Very good start!

This chapter has left me begging for more!  I think you have captured Ron perfectly, as I have always felt that Ron is a very inconsiderate character.  I look forward to the next installment.

Lovely little story.

Cute story, but the plot lacked development. There was no real reason for Severus and Hermione to get together - not that I'm complaining, mind - it all just happened very quickly. It left me wondering.

What's Level 6, Ahhh - time for a cigarette? Very nice tying up of the loose ends!

A very neat wrap up. Well done!

Excellent ending.  I knew that Severus couldn't resist a challenge!  I really enjoyed your story and look forward to your next posting.  Thanks, JoAnne

Good ending for your story. :) Nice work. I notice it's not marked as completed yet. Might mislead the folks begging for more. Bwahahaha Thanks for posting

I hope in this epilogue they find hermione's parents...a rather short story, but enjoyable!

Thanks for the plug! Glad to have been of help (wow!) I have only just caught up with your story again and...woah! They don't muck around! From loathe to love in less time it would take Longbottom to earn a 'Number 5'!  But hey, I'm not complaining. I also really like the graded stares idea. Looking forward to the next chapter/s.Cheers.

It WAS pretty fast, and I, too, thought she got sidetracked from finding her folks too easily- that's even stranger than the instant sex. Not meaning to be cruel to you, just my opinion.--

I'm disappointed to see only one more chapter. I was hoping for an exciting search for the 'rents.

Wow - what an encounter - I love a good smut scene and this one was extremely steamy. When Severus wants something, he sure does declare it - LOL. Loved the chapter.

I liked the chapter - he gets a look - she gets a look. What a way to set-up sexual tension and make them notice one another. Good work. I was funny - the whole pans falling from the cover.

Hem, hem ( channelling Dolores here), what about her desperate need to find her parents? She got sidetracked rather easily, the naughty, lusty wench!

That was really hot, and funny.  I quite enjoyed it. 

it was a lil fast paced for me. but still enjoyable. I like a slow build up with lots of tension generally. Excellent dialogue however ;)

I love it:-))

The story was interesting and developing nicely up to this chapter.  But I must say, events here move way too fast to be at all believable.  The passion I can go along with, but after one kiss--"you are mine forever if we have sex" seems more than a bit over the top.  And why would two (supposedly) intellegent people agree to marry based on just a great bout of sex?  I don't have an issue with the sudden sex-- the impulse can be very strong and sudden intimacy can and does happen.  I wish you had chosen to develop this story a bit...perhaps they could have gotten to know one another as they searched for her parents and unraveled the mystery of who is after her?I hope you take this as concrit--I don't mean to flame you or anything--just offering my perspective.Peace, Love and Happy Writing!

Did time pass or just one mind blowing sex encounter make them realize they were meant for each other?Great chapter...I hope it ends as good.

Did time pass or just one mind blowing sex encounter make them realize they were meant for each other?Great chapter...I hope it ends as good.

Sweet romance, I love it when Hermione and Severus "find" each other!Livvy

It did move rather quickly, but there is a history between them that sets it up pretty well.

GOOD START, PLEASE KEEP IT UP.

Loved the set-up of the first chapter. I can so see Ron making a fuss over having to do something for her. I never do like the pairing because I just do not think that he is the right partner for her. I loved how you put Severus in the story. I just cannot wait to see what happens between them when she comes too.