The Groom is Charmed
Chapter 5 of 5
Rose of the WestSeverus hears a story and listens to his heart.
ReviewedDisclaimer: Except for OCs, the characters here and the world they inhabit are the creation and property of JK Rowling and her assigns.
"Wait, Severus. There is a story I must tell you, first. A choice must be made between us, and then we may lie together."
"I know that I will love any story you tell me, Kalinda. You tell good stories and your voice is most pleasurable to the ear."
She smiled and began.
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"In days not so very long ago, a terrible wizard came to power. This wizard loved no people and feared few, yet he was able to raise a following that threatened the fabric of the Wizarding World. He cared little for other people of any sort, yet he managed to amass his followers, by targeting those of non-magical parentage. His power was so great that few wizards and witches chose to resist him; yet a small contingent of people did.
"One thing troubled him. He had a magical parent and a non-magical parent. Of the two, the magical parent had died but the non-magical parent was still living. This was distasteful to him. Surely it should be the other way around, and yet it was the case. He himself would find ways to live forever. He searched through texts that others eschewed. He found ways to obtain texts that those in power hid. Over time, he discovered several options, but no one would explain them to his satisfaction.
"He spent time at a shop where dark objects were sold, even before he reached his majority. He became friends with the owner of this shop, who showed him an amulet from a distant country. The owner had never found the secret of the amulet, because it was written in a different language, but this boy copied the writing carefully and promised himself to discover the secret if he could.
"On his next holiday, he went to the shop and took the amulet into a back room. Holding the dreadful object in his hand while speaking the spell inscribed upon it, he summoned a djinn from a land far away. He demanded help in his search for immortality. This djinn was loath to help the wizard, for he could tell that the other man was evil. However, he was bound to obey due to the spell upon the amulet.
"The djinn was forced to help the wizard store portions of his soul in various objects. It was distasteful work, for it involved watching the wizard kill several people. Several times he was summoned by the evil wizard over many years to carry out this horrible deed. Eventually the djinn begged to be released from such dreadful work. The wizard had broken his own soul enough times for his satisfaction, anyway, and said, "I shall release you if you give to me your greatest treasure."
"This djinn had a fine home and rooms full of gold and gemstones. Yet he knew that he had no need for all of it. He was sure that perhaps a particularly fine ruby or a chest of golden coins would be exchanged for his freedom. It was a small price, so he agreed. The wizard handed him the amulet, and the djinn went to his home.
"His mortal wife greeted him in tears. Their daughter, who had just come of age, had disappeared at the moment the deal had been struck. The djinn knew his error immediately, for in truth, he had no greater treasure than his wife and children. He hurried back to nullify the exchange, but the evil wizard was happy with the exchange.
"Since his magical mother had died, he assumed that death comes to and through women. He had long since vowed not to have anything to do with them. However, this daughter of the djinn was useful. Through her arts and those of her house-elf, he would have home-comforts such as clean clothes and warm meals. He refused to nullify the exchange and kept the girl.
"Eventually, this evil wizard was killed by a spell he didn't expect. His soul drifted away, although it waits in different objects to be regenerated. The girl was found in his flat and brought to a castle. There she met and was quickly married to a different wizard. He had been a follower of the evil wizard, yet he was a false servant to him. The girl consented to the marriage because he reminded him of her father, who was likewise tied to a man his inferior in many ways.
"The marriage did not go as normal marriages do. This young wizard had other loves and wishes. Yet eventually, he laid with his wife and found pleasure in it. He would not stay in her rooms nor invite her into his, because he still did not love her. He never even kissed her. Yet this marriage progressed in this odd way for three moons.
"At length, his wife became pregnant. Her house-elf quickly took these tidings to the djinn and his wife, who rejoiced and sent messages to their daughter. When the child was born, the parents of the girl would come for her. With the death of the wizard, the spell was broken, and they would rather suffer the shame of divorce than see their daughter tied unhappily to a man who did not love her back."
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Severus was swept by many thoughts as he looked at Kalinda. What she had told him explained so many things, and the tidings she had just given him were something he had never contemplated. His first urge, which he decided to obey, was to pick her up and carry her, not to the nearby bed, but to his rooms.
For the first time ever he placed her on his bed. As always, her skin glowed, and she lent new life and beauty to the linens and hangings of his room. He removed her shift and undressed himself. Then he proceeded to touch and caress her until she sighed for more.
After they were done, he touched his lips to hers. She tasted as good as she had looked and smelled. He kissed her for a long time and then carefully put his arms around her as he sorted out his thoughts.
"If the Dark Lord's death nullified the arrangement, then why didn't Zurie bring tidings of his death to your family sooner? You might have gone home and avoided me entirely."
