Severus Plots His Revenge
Chapter 3 of 4
Prof M McGonagallSilliness ensues when Severus helps a pregnant Hermione get her daily exercise. A silly little drabble series written for GS100.
ReviewedA/N: Thanks to ladyinthecloak for her awesome beta skills!
Severus sat glaring at the flames in the fireplace. Those silly women had mocked him with their billowing tracksuits. That could not go unanswered, and yet… Hermione actually liked them.
He glanced at the bedroom door. Hermione tired easily these days and had gone to bed. How he loved Hermione—even more as their child was growing inside her. These women were her friends. They had seen the worth of his Hermione long before he had. If they were humiliated, she would be hurt.
Severus smirked as he stared at the fire. He loved a situation that required such… delicacy.
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The next morning Hermione complained, “I feel so stupid waddling around in this tracksuit like… a giant penguin!”
“A giant…?” Severus spluttered.
“Oh, never mind!” Hermione snapped.
Severus wisely said nothing and gently rubbed her back.
“Oh, Severus, I’m sorry! I just get so winded on the stairs. I hate that!”
“What if I asked the rest of the club to come down to the dungeons? I believe I can avoid staircases. Walking different passages might be a welcome change.”
“Oh, would you?”
“Gladly, dearest.” Severus kissed Hermione’s temple and shut the door quietly behind him. He smirked devilishly. “Perfect.”
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Latest 25 Reviews for Walking Club
46 Reviews | 7.72/10 Average
I love a naughty Severus just as much as Hermione. thank you for a lovely story, and a perfect ending.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
Thank you for your reviews! I enjoyed reading them.
Oh dear, what is he planing for "The Girls" once he has them on his own turf
Ooooo, it is unwise to mock Severus at the best of times, now when he is worried Hermione, well he could be dangerous. I knew it, I couldn't imagine Severus in anything but black but valour! really?
the billowing tracksuit is black, isn't it? it is in my mind but my mind does tend to wander off on to strange paths, that have not been trod before.
I thought the matching outfits were cute. No wonder Snape didnt approve!
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
This whole story was much too silly for Severus. I think he's been mad at me ever since. :)But I'm glad you liked the matching outfits.
Dont mind me. Im just here doing some reading for the Quiz. AND I had a black velor maternity track suit myself. I remember it fondly. It didnt make me look like quite such a blimp.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
Thanks for letting me know you dropped by. :)I think Lula gave me the original inspiration for black velour. She thought Snape would look cool in a billowing black velour track suit. :D But perhaps it was Hermione's idea to decrease her pregnancy bump.
Ha! No one mocks Severus and gets away with it ... for long! A lovely ending to the series - thanks for sharing!
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
No one mocks Severus--you bet your tartan track suit! I'm glad you enjoyed the ending. Thanks for reviewing!
Anonymous
How sweet! ;o)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! :)
this was absolutely adorable! thanks so much
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing.
That's our Severus. I like it so much when he is being mischieveous like the little boy he should have been.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
Mischievous!Severus is a lot of fun. I did let a little bit of the boy peek through here, but only for Hermione (and us) to see.Thanks for the review!
He is naughty! :)
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
As long as only Hermione knows... *grins*Thanks again for reviewing.
Tartan stripes? Whatever next? :P
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
That's a bit of a scary fashion image, isn't it? :0
LOL, billowing tracksuit! :)
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad it made you smile.
Anonymous
*mwahaha* I just can picture the whole group in the billowing tracksuits! *rofl* And all the matching striping...
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm so glad you found it funny!
Anonymous
*raises eyebrows* Severus in TRAINERS and TRACKSUIT? And the stuff BILLOWING? *rofl*
Now, that's truly a surprising and impressing image, and simply a brilliant one.
Author's Response: When I wrote this, I had the idea for about 3 weeks before real life allowed me to get it written down. Having Severus in a billowing tracksuit in your mind for 3 weeks is funny... and a wee bit frightening! I'm glad you liked it!
Cute, a billowing tracksuit? Roflol.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
I'm glad my story made you laugh! Thanks for your review.
XD I can totally picture a billowing tracksuit! That is great!
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
I had that picture in my head and had to get it out! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!
What I wouldn't give to see Severus Snape in a billowing track suit... I love the I-Want-To-Make-Sure-You-Are-Perfectly-Fine-All-The-Time Snape!
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
I love Snape's protective nature too! Thanks for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Severus in a billowing track suit?
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
I like your emoticon! I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. Thanks for reviewing!
The last line is excellent just like the rest of it.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
Thanks for the nice review. I'm glad you liked it!
cute. severus in a tracksuit was already a giggle, but billowing! lol! sweet little snippet.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
And then picture waddling Hermione, as well as Professors Sprout and Vector. ;-) Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad it made you smile!
severus would charm his tracksuit to billow, now wouldn't he, lol! Cute little fic, I love domestic!protective!snape
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
Well, you know what they say. If you find a look that works, stick with it. :-) I enjoy domestic!protective!Snape, too. Thanks for reviewing.
LOVE it!!! I can't get the image of a tracksuit with tartan stripes out of my head!!!! You have me gleefully giggling here... I hope there's more to come!!
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
Those three ladies in their tracksuits made me giggle. I hope there's more, too. (I didn't think there was going to be a second installment.) We'll see if inspiration strikes.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
Those three ladies in their tracksuits made me giggle. I hope there's more, too. (I didn't think there was going to be a second installment.) We'll see if inspiration strikes.
OMG... I simply adore the image of a billowing track suit!!! That's so clever. Very nice piece!
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
Severus has a look, and he's sticking with it! LOL!
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
Severus has a look, and he's sticking with it! LOL!
more please, this is so funny!!with all the suits an' the billowing!
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
Thanks for reviewing. I hope the plot bunny keeps biting. :-)
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Walking Club)
Thanks for reviewing. I hope the plot bunny keeps biting. :-)