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Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge On the Beach
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On the Beach

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On the Beach

diana_hawthorne

29 Reviews   |   29 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Romance Snapshot Art Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 85 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy

Art: A snapshot of Lucius's and Hermione's vacation on the beach.

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Chapter 1: On the Beach


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0/10

rhiannonofthemoon

Looks like they are having a blast!  I like how they are off-center - makes the photo seem more real, somehow.  Boy does Lucius look older than her.  S'ok - if she finds a younger man, I'll console him!

0/10

debjunk

It's a good thing they found each other.  They seem quite happy.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

They sure do look like they are having a good time.  I wonder why Lucius let his hair get so dark, it looks good on him and is it shorter too.  Awesome.

0/10

phoenix

very cute. great use of photos

10/10

Maddie

Wow, great photo manip. Looks real life.

0/10

Elise_Wanderer

Oh, that's adorable!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I love the pix, they look like they are having a great time but whoever took the pix is like me and can't center very well. lol

10/10

SS Lupin

So adorable :D

9/10

Shadow

This give such an impression of them just having fun and being free. Wonderful!

10/10

beaweasley2

How adorable. It' looks like a snaphot! Love it

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

Thanks!  I'm glad you like it!

10/10

MollysSister

Mr. Isaac looks like he is smiling inspite of himself! Bravo!

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

Thanks for your review!

0/10

jcrowell

Great job!  I really like it!

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

Thank you!

0/10

kimbee73

They seem to be having a great time. Nice picture!

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

I know - I wish I was there with them - or, better yet, there instead of Hermione!Thanks for the review!

0/10

Deavlynn

Wow - that's incredible for doing it in Paint!  That must have been really frustraiting.  God Bless Adobe Photoshop.  :)Nice work.

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

Thanks - it took ages!  Unfortunately, my laptop at school doesn't have Photoshop (my home computer does), but I didn't have access to my home computer and I didn't want to wait - so I did the best I could.I'm glad you liked it!

0/10

elsolel

I like the picture, they both look like they are having fun. But I have one little nitpick - Lucius's hair.

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

His hair colour is a result of my school blocking access to most of the photo-editing software on the web (they've even blocked lunapic.com! ), and I just could not for the life of me figure out how to make him a blond just using Microsoft Paint.Thank you for your review!

Response from elsolel (Reviewer)

that makes sense.  I don't think that paint would lead to a very good hair color change, so thanks for going for realistic versus the YELLOW, of paint, or what ever it might have had.

10/10

snitchette

Not only did he nedd a change of scenery but apparently a change of hair color as well. Nice picture.

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

Of course - he was always identified by his hair colour and because he wanted to change his life, he started with his hair!  No, really, it's because I didn't have access to much photo-editing software because my school has blocked it (they've even blocked lunapic.com! ), and I just could not for the life of me figure out how to give him blond hair just using Microsoft Paint.Thanks for your review!

10/10

pookah

What a charming picture.  Had no idea that it was the same actor as in the HP movies untill I read the reviews. (I'm terrible at faces)  He looks so nice!  they both look so happy, but the idea of Hermione and Lucius together creeps me out.  Pic is a great answer to that prompt, though.  Well chosen pics nicely manipulated. 

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

To be honest, Hermione and Lucius together somewhat creeps me out as well, but I had stumbled across these pics and was inspired to respond to the prompt.Thank you for your review!

0/10

klschmidt

Great job - but I do like Lucius with the blond hair!  (My reaction after OOTP movie - let's have an orgy and invite Jason.  Tell him to bring the wig! hahahaha)  :-D

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

I like him as a blond, too, but with my limited access to photo-editing software while I'm at school (because they've blocked most photo-editing sites ) I couldn't change the hair colour - I also couldn't find a picture of Jason Isaacs as a blond smiling, so that somewhat limited my options.

Response from klschmidt (Reviewer)

Oh, how true.  Lucius doesn't smile much, does he?  ;-)

0/10

ChrissyJones

This was really cute! I love how she's laughing, and that look on his face...!

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

Me too!  Thank you for reviewing!

0/10

tinytexans

Very nice. If I had Lucius to myself on the beach I'd be grinning like a fool too!!

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

I would be too - I envy Hermione in this picture!  Thanks for the review!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

It's cute. Good work. :)

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

Thanks!

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StormySkize

I probably wouldn't have recognised the man as Lucius -- just goes to show you how good the make-up artists are on the movies! Now, I'll try to 'see' the picture as Lucius in his Muggle disguise.Really good job with the manip, though.

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

I've actually seen quite a lot of movies (besides HP) with Jason Isaacs but for the longest time never put two and two together and realised that he played Lucius.  Silly me!Thanks for the review!

10/10

karelia

Lovely. Shows they're both enjoying the vacation.

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

I would be too if I was on vacation with Lucius!  Thanks for your review!

0/10

sunny33

looks so natural !

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of On the Beach)

Thank you - it took quite a lot of time before I was satisfied with the result.

9/10

diana_hawthorne

Wow, that looks really cool!  Great job!

Response from diana_hawthorne (Reviewer)

Thanks!

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