The Marriage Begins
Chapter 2 of 5
Rose of the WestThe plan does not go as Severus hopes.
ReviewedDisclaimer: Except for OCs, the characters here and the world they inhabit are the creation and property of JK Rowling and her assigns.
When he awoke the next morning, Severus found that the robe he had laid out was replaced by a coat cut similarly to the one he had seen on the girl...Kalinda, if the elf told him correctly. He pulled the rest of his clothes on and made his way up to the staff room, carrying the coat and resolving to put a stop to everything. As he reached for the handle of the door, he realized that for once, he had gotten up on a Monday morning, showered, shaved and dressed with very little of the aches and stiffness he usually experienced. He resolved again to analyze the tea she had sent. It might be quite useful.
When he entered the staff room, he had to step out again to make sure he was in the correct hallway. He looked around, felt like a fool, and opened the door again. Someone had gone to great efforts to make the room look like an exotic palace. Thick carpets in many colors lay upon the floors and the walls were hung with silk, which gave the room a much warmer feeling. There was a small fountain in a corner and soft cushions for the guests...Snape's fellow staff members...to sit upon. The most impressive thing in the room was a table laid with a rich cover. Upon it were so many items and foods that Snape couldn't keep track of them all: nuts, sweets, coins, and other precious-looking things.
The bride stood in a corner, wearing clothing similar to that which he had seen her in before, but much richer. Her coat was cream colored silk and brocaded with threads that he somehow knew were real gold. Her face was veiled again, so now he was looking at those eyes. He had forgotten how moved he had been by them on Saturday morning. He put the coat on that had been sent to him and only barely avoided sighing contentedly at how well it fit and how comfortable it was. It was wool, but the softest, finest wool he had ever touched. He turned away because he noticed her eyes light up when he finished buttoning it.
For once, Dumbledore didn't pontificate; he went through the rites that were necessary with a minimum of fuss. Perhaps he sensed that the rites required to satisfy the local authorities and those of the girl's homeland were long enough. It was a school day, after all. In a blessedly short time, Snape walked his bride from the room and to her quarters. He walked into his own quarters and found his teaching robe. Exchanging it for the coat, he returned to tell his...erm, wife...to stay out of his rooms before going to breakfast.
* * * * *
After breakfast, a morning spent teaching, lunch, and then an afternoon of teaching, Dumbledore forced Snape to return to his own rooms. "You should be with your bride, Severus."
"I have nothing to say to her."
"Ah, but she may have a great deal to tell you. We need to know everything we can learn about Voldemort from her. I doubt he's gone for good. Since you're her husband, she can tell you now."
Snape made a great show of sighing and turning toward the dungeons. "Fine, Albus, but when this is all over and we're sure he is gone for good, we need to get this marriage annulled and send the child back to her parents." He would have stomped away, but it wouldn't have looked dignified.
"She's of age and then some, just as you are, Severus. Keep that in mind."
He went to his rooms and saw that a door had appeared in his sitting room, near the fireplace. He stepped over and lifted his hand to knock but then stopped himself. Turning, he looked over at the coat he had worn that morning. It might be a sign of good will on his part. He had become very much aware during his youth that the right clothes opened pathways that might otherwise be closed. He changed back into the coat and knocked on the door.
The door opened, and he stood in the doorway in confusion. The sitting room was laid out as the staff room had been that morning. The cushions were placed on the floor before a warm fire. A table was covered with delicious-smelling foods and the fountain in the corner gurgled merrily.
What confused him most was the girl. Instead of the attire she had worn previously, tonight she was wearing filmy trousers that did little to hide the shape of her legs, nor...he averted his eyes upward. There he found a flat belly which beckoned the touch of...not himself...a man. Keeping his eyes moving, he discovered that her breasts were covered by a snug blouse or shirt that clung and outlined a form that was not in the least girlish. Her veils were lying over her hair, which had been let down.
He couldn't look at her. It caused him to entertain thoughts, and he shouldn't have such thoughts. He was in mourning, after all. "You were going to tell me your story."
"I cannot tell you my story."
"What?" This new development was irritating. Was the marriage a waste of time? A line formed between his eyebrows.
"I think we must be husband and wife together for a while first, perhaps."
