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Truffles and Strawberries
chivalric60 Reviews | 6.65/10 (60 Ratings, 0 Likes, 32 Favorites )
Snape is in bad shape physically and heavily depressed to boot after nearly having been killed by Nagini. Draco Malfoy, owing his former Potions master a life debt, insists on looking after him.
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Truffles and Strawberries
thank u so much for having a sequel ready for us! that's awesome!
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
My pleasure, and thank you so much for reading them both and reviewing, too!
> it would kill Snape if he knew that twenty years of spying on Dumbledore had been in vain.Huh, so Draco never understood Snape's true alliance? A great idea! No time for longish praise, even though you definitely deserve it: I must read on!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
Thanks for reading that story - I sort of twisted the prompt, I might have painted Snape a bit OOC, but still - thanks for reviewing!
I think I understand better the "cradling thing" Draco mentionned. It's such a shame I haven't read that before.
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
It took me a while to write the seque, sorry for that. I wanted Lupin to be there for Snape without a sexual connotation. At least in this first part of the story ;-)Again, thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
It took me a while to write the seque, sorry for that. I wanted Lupin to be there for Snape without a sexual connotation. At least in this first part of the story ;-)Again, thanks for reviewing!
I'm so glad I know how the story ends because otherwise I might have feared the worst.
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
:-) I have written very, ver few stories with a grim ending, and for those, I usually find myself creating a sequel. This one starts dark, but ends light, as you know by now.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
:-) I have written very, ver few stories with a grim ending, and for those, I usually find myself creating a sequel. This one starts dark, but ends light, as you know by now.Thanks for reviewing!
How come I never found this little treasure before? It's amazing, it's brilliant, and it made my day this morning...
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
So glad to hear that! It was a Challenge entry about a year ago, and the sequel began to really nag. Thanks for reading and reviewing the prequel, too!
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
So glad to hear that! It was a Challenge entry about a year ago, and the sequel began to really nag. Thanks for reading and reviewing the prequel, too!
Oh you did a splendid job of showing the two different Snapes. The bitter man at the beginning of the chapter and the emerging from his spying cocoon Snape at the end. Watching him enjoy food, use humor and most importantly give comfort to Hermione was powerful stuff. I am very much looking forward to the meeting with Fudge & the reunion with Minerva. I am a happy little fan girl.
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
Argh! You are asking for a sequel here, and as I am cursed to write sequels whenever they get required, I will possibly do one. Sort of soon-ish :-)Thanks for reviewing - it means a lot to me.
Poor poor Severus. My heart breaks. Excellent story so far, though.Miriam
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
Thanks for reviewing!
This was a delightful little story. Thanks for sharing.
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
I'm happy you enjoyed it. And sorry for the late response.
Fantastic! Really loved it and I'm repeating the calls for a sequel (but not a HG/SS).I really want to know who you are so that I can read more of your stuff!
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
*grins widely all over her face* Thanks for reviewing! Thanks for liking! And as a waring: I have written quite a few stories so far :-)Concerning a sequel - I don't think so, at least not in this precise context. But if you are craving for... hmmm... something happening between Remus and Severus, I can assure you that THAT story is nearly finished. I only need a willing beta... so leave me your mailadress in case you are interested.
This was fabulous!!! I loved it!
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
Thanks for reviewing!
OMG This chapter is my favorite of all. I know it is finished but you could make a sequel. I would definitely read more of this story. Truly awesome work and very well written too.Tamara aka
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
Thank you! Will think about a sequel...
I love the banter between Severus and Remus; even after all this time they still get on the same. It's a shame that Remus and Tonks' relationship isn't that strong. Since Remus found it so easy to lie to her; even if it's for a good reason. I wonder if that means something.Poor Draco, can't get around thinking that he did something wrong. Such self doubt, never looked good on him. lolPolly always was a strong person. Thank you for giving her a strong roll in your fic. Tamara aka
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
Thanks for your detailed review, it will help me to design the sequel properly, bringing them all back in.
brilliant! take a bow!
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
*blushes*Thanks, dear!
Totally delightful. I just love happy endings!
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
Oh, so do I. Which is the reason why I am currently posting a sequel.
Only one thing can be said...sequel. Irish
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
On the way. Just need a beta mad enough to check it for me. You aren't interested, by any chance?
Very nicely done. I love how it took the threat of Umbridge to really get him riled up. LOL The 'over my dead body' was wonderful line. I got a good laugh out of that. Thanks for the wonderful little story.
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
Totally my pleasure, dear. Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Thank goodness Draco found Poppy in time. I like the skepticism Severus is showing. It's very much how he would behave. Not to mention his snarkiness. LOL I look forward to seeing how it all ends in the next chapter.
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
I couldn't let it end after chapter four; there is a sequel with the proper ending. Thanks for reviewing!
Very nice :) I love that Snape is oging to return to Hogwarts and that he's going to kick out that shrew Umbridge!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
He will kick her badly in the sequel, promise!Thanks for reviewing!
This is a charming and pleasant chapter, but I hope there is more turbulence to come! Dying to see Severus fight Fudge, and especially the evil Umbridge. Thank you for this wonderful story.
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
Hi, dear,and sorry for the late response. The turbulence will happen in the sequel, Scampi and Cherry Cream. Thanks for reviewing!
Ooo, this is getting so good! I love how his reappearance is bringing Hermione out of her depression. I can't wait for him to face down Umbridge and Fudge -- that should be fun to read!
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
In the sequel, dear. I am just posting it (Scampi and Cherry Cream), and yes, Umbridge and Fudge will get kicked ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Oh, how I would love to see the look on Fudge's face when the resurected Severus Snape confronts him about employinh Umbridge at HIS school.Please tell me it is not finished yet. There is still soo much I would love to see!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
I just started on the sequel and am looking for a beta for it. Interested? Let me know! And of course thanks for reviewing!
I am so glad Remus is taking care of Severus. Both of them need someone from the past to lean on, and I think they could really be great friends.I loved how you described Poppy's kidnapping. It really had me giggling!
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
I love to make people smile - thanks for letting me know! IMO, Snape and Lupin are always friends. Or lovers.Thanks for reviewing!
thats brilliant, lets just annoy Severus better !
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
That'S how it works best ;-)
Yay! I love that Remus is alive, and missing Snape. I love that he discovered that a gentle touch is what helps him calm down.
Response from chivalric (Author of Truffles and Strawberries)
Thanks, dear. I am glad this chapter didn't turn out to be too soppy, with the scars and the helpless Snape and all.Thanks for reviewing!