The Wait
KellyH9 Reviews | 4.11/10 (9 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )
Hermione is hiding and Lucius is in the mood to taunt.
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Is Lucius good or bad? Is Hermione good or bad? I'm confused...
Response from KellyH (Author of The Wait)
Confusion is not a good state to be in. I better clarify things in the next chapter for you. 
I can't wait to see where this is going. Very sly of you to give no hints as to the timeframe of this story (post Voldemort or not...)
Response from KellyH (Author of The Wait)
Thank you and I hoped to get more out soon.
The story about Draco and the bird is fascinating. But why doesn't Hermione fight? That seems out of character. That 'Harry will save me' bit makes her seem like a little kid waiting for Mommy. Has she been injured, is she in shock or something? Interesting.
Response from KellyH (Author of The Wait)
Why Hermione doesn't fight? I can only tell you that she has her reasons. Even Lucius is wondering the same thing. Thanks for the review.
*shivers* Breathtaking! I do hope you update this soon! I absolutely love your characterisation of Lucius. And a part of me hopes Harry doesn't come, that Lucius gets to play out whatever little scenario is going through his head. Erm, does that make me twisted? lol... anyway, please do update soon!
Response from KellyH (Author of The Wait)
Thanks, for the review! I hoped to have more up soon.
Wow, this is very breathtaking! I'm also on the edge of my seat -- what's going to happen! More soon, please!
Response from KellyH (Author of The Wait)
Thank you! Hopefully I can the rest up soon.
Oh man - what is he doing to her - Seducing her or scaring the crap out of her - good cliffie - I cannot wait to read more to see where you are going to take it.
Response from KellyH (Author of The Wait)
Well hopefully I can get it out soon. Thanks for the reviews!
Oh crap - deatheater Lucius has her cornered - does he know the she is in the trunk- can she apparate - I would be tempted to.
Response from KellyH (Author of The Wait)
I really need to get back into writing this story. HAHAHA
OH NO I bet Harry is going to be late and things are going to get ugly! Rut Row!!
Response from KellyH (Author of The Wait)
hmmm.....will see.
wow. what a scarey story. i look forward to its progression. thanks so much
Response from KellyH (Author of The Wait)
Thanks!
Response from KellyH (Author of The Wait)
Thanks!