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A Long Vernal Season

1: Prologue: Return

2: Chapter One: Hermione’s News

3: Chapter Two: An Unusual Invitation

4: Chapter Three: St. Giles Clinic for Magical Maladies

5: Chapter Four: Through the Looking-Glass

6: Chapter Five: Alternative Treatment

7: Chapter Six: Race Cars Go “Vroom”

8: Chapter Seven: Waxing

9: Chapter Eight: Business as Usual

10: Chapter Nine: A Delicate Phase

11: Chapter Ten: Jam Tarts

12: Chapter Eleven: Don’t Frighten the Firsties

13: Chapter Twelve: The Stages of Brewing

14: Chapter Thirteen: Breakfire

15: Chapter Fourteen: Of Ice Cream, Kittens, and Jet Planes

16: Chapter Fifteen: Bacon Butties and Baked Beans

17: Chapter Sixteen: A Sympathetic New Start

18: Chapter Seventeen: An Ambush for Minerva

19: Chapter Eighteen: A New Man

20: Chapter Nineteen: Of Scotch, Choices, and Ambiguity

21: Chapter Twenty: A Ghostly Halloween

22: Chapter Twenty-One: Fancy Dress

23: Chapter Twenty-Two: Not Onerous or Dreary

24: Chapter Twenty-Three: Collegiality

25: Chapter Twenty-Four: Dawn Light Reflected

26: Chapter Twenty-Five: Preoccupation

27: Chapter Twenty-Six: Laid to Rest

28: Chapter Twenty-Seven: ’Twas the Night Before the Night Before Christmas

29: Chapter Twenty-Eight: A Happy Birthday?

30: Chapter Twenty-Nine: A Tear Shed

31: Chapter Thirty: A Tour of the Past

32: Chapter Thirty-One: A Date with Hermione

33: Chapter Thirty-Two: Disquiet

34: Chapter Thirty-Three: At Spinner’s End

35: Chapter Thirty-Four: Uncertainty

36: Chapter Thirty-Five: Friendship

37: Chapter Thirty-Six: A Darkly Smouldering Magnetism

38: Chapter Thirty-Seven: An Exercise in Harmless Flirting

39: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Playing with Fire

40: Chapter Thirty-Nine: The Morning After

41: Chapter Forty: A Matter of Timing

42: Chapter Forty-One: A Fast Learner

43: Chapter Forty-Two: Confessions

44: Chapter Forty-Three: Distractions

45: Chapter Forty-Four: No Unmixed Pleasures

46: Chapter Forty-Five: An Esoteric Spell

47: Chapter Forty-Six: A Complicated Life

48: Chapter Forty-Seven: Exotic Concoctions

49: Chapter Forty-Eight: A Wager with the Headmistress

50: Chapter Forty-Nine: Normal Life

51: Chapter Fifty: A New Project

52: Chapter Fifty-One: Just a Fling?

