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Smokescreen
Delayed Poet4 Reviews | 7.0/10 (4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
It was exhilarating to see how the potion affected her. It was different every time. But Hermione had more than one addiction...
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Delayed Poet
Member Since 2007 | 9 Stories | Favorited by 6 | 148 Reviews Written | 189 Review Responses
Update June 4, 2013:
Parenthood: Ready or Not - Chapter 13 has a good chunk written and I'm trying very hard to get my head back into it so that it's not left abandoned.
Other than that, I've really wandered away from fandom and am mostly writing original things.
Reviews for Smokescreen
Was it Lust Potion?Sneaky of Hermione to use this potion in order to get to Severus. And how was he to say no, it was from the effect of the potion, not from her own willingness... or was it? They might already attracted to one another but simply using the potion as excuses... well, that's what I think anyway.Loved it! :)
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Smokescreen)
Hmm, I thought of it more as a 'Lowering Inhibitions' Potion.In my mind, she'd been unable to allow herself to be with him the way she wanted, so she consciously made the choice to use a potion that would allow her to make the choices she wanted to make without stressing about the potential consequences. Also, Severus would know that the potion wouldn't make Hermione do anything she didn't already want to do. The attraction was definitely mutual, but at the end of the story, Hermione was much more emotionally attatched than Severus—his will come in time, Hermione will make sure of that!Thank you so much for this lovely review! I really and truly appreciate it!
Response from zyra (Reviewer)
Oh, well that's a lot more logical explanation! Besides, if it was Lust Potion, Severus wouldn't know if it was the Potion or really her attraction for him... hmm.Ah, now I like this even more... I'm gonna save this in my archive.Good one!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Smokescreen)
Aww I'm oddly touched that you're going to save this! Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, lol...Thanks!
Response from zyra (Reviewer)
I always save good stories. It's easier to re-read during rainy days (aka Internet went caput). They're all under SSHG Archive > Outstanding folder.Hee... =)
Clever Severus ... or clever Hermione. The two of them are so good for each other. Good job
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Smokescreen)
They're both pretty clever, aren't they? Thanks so much for the review!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Smokescreen)
They're both pretty clever, aren't they? Thanks so much for the review!
Hehe, I can just see that smirk on his face at that moment. Great job!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Smokescreen)
I saw the smirk on his face the moment I started writing them! Thanks so much for the review!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Smokescreen)
I saw the smirk on his face the moment I started writing them! Thanks so much for the review!
Anonymous
How delightful! With very few words, you have conveyed so much. There's really an art to doing drabbles in series like this. Very sultry feel to it. I almost feel as drugged as Hermione.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this wonderful review!