Whoa ... that was very strange.

That was a hell of an impact!  Well done :)

Oh! You sure did make a big bang with such a little bomb.  This is going to stay with me a long, long time...

ewwww, gross. *wrinkles nose* you did a very good job of managing to tell an entire story in very few words. but - must go find something fluffy now to rinse out my brain.

Ewwwweee! Ok.

splat! not a bad tale for so few words.

This was as good as the vampire story I was hoping for when I saw the title.