53: Chapter Fifty-Two: Technique

54: Chapter Fifty-Three: Dinner at Delancie’s

55: Chapter Fifty-Four: Dangerous Consequences

56: Chapter Fifty-Five: Not Falling in Love

57: Chapter Fifty-Six: Out-of-Sorts

58: Chapter Fifty-Seven: Making it Through the Week

59: Chapter Fifty-Eight: The Barghest’s Howl

60: Chapter Fifty-Nine: Skimming the Lake

61: Chapter Sixty: Perfect Timing

62: Chapter Sixty-One: Late Night Advice

63: Chapter Sixty-Two: For Old Times’ Sake

64: Chapter Sixty-Three: A Little White Lie

65: Chapter Sixty-Four: The Goblin’s Knee

66: Chapter Sixty-Five: Test Flight

67: Chapter Sixty-Six: Broomstick Rodeo

68: Chapter Sixty-Seven: Some Muggle Business

69: Chapter Sixty-Eight: Bad Timing

70: Chapter Sixty-Nine: Moulting

71: Chapter Seventy: To Persist and Pursue

72: Chapter Seventy-One: Descent into Hades

73: Chapter Seventy-Two: Home

74: Chapter Seventy-Three: Renovation

75: Chapter Seventy-Four: Glimpse the Snape Family Past

76: Chapter Seventy-Five: A Wizard Not to be Crossed

77: Chapter Seventy-Six: Present Danger

78: Chapter Seventy-Seven: Paying Court

79: Chapter Seventy-Eight: Sifting the Past

80: Chapter Seventy-Nine: Atmosphere

81: Chapter Eighty: Finding Flowers and Family

82: Chapter Eighty-One: Lighting

83: Chapter Eighty-Two: An End to a Perfect Evening

84: Chapter Eighty-Three: Attack in a Blur

85: Chapter Eighty-Four: Suspicion

86: Chapter Eighty-Five: Jumping at Shadows

87: Chapter Eighty-Six: Remedying Magical Misfortune

88: Chapter Eighty-Seven: Brewing with the Master

89: Chapter Eighty-Eight: Back to Brewing

90: Chapter Eighty-Nine: A Cryptic Missive

91: Chapter Ninety: A Happy Decision

92: Chapter Ninety-One: A Proposal

93: Chapter Ninety-Two: Promising Start to a Holiday

94: Chapter Ninety-Three: Whetting the Appetite

95: Chapter Ninety-Four: The Rewards of Patience

96: Chapter Ninety-Five: Afternoon Games

97: Chapter Ninety-Six: An Unexpected Encounter

98: Chapter Ninety-Seven: Another Splash of Whiskey

99: Chapter Ninety-Eight: Confidences and Promises

100: Chapter Ninety-Nine: Memory Lane

101: Chapter One Hundred: Some Truth

102: Chapter One-Hundred One: Simply Severus

103: Chapter One-Hundred Two: Meeting Max

104: Chapter One Hundred-Three: Of Lilacs, of Love, and of Danger

105: Chapter One Hundred-Four: Party Games

106: Chapter One Hundred-Five: An Assignation

107: Chapter One Hundred-Six: Refuge

108: Chapter One Hundred-Seven: Reparation

109: Chapter One Hundred-Eight: The Greatest Slytherin

110: Chapter One Hundred-Nine: Vita Furtiva

111: Chapter One Hundred-Ten: Journey to Dun Torc

112: Chapter One Hundred-Eleven: An Accident Foretold

113: Chapter One Hundred-Twelve: Association

114: Chapter One Hundred-Thirteen: The Past Follows

115: Chapter One Hundred-Fourteen: Arithmantic Charms

116: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen: Dead … or Alive?

117: Chapter One Hundred-Sixteen: The Tyree Estate

118: Chapter One Hundred-Seventeen: From the Primrose Cottage to the Shell Folly

A Long Vernal Season

MMADfan

1,058 Reviews   |   1,058 Ratings, 0 Likes, 88 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 652,726 Words 136 Chapters WIP
Albus Dumbledore Filius Flitwick Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Poppy Pomfrey Severus Snape Lucius Malfoy Pomona Sprout Original Character Other Canon Witch/Wizard Narcissa Malfoy Rubeus Hagrid Hogwarts Eileen (Prince) Snape Tobias Snape Draco Malfoy Professor Vector The Fat Friar Madam Rosmerta Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Firenze (Centaur) Professor Sinistra Name Withheld (surprise) Ginevra Weasley Arthur Weasley Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank Harry Potter Fawkes Bellatrix Lestrange Peter Pettigrew Nymphadora Tonks Remus Lupin Sorting Hat

Severus Snape had believed that, for him, life after the Dark Lord was an impossibility, that his death was not merely justice, but necessity. He has survived, though, and now he must learn to live his new, unexpected life, and to find something beyond the narrow existence to which he was once bound. A Snape-centric post-war fic.

A Death’s Dominion sequel, but may stand alone. Not DH-compliant. DH-disregarded. Rated M for overall content. Much of it is "T," but the ratings rise to MA later for a reason, hence the switch to an M-rating for the earlier chapters. Watch the individual chapter summaries and author’s notes for ratings, warnings, and the characters appearing in that chapter.


Part One finds Severus dealing with some very immediate and dangerous consequences of his final confrontation with the Dark Lord more than three months before.

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Chapters (118)

Chapter 1: Prologue: Return

Chapter 2: Chapter One: Hermione’s News

Chapter 3: Chapter Two: An Unusual Invitation

Chapter 4: Chapter Three: St. Giles Clinic for Magical Maladies

Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Through the Looking-Glass

Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Alternative Treatment

Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Race Cars Go “Vroom”

Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: Waxing

Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: Business as Usual

Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: A Delicate Phase

Chapter 11: Chapter Ten: Jam Tarts

Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven: Don’t Frighten the Firsties

Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: The Stages of Brewing

Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: Breakfire

Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: Of Ice Cream, Kittens, and Jet Planes

Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen: Bacon Butties and Baked Beans

Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen: A Sympathetic New Start

Chapter 18: Chapter Seventeen: An Ambush for Minerva

Chapter 19: Chapter Eighteen: A New Man

Chapter 20: Chapter Nineteen: Of Scotch, Choices, and Ambiguity

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty: A Ghostly Halloween

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-One: Fancy Dress

Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Two: Not Onerous or Dreary

Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three: Collegiality

Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Four: Dawn Light Reflected

Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Five: Preoccupation

Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Six: Laid to Rest

Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Seven: ’Twas the Night Before the Night Before Christmas

Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Eight: A Happy Birthday?

Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty-Nine: A Tear Shed

Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty: A Tour of the Past

Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty-One: A Date with Hermione

Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty-Two: Disquiet

Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty-Three: At Spinner’s End

Chapter 35: Chapter Thirty-Four: Uncertainty

Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty-Five: Friendship

Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-Six: A Darkly Smouldering Magnetism

Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty-Seven: An Exercise in Harmless Flirting

Chapter 39: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Playing with Fire

Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty-Nine: The Morning After

Chapter 41: Chapter Forty: A Matter of Timing

Chapter 42: Chapter Forty-One: A Fast Learner

Chapter 43: Chapter Forty-Two: Confessions

Chapter 44: Chapter Forty-Three: Distractions

Chapter 45: Chapter Forty-Four: No Unmixed Pleasures

Chapter 46: Chapter Forty-Five: An Esoteric Spell

Chapter 47: Chapter Forty-Six: A Complicated Life

Chapter 48: Chapter Forty-Seven: Exotic Concoctions

Chapter 49: Chapter Forty-Eight: A Wager with the Headmistress

Chapter 50: Chapter Forty-Nine: Normal Life

Chapter 51: Chapter Fifty: A New Project

Chapter 52: Chapter Fifty-One: Just a Fling?

Chapter 53: Chapter Fifty-Two: Technique

Chapter 54: Chapter Fifty-Three: Dinner at Delancie’s

Chapter 55: Chapter Fifty-Four: Dangerous Consequences

Chapter 56: Chapter Fifty-Five: Not Falling in Love

Chapter 57: Chapter Fifty-Six: Out-of-Sorts

Chapter 58: Chapter Fifty-Seven: Making it Through the Week

Chapter 59: Chapter Fifty-Eight: The Barghest’s Howl

Chapter 60: Chapter Fifty-Nine: Skimming the Lake

Chapter 61: Chapter Sixty: Perfect Timing

Chapter 62: Chapter Sixty-One: Late Night Advice

Chapter 63: Chapter Sixty-Two: For Old Times’ Sake

Chapter 64: Chapter Sixty-Three: A Little White Lie

Chapter 65: Chapter Sixty-Four: The Goblin’s Knee

Chapter 66: Chapter Sixty-Five: Test Flight

Chapter 67: Chapter Sixty-Six: Broomstick Rodeo

Chapter 68: Chapter Sixty-Seven: Some Muggle Business

Chapter 69: Chapter Sixty-Eight: Bad Timing

Chapter 70: Chapter Sixty-Nine: Moulting

Chapter 71: Chapter Seventy: To Persist and Pursue

Chapter 72: Chapter Seventy-One: Descent into Hades

Chapter 73: Chapter Seventy-Two: Home

Chapter 74: Chapter Seventy-Three: Renovation

Chapter 75: Chapter Seventy-Four: Glimpse the Snape Family Past

Chapter 76: Chapter Seventy-Five: A Wizard Not to be Crossed

Chapter 77: Chapter Seventy-Six: Present Danger

Chapter 78: Chapter Seventy-Seven: Paying Court

Chapter 79: Chapter Seventy-Eight: Sifting the Past

Chapter 80: Chapter Seventy-Nine: Atmosphere

Chapter 81: Chapter Eighty: Finding Flowers and Family

Chapter 82: Chapter Eighty-One: Lighting

Chapter 83: Chapter Eighty-Two: An End to a Perfect Evening

Chapter 84: Chapter Eighty-Three: Attack in a Blur

Chapter 85: Chapter Eighty-Four: Suspicion

Chapter 86: Chapter Eighty-Five: Jumping at Shadows

Chapter 87: Chapter Eighty-Six: Remedying Magical Misfortune

Chapter 88: Chapter Eighty-Seven: Brewing with the Master

Chapter 89: Chapter Eighty-Eight: Back to Brewing

Chapter 90: Chapter Eighty-Nine: A Cryptic Missive

Chapter 91: Chapter Ninety: A Happy Decision

Chapter 92: Chapter Ninety-One: A Proposal

Chapter 93: Chapter Ninety-Two: Promising Start to a Holiday

Chapter 94: Chapter Ninety-Three: Whetting the Appetite

Chapter 95: Chapter Ninety-Four: The Rewards of Patience

Chapter 96: Chapter Ninety-Five: Afternoon Games

Chapter 97: Chapter Ninety-Six: An Unexpected Encounter

Chapter 98: Chapter Ninety-Seven: Another Splash of Whiskey

Chapter 99: Chapter Ninety-Eight: Confidences and Promises

Chapter 100: Chapter Ninety-Nine: Memory Lane

Chapter 101: Chapter One Hundred: Some Truth

Chapter 102: Chapter One-Hundred One: Simply Severus

Chapter 103: Chapter One-Hundred Two: Meeting Max

Chapter 104: Chapter One Hundred-Three: Of Lilacs, of Love, and of Danger

Chapter 105: Chapter One Hundred-Four: Party Games

Chapter 106: Chapter One Hundred-Five: An Assignation

Chapter 107: Chapter One Hundred-Six: Refuge

Chapter 108: Chapter One Hundred-Seven: Reparation

Chapter 109: Chapter One Hundred-Eight: The Greatest Slytherin

Chapter 110: Chapter One Hundred-Nine: Vita Furtiva