Snape sighed. Perhaps they needed to prove something to the fates who controlled the charm. "Very well, then."
"I can tell you a story, however. Would you like to hear it? First you must eat and tell me such things about your day as you would like."
He found himself strangely motivated to describe small anecdotes from his classroom with her. She nodded her head in agreement with all that he did and shook her head or laughed at the antics of the students. He found her attention and her desire to agree with him quite gratifying.
Eventually, dinner was finished and the house-elf carried off the remainder. They were alone. The elf must have turned down the lamps, because the room seemed a bit darker and the mistress of it seemed to glow in a way he hadn't noticed before.
"You were going to tell me a story," he reminded her.
"Yes, of course," she said. She started to speak. There must have been some magical charm about her voice, for as she told her tale, pictures of the events passed before his eyes.
* * * * *
I have learned, my lord husband, that a long time ago, but not too long, a young man realized he had curious abilities. At an age when it is common among your kind, this young man learned that these abilities were more common than he liked. It was a source of great consternation that others could have such skills. Yet when the opportunity to learn about and develop his art was offered, he eagerly took it.
When he arrived at his school...such an odd school, but wonderful to him...he discovered that his abilities, while common, were above those of his peers. He comforted himself in the fact that, once fully trained, he would be the greatest wizard of his time.
He gathered weaker wizards and witches around himself. They were drawn to his power and to the promises he made to them. He started suggesting that they carry out certain acts of evil. They loved the power this gave them and continued even as his suggestions slowly became orders. Over time, when they didn't conform to his wishes, he would perform small tortures and they would quickly fall in line.
As his power over them grew, they obeyed him because they feared him. Oddly enough, his following grew, even though he was an object of fear. He promised his followers power and the respect of other witches and wizards. This they received even as they feared him, and so his adherents grew in number.
One thing troubled him. He had a magical parent and a non-magical parent. Of the two, the magical parent had died but the non-magical parent was still living. This was distasteful to him. Surely it should be the other way around, and yet it was the case. His magical mother had died in childbirth while his non-magical father lived. He was greatly angered by the injustice of this. Surely magic should have saved his mother and allowed her to live.
He decided that his mother died because she was a mere woman. He, being male and magical, would find the secret to long life. He asked his teachers to help him, but they gave unsatisfying answers about living a great life or working to ensure the greatness of the next generation. None of them answered the question of how he could live a long life.
He searched through texts that other students eschewed. He found ways to obtain texts that his professors hid from him. Over time, he discovered several options, but no one would explain them to his satisfaction. Unhappy with the results, he chose to look outside of his culture. He started exploring other magical traditions.
* * * * *
Kalinda fell silent.
Severus looked at her for several minutes. When it became apparent that she was done, he burst into questions. "What happened? Where did he go? What did he discover?"
"These things I cannot tell you, lord husband. I cannot tell you about myself."
"You're not telling me about yourself, you're telling me about..." He stopped short. Perhaps the next part of the story involved the way she came to be in the Dark Lord's possession. He sighed.
"Why can't you tell me about yourself?"
"There's a charm. Only a husband can know me so intimately."
He nodded his head as he mentally cursed the foolishness of this bit of magic. Of course there was a charm, and of course the requirements were murky. Simply being the girl's husband was insufficient. She suggested that it might take some time, and she was more likely to know than he was. He looked at his watch and stood.
"Well, it's been a long day, and I have papers to grade, so I'll bid you good night."
"Oh," she said, "I thought..." her eyes darted to the alcove where a richly hung and cushioned bed stood.
"I wouldn't presume," he answered.
"But you're my husband."
"I'm here to protect you insofar as my name and wand can do so. Don't ever think that what is between us extends further than that." He was unaccountably angry. He stood and went to his own rooms, closing the door between them.
He leaned against the wall. "Lily," he whispered, "I might have betrayed you tonight." He decided that it wouldn't happen again.
* * * * *
He repeated the story for Dumbledore. "I don't believe that's all there is," said the Headmaster. Snape took his wand and removed the memories of the entire evening up to the moment the door shut. He all but flung the smoky gray thoughts into the Pensieve.
Several minutes later, the Headmaster reemerged from the bowl. "It's a bit of a problem, but not insurmountable. It just needs time, as she said. Perhaps you could hurry it along a bit, by..."
