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The Wrong Side of the Door
sc010f19 Reviews | 19 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )
Written for the GS100 "behind closed doors" challenge. Assumes Hermione is of age. Not DH compliant.
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Just obsessive. Nothing more.
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You did an amazing job conveying so much in so many few words. Bravo
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
Thank you so much!
i liked this very much. it's remarkable how much life you cram into so few words, and mostly dialog. it's sexy, funny, and sweet.
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
Thank you very much!
It is truly amaizing how you have managed to convey everything just by using dialogue. Truly brilliant.
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
Thank you! :)(:
I like the name Fiona. It is different enough to sound witchy!
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
Thanks. Truth to tell, she's named after a cousin of mine. I needed a name quickly and there it was . . . :)
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
Thank goodness your cousin isnt named Ashley or Tiffany or Bethany ewwwww! Fiona is a good name!
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
*grins* Her sister is named Claire, so that might have worked. I like Bethany, but only because it is the property of a Very Large Aunt of mine (whom I also like), but yes, that wouldn't have worked either. . . :)
It's very good. And for a second, just at the end, I wonder if, maybe, he was not married to another woman. But fortunately my addictive passion for SS/HG just makes me come back to my senses. Honestly who would marry him except her (or me *most evil grin*).
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
Thanks! You know, it could be possible . . . but I'm just as addicted, so I couldn't let it happen (at least here). I'm glad you liked it!
Nice use of the door throughout. You managed to get quite a lot into this, through dialogue alone!
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
Thanks very much! Exposition is my mortal enemy! :)
Really liked that one. Thanks for sharing.
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
Thank you!
It was an interesting story, and I liked it, but I had to read it twice to make complete sense of it because I didn't feel like it was clear until the last portion. Once at the end, starting over it made perfect sense. Not flaming, just my thoughts on this style of writing.
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
That makes perfect sense. I wrote the darn thing and I had to do that too . . . I'm glad you liked it!
Brilliant... the focus on the closed door was wonderful.
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
Thank you very much!
Anonymous
I absolutely love this style, all dialogue and just a line or two of description when perfectly needed. You did great, I followed every exchange, and of course, the beginning was hot! To go from totally hot to totally tender at the last... ahhh. Beautiful!
Now do another one! (please)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! *is working on something similar for GS100 on lj*
LOL tells the story beautifully doesn't it
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
Thank you very much!
Ohhh... It's lovely. Thank you for writing it.
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
Thank you! :)
So much said in so few words. I love it!
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
Thank you so much! :D
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
Thank you so much! :D
lovely vignettes. thanks
Response from sc010f (Author of The Wrong Side of the Door)
Thank you! :)