Chapter 111: Chapter One Hundred-Ten: Journey to Dun Torc

Chapter 112: Chapter One Hundred-Eleven: An Accident Foretold

Chapter 113: Chapter One Hundred-Twelve: Association

Chapter 114: Chapter One Hundred-Thirteen: The Past Follows

Chapter 115: Chapter One Hundred-Fourteen: Arithmantic Charms

Chapter 116: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen: Dead … or Alive?

Chapter 117: Chapter One Hundred-Sixteen: The Tyree Estate

Chapter 118: Chapter One Hundred-Seventeen: From the Primrose Cottage to the Shell Folly


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0/10

Fishy

*snip*so Grandmother Siofre and Johannes adopted himAm I missing something here - did Johannes couple up with Grandmother Siofre? Isn't that an age difference of....... like 80 or 90 years?

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

LOL! No, my dear, it isn't. Siofre's younger than Albus by a few years, and Johannes is older than Malcolm, who was 17 when Minerva was born. So the age difference is less than that between Albus & Minerva.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Ahhh, okay well that makes more sense... but I'm still surprised you never told us the two of them were hooking up - I mean it was hinted at in RaM but...

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

You could read Charming the Scottish Garden. Also, Severus doesn't really know either of them, so it's all just names to him at this point in the story. We did see them together at the Merlin awards dinner at the end of DD, but Poppy wasn't able to tell Severus much about the three of them because the speakers began.

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Fishy

*snip*He raised one eyebrow. “I hope you find yourself as honoured to serve others who are Slytherin.”“Of course! It was my wife’s House.” He smiled. “I was in Hufflepuff.”“Hufflepuff?” He nodded. Hufflepuff and Slytherin, what a combination, he thought. He couldn’t imagine what had drawn the two to each other, unless his wife enjoyed his devotion and knew she wouldn’t have to work too hard for it. “Yes, also a fine House. As are they all.” Oh HO! Is this a hint? *grins*

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

It most certainly is -- a hint of the ironic sort! (Little does Severus know!) hee!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

*grins wide*

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Fishy

Awww, I had hoped Albus and Minerva won for best costumes! Ahh well...

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Well, Albus was a runner-up, so to speak! I think that part of the pull for Severus was that everyone was so amazed that he'd go for a fancy dress that was colorful and flamboyant -- that he seemed to get into the spirit of the thing.

0/10

Fishy

*snip*“Madame Curie,” Poppy said.“Playing against type, I presume,” Severus said drily. “What?!” She sputtered indignantly.“I simply meant that, although you are clearly not unintelligent, you are more inclined toward taking care of people, being . . .” How could he dig himself out of this one, he wondered. “Being a generously warm caregiver. Madame Curie spent her time in laboratories, not with people. She is also . . . drab. You are not. That is all I meant.”*falls over laughing*

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

He did manage to dig himself out, though! And by being truthful. He's a pretty good Slytherin! *wink*

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

hehehehe

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

He also does like Poppy and wouldn't want to insult her.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

That's what I noticed when he came out of his magical ritual... where's Poppy, I need Poppy! I was thinking... hrmmm

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

It bothered him that she wasn't there, you're definitely right about that! And he even felt a bit hurt, believing at first that she simply hadn't cared enough once he was out of danger to be there and look after him herself.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Dawwwwwww! I be thinking Severus is having a crushie on our Matron mediwitch!  So adorable!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Nah . . . not yet, anyway! But he's fonder of her than he realizes!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Tee hee hee hee *grins* Can't wait to read it!

