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One Last Request

1: Just a Conversation

One Last Request

Anijade

17 Reviews   |   17 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

General Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 1,176 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Lily (Evans) Potter Petunia (Evans) Dursley

Lily comes back to talk to her sister.

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Chapter 1: Just a Conversation


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Well I am 29 almost 30 not sure if I am going to let that happen or not. I am addicted to writing.

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0/10

kimjo2

touching and lovely.  thanks so much

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I'm glad Lily came to visit her sister and gave her a talking to.  Someone needed too. Good for Petunia for being welling to stand to her husband.

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Thank you for your review. I do think that under the right circumstances Petunia would realize her guilt

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Thank you for your review. I do think that under the right circumstances Petunia would realize her guilt

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phoenix

Very nice. I like that it's Harry's wedding day. Poor Petunia and all that bitterness and jealousy. It's a shame she couldn't let go of it and/or stand up to Vernon and treat Harry like family.

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Yes, it is a pity. So much potential thrown away over pettiness but sometimes that's how we can be. Perhaps she will make the most of fullfilling her sister's wish

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Yes, it is a pity. So much potential thrown away over pettiness but sometimes that's how we can be. Perhaps she will make the most of fullfilling her sister's wish

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debjunk

I'm shocked and gladdened that Petunia saw fit to go to the wedding for Lily.  The woman has a smidgen of heart in her.  Lol.

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Perhaps she does, or at least understands guilt. I think Petunia wouldn't be so bad without her beast of a husband.Thanks for the review!

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Perhaps she does, or at least understands guilt. I think Petunia wouldn't be so bad without her beast of a husband.Thanks for the review!

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SeleneDianara

Made me tear up! Well done love the plot.

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Aww, tears. thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Aww, tears. thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

9/10

sinbad

How very sad.  Personally if I were Lilly I would have gone to the wedding instead of going to her sister.

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

I think that if Lilly could only appear to Petunia that there was someone/something beyond the veil preventing her from going to the wedding. Perhaps she was just a spirit of healing?

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

I think that if Lilly could only appear to Petunia that there was someone/something beyond the veil preventing her from going to the wedding. Perhaps she was just a spirit of healing?

10/10

floorcoaster

Oh, wow, that was excellent! Heart-wrenching and poignant. Very nicely done!

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Thank you glad you enjoyed it

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CharmedForce

I love seeing Petunia redeemed. Well done!

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Thanks! I always kind of hope that she too was bullied by Vernon but who really knows

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Thanks! I always kind of hope that she too was bullied by Vernon but who really knows

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KellyH

I actually did like this, but I kept thinking in my head why come to her now? Why wouldn't she just go and tell this to Harry?

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Perhaps an agreement with the PTB to let him live his life, or maybe as a mother she wants to heal them both. I don't see Lily as a ghost who can't move on but more of a spirit that comes and goes with permission

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Perhaps an agreement with the PTB to let him live his life, or maybe as a mother she wants to heal them both. I don't see Lily as a ghost who can't move on but more of a spirit that comes and goes with permission

0/10

mock_turtle

ooh...you gave me shivers.

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Really? Cool Thanks for reviewing

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lkwriter

Oh, nicely done! It's an intriguing prompt, and I like what you've done with it, giving Petunia a chance to redeem herself slightly!

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Thank you when I read the prompt it just jumped into my head. I am glad you enjoyed it

10/10

June W

YES!  YES!!  This is wonderful, and I can see the characters responding exactly this way.  Best line: Lily would have done better for Dudley than I did for Harry. There’s no question of that.  I'm glad Lily is going to the wedding, and perhaps she'll remember that Dudley showed signs of wanting to be better friends with his cousin - that would be nice for Petunia, to have Duddiekins with her when she visits Harry's new family.  Thank you for sharing this!!

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Thank you for your kind words and for reviewing

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I always wonder why Lily and James didn't come back to haunt people.  I thought ghost came back because they had something left to do or something to that effect.  Anyway, I really enjoyed reading your take on this prompt.  Nicely done.  Tamara

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Personally I think they have a lot of unfinished business. Thanks for reviewing

10/10

blue artemis

I liked that quite a bit. 

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Thank you so much!

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silverdoe

Beautiful, I think I could see this happening.

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

I wish it could just so Lily could get in one last bit. Thanks for reviewing

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I really do wish that Lily could have come to her sister at some point to put her in her place. Thanks for sharing.

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

I think Lily would have liked the chance to. Thank you for reviewing

8/10

JoKK2

Simple and touching.  Very nice.  Thanks, JoAnne

Response from Anijade (Author of One Last Request)

Thank you

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