Love Untold
Chapter 22 of 27
ConstantCommentHermione Granger returns to Hogwarts for a year of postwar schooling. When, supposedly, all is well for the Know-It-All, events from the past emerge and drama ensues. And where is Severus Snape in all of this? Right smack in the middle, of course! Amidst the turmoil of early adulthood and unrequited feelings, will Severus and Hermione learn to "seize the day"?
AU after HBP, some facts from DH. Mild student-teacher romance. Rated M for later dream sequences, etc. Features some non-explicit HG/DM.
PLEASE read Author's Notes for disclaimers and necessary warnings throughout story.
ReviewedDisclaimer: I stole Jo's characters and a bit of her plot for some not-so-well-intentioned fun. So sue me. But, really, I'd rather you didn't.
WARNING: Lemons afoot! You may or may not leave this page offended. And if you don't, think of it as a 'present' for your lovely reviews. XD
Thanks to ladyinthecloak for her betawork!! :)
Chapter Twenty-Two: Love Untold
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Frankly, Severus Snape was nervous. Not nervous excited, as one gets before a well-matched Quidditch game or before a wedding (although Severus had never had the misfortune of experiencing a wedding from that perspective). Neither was it the nervousness one feels before the first day of school or before public speaking...
No. This was genuine apprehension, which made him want to go 'hug the porcelain,' rather than open the discreet bag on his bedside table.
"Shit."
He was already naked, for Circe's sake!
Several scenarios flew through his conscious, not withholding one headmistress calling upon him for a student's discipline while he was in the throes of very satisfying shag with a virtual female in a virtual world.
He hummed disapprovingly and then waved his wand about, adding several more wards to his chambers and then an extra stinging hex to his bedroom door for good measure.
Finally mustering up the courage...it had taken him about an hour and his toes were getting chilly (after all, he was no Gryffindor)...he practically tore up the bag and dumped the contents in front of him.
Bottled Bliss.
"Shit," he said.
-o-
Again, a familiar setting materialised in front of Severus. He sat against a tree in the same clearing he had so often visited in his dreams. A gentle breeze blew hair about his face and he found that everything was crystal clear in this 'dream'. He could feel and see things he wouldn't normally notice in a regular journey through his subconscious.
"Clever invention, this," he murmured aloud. Turning his head to the right, he spotted her. All the breath seemed to leave his lungs as he looked toward the fountain pond. She was turned away from him, sitting atop the warm slate lip of the mossy fount, her legs dangling in the cool waters. And she was naked. Severus staggered to his feet and leaned on the tree for support, watching her avidly while she lifted her riotous copper curls above her head to reveal the most exquisite back he had ever seen, accentuated by soft curves and lean muscle.
He was reminded briefly of a memory by the side of the lake not three or four months ago, but shook the thought away as she took a clay pitcher in her unoccupied hand and dipped it in the water, proceeding to pour it over her head. The water cascaded and glistened down her back as she did so, and Severus' entire body pulsed with desire and... affection? His chest hurt more than he could ever remember and he felt fantastic...full...seeing her in this simple, gorgeous ritual.
He finally made a step toward her and continued when he realized that he was barefoot and would make no sound. She rubbed at her arms and twisted the long russet locks in a thick rope to rest in front of her left shoulder over what Severus presumed would be a perfect, round, creamy breast. He inched ever closer and he could hear her singing quietly as she went through her ablutions.
Brilliant potions work, he thought not for the first time during this sequence.
Again she took up the clay pitcher, pausing in her song as she submerged it in the water and poured it over herself again.
"You have a beautiful voice," Severus rasped, sounding much creepier than he'd ever meant to. Her head turned toward his voice a fraction, but she only continued to sing as if he'd not said a word.
Finally she placed the pitcher on the side of the pool and slipped quietly into the water, submerging her head fully and coming up for air after pushing off the bottom of the pond forcefully, still facing the statue of Venus that perched in the centre of the pool. "I was not expecting to see you today," she said finally, rubbing her wet arms as a warm breeze blew by, and he felt a sudden jolt of recognition.
He knew that voice.