10/10

OldFashionedGrl

More story! And so soon!!! Yay!!!!I was worried Poppy might be gone longer than that. I'm so happy that she was able to get back and that Severus told her how he felt instead of just pouting. Plus now there's more to look forward to. I love this story beyond words!Thank you for making it something to look forward to.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yep, Severus was really good about not just sulking! I'm glad you are enjoying it so much! The next chapter is well underway, and I have started the next chapter of Charming the Scottish Garden, too, so I should be able to update one or the other of those stories this coming weekend. (Crossed fingers on that!)Thanks for the review! :-)

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Wow. I bet Albus got an earful from Minerva when he got home, not to mention Shunpike and Rath. eeek! I am glad they found him and without sending the Patronus. How embarassing.It was nice to see Poppy returning to the lab and finding Severus in a much cooler mood. That sound odd, but I think if he'd been anything other than cool towards her at first, it wouldn't have seemed realistic. It goes a long way towards firming their relationship that they can be open and honest about how they're feeling. And boy were they "feeling" a lot. tee he. Looking forward to their next date. tee hee.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm sure Albus did get an earful! You're right there!Severus was feeling hurt, and he was trying not to lash out like he used to, so he was a bit distant, though at least he didn't shut down completely. He finds it hard to talk about his feelings, or feel that others will find them legitimate. It was a big deal that Poppy recognized his feelings and gae him validation -- and it was a big thing that he started off actually telling her how he felt rather tan waiting and just being grouchier and surlier and basically the old nasty Snape!They certainly were "feeling" quite a lot in this chapter! I'm glad you enjoyed it!Thanks!

10/10

PureBlood Proud

I am so happy to have further story line to read in the RAM universe!  RAM was one of the first fics I read and one of my favs. But being truthful I am very much a Snape fan.  I am loving this story and look forward to each new chapter I get to read.  I love the evolving friendships as Snape discovers his own trueself.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I can't remember if you read Death's Dominion or not, but if you didn't, you will like it, I think. It's a Snape-centric fic, and I think it's my best one -- though RaM's my favorite. DD does lose quite a bit, though, with the spoilers from LVS, since the structure and plotting are intended to create some suspense which the spoilers, um, spoil (LOL!), but I still think it's likely a good read, especially if you like this Severus, since you can see where he came from and how his relationship with Gareth began and his relationship with Hermione became more of a friendship.I'm glad you're enjoying LVS! There's a lot more to come, and I hope you continue to enjoy it!Thanks for reviewing!

9/10

browneyes2yu

For some reason, well, I know for what reason, but I feel really horrible for the Malfoys. Yeah, they were horrible, DEs and all that, but their way of life, their home, money...all gone, that's horrible. But then I always say that government whether good or bad is always looking to rip off its people (don't get me wrong, I am no anarchist and governments are necessary and created for a reason, but let's be realistic and keep our eyes open and brain functioning...), not caring if it's taking their long-held hereditary inheritance, rightfully-gained possessions or wrongfully obtained ones, all government wants is to line ITS coffers, how/whatever way. I just hate that and I feel really bad for Malfoys....the last part of the chapter just leaves a bitter aftertaste, at least for me. Nice job!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

It's restitution money, not just something that stays with some faceless governtment. The money is going to the Death Eaters' victims -- orphans, widows, destroyed businesses, etc. -- so it's not merely punishment. And the Ministry is renting the manor, they didn't just take it. But I can see how you can feel badly for the Malfoys. They do look a pathetic sight right now . However, they live as many others in the world do, and better than a good many do. And Draco got to keep what money was left in their accounts -- though Voldy had taken most of it. The Ministry didn't want to visit the sins of the father upon the son, as they say.I think part of the point of this chapter and the next is to contrast the fates of Severus & Lucius, and how for each of them, their own choices played a role in where they are now, and how even in their current circumstances, they still have choices to make.Lucius is a sad and broken figure here, but he was treated leniently, considering that he tortured and murdered people as a DE. But the treatment he later received from Voldy -- for screwing up, not for betrayal -- did soften the hearts of the MLE & Wizengamot. Hopefully, Lucius will pull himself together and do more than just sit in his back garden and read . . . Though heck! I'd love to do that! LOL! Can't knock wanting to sit in a garden and read, can we?Thanks much for the review! I love hearing from folks and getting their perspectives on things. I hope you continute to enjoy the story!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Yippee! Another chapter in which Gareth McGonagall makes an appearance. I do love that wizard, though he's no Albus Dumbledore. haha. I thought it was so funny that he was chatting up the assistant in Murdoch's apothecary shop. Always the flirt ... just like his father.Hmm, can't say I feel overly sympathetic towards Malfoy's lot in life now. After years of looking down his pureblood nose at everyone not in his circle of friends, it's high time he learned a thing or two about how the other side lives. And, as he said, it could have been worse. I bet Snape did feel a bit odd, both in speaking with Lucius and in finding out just how they were living. I'm sure he'll find there are lots of changes still in store for him.Thanks again for posting!Cheers,the GLM

