I Have a Crush on my Professor
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I was in Slytherin when I was at Hogwarts. Severus
Snape was my Head of House, my Potions professor and
the object of my schoolgirl dreams. In my career
options discussion, I made the huge mistake of telling
him. I’m quite certain he saw one, or more, of my
fantasies in my mind and things happened, delicious,
exotic and fantastic… But I’m ahead of myself. What
did he do? What did I do? Well, I’ll tell you…
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
“Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein
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Reviews for I Have a Crush on my Professor
Interesting storyline. Very well-written as well. I really like how you had Snape handle the situation too; very realistic. ~Jen
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of I Have a Crush on my Professor)
Thank you. The prompt was Mary-Sue/Snape and I didn't really want to have a smut story, but a crush. I'm glad you liked how I handled this prompt and that you think I kept Severus true to himself and realistic. Thank you for the review. *hugs*
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of I Have a Crush on my Professor)
Thank you. The prompt was Mary-Sue/Snape and I didn't really want to have a smut story, but a crush. I'm glad you liked how I handled this prompt and that you think I kept Severus true to himself and realistic. Thank you for the review. *hugs*
I liked the ending of this one. I love the Severus didn't actually fall for it and that he actively discouraged it. And I like that she really did find a good career.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of I Have a Crush on my Professor)
This sin't a 'Severus shaggs a student story,' no. This is a 'student has a crush on her teacher' 
and Severus has to deal with it and not completely crush her. 
She's just a pureblood socialite who does end up working. 
Personally, I think Severus should have nipped this in the bud much earlier... TeeheheheThank you very much for the lovely review.
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Hehe! I love the diary interludes, and the running internal monologue! Nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I appreciate that you gave my Mary Sue a shot. Thanks
Very nice take on that prompt. I enjoyed the ending—how she used her fantasies of him to write romance novels. I also liked that it was realistic in that Snaped didn't actually give in to the attentions of one of his students. Well done.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of I Have a Crush on my Professor)
Thank you. I'm glad that you liked this. It's a bit different. Thank you again.
XD The delusions of a teenage student. Written quite wonderfully!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of I Have a Crush on my Professor)
Thank you so very much - that's exactly what I was aiming for!!!
Loved it. I was a little worried at the beginning when she was jsut taking her OWLS but soon realized Snape was not going to reciprocate these feelings. And then, for her to become a writer and use him as her romantic hero - I think that's actually happening in RL LOL - was a great ending to the tale.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of I Have a Crush on my Professor)
Well, *blushes* it was supposed to be a Mary Sue - and really, that was the only Mary Sue part. (except no publisher, not making any money and I doubt I'll have thousands of withces reading this!) However, I'm glad you liked my fic. Tahnk you so much, your comments really made me smile!
excellent - poor girl but at least she got to kiss him - all we get to do is dream....
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of I Have a Crush on my Professor)
Thank you. Yep! a real kiss - even if it's a stollen kiss.
Cute little story. I like how you introduce the sections with a diary entry and then show the entire incident.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of I Have a Crush on my Professor)
Thank you very much.
I'm glad he didn't take her up on it, but you did a great depiciton of a childish crush.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of I Have a Crush on my Professor)
Thank you very much.
It is interesting to see how overblown a teenager can make a schoolgirl crush in her own mind. I liked your Severus, slightly tempted (I think) but not willing to enter into a relationship with his student.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of I Have a Crush on my Professor)
This is exactly what I was going for - the overly romantized fantacy of a teenage girl, in her early sexual blossom, throwing herself at her snarky Head of House! And HE knows about her infatuation and doens't really want to indulge her 'delusion. But he is flattered and slightly curious - but in no way will he jeperdize his job.
Nicely written, I like the variation between the diary entyries and "real time"
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of I Have a Crush on my Professor)
Thank you. I tried to think like a teenager (which I haven't been in a while) and the duality just came as I was typing. Besides, it was fun having 'me' be a little bit delusional.
Nice little story very detailed and real!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of I Have a Crush on my Professor)
Thank you very much.
lovely! thanks so much
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of I Have a Crush on my Professor)
I'm glad you liked this. You are very welcome.