"I was not expecting to be here, either," he said lamely after he managed to slow his pulse. She sunk under the water and came up for air at the lip of the fount. He closed his eyes tightly, not daring to look at her face and see who she was. "Do you have a towel or a gown?" he asked tentatively.
"I let the air cool my skin."
"Oh. Should I turn around, then?" His eyes were still closed and he received no answer until he heard a small plash on the slate.
She answered in a low voice, "What good would that do, Severus?" His eyes shot open, and he felt as if he'd been punched in the stomach.
There she was, in all her glory. Water rushed down the curves and planes of her body as she stood on the lip of the fountain, her long, dark curls covering her pert breasts from view, but not the apex of her thighs.
He could not breathe. He could not think. There were only two words flitting through is mind at this moment.
Hermione. Beautiful.
Her hips flared out from her waist in a gentle curve, and her legs, although she was relatively short, seemed to go on forever, finally ending with pale, dainty feet and rosy toes. She breathed calmly, not even twitching under his dark gaze.
Severus stepped toward her, warring with his feelings. How did this happen? But he could not deny that this felt incredibly right. She looked down into his face as he reached her. They were nearly on eye level...his eyes reached her nose. She brought cool fingers to his brow, tilting his head up to her, and leaned in to kiss him.
It was chaste, at first. And Severus' arms hovered awkwardly in the air between her waist and his sides as she tilted her head to the side and ran her pink tongue over his lower lip. He groaned, and his hands grabbed at her waist in a vicelike grip, his eyes falling closed. She leaned in toward him, tilting his face even farther back as they changed directions and he tentatively flicked his tongue over hers.
So right.
She claimed his mouth then, showing no mercy, and Severus gave in to her demanding tongue. His desire raced through his veins and he felt weak in the knees, fighting for balance. Slowly, he mapped her back and waist and buttocks with his hands, pulling her against him as he grasped the back of her upper thighs. She sighed and hooked her arms around his neck, then hoisted her naked legs around his waist, and he staggered backward a few paces. Her body hummed with laughter, and she nuzzled his nose as he regained his footing.
"Wicked nymph," he muttered between kisses and her arms tightened around his neck.
He slowly lowered her to the ground under a willow, kneeling a bit ungracefully and laying her in the plush, green grass. Her eyes were dancing with light and her lips were bruised from frantic kissing. She played absently with a curl behind her ear, and her breasts rose up and down with her panting. He leaned on his left forearm and placed his right hand over her tummy, spreading his shaking fingers. Her breath hitched as his hand travelled over her hip and then rested over the tight curls between her thighs. He lowered his face over hers and kissed her soundly.
"Wicked nymph," he whispered again, his voice quivering when he broke free of her moist lips.
"Severus..." she moaned and twisted a fist in his shirt when he finally slipped a finger inside.
Soon after, she had stripped him of his clothes in silent and rushed hunger and had pushed his shoulders into the grass, straddling him and dipping her face back to his, still trembling in the glow of her first orgasm in his arms. She trailed wet kisses down his chest, dipping her tongue in his navel when she passed it, which released a rather startled grunt from her paramour. She fumbled briefly with the button of his khakis. Soon he was free of all clothing, and suddenly she was straddling his shins and taking his penis in hand, stroking up and down lazily as his fingers twitched restlessly at his sides. Severus closed his eyes and bucked when her grip tightened, her bum lifting off his legs and a cool breath ghosting over his already weeping cock. And he was in her mouth, and she licked and sucked and did all sorts of unmentionable, beautifully unmentionable things to him until he was whimpering in torture.
It was then that she took him all the way in, bottoming out against the back of her throat and sucking hard. And, of course, he came so hard, bucking and holding his breath in a silence groan as he spent himself between her pink lips.
Slowly she let go of him, crawling back up his body and lightly stroking his sensitized skin as he clung to her and kissed every inch of her face. They kissed languidly until he felt a stirring again...Again!?...in his groin and she felt it, stroking him back to life and sinking down onto him. Slowly she rotated her hips, mewling when he grasped her bum, then her hips, and then her breasts.
