the charm kept me invested to see how it would all turn out.

They're progressing nicely.  He's captivated and doesn't even want to admit it.

Loved how she got under his skin, but I feel badly for her.  Of course, she has accepted what their relationship is, so she's going into whatever happens with eyes open.

She's definitely intriguing.  I'm betting he'll be forgetting Lily soon.

This is charming so far.  Love the premise.

There was a simple innocence about this story that was charming.  Almost as though you were hearing the magical version of The Arabian Nights.  I've always liked your work but this had a certain old world flavor that was delightful.

I'm sorry. It appears I forgot to read this one. And I notice that she doesn't call him "husband" anymore. That must mean something important.

i truely enjoyed this story.  First of all, any story where severus fines happiness is a winner in my book.  i couldn't wait to find out his wife's story.  this was a very well written story.

In resonse to your request - I read this story because it is focused on Snape - just taken a quick look at your other writing, most of it doesn't seem to feature him very much. Maybe it's just me, but I love stories about mean moody men who dress in black.  I will look at some of your other work again, reading this has prompted another look! 

Combination of a: you, b: Sev, c: an intriguing OC, I think. :D

Not really sure what drew me to the story at first. Severus is usually a good start. Usually go for Serverus/Hermione. The other thing I look for is quite a few reviews early on or 10/chapter later.  I liked the uniqueness of the story and hoped for the happy ending. Thanks for writing!

Just dropping you a line in the interest of science: I enjoy your longer works but as a rule I skip anything with only one chapter.  I just prefer character developement to short work and drabble. 

It's very sweet the way he is falling for her and doesn't realise it. :)

I don't think everything will be solved with just being intimate but maybe it will help Sev to begin healing from his heartbreak. I think that woman is just what he needs. She's understanding, very patient and very insightfull. He may discover he'll be happy forever. At least I hope so.

Finally he figures it out! :)