Second Best

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Poetry/Prose Hogwarts Castle 15 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Aberforth Dumbledore, the brother of esteemed Albus Dumbledore, was always treated less special than his brother.

Chapters (1)

Chapter 1: Forever

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10/10

Poor bloke. :) Nicely done.

10/10

Oh how sad! reminds me of a situation in my extended family. a pity. Every child is special.

0/10

A lot of people feel that way. Great poem.

10/10

Oh, I like this!! Any chance you'll keep going on this theme?

Response from Griffins Calling (Author of Second Best)

If by theme, you mean doing Dumbledore's family, I do.If by theme, you mean cinquains, I intend to do that too!Thanks :)

10/10

Oh, this is poignant in such a short space. You capture Aberforth's character so well, and I think it also speaks to so many people - great work!

10/10

Very sad. It's easy to turn Aberforth into a buffoon -- even Dumbledore did. Nice job.

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