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Chapter 15 of 17
diana_hawthorneChapter Fourteen: June 1956
Marlene received her Hogwarts letter in June, and straight away Minerva and Albus took their daughter to Diagon Alley to get her school supplies. As Minerva and Albus lived at Hogwarts, Marlene decided not to get an owl as her pet, but a cat – a ginger tabby that she named Dinah, after Alice’s cat in Alice in Wonderland.
One of their last stops was at Ollivander’s Wand Shoppe. Ollivander had always disturbed Minerva – he seemed to know so much more than he let on.
“Ah, Lily McGonagall,” he said to Marlene. “I expect great things from you. I remember when your mother came in here, so many years ago,” he nodded to Minerva, “Mahogany, twelve inches, with a core of a unicorn hair. Good for Transfiguration, obviously,” he said, his shiny silver eyes regarding Minerva. He turned his attention back to Marlene.
“Try this one. Willow, with a unicorn hair core.” She picked it up, and he snatched it out of her hand immediately. “Rosewood with phoenix feather,” he said, placing it in her hand. Again, he snatched it out of her hand. “Mahogany with a phoenix feather,” he said. Once more, the wand was taken out of her hand. “Elder wood with a unicorn tail hair,” he said, and sparks shot out the end of her wand, a warm feeling spreading throughout her body. “That’s the one,” he said.
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Minerva beamed proudly at her daughter. They paid for the wand and left the shop. Albus was waiting for them, holding their purchases at Florean Fortescue’s Ice Cream Parlour.
“I got my wand, Daddy,” Marlene said proudly, taking it out for him to see. “Ten and a half inches, elder wood, with a unicorn tail hair,” she said.
He examined it. “Congratulations, my dear,” he said, giving her a kiss on her forehead. “Now, what type of ice cream would you like?” he asked her.
“Ooh, chocolate!” she exclaimed. Albus smiled at her. “All right. And Minerva?” he asked, smiling at his wife.
“Vanilla, please, Albus,” she said. He stood up.
“I’ll get the ice cream,” he said and went inside. A few minutes later, he emerged, three bowls of ice cream floating in front of him. He set them down on the table, and the Dumbledores enjoyed their ice cream.
In the past year, Minerva had researched ancient protection spells that would keep her daughter safe from the wrath of Colleen. She finally found a series of spells and, with both Marlene’s and Albus’s consent, she performed them. These spells would protect Marlene from anything that Colleen would attempt to do to her. So at least her daughter was safe.
In August, the school was notified that Albert would not be attending Hogwarts that year; rather, he would be attending Durmstrang. Colleen and her new husband, Evan Travers, had relocated to Bulgaria, where Durmstrang was located. Marlene was devastated – she missed Albert, missed the brother that she had had for such a short period of time.
Marlene tried to write to him, but the letter was brought back by the owl she had sent the letter with. Albus suggested that she use Fawkes, but Fawkes was unable to deliver the letter too. She was utterly crushed. Minerva and Albus tried to comfort her, but it was to no avail – she refused to talk about it.
September came all too soon, and Marlene began school. Minerva attended the Sorting Feast and was so proud when her daughter was sorted into Gryffindor. Marlene was an excellent student, particularly excelling at Transfiguration. She was her parents’ daughter, after all.
In December, the Headmaster of Hogwarts, Armando Dippet, died as the result of pneumonia. Albus, as the Deputy Headmaster, became the new Headmaster, and Minerva applied for the positions of Deputy Headmistress, Head of Gryffindor House, and Professor of Transfiguration. As Albus had a conflict of interest in her hiring, Minerva had to be approved by the Board of Governors, which she was. Minerva began in the second week of December. It was difficult at first for Marlene to adjust to calling her mother “Professor McGonagall”, but she managed. She loved having her mother as a professor, as she was a good and fair teacher.
Minerva settled into life as a member of the Hogwarts staff quite nicely. Some of her old school friends – Pomona Sprout and Rolanda Hooch – had also begun teaching at Hogwarts. And, of course, she worked very closely with her husband, which was wonderful.
While she and Albus did not always agree and had quite a few arguments, they loved and respected each other, so they worked well together. It was wonderful, and all of them were happy. The world was at peace, and so were they – at least for now.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Lily Marlene
136 Reviews | 4.25/10 Average
Oh, this is such a tragic ending. I am still shocked that Lily was killed by the boy who everyone thought was Albus' son! But then I suppose the bitterness of the boy's mother, her anger and hatred simmered and grew into posion, and warped her son.