"Not on your life."
"What's wrong with her? She seems quite lovely, for men who are interested in that sort of thing."
"She's not Lily."
"Severus, we need that information."
"You're welcome to take my place, old man." The black eyes were intransigent as they looked into the blue ones.
Dumbledore stared at the professor. The boy had been through terrible grief recently, and this marriage had been sprung upon him unawares. The Headmaster considered that perhaps he had pushed too hard, too quickly. "I suppose we have a little time. The thing is, we've heard this bit about immortality from other sources. If it's true, then perhaps he's not dead and gone after all."
"So where is he, then?"
"That's an excellent question."
"When or how will he come back?"
"Another excellent question. You see why we need the information in that girl's head. The sooner we know what we're up against, the better prepared we'll be."
Snape sighed and nodded. "Do you suppose there's a counter charm?"
Dumbledore didn't think so, but he didn't want to discourage the other man, who was grasping at straws. "That's an excellent idea. You might check with Filius, and there are several books in the Restricted Section that deal with memory charms and charms which invoke the nuptial bond."
It was not an altogether satisfactory interview on either side, but both wizards decided it was the best they would have on this night. They said their goodbyes and Snape headed for his quarters. When he walked through his sitting room, he heard the squeaky voice of a house-elf.
"Mistress is beautiful. Master will see that. Mistress is desirable. Master will love Mistress."
"Thank you, Zurie."
He heard a hiccuping sound, followed by something very much like the blowing of one's nose, and then silence. He sighed and went toward his own bedroom.
A/N: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Thanks especially to Trickie Woo for beta reading!
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Latest 25 Reviews for Charmed Bride
39 Reviews | 6.38/10 Average
There was something about the plot and the idea that struck me. I admit that I liked the girl and her mystery very much - that was one draw for me as a reader. The second was the 'stories' about Voldemort and Severus. The girl's perspective about things was delightful and unique. I think with soooo many SS/HG and the 'norm, this one was entirely refreshing. That's the best I can say - it was so unique and refreshing. I admit that I don't understand the comments about the style you keep making, it's nice/fun to step outside boxes and if you did - congrats. That's not easy to do. I did enjoy this story very much and wonder what happened to her - if something did, because in the books Severus is alone ( or seems alone.) Regardless, it's a wonderful tale. Thank you for it.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much for the lovely review!I've lived on "unique and refreshing" for several days now. I'm glad you saw that in the story.I think if I was to continue this, it would be entirely AU. I might even find a way to end the story before Harry went to Hogwarts, or perhaps his first year (since there's only one way to get rid of the scar-horcrux).
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Well if you do decide to continue this story, let us know so I can bookmark it to follow along. ... gonna go read another of your stories. Do you have a recommendation of a favorite one?
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much for the encouragement! It's a very different OC, and a little rough in places, but I think my best story, certainly my best OC, is in The Tower Affair. I'm awfully partial to The Life and Times of Perseus, though. No Snape, but a sweet love story between two characters that were almost as shafted in canon as Snape.Thanks again!
Wow, this was cool! I loved how you used K to tell stories we already know in such a fresh way. The style is totally different to other fanfic I've read - I would like to see more in the same kind of style, its a cross between some of the old stories my granda tells and a kind of eastern influence that stands out. Also liked the interaction between S & K, more of their relationship would be cool and maybe how she was able to change what came next?
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you! I was honestly worried that the eastern style wouldn't sound right or might even be offensive to some. I'm glad so many people have liked it.I've had a great many requests for more to this story. I'm not going to promise anything, but I may try to work out something.Thanks again!
I've not read any of your other stories yet, so I am not able to compare them. What drew me back to this story was the cadence of the prose. It reminded me of Arabian Nights, and it felt luxurious. The tone of the story felt hypnotic and restful. I appreciate the mood you created. I don't think the way this story was written would necessarily work for telling different kinds of stories, but I appreciated it for this one.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Wow! Thank you for giving my work a try! I will say this is very different for me. I'm usually a lot more direct in my writing style and I had re-write sections of it to be in the tone I wanted to achieve here. I'm glad it came over well.Thank you very much for the lovely review!
