Hi, I just stumbled over your story... A.D. is making his typical mistake, and M.M. see it but won't interfere strongly enough. I wonder why none of the others does either.Introducing you own character is risky. Lets see if she'll rule the game in MarySue manners or just add flavour. Sorry, I cannot rate this yet, but I'd like to leave the note so you see it has been read. I'll continue reading.

This was a surprisingly good story. The addition of the Magi was ingenious, really. It worked very well, if I do say so myself. The only problem I had with the entire story was all the Italian. While I do love multiple languages, having the translation at the bottom was sort of confusing. The shorter lines I could somewhat translate for myself, but the longer ones frustrated me as I couldn't tell what the person was saying. Also, are you planning on continuing this at a later date? It seems a little...unfinished. Though perhaps it's simply me wishing for that 'happily ever after.' In all, a very well thought-out story. Kudos to you, my friend!

This was a wonderful story and I would be interested if you plan a sequel or just need someone to beg for one. I still wish Lucius could have been left insane *sigh* and I am one of his fans go figure.

Wow! I think Harry could have taken Voldemort, too. (Hermione optimism here.) I am so curious as to what comes next. Are you planning a sequel?

Oh, man! I wish Dumbledore would have let Harry kick Voldie's arse! lol... Can't wait to read what's next. Oh... I shall do that now, as I have it. lol.... muahahahah xoxoox good chapter, dear. I like the idea of freezing time and manipulating things. Lucius gets away again, eh?

This story keeps getting better. I am not even willing to guess who got the curse but I am sitting on the edge of my chair waiting for the next chapter. Wonderful work !

I'm thinking it's Hermione that got it. She's right. Harry needs to defeat the Dark Lord! In fact, he ought to get Dumbledore to let him take him on now! hehe And damn... I remember that Snape had that Delore thing put on him. After your explanations from last chapter, does that mean he's a nutter now?

I wonder if Ron imagined that Seeing woman that told him he'd have to make a choice. Other than that, I don't know who he would hate. Very interesting curses you've come up with here. Cheers

Wow... That's one bad curse there! Let's hope Gin doesn't experience it. I'm thinking Sloan's days are numbered. I like that the "kids" are getting action. And mention of Snape! woohoo!

exceptional chapter. I can understand draco's need for darkness. I hope it won't consume him. The pop they heard was ginny?

It's good to see Neve acting more human, emotions. I'm glad that Draco, of them all, went to talk to her. Too bad she's so hateful to Hermione. She really could have helped her out by listening. Glad that Ginny is comfortable. :)

Okay, to be quite honest, I don't really like Neve much. To me, I find she's a bit bratty. I do feel badly for what happened to her here, but I don't feel that she reacted in a way that a woman would truly react having been raped and tortured. There might not be a need for tears, but it seems her mentality would be different. It's sort of hard to feel sorry for her when it appears to not have bothered her one bit.

I'm anxious to see what they want with Ginny and what happens next. Good job.

good chapter, dear. glad they finally found out who the spy was!

OMG! good story, hope you finish soon...I am soo into it!!

Love the Italian. Love Harry playing with balls. Love Ron's comment about the Italian language. What's not to love? :)

I must say that I was annoyed with Harry's treatment of Dumbledore at first. I'm glad he realized that there was a limit to his snappy behaviour. After that, I turn around and feel sorry for Harry b/c Hermione slaps him. LOL.. poor bloke. She's lucky he didn't "telepath" her away.. hehe.. good chapter

I can just imagine Ron having at the firewisky. I am quite curious as to what is going on with Harry / Ginny. Good Chapter.

Good chapter. I've written down all these curse words.. muahahha

This chapter is the best one yet, as I've told you in e-mail. I particularly love the little bit of mirrored 'animosity' between Drake and Sloan. So much like Ron and Malfoy, and it made me laugh. I like the new angle you have with soliopathy and magi. Keep up the good work.

the entire plot circulating around ginny is intriguing. interested in finding out more. cheers

dang! Drake was a bit rough with Hermione! The new Seer makes things very interesting!! can't wait to see

I absolutely LOVE this story. You tell it so well and you have a very vivid imagination with all the details and abilities you have given them. I love your OCs, especially Neve. Keep up the good work. I would LOVE to see where this goes.

Erin Alexis

P.S. By the way, I just love your first name... ^_-

A good story, better told in the later chapters. I'm looking forward to more from Alexis McCoy