I've enjoyed this story, and I found it intriguing and heartwarming at times. Even ruffled my feathers more than once - a sign that I even got into it. Well done.
This was such a sad story but I saw it through to the end. Thanks so much!
Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)
Thank you so much for seeing it through! Sorry the ending was so sad.
Oh my what a predicament! Albus wants to protect his family and well hurt them at the same time. What a Catch-22 he is in. And we already know what happens to Marlene. Poor Minerva, she is in for a world of hurt.
Poor Albus. It's amazing how much wisdom you accumulate over the years and clearly had to learn from the bad as well as the good.
Well, he couldn't have asked for anything easier, could he? She just handed him what he wanted. At least he and Minerva are now free to be together.
Glad to see he got to the bottom of it. Though I do worry about his statement about not leaving her again. He has quite the mess in his family waiting for him. Nothing like a meddling mother.
Good job, Albus. You are halfway there. Now he just has to be on guard while confronting Alastor. And when he learns it was his mother's idea... That's going to be a hard one.
Good job, Fawkes. Now to see if he can get to the bottom of the enchantment.
Oh, Alastor you bad man. I can't believe he would do that. And Kendra, you bad woman. I curse you. At least there is Fawkes who will hopefully wake Albus from his stupor.
Interesting that Fawkes would seek them out on his own. Then again,
Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)
es are quite intelligent and probably know more than their masters sometimes. I hope that Minerva doesn't stay in seclusion too long.
Oh, poor both of them. And Moody, well, still not happy with him. Better be a darn good explanation for that. And for him talking Albus into getting married so quickly. Poor Minerva left all alone during this time. *sniff*
Oh what a horrible blow to a new mother. She really should have paid more attention to the wizarding world, though Poppy really should be flogged for not filling her in on Albus's marriage. And if it was Alastor letting the cat out of the bag like that... Well, I have a few things to say about that, too. LOL
Oh, Minerva. What will happen when Albus finds out? It really is a compelling story and nice to see something featuring the older professors and such when they were younger.
Oh, poor Minerva. One moment of happiness and then being lost like that. I hope that someone will come looking for her.
Oh, what a horrible start, but it seems to ring so true that Minerva would have once had a family and that something horrible had to have happened to them. I look forward to journeying back to the past and happier days.
very interesting. what a charming woman Colleen is. and Kendra is even more delightful. (Almost as nice as Sirius's mom, as Harry would say.)Well that was a surprise. thanks for the update!
OH, what a nasty piece of work she turned out to be!
Don't know how I missed this one before, but it explains a lot!
Considering that she's remarried, why is Albus paying alimony, anyway? Child support - yes, but not alimony.
Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)
Albus hadn't known that she had remarried, so that's why he was still paying alimony.Thanks for the review!
Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)
Albus hadn't known that she had remarried, so that's why he was still paying alimony.Thanks for the review!
Wow here if you remarry you don't get alimony anymore. Wizarding ways sure are different. I want to live there. lol Though I'm not sure I like Colleen even more now. She is becoming more of a b...h. I hope Albert doesn't become like her. I really enjoy reading your story.
Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)
You don't get alimony if you remarry here either - but Albus didn't know that she had remarried - therein lies the problem.
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
Ah, I see. Colleen is pretty smart, then.
Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)
You don't get alimony if you remarry here either - but Albus didn't know that she had remarried - therein lies the problem.
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
Ah, I see. Colleen is pretty smart, then.
Does Albert belong to Albus or Travers? Great story, I like this non all knowing Dumbledore.
Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)
Glad you like it, dear! Thanks for your review!
Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)
Glad you like it, dear! Thanks for your review!
Haha! How surprising. lol
Well, that is resolved, kind of.
They may be awake, but they are definitely dreaming. Albus has a wife. And another child. His life is seriously screwed up.
I wish he'd have done something... more to Moody. LOLNow I wonder what he's going to do about his wife and child. :( Tough subject.
Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)
The next chapter reveals what happens between Albus, Colleen, and their son. And believe me, it's not what you'd expect.Thanks for the review!
Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)
The next chapter reveals what happens between Albus, Colleen, and their son. And believe me, it's not what you'd expect.Thanks for the review!