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Malfoy Manor Gravity
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Gravity

1: Prologue

2: One

3: Two

4: Three

5: Four

Gravity

floorcoaster

16 Reviews   |   16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 26 Favorites )

Angst Romance Malfoy Manor 35,826 Words 5 Chapters WIP
Draco Malfoy Hermione Granger

It's about arranging stacks of books, wall colours, and jumping off a cliff.

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Chapters (5)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: One

Chapter 3: Two

Chapter 4: Three

Chapter 5: Four


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floorcoaster

Member Since 2007  |  6 Stories  |  Favorited by 54  |  28 Reviews Written  |  248 Review Responses

I love writing! And Harry Potter! :D

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0/10

wywrite

Holy Cow!  What a wonderful sense of confusion you've put into Draco.It's nice to read a likable Pansy, also.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

Thank you! I'm glad you're liking so far! And I'm pleased you liked Pansy! :)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

Thank you! I'm glad you're liking so far! And I'm pleased you liked Pansy! :)

0/10

mock_turtle

ooooohhh...frustration!  this is good writing.  I hope they resolve their issues sometime in the next decade.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

LOL - I can assure you, they do. Thanks for the review! :D

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

LOL - I can assure you, they do. Thanks for the review! :D

10/10

MollysSister

Holy cliff hanger. Okay maybe its not a cliff hanger per say but it is a dramatic revelation at the ending of a chapter. Does that sort of thing have a name?thank heavens for Pansy, both for Ron and for Draco, hey and for me. Moi because I secretly love Ron & Pansy or Harry & Pansy. Ron because he needs the love a worthy witch and Draco because he needs a life long friend to tell him to get his head out of his ass. My most favorite line? he’d be declared a holy saint before he went willingly

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

I don't honestly know about the dramatic-relevation-ending thing. Ooh, ooh! I love Pansy with Ron or Harry too! Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it. :D

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

I don't honestly know about the dramatic-relevation-ending thing. Ooh, ooh! I love Pansy with Ron or Harry too! Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it. :D

0/10

sunny33

He almost got there, one day he will admit he has already fallen for her, and catch up with nearly everyone else who has already figured it out!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

LOL - you're so right. Thanks for the review!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

LOL - you're so right. Thanks for the review!

10/10

MollysSister

Thank goodness for magic cleaning up the aftermath of a paint war. I was flinching thinking about how horrible that would be "the muggle" way. What the hell is up with Hermione? She is playing mental torment games with poor Draco. Make her stop.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

Wow, yeah. That wouldn't have been... quite the mess! Thanks for reading and reviewing. As for Hermione... yeah. She's got her own mental things going on. :)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

Wow, yeah. That wouldn't have been... quite the mess! Thanks for reading and reviewing. As for Hermione... yeah. She's got her own mental things going on. :)

10/10

the izz

Your story is so lovely and nuanced. It is simultainusly original and very true.I can't wait for the bext chapter. You should be proud.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

Wow, thank you! This means more to me than you can know! I am very proud of this story, in part because I have learned so much about writing through this process. Thanks again!

10/10

MollysSister

Holy long ass chapter bat girl!!! Will they all be 10k from now on?I pledge my eternal fangirl love to you for showing us the paint samples!! It was like HGTV porn and I loved it. Will they magic the paint on the walls or do it the muggle way. HEY I make notes on my garden every year. Its called a garden journal and you are not to mock Draco. He is being a good gardner, not an obsessive geek. Unless I am an obsessive person? NAH!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

LOL! You seriously always crack me up. For the most part, these chapters will be loooooong. Oh man, the paint samples were too much fun! LOL. And I don't want to spoil the painting part, so you'll just have to wait and see how they do it. Althought I will tell you that I can't imagine magical painting being too much ... fun. ??Of course Draco is being a good gardner! He just also has obsessive tendencies (you may have noticed the thing with the books?). So he's an obsessive gardner. LOL. :)

0/10

sunny33

Nice insights into Draco's inner man

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

Thank you!

0/10

sunny33

I like the way you have drawn the characters and the relationships. Hermione seems to fancy him.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

Thank you! And nicely spotted! I appreciate the review!

9/10

Anonymous

Ah, colour names. Always a little barmy, aren't they. No wonder Draco would rather just have bare walls!

Head-banging = rather funny, too!

Author's Response: Thanks! For everything! :)

10/10

Muggline

Ooooh, this is beautiful! I hope there will be another chapter soon...

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

Thank you very much! I hope so too! :D

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sunny33

Nothing like a good paint fight to make things heat up LOL :)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

Indeed! LOL! :) Thanks for the review!

10/10

Muggline

Argh – Men! They CAN be really stupid sometimes...

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

LOL. so true! :) Thanks for the review!

0/10

mock_turtle

reading this is sort of like eating custard--sweet, creamy, and meant to be savored slowly.  I really like that bit about tiny events being life-changing.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

Thank you! That's such a lovely thing to say. I'm really pleased you're enjoying this!

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mock_turtle

one bit of confusion--where are draco's apparition boundaries?  because I thought I read at the beginning of this story that there was quite an expansive anti-apparition jinx around the house, and yet hermione apparated just outside the front doorstep.

is this story finished...?  it's so open ended...  I do love it.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

OOh, nice catch! I didn't go into the details on the wards, but certain people are granted access to his property, Hermione included.Nope, this story is just getting started! The next chapter is in the queue, and it will be 9 total. Hope to see you back! :)

0/10

mock_turtle

I like the description of a friend as a person who'd give you the bigger piece of cake.  it feels right.

and just by the way, i am impressed with draco's ability to grow avocados in scotland, warming charms be damned.I do not have a ginny so my walls are white.  you have a way with words.  and the bit where friends are a bonus...draco has turned out rather philosophical."For example, an uninterrupted lift could go from the entrance level of the Ministry of Magic to halfway between the third and fourth levels in six and a half seconds, if the journey was not interrupted"  this sentence is slightly awkward ;)"I cannot buy another book until I have read all the ones I already have. I made a deal with myself.”  good god, this sounds just like me.draco is like my dad and his friends.  spatulas and spoonulas...cambozola and tomato slices....I am thrilled.fabulous!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of Gravity)

Thank you! I'm honored that you ventured over to this story of mine, and that you liked it too! So far. :) This story is very dear to my heart. It's been a long time in writing and editing, and I've learned soooo much in the process.I see what you mean about that sentence! I'll have to fix that ASAP. Thanks for pointing it out!Again, I'm pleased that you like Draco. He's one of my favorite characters to write, if not my most favorite. For some reason, I feel like I can just get into his head. I dunno. I'm glad you liked this!

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