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks! Glad you like seeing Gareth again. He'll be around a lot. He's fun, and with attitude! haha! Bet you never thought when you read that first chapter with him and Severus in it that they would become friends! (I had no doubts, however -- LOL!)Lucius Malfoy . . . yes, now that his "style" is stripped from him, his name is Mudd, so to speak, and he has no money or influence, is there much left of him? Quite a contrast with Severus.Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it!TTFN!

10/10

just harry

So happy to see a new chapter.  looking forwarrd to another soon.  As always its a great one, I am so glad Poppy is back.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks,

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

! I hope I have my mojo back and will be able to update more regularly now!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks,

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

! I hope I have my mojo back and will be able to update more regularly now!

10/10

Regina Demonica

Gareth really is a loyal buddy to Severus, an through the surface of his jovial manner there was some real concern. There certainly are a lot of people dedicated to helping Snape keep going. I loved the blend of Muggle and magical elements in both the phone system and Floo system respectively. Instaports also sound very useful and very strictly regulated. It must be strange for Severus to see himself in history books about the war, particularly with his own conflicted feelings about some of his actions. Polyphemus's name makes sense with that squint, although this Polyphemus seems hopefully nicer than his namesake in the Odyssey.I wonder why Gwen Burns has such distaste for Slytherins?It's also about time the Ministry had a reorg! It must be a change to have someone forward-thinking like Shacklebolt in charge instead of Fudge. Then again, it seems that Fudge is still trying to get involved in catching the vigilante, although still by throwing around money. At least part of it could be shame about his refusal to get involved in the war with Voldemort before it was too late.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Hi! Thanks!Yes, some of Fudge's motivation is discomfort with his head-in-the-sand approach to Voldie's return, and some of it is fear for what this could do to a society recovering from war and distrust, and, of course, some of it has to do with wanting just a bit of the spotlight and to be seen as a leader. Mostly, though, it's his guilt and shame over not having done enough (or anything, really!) when it should have been clear that Voldemort was returning.Gwen Burns was married to Polyphemus, who was in Slytherin and had only Slytherin friends, most of whom were either Death Eaters or Death Eater sympathizers. She's had it to here with them, and she has a pretty good idea of what Severus must have been up to before he turned on Voldy, and that makes her sick. So while I wouldn't share her feelings if I were a character in the story, I can understand them.Polyphemus was pretty much a lout. Severus and Gareth discussed him in a previous chapter:[Gareth] "I guess her husband was an ass. She doesn’t have anything nice to say about him.”“Who’d she marry?”“Polyphemus Melliflua.”“Why on earth would any woman marry him?” Severus asked, an expression of disgust on his face.“I think that Gwen felt that time was passing, and he asked her, so she married him.” Gareth shrugged.“She is not as intelligent as I had believed, then,” Severus said with a snort, remembering the Slytherin who had been two years behind him at Hogwarts. “Polyphemus had a squint, a fat stomach, spindly arms and legs, a bulbous nose, went bald on top at nineteen but kept a long, stringy ponytail, and he wiped his nose on his sleeve. Constantly. And those are the kindest things I can think to say about him.”“Was he a Death Eater?” Gareth asked.“No, but like all the Mellifluas, he supported pureblood supremacy—as if he were a shining example of it.” Severus shook his head and took a swig of whiskey.Gareth frowned. “I hope that Gwen doesn’t share those beliefs.”“Not likely—even if she was fool enough to marry a Melliflua, at least she got rid of him.”Instaports are a new transportation system springing up across Europe in the RaMverse (the German is Sofortport, which I like 'cause it rhymes! ), but so far there is only a single arrival point in Britain, and no departure booths, since the British Ministry is leery of them and, at the moment, doesn't have the means to regulate them. They are a kind of replacement for or supplement to the Floo Network, and there are handy Instaport booths in Owl Post Office across most of Europe now (in the RaMverse). (Just a bit of trivia that will likely never be explicitly discussed in the stories.)Thanks for the review!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Hi! Thanks!Yes, some of Fudge's motivation is discomfort with his head-in-the-sand approach to Voldie's return, and some of it is fear for what this could do to a society recovering from war and distrust, and, of course, some of it has to do with wanting just a bit of the spotlight and to be seen as a leader. Mostly, though, it's his guilt and shame over not having done enough (or anything, really!) when it should have been clear that Voldemort was returning.Gwen Burns was married to Polyphemus, who was in Slytherin and had only Slytherin friends, most of whom were either Death Eaters or Death Eater sympathizers. She's had it to here with them, and she has a pretty good idea of what Severus must have been up to before he turned on Voldy, and that makes her sick. So while I wouldn't share her feelings if I were a character in the story, I can understand them.Polyphemus was pretty much a lout. Severus and Gareth discussed him in a previous chapter:[Gareth] "I guess her husband was an ass. She doesn’t have anything nice to say about him.”“Who’d she marry?”“Polyphemus Melliflua.”“Why on earth would any woman marry him?” Severus asked, an expression of disgust on his face.“I think that Gwen felt that time was passing, and he asked her, so she married him.” Gareth shrugged.“She is not as intelligent as I had believed, then,” Severus said with a snort, remembering the Slytherin who had been two years behind him at Hogwarts. “Polyphemus had a squint, a fat stomach, spindly arms and legs, a bulbous nose, went bald on top at nineteen but kept a long, stringy ponytail, and he wiped his nose on his sleeve. Constantly. And those are the kindest things I can think to say about him.”“Was he a Death Eater?” Gareth asked.“No, but like all the Mellifluas, he supported pureblood supremacy—as if he were a shining example of it.” Severus shook his head and took a swig of whiskey.Gareth frowned. “I hope that Gwen doesn’t share those beliefs.”“Not likely—even if she was fool enough to marry a Melliflua, at least she got rid of him.”Instaports are a new transportation system springing up across Europe in the RaMverse (the German is Sofortport, which I like 'cause it rhymes! ), but so far there is only a single arrival point in Britain, and no departure booths, since the British Ministry is leery of them and, at the moment, doesn't have the means to regulate them. They are a kind of replacement for or supplement to the Floo Network, and there are handy Instaport booths in Owl Post Office across most of Europe now (in the RaMverse). (Just a bit of trivia that will likely never be explicitly discussed in the stories.)Thanks for the review!

