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Carpe Diem, Part One
ConstantComment398 Reviews | 5.08/10 (398 Ratings, 0 Likes, 234 Favorites )
Hermione Granger returns to Hogwarts for a year of postwar schooling. When, supposedly, all is well for the Know-It-All, events from the past emerge and drama ensues. And where is Severus Snape in all of this? Right smack in the middle, of course! Amidst the turmoil of early adulthood and unrequited feelings, will Severus and Hermione learn to "seize the day"?
AU after HBP, some facts from DH. Mild student-teacher romance. Rated M for later dream sequences, etc. Features some non-explicit HG/DM.
PLEASE read Author's Notes for disclaimers and necessary warnings throughout story.
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I like what I see so far and lookforward to the next chapter. I like how you've portrayed Snape as being completely free of both Dumbledore and Voldemort and not having a clue as to what to do next. I like this new Hermione with passion. Very nice.
Response from ConstantComment (Author of Carpe Diem, Part One)
Thank you and thank you for reviewing! The next is waiting in queue, so it should be through, soon. I'm glad you enjoyed. :) Keep posted!-CC
I liked the dream. Couldn't tell you what it meant, except that drowning in the past part, but I thought it sounded quite dreamlike. Hermione is certainly keeping Severus guessing. She realizes it, of course, and I hope she continues doing it.
Response from ConstantComment (Author of Carpe Diem, Part One)
Thanks! The dream is actually filled with all these metaphors and such, but you'd have to take out a dream dictionary to understand them. LoL. Hermione is a firecracker, for sure. Sev will continually feel like an awkward teenager in her presence... Hehe. I think he's a little creeped out that she can keep up with him. ;)-CC
wonderful update! by the by, what song was she singing? thanks so much
The dream was well done. Hermione woke him up just at the right time, it seems.
I'm curious to see where it's going, now that he knows of her interest in Potions, and has acknowledged her as a person, not just one of the Gryffindor golden trio.
Good chapter. I see Hermione has had an affect on him. I wonder what the next chapter is going to bring.
Look forward to more as ever.
Nessa.
Severus' dream was a doozie. I'm glad Hermione was there to bring him out of it. And deep down on some level, I think he was glad of it, as well.
I enjoyed his reaction to finding out that she had attended Peniche. And her smiles... her smiles and her songs take him back to a happier time.
Very good chapter!
Beth
I hope we get to find out what the song is!Severus does not realioze how much he needs Hermione.Everyone needs to be happy even him.
Good chapter. I liked the way you wrote about Hermione's "calming effect" on him. I could visualize this chapter perfectly.
Livvy
Good chapter! I like the dream. I like her waking him up from it. Doesn't he owe her one for that? Of course, they all 'owe' each other for saving the Wizarding world from Voldemort.
I like their thoughts mixed in with the dialouge, just like we all have that unspoken part of our conversations. Nicely written!
I enjoyed that. Snape is confused, and that makes it fun.
Very interesting. The dream was thought provoking. I'm looking forward to seeing how things play out. Looks like it's going to be a very involved plot...and I love those kind!! Patiently (as much as possible) waiting for next chapter...
I like the sniping, tempered with a little reason from time to time. :)
I really rather enjoy this story. It shows definite promise of a kick-ass plot. Keep up the awesome writing! -Thall.
great update. i see we have ron the prat joining us. thanks so much
Good chapter, you gave us some more information about Hermione's summer, and she got to tease Ron! Looking forward to more.
Poor Snape! By the way I do not, in real life, approve of student/teacher romances, so I am happy to hear I don't have to worry about inapropriate behaviour. I hope!
Thanks for an interesting begining. By the way, I love that tea!
All right, Hermione! You razz Ron! Loved it! (but I am looking forward to more Severus.)
It was a good chapter even though it didn't have Severus.Hope you update soon!
Loved the story and am going to add it to favorites.
i like this. it is fun so far, keep it up!
Her secret is out. She wants to be a Potions mistress. And Severus Snape would be the perfect Potions master to teach her. Simple!
Not so fast... nothing about Severus Snape is ever simple... but it is always interesting.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Beth
Awwww, poor ickle jealous Ronniekins.
It's good to see Hermione finding her own way, whatever the boys might have expected!
I look forward to the 'detention' and maybe Severus can help Hermione into becoming a potions mistress? Hmmm.. *grins evily*
Look foward to the next chapter.
good chapter its making me nervous lol
Your discription of Snape's mindset in the second paragraph is one of the most accurate and best I have read. A part of one line I thought was truly well written was,"He felt immediately mended of all his woes and wretchedness," what a wonderful way to express how a miniscule amout of attraction, affection or kindness can take the rough edges off someones pain and begin the healing process. You have inspired me to continue reading. I had to take a break from reading and reviewing to handle some real life issues and when I came back found it hard to do either (as much as I love ff) because of the quality and lack of updates. I see you have either written or have planned out this story so I will take a chance. Look forward to your next update.
Response from ConstantComment (Author of Carpe Diem, Part One)
Thank you so much!!! It's a mark of my roaring social life that a review makes me glow ;) I'm really glad that you liked the first chapter, and I'm sorry that I haven't updated recently!! It's particularly hard because my school has blocked this website for "adult content". Oh well. If you'd like to check it out on another site (where it is 19 chapters, as of now) then feel free to stop by and leave me a review as lovely as this one!! http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1532029/Thanks again,CC/Ava