Severus Snape has loyalty down to an art form. It does not suprise me that he would view sleeping with his wife as a betrayal of Lily. ((sighs)) I really hate Lily. Go Kalinda Go!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
I knew that would be irritating, but it's in his nature, isn't it? Maybe if we're lucky, he'll grow out of it. At 21, he's still a kid in a lot of ways. Thanks again for the review!
Severus certainly needs someone to take care of him. However we should beware of anything that was around Riddle. It cannot be safe.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
I had so not considered that angle! It was in my mind that Riddle never touched her, since he distrusted women generally as being weak, but you're right, there might have been a lingering curse or something there. Thank you for the review!
Hi! You already know how much I enjoy your work. I like the different style here; very Arabian Nights of you. I like the OC, even though I don't find her strong enough. Not weak, per se, just not enough of a 'presence'. I don't know how to explain it better than that. I don't want to call her a pushover, as she doesn;t cave in at all really, she seems stronger than that, but...maybe 'assertive' is the word I'm looking for. Although, now that it occurs to me, she does come off as slightly Slytherin in her ability to get her way by dissembling. Over all, I enjoyed it very much. If I'm completely honest, it feels...unfinished. What happens to Kalinda? What is the baby's name? How does this particular AU differ from canon as time passes? Does Severus get to live? Does his new family? Methinks I need more of this. Which is a good thing, no?So, to wrap it up, I liked the story, (quite a lot, actually), I liked the OC, (apparently, more than I even thought I did!) I liked how Severus softened up slightly over time, and I'd like more, pleasethankyouverymuch.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much! I've been humbled by the outpouring of love this story has received, and I'm so glad you enjoy my work generally, too!Kalinda is not assertive, but she has a way of arranging things such that Severus usually finds himself falling into line with what she wants him to do. It is Slythern, but there's a bit of the badger there, too, I think.Just between you and me (and almost everyone else), yes, the story is a bit hurried at the end. I'll see if I can come up with some of the short stories that would mesh with this one and finish it up.Thanks again for the lovely review! I'll do my best to continue to earn it.
I don't think I've read this anymore than any of your other stories, but I'll try to answer your question anyway. First I like it because it is Severus. But I like other characters, too so this not exactly relevant. He is so often paired up with the usual people that Kalinda is a refreshing change. I don't think it's her OFC status that counts. I'd read it if it were Pomona or Luna or any other male/female character that he is not often or never paired up with. Plus there is the mystery around her persona, the spell she's under. I even think you could have develop her a bit more and made the story a bit longer. Sorry I digress. Anyway, I hope it helped.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
I totally agree about the lack of development. I was sort of limited to 10k words by the festival it was written for, and I had thought to add a little here and there. Tinkering with things gets so complicated, though.She's one of those people who seems compliant, but actually has a spine of steel and before you realize what's happening, you're doing what she wants you to do. I love Severus, too, and even when I write about completely different people, I usually find a way to sneak him in somewhere. Thank you so much for your thoughts!
Roseof thewest, I love all of your work, your Severus stories outstandingly, but due to your note, perhaps, the things which went hand-in-hand in this story were: Severus placed to interact with an 'eastern' OC which incurred the lovely mythologies and tales of eastern lore which is rare to come across; you touch many childhood nerves with including the djin & the hairy heart, etc. the whole schaheradzad/1001 Nights, etc, all the elements of tale/myth-telling... as most writers are trying to portray the Anglo-Saxon or continental European Wizarding world and/or strictly Canon confines, so this OC allowed a more exotic dilemma tied in with Canon events, and intertwined with Voldemort's and Snape's lives; once the OC's profile is accepted, reading of Severus engaged with such a unique, different OC of a magical but different/exotic background is very engaging.Of course, as a Snape/OC fan, I love seeing Severus' personal journey from detaching himself or rather giving himself permission to feel and experience life and relations beyound a maudlin, stalemated tie to Lily, especially when it is shown, as here, his sincere display & ability to love and be loved... which again, is why I love ALL of your work!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Oh, thank you for your complete analysis! I have to admit the Arabian Nights flavor was deliberate and it was hard... like learning to think in a different language. I'm glad that it worked for you. I really like Snape/OC, too. :)Thanks again for you wonderful support!
Lovely evolvement of their relationship - lovely to see that there is some true pleasure and joy they sincerely share and enjoy from each other; their is a mutual affection and desire.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you, again! I think he would admit by now that he enjoys her companionship, at least.