Gods, she's breathtaking, he thought fiercely. And then he lost all clear train of thought. Soon, they were both gasping, clutching frantically at each other's bodies, and he flipped her over, taking her knees over the crooks of his arms and pounding into her.
"Say it," he gasped, "Say my name!"
"Severus! Oh, God, Severus..."
"Say you're mine!"
"I'm yours," she breathed.
They came together and, sweating, rolled over in the grass. She cradled him in her arms, and he clung to her for dear life, hoping that this dream would never end.
"Sing for me," he said a little while after. She smiled against his hair as he curled in towards her, snuggling his nose into the valley between her breasts and laying a kiss there. She wove her fingers into his hair, scratching lazily at the base of his skull. "Please..." He dared not say her name.
She took a breath, pausing in indecision, but he pulled her closer and she rose up on an elbow. He rolled onto his back, still keeping a hand around her waist, feeling her ribs expand as she began to sing:
"When my love and I parted, the wind blew cold
When my love and I parted, of love untold
Though my heart was crying, 'Love, come with me!'
I turned my face from him and sought the sea
When my love and I parted, we shed no tears
For we knew that between us lay weary years.
A bird was singing on a tree
And a gleam of sunlight lay on the sea.
Parting is bitter and weeping, vain.
But all true lovers will meet again
For no fate can sever my love from me
For his heart is a river and mine, the sea..."
-o-
Severus awoke as the first stretches of light pierced through the gossamer curtains in his bedroom window, his body still slick and warm from the potion's effects.
"I had no choice but to continue with the dream," he whispered to the room, trying desperately not to feel guilty.
It didn't work.
Today was Saturday, at least, so he could sulk in bed all day.
No, wait. It was Valentine's Day. Chaperoning. Again.
"Shit."
A/N: WHEW! Well, I'm sure that was a bit of a surprise (I wasn't sure I could be that raunchy), but if you skim over last chapter, you might just get the vague idea that Sevvie's in a 'sex shoppe'. This is the result. Obviously.
Here is my explanation of the product Sev uses: Bottled Bliss "rifles" through your subconscious, taking the thing you want most (emotionally) and morphing it into fantasy that will either leave you completely satisfied or guilty. Of course Sev would choose the latter...what's one more thing to beat yourself up about? I hope this makes sense.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Carpe Diem, Part One
398 Reviews | 5.08/10 Average
Great job! I really enjoyed this fic. Not to mention you have me craving CC tea! lol
I loved this story. It was soo sweet.Severus is so cute. Although I can't say I'm not the teensiest bit disappointed that Hermione and Snape didn't get together in the end up. It would be absolutely amazing if you could finish Part Two. I will definitely keep my eye out for that.
What a lovely story! Thanks so much for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your work!
Anonymous
I love the story! When are you going to post the sequel?
Author's Response: Started posting today! It'll be slow in coming, though.
Makes me want to keep reading and thats a good thing ;) I REALLY wish I could write this good! I'm stuck with just reading them, which... is better that not reading them at all...
Sorry to only review at the "end." Brilliantly handled through this story. Can't wait to see the results of his time waiting for her!
i do like that ron is still a jerk but a perceptive jerk. i very much look forward to the sequel as this possesiveness of draco's really has me worried. great story. thanks and mega mucho smoochies
Response from ConstantComment (Author of Carpe Diem, Part One)
thank you, kimjo! :) hermione will be rid of Draco in the next part, although we'll hear from him once or twice. It'll be another thing that Hermione needs to deal with... but I think she'll succeed! *glompsyou*
Wonderful story and I can't wait for the sequel. Good luck in college.
Response from ConstantComment (Author of Carpe Diem, Part One)
Thank you and thank you! :)
Please, for the love of all that is holy, continue with this and don't leave me hanging. This needs to be wrapped up or I will absolutely burst. My only critique is that in one chapter Draco mentioned he would eat ice cream in twenty or eighty degrees.... Just remember they're brits, eh? Don't think they use Fherenhiet. Just a little nitpick, I might be wrong. Otherwise, seriously great job, please keep going.