"I would have gone home in disgrace. Everyone knew that I had gone, and to return without a husband would have left me vulnerable to much evil. At least this way, returning with a child, the men will know that I am fertile and will bear them children."
He asked her about the broken soul of the wizard that had been placed in various objects. She told him what she knew, but that was unfortunately little. Perhaps her father would help Dumbledore when he came for the child's birth. After a while the serious conversation became playful as the two spoke of their attachment to each other.
At length Snape said, "I have one other question."
"I will answer if I can."
"How can I prove to your father that I am in love with you and that I wish to make you happy?"
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After an idyllic summer spent in the greatest freedom Severus had known, he and Kalinda returned to Hogwarts. They fell easily back into a pattern similar to the one they had known the previous year, with the exception that they spent the nights in one bed together.
Her labor came upon her sooner than expected during the winter. Within hours, Severus and Kalinda were admiring their son. He was quite dark, as they expected, and both parents found him to be quite beautiful.
A few days later, Severus was summoned to the Headmaster's office from a class. When he arrived, he met a being who frightened him even more than the Dark Lord had. He came into the room cautiously and tried not to be nervous.
"You wished to see me, Headmaster?"
"I understand that this is your father-in-law, Severus. He came to meet his grandson."
"Yes, of course." He pondered putting his hand out to shake but didn't know if this was acceptable. What were the proscribed manners for dealing with a djinn?
He found that his hand was taken between two much larger ones. "So you are the young man who has taken such good care of the daughter I so carelessly lost."
"Yes...sir." He wasn't sure how to address the djinn, either. "I'm sure you would like to see her, so I'll take you down to see her."
"Ah, I've already seen that she's happy, and her mother is even now with her. I shall not turn you into a bloody pulp. Just remember that Zurie tells her mother and me everything, and remember that we shall come to visit our grandson frequently."
"I will remember that."
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After these events, the Snapes lived a quiet life together while Dumbledore pondered the meaning of Kalinda's story. He spoke at length with Snape's father-in-law, who told him the nature of the objects containing Voldemort's soul. He could not tell where they might be stored or hidden. He gathered information from shopkeepers and professors, from house-elves and contemporaries of Voldemort. He didn't understand all that he learned, but he slowly built up his knowledge. He could only hope that by the time he needed it, he would have the entire puzzle in place.
A/N: Dear Readers, I wonder if you can help me out a little bit. This story has been very popular compared to some of my other stories. The view counts have been huge compared to my usual averages. I wonder if you could drop me a quick review just to tell me what it was that brought you back to it. Was it the OC? Was it the time frame? Was it the style? Was it something else? I'm not fond of requesting reviews, but in this case it's in the interest of science. Obviously, if most people liked something in particular, it will have an effect on my future work. Thank you in advance! You've all been lovely to stop by and read!
Thank you espeicially to Trickie Woo, who beta read this story.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Charmed Bride
39 Reviews | 6.38/10 Average
There was something about the plot and the idea that struck me. I admit that I liked the girl and her mystery very much - that was one draw for me as a reader. The second was the 'stories' about Voldemort and Severus. The girl's perspective about things was delightful and unique. I think with soooo many SS/HG and the 'norm, this one was entirely refreshing. That's the best I can say - it was so unique and refreshing. I admit that I don't understand the comments about the style you keep making, it's nice/fun to step outside boxes and if you did - congrats. That's not easy to do. I did enjoy this story very much and wonder what happened to her - if something did, because in the books Severus is alone ( or seems alone.) Regardless, it's a wonderful tale. Thank you for it.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much for the lovely review!I've lived on "unique and refreshing" for several days now. I'm glad you saw that in the story.I think if I was to continue this, it would be entirely AU. I might even find a way to end the story before Harry went to Hogwarts, or perhaps his first year (since there's only one way to get rid of the scar-horcrux).
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Well if you do decide to continue this story, let us know so I can bookmark it to follow along. ... gonna go read another of your stories. Do you have a recommendation of a favorite one?
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much for the encouragement! It's a very different OC, and a little rough in places, but I think my best story, certainly my best OC, is in The Tower Affair. I'm awfully partial to The Life and Times of Perseus, though. No Snape, but a sweet love story between two characters that were almost as shafted in canon as Snape.Thanks again!
Wow, this was cool! I loved how you used K to tell stories we already know in such a fresh way. The style is totally different to other fanfic I've read - I would like to see more in the same kind of style, its a cross between some of the old stories my granda tells and a kind of eastern influence that stands out. Also liked the interaction between S & K, more of their relationship would be cool and maybe how she was able to change what came next?
