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Now You See Them
richardgloucester26 Reviews | 26 Ratings, 0 Likes, 26 Favorites )
Response to the "Portrait" challenge. An accident has strange consequences for the headmaster's portrait. A drabble series.
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RichardGloucester is now also a published author, under the name Jae Eynon, with stories in a new anthology, "IMMANENCE" (Story Spring Publishing, 2016) and "Thoroughly Modern Monsters" (Story Spring Publishing, 2013). She still loves the world of Harry Potter and sails the SSHG ship!
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I'm crying. You are a powerful storyteller.
Really like how you left the more obvious details out.
I would say this story is very funny. Very beautiful anf funny.
Thats my girl, if he doesn't come willingly he obviously doesn't know his own best so you just make sure to take him with you! Wonderful story!
Thats my girl, if he doesn't come willingly he obviously doesn't know his own best so you just make sure to take him with you! Wonderful story!
*loves*
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Beauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutiful.
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Aww ... That was sweet! Really! I loved it. Sweet and highly amusing to boot :) Only thing was, I had to re-read the first drabble several times before I realised what was happening *grins stupidly*
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love it!! if anyone could do it, our hermione could! p.s. love your name!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of Now You See Them)
Thanks!(I used to be a bit obsessed with Richard III when I was a teenager - he just fell into my head when I was looking for a pen name.)
What a fascinating idea! And very well done, finishing with so few words.
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Very cool and well done!
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"Can portraits get piles?" she mused. Utter Brilliance!
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*blushes* Thank you!
this was spectacular. very original, made me laugh, and now i'm wearing a big, goofy smile. thanks!
Response from richardgloucester (Author of Now You See Them)
Thank you so much! I'm glad I made you smile.
Now you don't! I am infatuated with the idea that she pulls him back from death. Lovely Dickie, just loverly!
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Thank you so much!
Oh! I liked that, their arguments, and the fact that she refused to leave him there. I am certain he will appreciate this second chance at life.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of Now You See Them)
Thank you! And yes, I think he will.
Very clever and original! I liked their interactions, too.
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Oh, this is lovely. Thank you!
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You're welcome - and thank you!
How clever! I love the "kiss of life" that poisons Hermione. Very well done.
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Oh my God. I LOVE the Bill and Ted reference (why is Death so darn lovable in that movie?)
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*snerk*Thanks!
YAY!! Both of them are saved!! =DLovely drabbles here, I love every single one of them. The scissor, rock, paper game was hilarious! :P I like it that when Hermione was fading, Severus was feeling a little regret but she hold on to him so he might be saved as well. Loved it, good job.
Response from richardgloucester (Author of Now You See Them)
Thank you very much!(And what else can one play in a featureless dungeon?!)
That was lovely and so very uplifting! Thank you very much for not letting them die.