Well-done depiction of her dilemma, as well as his... not until the very last line could a glimpse of hopefulness for Sev be truly allowed, although there still seems to be a tinted, ambiguous sadness surrounding Kalinda, perhaps an attached effect of the spell upon her; reading on to see if it'll be lifted!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much! I think part of what we see in Kalinda is that she's made the best choice out of the very few options she's been given, and yes, the spell is having an effect in one way or another.
Great story! I loved the whole premise of the secrets and his falling for her, but being unwilling to admit it until it was blatantly thrown in his face through her story. I like all your stuff, Rose. I do think that the mystery of the charm kept me invested to see how it would all turn out.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thanks so much, Deb. I think Snape is contrary enough that a girl needs a back door into his heart. Once there, though... :)
They're progressing nicely. He's captivated and doesn't even want to admit it.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Oh, yes, he's captivated. Her persistence is paying off.
Loved how she got under his skin, but I feel badly for her. Of course, she has accepted what their relationship is, so she's going into whatever happens with eyes open.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you! Yes, she knows what she's getting, but she's hoping things will improve. She has a way of persisting in what she wants, so she just might get it.
She's definitely intriguing. I'm betting he'll be forgetting Lily soon.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thanks for the review! One can hope that with the proper distraction, he can forget Lily. ;)
This is charming so far. Love the premise.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Hi, Deb! Thanks for reading this. I'm glad it caught your attention!
There was a simple innocence about this story that was charming. Almost as though you were hearing the magical version of The Arabian Nights. I've always liked your work but this had a certain old world flavor that was delightful.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Such high praise from you! I was reading the Arabian Nights when I was inspired for this story. It didn't come easy for me. It's almost like learning another language. The sentence patterns are so different. I'm glad it worked.
I'm sorry. It appears I forgot to read this one. And I notice that she doesn't call him "husband" anymore. That must mean something important.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Yay! Someone noticed! Yes, as things progress, she has very different things to call him. That was deliberate.
i truely enjoyed this story. First of all, any story where severus fines happiness is a winner in my book. i couldn't wait to find out his wife's story. this was a very well written story.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much for writing me! Yes, I agree, any story where Severus finds happiness is a winner. As a result most of my stories have happy endings.
In resonse to your request - I read this story because it is focused on Snape - just taken a quick look at your other writing, most of it doesn't seem to feature him very much. Maybe it's just me, but I love stories about mean moody men who dress in black. I will look at some of your other work again, reading this has prompted another look!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much for responding! I had to laugh at your comment because my early writing was entirely Snape, but when I started posting on TPP, I began to branch out a bit. How ironic! We'll see what I come up with in the future. Thanks again for the note!
Combination of a: you, b: Sev, c: an intriguing OC, I think. :D
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you! I really appreciate your constant support. I'm glad that you enjoy my writing!
Not really sure what drew me to the story at first. Severus is usually a good start. Usually go for Serverus/Hermione. The other thing I look for is quite a few reviews early on or 10/chapter later. I liked the uniqueness of the story and hoped for the happy ending. Thanks for writing!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much for responding! I like Severus, too. You can usually count on a happy ending from me, although I seldom get more than 4 or 5 reviews per chapter. I'm glad you found it unique! Thanks for taking a chance on my story!
Just dropping you a line in the interest of science: I enjoy your longer works but as a rule I skip anything with only one chapter. I just prefer character developement to short work and drabble.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much for your response! I'm glad you enjoy my work, and I understand what you mean about the difference between the shorter things and the longer ones. They really are different literary forms.
It's very sweet the way he is falling for her and doesn't realise it. :)
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Yes. It's good that he doesn't realize it, though, because he might try to stop himself from falling for her. Thank you for the lovely reviews and rating!
I don't think everything will be solved with just being intimate but maybe it will help Sev to begin healing from his heartbreak. I think that woman is just what he needs. She's understanding, very patient and very insightfull. He may discover he'll be happy forever. At least I hope so.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
No, I don't think intimacy will solve everything, either. It's simply another step in the progression. Thank you for the thoughtful comments!
Finally he figures it out! :)
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
He's been known to be pretty smart once or twice, LOL. Thank you, again!