Very cool.  I was hoping all along that he was going to be 'nice'.  Since he could very well have hurt her. 

Oh, very hot and erotic! *fans self*

Potatoes? Interesting food choice for seduction! LOL Hot story, though!

Author's Response: Teehee! Thanks for reading

Wow! Now that was very hot. I love how you have Kathy as a transfer student so it's not someone Severus watched grow up. That definitely adds to it Gret job. :D

This was really good story.  A great way to put the prompt #36 into words.

This one was really fun. I liked the suggestive words between them, and the dancing/career choice thing. As much as I don't care for OC's/Mary Sue's, it is entertaining to read when written on purpose. Good job with the prompt.  =)

not bad, sexy and funny all wrapped up in the one parcel.

Oh all of that naughty talk with the double meanings!! thoes sneaky slytherins. Thank you mystery author

 The lap dancing seemed a little cheesey, but her internal dialogue and the line 'I hope my breath doesn't smell like mashed potatoes' were fantastic! I don't normally read fics w/ OFC but this rocked...can't wait to find out who you are so I can read more of your stuff. Good job.

Ho ho ho! Or Ou la la... I relaly like this, but it simply can't be a one-shot! Not just before it got Hot!  *checks story index*  Not here... There has to be more... *checks again*  Ok, maybe if I beg really nice we get to see more? hint hint...

Best written Mary Sue I've seen in a long time. She had all the MS-y qualities that made me want to smack her and smack him for falling for it and smack her again just because. :p

You certainly did the prompt justice. :D

i liked it, good job!

Since my name is the same as the OFC I had no trouble putting myself in her place.  Thanks for making me smile !

Lovely. I think you did a great job. And lots of room for a sequel (hint, hint!)