Great take on this prompt.  You sure can write smut really well. Bravo.

Very hot. Nothing quite like Lucius taking control of a situation.

I have to say I was rather squicked at first. But you portray the characters and emotions so well, it was a very good read.

Oh! Twisted ending... I love that you used a a canon name and assigned such meaning.

He won the conquest and settled down eh.  Good one. :)

*fans self* Who knew that Lucius and Minerva would be a hot couple?

Oh my gosh! Although I was slightly squicked at the idea of Minerva and Lucius,, I enjoyed it very much.

Wow!  Great job.  Totally unexpected, but wonderful take on the prompt.

Great take on the prompt. It's an unusual pairing, but it works so well in this story, and it's quite hot!

Great response to a prompt. First time I have read this pair, and it was enjoyable.

Lucius does seem like the type to have the guts to do something like this. Passionate, but love 'em and leave 'em.

OMG What an amazing story.  You could take so much further.  This is a brilliant ideal.  I really hope you continue this.  Tamara

What can I say? Great use of the prompt -- perfect in fact. Hot! Hot! Hot! sex. And the twist of the unplanned child was great. Well done, you!

I really enjoyed this piece - I've only read two other Lucius/Minerva fics, so it is certainly enjoyable to see another one!  I also liked how you tied in Terrence Higgs - I certainly wasn't expecting that ending!  Great job.

Huh. This was a pairing I wasn't expecting. It so works, though! I wonder what would happen if Lucius ever found out? What kind of conversation would the two of them have?  Great take on the prompt! :)

I greatly enjoyed this. It's a very different pairing indeed, but you executed it well. I also like the added usage of another canon character we know (Higgs). Thanks for posting.

Wow! That was an awesome story! And the ending was quite well done. Good work!