Moony's Got a Problem

guiltysecret79

3 Reviews | 6.67/10 (3 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

General Snapshot Shrieking Shack 476 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Lily (Evans) Potter Remus Lupin Severus Snape

Moony is left moping after catching sight of something he'd really rather not have seen.

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Chapter 1: Moony's Got a Problem

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Member Since 2007 | 6 Stories | Favorited by 4 | 10 Reviews Written | 41 Review Responses

IRL I'm a British secondary school science teacher. Fanfiction is my guilty little secret - I *really* don't want the little buggers getting wind of this, hence the screen name!

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mock_turtle

interesting...sigh.

Response from guiltysecret79 (Author of Moony's Got a Problem)

Thanks. You just want to hug him or shake him, don't you.

10/10

lkwriter

Oh, this is just excellent. I love how you captured Lupin's voice here, and how succinctly you sum up his feelings. It's a short piece, but it packs a powerful punch!

Response from guiltysecret79 (Author of Moony's Got a Problem)

Thanks. You can't help but feel sorry for Lupin, can you? He's convinced that *everything* is his fault, and no matter what anyone else tells him, he'll just keep on believing it.

10/10

Anonymous

Love this! I like how you've written Lupin. He thinks his only two options are brother or monster? That sums up his low self-esteem. And in a few hundred words, you've managed to sum ALL of his problems, really. Nice little snapshot, concise, and yet it has that sense of worried urgency.

Excellent all around!

Author's Response: Thanks. I think Lupin's my favourite character. His low self-esteem and feelings of responsibility for absolutely *everything* regardless of fault make him great to write about.

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