Darkly done.....I kinda like it but sad that Pansy actually does kill herself. Not a big fan of hers but *shrug*

this is very sad but well written.  it's too bad people don't realise just what it feels like until after the fact.Tamara

for a short story this is brilliant, so much feeling in so few words! keep up the good work, write more please

Just wanted to say that I was touched by this story. I feel so sorry for her. I can only imagine what she's done and who tried to save her, etc.

Great story. Pansy is not a strong person when it comes to guilt. If it ever built up on her. -- B

Very well written! Keep going, and pretty please write a longer story, too! :-)

Very sad story.