One Last Look

Moreteadk

5 Reviews | 7.8/10 (5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

General Hogwarts Castle 906 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Lavender Brown Seamus Finnegan Theodore Nott

He just had to see her one last time before she became somebody else's wife.

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Chapter 1: One-Shot

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Moreteadk

Member Since 2006 | 17 Stories | Favorited by 19 | 146 Reviews Written | 250 Review Responses

Born in Denmark in the year of '79. Drink a lot of tea and is completely an utterly addicted to my dearly beloved LJ account. Feel free to friend me if you're so inclined.

I'm only posting my own favorites and newer stuff here. All my other stuff can be found at my fic comm on LJ, but I'm a fairly mediocre writer though, so consider yourself warned.

There's a lot of Draco/Hermione, a somewhat smaller amount of Severus/Hermione and a wide-ranged smattering of minor pairings including but not limited to Adrian/Hermione, Neville/Lavender, Albus/Sirius, Filch/Luna, Draco/Ginny, Harry/Pansy and Ron/Voldemort. There's also some general stuff and some original fics there.

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9/10

CharmedForce

Lavender and Theo is unusual pair since they are both such minor characters that JKR hardly bothers to mention them, but you've done well here!

Response from Moreteadk (Author of One Last Look)

Thank you. :) I'm not even sure how I came up with this pairing, other than the preference I've got for Slytherin/Gryffindor combinations.

0/10

sunny33

well done!

Response from Moreteadk (Author of One Last Look)

Thanks

10/10

Gardengirl

Nicely done! Glad to see you posted it.

Response from Moreteadk (Author of One Last Look)

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :)

10/10

pookah

This is very good. I like how Theo's thoughts evolve over the short time, from wishing his rival dead(well, not really, I hope) to realizing that he (Theo) never stood a chance with Lavender, never truly made her happy. When I read the summary I thought, "what a mistake." But it seems to have helped Theo, so I'm glad he went to the wedding.

Response from Moreteadk (Author of One Last Look)

I have this idea in my head that while Lavender was going out with Theo it's entirely possible that she thought she was really happy, but then they broke up for whatever reason and she found something so much better. That probably just makes it even harder for him, the poor boy.I think going made him realise that it really was the end and that it enabled him to move on. So if you sort of squint there's a sort of positive ending. :pI'm glad you liked it. :)

10/10

Anonymous

Aww, this is kind of sweet. In a sad way. I forgot to mention in the letter I sent you that we added the character (Theo) to the list, and I've added it to the characters in the story before I validated! :-) Please write more about him!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :D

I might write him again. For some reason the thought of Theo/Lavender is enormously appealing to me.

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