Response from ConstantComment (Author of Carpe Diem, Part One)
Hahaha, you're right! That's interesting that the mods didn't catch it. ;) Thanks for letting me know... I'll go see about fixing that. Since I'm American I don't automatically think of that sort of thing. Poor Draco in 80 degrees Celsius. LOL.
So hurry up with the sequel already! ^_^
Response from ConstantComment (Author of Carpe Diem, Part One)
*flails* I's hurrying!
It's sad to see this one end, but WOW what a journey. I applaud you and can't wait to see the sequel.Much Love,Mistress Cosmos
Response from ConstantComment (Author of Carpe Diem, Part One)
Thank you! I agree, it was quite an epic and stressful journey for me as well. You and I both are looking forward to the sequel. ^__^ -CC
I was hoping this would've turned out with Hermione and Severus getting together. Perhaps the sequel?
Response from ConstantComment (Author of Carpe Diem, Part One)
Most definitely. If you read my authors notes throughout the story, you'll find I have several hints as well as disclaimers that Severus and Hermione do not get together in this part of the story, but DO in the sequel. :)
Well, I'm seeing a light at the end of the tunnel, knowing you plan a sequel. I think Hermione and Severus will only appreciate each other more because of the lengthy separation. I love the man-to-man talk with Ron at the end. There's too much Ron bashing in fanfic for the sake of bringing Hermione and Severus together. You portrayed him as a mature, caring friend and the bright strategist we all know he's capable of being.When all is said and done, cc, this was a well written, always entertaining story. Bravo.
Response from ConstantComment (Author of Carpe Diem, Part One)
Thank you, very much. Glad you can see the silver lining. I tried to do Ron justice, because, man, he was such a prat in the beginning. He needed to grow as a character. :)
Well at least he knows and it was nice unexpected thinng to Have Ron come and talk some sense into him. The idea of Hermione off with Draco for two years turns my stomach. Besides the fact that Draco loves her and she will break his heart won't she. I hope since the next Story will be in France that it won't be two years in between. LOLExcelent story and I look forward to more.
Response from ConstantComment (Author of Carpe Diem, Part One)
There will be two years between their meeting, but when they get together again it'll be like those two years never happened. Don't you worry! :D Glad you liked Ron. <3
This is getting to far from Severus and Hermione, having her have sex with Draco is horrible. Sorry this is freaking me out. If this is a SSHG story It getting way too of track.
I may ot liekt he content and I understand good writers can take you for en emotion ride and you have done very well. Good writing.
Sorry can't read Draco and Hermione
Response from gersknightlady (Reviewer)
sorry I was in a mood last night, you really have done such a great job with this story. Not all stories can be for everyone. Draco is not my cup of tea but I will keep reading looking for the HGSS stuff. I love them they are my ship. The SS HG stuff you wrote was abosolutely wonderful and I am amazed at how varried the story is. Good work!!!
Response from ConstantComment (Author of Carpe Diem, Part One)
It's alright, no worries. I get this kind of stuff all the time with many of my stories, and I understand the deal with this being a certain ship that happens to semi-ship another ship and that can be a disaster. It's supposed to be a disaster--Draco and Hermione... anyway, glad you're still sticking with me. There isn't any explicit Draco/Hermione for the rest of the story, and I specifically kept the D/Hr a little less... descriptive so I wouldn't lose too many followers. You'll enjoy Part, Two. I promise.
Dreams are fine but I look forward to reality, well crafted exciting but not reality :)
ugh, not enough Severus and Hermione...this is a well written story I just am not fond of the chapters where they hardely interact. I'm looking forward to more. great job
That's an interesting ending, and I love Ron coming along to bully Snape out of drunken funk. :)
Response from ConstantComment (Author of Carpe Diem, Part One)
Hehehe, for some reason, in another life I think they would've made great friends. I'm weird, I know. You'll see more of their banter when the sequel is published! -CC
Love it when he shows concern for her.
Oh another chapter I forgot to say I loved the list of reigndeer. Made me laugh aloud. Thats was hysterical.
Ahh, Luna is a gem. :)
Very good chapter, I look forward to her detention :)
much too short, very good
Very nice interaction look forward to more
Gosh a hard horrible thing for him to deal with, good writing