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Fishy

*squeels* I'll actually review the chappie after I read it, just had to express my excitment seeing the notification in my mailbox.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

LOL! I'm glad you're excited! I am very sorry that my fics have been languishing with few or no updates for so long! Hope you enjoy it!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

LOL! I'm glad you're excited! I am very sorry that my fics have been languishing with few or no updates for so long! Hope you enjoy it!

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Fishy

*snip*“Nothing . . . just, thank you. Thank you for coming down for me.” He quirked a little smile. “Maybe we could have that warm snuggle tonight that we didn’t have time for this morning?”Minerva smiled. “You can count on it.”Yummy snuggles! Snuggle Bunnies with Albus! By the way, SO thankful you only used a glamor *shudders*!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I don't think he'd want to make those changes permanent! Fun for dress-up, though!

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Fishy

OOOOH! I love Halloween! I usually go as a Viking warrior! I would LOVE to go to a Halloween DANCE!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Halloween is definitely one of my favorite holidays -- I love dressing up! You can go to the Hogwarts Halloween party here -- you can even dress up for it, if you like!

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Fishy

*snip*“He is forming a Muggle-book club. You will get a notice for it, I am sure. Staff and upper level students both will be invited to participate. And you’ll be hearing about this from him, but do not let him know that I told you first, he wants to create a bowling alley in the upper dungeon—”“He wants to what?”*coughs and sputters* Oh dear God!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

LOL! You liked that, huh? hee!

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Fishy

Awwww, Severus giving Albus a pep talk - there's a role reversal if I ever saw one!And dear sweet Albus, feeling useless.... I can see that, very easily, after being the one EVERYONE depended on for EVERYTHING... ahh but he won't feel like that forever, I hope! He deserves some relaxation and peace, after all - Minerva will help him feel important! I hope, of course she will, she's Minerva... as will the others... poor sweet Albus. I want to hug him... well actually, I want to do more than that... but, I like Minerva too much to be bad!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Well, in some AU where there is no Minerva McGonagall (though that would be sad!!!), maybe you could do more than that! Yes, that was indeed a role reversal! Severus did his best, though. And I think you're right that he deserves some time to relax, if he can remember how, and have some peace.Thanks!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

*snip*“I don’t want her to feel badly, though. She is doing what she is meant to be doing now, and she takes it very seriously, as well she should. I just wish she wanted to spend the weekend with me as much as I want to spend it with her.”AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

*snip*“I’ll leave it all up to Albus,” Minerva replied. She looked up at her beloved, who was twinkling down at her. “I place myself entirely in your hands.”“I look forward to that immensely,” Albus said with a bright smile. “So do I,” Minerva said with a matching smile. “So do I!”Dawwwwwwwwwwww Now I'm complete mush....