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you! I was honestly worried that the eastern style wouldn't sound right or might even be offensive to some. I'm glad so many people have liked it.I've had a great many requests for more to this story. I'm not going to promise anything, but I may try to work out something.Thanks again!
I've not read any of your other stories yet, so I am not able to compare them. What drew me back to this story was the cadence of the prose. It reminded me of Arabian Nights, and it felt luxurious. The tone of the story felt hypnotic and restful. I appreciate the mood you created. I don't think the way this story was written would necessarily work for telling different kinds of stories, but I appreciated it for this one.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Wow! Thank you for giving my work a try! I will say this is very different for me. I'm usually a lot more direct in my writing style and I had re-write sections of it to be in the tone I wanted to achieve here. I'm glad it came over well.Thank you very much for the lovely review!
Severus Snape has loyalty down to an art form. It does not suprise me that he would view sleeping with his wife as a betrayal of Lily. ((sighs)) I really hate Lily. Go Kalinda Go!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
I knew that would be irritating, but it's in his nature, isn't it? Maybe if we're lucky, he'll grow out of it. At 21, he's still a kid in a lot of ways. Thanks again for the review!
Severus certainly needs someone to take care of him. However we should beware of anything that was around Riddle. It cannot be safe.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
I had so not considered that angle! It was in my mind that Riddle never touched her, since he distrusted women generally as being weak, but you're right, there might have been a lingering curse or something there. Thank you for the review!
Hi! You already know how much I enjoy your work. I like the different style here; very Arabian Nights of you. I like the OC, even though I don't find her strong enough. Not weak, per se, just not enough of a 'presence'. I don't know how to explain it better than that. I don't want to call her a pushover, as she doesn;t cave in at all really, she seems stronger than that, but...maybe 'assertive' is the word I'm looking for. Although, now that it occurs to me, she does come off as slightly Slytherin in her ability to get her way by dissembling. Over all, I enjoyed it very much. If I'm completely honest, it feels...unfinished. What happens to Kalinda? What is the baby's name? How does this particular AU differ from canon as time passes? Does Severus get to live? Does his new family? Methinks I need more of this. Which is a good thing, no?So, to wrap it up, I liked the story, (quite a lot, actually), I liked the OC, (apparently, more than I even thought I did!) I liked how Severus softened up slightly over time, and I'd like more, pleasethankyouverymuch.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much! I've been humbled by the outpouring of love this story has received, and I'm so glad you enjoy my work generally, too!Kalinda is not assertive, but she has a way of arranging things such that Severus usually finds himself falling into line with what she wants him to do. It is Slythern, but there's a bit of the badger there, too, I think.Just between you and me (and almost everyone else), yes, the story is a bit hurried at the end. I'll see if I can come up with some of the short stories that would mesh with this one and finish it up.Thanks again for the lovely review! I'll do my best to continue to earn it.
I don't think I've read this anymore than any of your other stories, but I'll try to answer your question anyway. First I like it because it is Severus. But I like other characters, too so this not exactly relevant. He is so often paired up with the usual people that Kalinda is a refreshing change. I don't think it's her OFC status that counts. I'd read it if it were Pomona or Luna or any other male/female character that he is not often or never paired up with. Plus there is the mystery around her persona, the spell she's under. I even think you could have develop her a bit more and made the story a bit longer. Sorry I digress. Anyway, I hope it helped.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
I totally agree about the lack of development. I was sort of limited to 10k words by the festival it was written for, and I had thought to add a little here and there. Tinkering with things gets so complicated, though.She's one of those people who seems compliant, but actually has a spine of steel and before you realize what's happening, you're doing what she wants you to do. I love Severus, too, and even when I write about completely different people, I usually find a way to sneak him in somewhere. Thank you so much for your thoughts!
Roseof thewest, I love all of your work, your Severus stories outstandingly, but due to your note, perhaps, the things which went hand-in-hand in this story were: Severus placed to interact with an 'eastern' OC which incurred the lovely mythologies and tales of eastern lore which is rare to come across; you touch many childhood nerves with including the djin & the hairy heart, etc. the whole schaheradzad/1001 Nights, etc, all the elements of tale/myth-telling... as most writers are trying to portray the Anglo-Saxon or continental European Wizarding world and/or strictly Canon confines, so this OC allowed a more exotic dilemma tied in with Canon events, and intertwined with Voldemort's and Snape's lives; once the OC's profile is accepted, reading of Severus engaged with such a unique, different OC of a magical but different/exotic background is very engaging.Of course, as a Snape/OC fan, I love seeing Severus' personal journey from detaching himself or rather giving himself permission to feel and experience life and relations beyound a maudlin, stalemated tie to Lily, especially when it is shown, as here, his sincere display & ability to love and be loved... which again, is why I love ALL of your work!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Oh, thank you for your complete analysis! I have to admit the Arabian Nights flavor was deliberate and it was hard... like learning to think in a different language. I'm glad that it worked for you. I really like Snape/OC, too. :)Thanks again for you wonderful support!
