pointless,to tell you frankly.
Better luck next time!

This had me chuckling out loud. It perfectly follows the typical model of Hermione finding Ron in bed with Lavender. Ah, brilliant.

That's an original idea. Very good

Lol.  Great punchline. And this was the best line of them all: The Crumple-Horned Snorkack made you do it, right? Hah hah!

Lol.  Great punchline. And this was the best line of them all: The Crumple-Horned Snorkack made you do it, right? Hah hah!

LOL I bet she has a surprise for him as well. Brilliant, bravo dear. 

ROTFL I love the twist on this one. What a wonderfully sneaky way to surprise Hermione. The twins definitely rubbed off on Ron. :)

Oh, what a great surprise!  And I assume there was cake.A very good twist on the prompt!

Where they naked or did they have the covers pulled up under their chins?  Because I can't see her getting mad over them laying there in their clothes probably not doing anything.  Unless he was on top or bottom for that matter.  Oh my, I just love a story that makes me think.  Thank you.  Very well done.

Hee! I think this Hermione is the jealous sort, totally disregarding the lack of nudity. They were probably just sitting there next to each other too, not doing anything.Cute. :D

Very good and very unexpected. I absolutely didn't that one coming. Really excellent.

Words cannot express what I would do to my husband if he should *ever* feel that is an appropriate way to trick me into a surprise.I think I am going to go smack him so in case he ever does think that. LOL.But it is funny!

Too funny, trust Ron to surprise Hermione this way. *Wonders if Luna will overlook being called loony* I would still hex him into next week for it, lol.

short, sweet, and very amusing:)

Oh my, you had me there!  Very funny, well done :-)

Cute - I got a good laugh out of it!

I love it!  What a bizzare way to surprise someone on her birthday.  I like that you took a prompt that was almost destined to break them up and made it not do that. 

Very unexpected!  Very cute story :)

That was HYSTERICAL!! Sad to say, I can picture that sort of scenerio taking place with my husband. He get odd ideas every so often when he tries to be sneaky.

PRECIOUS!!  Wonderful surprise!  :-) 

*gigglesnort*  This story is like Luna: short, sweet, a little odd, and definitely unexpected.  Nice one!

 Oh this is really funny!

Brilliant! I wonder if Hermione can forgive him for surprizing her like that...

ROFLMAO I did NOT see that coming.  Way to go!

tee hee. very clever and funny.