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm glad you enjoyed the little glimpse of ADMM!

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WriterMerrin

Oh, Sev is so sweet, trying to talk a little about feelings and letting th L word slip out in the moment.  It must be frustrating trying to court someone with Dumbledore making his life complicated at every step.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Poor Sev can't seem to find any corner of the castle where he won't be disturbed and interrupted in his pursuit of romance!Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!

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Riposto

Oh, I feel poor Severus's frustration, but I do hope Albus is okay. I've been feeling a bit worried for him with all these hints about his tiring easily.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Minerva's been worried about him, and he doesn't do as well on little sleep as he used to, but he's pretty resilient still.Thanks for the reviews -- glad you enjoyed the chapters.

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Riposto

Hagrid's poor students must be cursing him more than usual. I bet you had fun thinking up bad things to happen to them. Sybil Trelawney would be proud!Severus is getting himself more embedded in the Tyree family. Looks like he's in for lots of collaboration in future. And little Eoghan is so very cute. He's like a little puppy, all wriggling around with excitement and delighted to be noticed.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, that was a fun section to write. And I've always yearned for Sybil's approval! LOL!Eoghan thinks it's really exciting to have Severus as a cousin, and as Johannes said, he misses his Grandma Lydia and sees Severus as a connection to her. He's thrilled with the attention from him. He also likes being useful and "grown up" and helping, so that was fun for him.Severus has found a new dimension to his social life. He's still not quite sure what to make of itThanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

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doralupin87

YAY!! I'm soooooooooo glad Albus is ok, but I could kill him!! doing something so foolish! Minerva needs to have a word or two with him about it, and then Severus! LOLI loved this chapter, I really like them together they are so sweet and cute and HOT lol. I absolutely love their plans! oh how I'd love to have those plans! LOL. Thank you sooooo much for updating so SOON, you are an angel!Sam

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yeah, Albus has to improve his communication skills, at least!I'm glad you liked Severus & Poppy together. :-)Thanks for reviewing! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yeah, Albus has to improve his communication skills, at least!I'm glad you liked Severus & Poppy together. :-)Thanks for reviewing! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

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Trulyamused

I like where you're going with this, the characterization is excellent as usual. I hope you continue your updates. Thank you for bringing this new story to light.Truly

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Hi there, Truly! Good to see you! I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Because RL's been rough, I didn't want to start revising and posting until I had enough so I knew there wouldn't be weeks or months between chapters! haha! Let's hope RL doesn't interfere & my enthusiasm for the story remains high. Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

laurelgirl

I find your timely updates very refreshing. This way we can keep up with the interesting story you are weaving without having to constantly go back and reread previous chapters. I also really like the way you are portraying Severus. Thanks for writing and please keep up the good work.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Hi,

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

-- I was wondeirng whether people were having a hard time keeping up, or something.Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like Severus here. I hope you continue to enjoy it!

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LinZE

There is no such thing as too quick an update! and I for one am ecstatic at your decision to continue this series.I've only just had a chance to catch up - but I promise I will follow!thanks as always for sharing Lindsx

 

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Oh, that's good! I was puzzling about it. I'm glad you're enjoying it, Linds! Thanks for reviewing!

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oenthusiast

NO you're not updating too quickly. I am enjoying the story, I'm just not good about reviewing. Severus is interesting and realistic here.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I was beginning to worry it was going over like a lead balloon, as they say. lolI'm glad you're enjoying it and like Severus. Thanks for the review!

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gurlimargrethe

Oh no, you could update twice a-day and I for one would be very happy. You are so talented in describing a mood and the persons in your story. I am not able to express myself in an intellilgent way as english is not my mothertounge and is therefore clumsy

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Hi,

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

! I understand the difficulties of expressing yourself easily in a language other than your native one! But your English is perfectly understandable, and better than some native speakers manage to write! ;-) I love hearing from you! It can be frustrating, though, I know, not to be able to say exactly what you would in your first language. I've had that experience, myself.Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

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