Lovely evolvement of their relationship - lovely to see that there is some true pleasure and joy they sincerely share and enjoy from each other; their is a mutual affection and desire.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you, again! I think he would admit by now that he enjoys her companionship, at least.
Well-done depiction of her dilemma, as well as his... not until the very last line could a glimpse of hopefulness for Sev be truly allowed, although there still seems to be a tinted, ambiguous sadness surrounding Kalinda, perhaps an attached effect of the spell upon her; reading on to see if it'll be lifted!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much! I think part of what we see in Kalinda is that she's made the best choice out of the very few options she's been given, and yes, the spell is having an effect in one way or another.
Great story! I loved the whole premise of the secrets and his falling for her, but being unwilling to admit it until it was blatantly thrown in his face through her story. I like all your stuff, Rose. I do think that the mystery of the charm kept me invested to see how it would all turn out.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thanks so much, Deb. I think Snape is contrary enough that a girl needs a back door into his heart. Once there, though... :)
They're progressing nicely. He's captivated and doesn't even want to admit it.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Oh, yes, he's captivated. Her persistence is paying off.
Loved how she got under his skin, but I feel badly for her. Of course, she has accepted what their relationship is, so she's going into whatever happens with eyes open.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you! Yes, she knows what she's getting, but she's hoping things will improve. She has a way of persisting in what she wants, so she just might get it.
She's definitely intriguing. I'm betting he'll be forgetting Lily soon.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thanks for the review! One can hope that with the proper distraction, he can forget Lily. ;)
This is charming so far. Love the premise.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Hi, Deb! Thanks for reading this. I'm glad it caught your attention!
There was a simple innocence about this story that was charming. Almost as though you were hearing the magical version of The Arabian Nights. I've always liked your work but this had a certain old world flavor that was delightful.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Such high praise from you! I was reading the Arabian Nights when I was inspired for this story. It didn't come easy for me. It's almost like learning another language. The sentence patterns are so different. I'm glad it worked.
I'm sorry. It appears I forgot to read this one. And I notice that she doesn't call him "husband" anymore. That must mean something important.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Yay! Someone noticed! Yes, as things progress, she has very different things to call him. That was deliberate.
i truely enjoyed this story. First of all, any story where severus fines happiness is a winner in my book. i couldn't wait to find out his wife's story. this was a very well written story.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much for writing me! Yes, I agree, any story where Severus finds happiness is a winner. As a result most of my stories have happy endings.
In resonse to your request - I read this story because it is focused on Snape - just taken a quick look at your other writing, most of it doesn't seem to feature him very much. Maybe it's just me, but I love stories about mean moody men who dress in black. I will look at some of your other work again, reading this has prompted another look!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much for responding! I had to laugh at your comment because my early writing was entirely Snape, but when I started posting on TPP, I began to branch out a bit. How ironic! We'll see what I come up with in the future. Thanks again for the note!
Combination of a: you, b: Sev, c: an intriguing OC, I think. :D
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you! I really appreciate your constant support. I'm glad that you enjoy my writing!
Not really sure what drew me to the story at first. Severus is usually a good start. Usually go for Serverus/Hermione. The other thing I look for is quite a few reviews early on or 10/chapter later. I liked the uniqueness of the story and hoped for the happy ending. Thanks for writing!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much for responding! I like Severus, too. You can usually count on a happy ending from me, although I seldom get more than 4 or 5 reviews per chapter. I'm glad you found it unique! Thanks for taking a chance on my story!
Just dropping you a line in the interest of science: I enjoy your longer works but as a rule I skip anything with only one chapter. I just prefer character developement to short work and drabble.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Thank you so much for your response! I'm glad you enjoy my work, and I understand what you mean about the difference between the shorter things and the longer ones. They really are different literary forms.
It's very sweet the way he is falling for her and doesn't realise it. :)
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
Yes. It's good that he doesn't realize it, though, because he might try to stop himself from falling for her. Thank you for the lovely reviews and rating!
I don't think everything will be solved with just being intimate but maybe it will help Sev to begin healing from his heartbreak. I think that woman is just what he needs. She's understanding, very patient and very insightfull. He may discover he'll be happy forever. At least I hope so.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
No, I don't think intimacy will solve everything, either. It's simply another step in the progression. Thank you for the thoughtful comments!
Finally he figures it out! :)
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Charmed Bride)
He's been known to be pretty smart once or twice, LOL. Thank you, again!