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Burning Love

StormySkize

55 Reviews | 4.98/10 (55 Ratings, 0 Likes, 9 Favorites )

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Hermione Granger Severus Snape

It's not easy living without magic, as Severus Snape learns when Hermione asks him to do her a favour.

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StormySkize

Member Since 2005 | 13 Stories | Favorited by 172 | 431 Reviews Written | 998 Review Responses

I am in my late 50's and I didn't even start reading Harry Potter until after the third book came out. My granddaughter got me 'hooked on Potter,' and while surfing the net one day, I found a fanfiction site. That was it! My first story, "Renaissance," was published on Ashwinder a month later and I've been writing ever since. I am primarily a HG/SS shipper, but I also enjoy reading and writing RL/SS. I live in Tampa, Florida with my wonderfully adoring and supportive husband, and three completely spoiled cats. (Kallie, Mysha, and Smudge {who was the inspiration for the cat that Severus gives Hermione in my story "Renaissance."}) I'm always happy to correspond with my readers and I answer ALL reviews. I'm always looking for plot-bunnies, so feel free to throw some ideas out.

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Reviews for Burning Love

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0/10

WriterMerrin

Oh, I love it! Hermione is such a trooper to live like a muggle. It's totally love for both of them :)

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

She would, wouldn't she? I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the great review.

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Lariope

Very nice--I do love a piece that can turn on its head from whimsical to serious and back--nicely done. :)

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much.

9/10

Anonymous

Fantastic! "Outrageously pleased." Yes, I could definitely see him being smug about accomplishing something, anything! Although of course, he had to grumble as he did it the non-magical way. That goes without saying. What's a Snape without the grumble? Good work!

Author's Response:

Oh, yes ... smug is the perfect description of Severus in this situation.

Thanks for the great review.

9/10

sinbad

Cute, poor Severus is having a time of it isn't he? Hopefully the next 40 yrs will go quick for them.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Deep down inside, I think he's enjoying himself.Thanks for the review.

8/10

siriussnape

cute story! funny too good write

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Thanks so much.

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KarenDetroit

That was cute. Thank you, just in time for Memorial Day!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Oh, the timing was purely coincidental, but thanks!

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slasher454

Lol! Well done :)

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Glad you got a chuckle. Thanks so much.

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inthedesk

You did it again. This is hysterical. You're creative and have a wicked sense of humor. Well done.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I did it again? (looking around furtively) I thought this was anonymous??I'm glad you liked it anyway.Thanks for the great comments.

10/10

StormySkize

Oh, Severus is so typically male, isn't he?

Response from StormySkize (Reviewer)

He certainly is. Thanks for the review.

0/10

Mint Stick

Very cute! Severus is entirely too adorable when acting all huffy. ;-) And I do like how Hermione's given up her magic as well, just to make it easier for him to deal with it.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I could just picture him stomping around, all put upon. And I could also picture the self-satisfied smirk when he succeeded.Thanks for the nice review.

9/10

bellarossi

So cute. :] I particularly like the ending with the 'insane megolomaniac/manipulative old fool' part. Well done!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Thanks a lot!

9/10

Maggie

I know it's completely unrelated, but all I could think of was the comic Crankshaft and his grill....

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I don't think I've ever seen that comic. I certainly didn't mean to steal anyone's idea.

0/10

Angel Prince

Very nice! Love the apron, too funny.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I just couldn't resist - glad you liked it. Thanks.

10/10

klschmidt

Deee-lightful. (pun intended!) Excellent entry. :-D

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the great review (even the pun!). And thanks for the stars.

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septentrion

Ah, but Severus is really trying, and it's sweet of Hermione to have put her wand away as well.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I think Severus might have wrestled her wand away from her if she hadn't ... lolThanks for the great review.

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morgaine_dulac

Hihi, I enjoyed this one immensly. So typical male, ehm, wizard, I mean ;-)

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I guess even wizards are males first. Glad you liked. Thanks a bunch.

10/10

kittylefish

this was very funny and sweet. : )

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Glad you liked it. Thanks for the stars!

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pookah

Cute! This is funny and cute. Thanks for sharing it with us, I enjoyed seeing Severus whinging about not having magic, and I liked Hermione's realization that he did something, and felt good about it, because she asked him to.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Thanks for the great review!

10/10

karelia

Aw, that is totally cute!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I totally thank you.

0/10

nightshift

Obviously Hermione has learned the virtues of positive reinforcement.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I'm sure it has other rewards as well. Thanks a bunch.

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lyn_f

That is just too too cute!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Aw ... I hope it's not too cute! Thanks so much.

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ChrissyJones

This was hilarious and so sweet!!! I applaud you for this! Standing ovation! I love how you weaved in all the necessary details without making too big a deal out of them. Everything was written perfectly!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Wow ... what a great review. Thanks a lot!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Adorable. And just like a man to not remember where anything is. hahaha!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks a lot!

9/10

FlittterKat

That was so sweet. Enjoyed your story and hope to read more of your work soon.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Thanks so much!

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Thanks so much!

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snapeygirl

HAHAHAHAHA!!!I could just picture Severus lighting is nose on fire.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Me, too! Thanks for reading.

Response from StormySkize (Author of Burning Love)

Me, too! Thanks for reading.

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