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Potions Under Duress Visiting an Orphanage
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Visiting an Orphanage

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Visiting an Orphanage

Southern_Witch_69

30 Reviews   |   30 Ratings, 0 Likes, 23 Favorites )

Romance General Snapshot Potions Under Duress 1,354 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape

Hermione delivers gifts to orphans and bumps into Severus Snape.

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10/10

apisa_b

I was directed to this story by the sshg quiz and am thankful for it.What a nice idea to have Snape dress up as Santa and read stories to orphans.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Visiting an Orphanage)

thanks! I thought it would be something sweet of him

10/10

alysensdad

Loved it! Have a great New Year. :)
Deby

0/10

tree faery

Awww! So cute! I admit I can't quite imagine Severus dressed up as Santa. but I'm sure it would be adorable. Nice job, thanks for writing!

0/10

MollysSister

I love, love, love the orphanage theme! Way to go Christy for requesting it. I want more fan fic that uses an orphanage! I enjoyed the disagreement at the begining of the chapter. shrill!Ginny works quite well for me! Nice job SW

10/10

TheBattyDragon

oh, how sweet! I always knew Snape was a big old softie deep inside.Thank you for sharing and Happy Holidays!Hugs.

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, so adorable.  Wonderfully festive. But why in heavens didn't she want to sit in Santa's lap? Silly, silly girl.Hum. Sit in Santa Snape's lap and listen to him read me stories...  in that rich silky drawl all night... Oh, too delightful!

0/10

mauvemagique

"Apparating them to his home."

 And then...

You can't honestly stop there! 

0/10

a_bees_buzz

I'm not so sure she doesn't want to sit on Santa's lap; I'm sure I would!  Still, tea is a good start.

0/10

droxy

Hehe, but I want more.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Visiting an Orphanage)

Grin I'm thinking she sits on Santa's lap for a bit of snogging later. :)

0/10

sareliz

Ooooh, I love it. It's adorable, and sweet, and deeply good, beyond the sucrose quotient. Thank you for writing it.

0/10

pookah

Aww, how delightful!  Just what I need with my leftover lunch, a sweet, and calorie-free, treat

10/10

potterbrat

Okay... give me just a minute to think about sitting on Sev's lap and having him read me a Christmas story...<deep sigh><naughty thoughts><huge grins>Okay, now I'm ready to leave you a review...That was wonderful.  Gotta go now, Sev wants to read me some more stories.~

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Visiting an Orphanage)

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10/10

Sampdoria

Loved it, absolutely loved it!!!

10/10

blue artemis

Oooh, I want a Santa Snape for Christmas. And it sounds like Ron and Ginny and Hermione need to let each other go.

0/10

kyriaofdelphi

Thanks for the story. Great work as is your usual style.

0/10

Mint Stick

Loved the story. So nice and Christmas-y!

10/10

Maddie

I can see the Weasley perspective if the appointment was the only time the business meeting could be held and Ron was a necessary part of the orphanage visit. However, it appears that bringing Ron was more for a security blanket for Hermione. Since this particular charity is one that she feels deeply about and apparently so does the Professor, it is nice that Hermione had the courage to make the first move to see him socially. So this brief snapshot of life ended on a positive note. That's always nice.

10/10

kittylefish

nice.  i'm enjoying the flurry of christmas cheer from your various christmas stories.  poor hermione, so misunderstood by her friends, but i bet she's thanking her lucky stars ron flaked out on her!  i really liked the image of santa snape visiting the orphans.  i will just use my imagination as to what happens next. thanks for another great story.  have a happy holiday!

0/10

GeminiScorp

Very sweet ~ Merry Christmas!

9/10

Morganabythesea

As with all of your stories, I enjoyed it very much!  It actually would make the beginning of something longer.  It is original and leaves you with questions that would like to be answered.  As always, a sign of a good story teller and author.

10/10

sinbad

Cute, I even read it to my kids (I read it first) they enjoyed it as well.

9/10

beaweasley2

Really quite lovely. What a nice little Xmas surprise!Happy Holidays to you, Merry Christmas and have a safe and happy New Year.

10/10

GinnyW

Oh, very sweet! Sooooooo.... what happens next? Hmmmm?

10/10

cocoachristy

Oh! I love it love it love it! Madam Okon and Jakob indeed! Thanks so much for this great present! Merry Christmas!

10/10

MoreThanSirius

Sounds like Hermione was a good girl this year in spite of what Ron and Ginny have to say. She's making orphans happy and deserves to sit on Snata Severus' lap. With any luck she'll get just what she wants for Christmas. Here's hoping Santa brings you what you want as well, dear author!

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