New Chapter for Revival
Revival
potionmastersmistress76 Reviews | 6.13/10 (76 Ratings, 0 Likes, 14 Favorites )
Snape is alive – only he doesn't believe it. He lays in a deep coma at St. Mungo's, his mind locked in an afterlife of his own making. Occlumency shields prevented the best mind healers from intervening. He's considered a hopeless case – but there's this irritating know-it-all with a crazy shaman trance plan and a boy-who-just-won't-bugger-off.
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Simplistic and complex. Forever a contradiction.
P.S. I hate biography sections!!!
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~prod~ More please??
good imagery!
lmao!!! omg hahahaha
I love this. hahaha
Oh, that was an intense ritual there! I can't wait to see what happens when Hermione wakes up. Your story is so entertaining.
Oh this was fun! From the opening to Hermione's response... priceless. "His troublemaking father would have been so proud." indeed.
I like how you mix in that thread with his introspection and deeper thoughts.
I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story!
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Thank you so much!!!! <3<3<3 I really appreciate you taking the time to review again! I hope that the fourth chapter gets through the queue soon so you can read on! Hugs and snark :D
Ah hah, not completely nude after all. Oh well. Maybe later. Wow is Hermione frustrated with Harry, but hey, coming so close and then thinking you've failed... hard on both of them. I like how that conversation shows some of the dynamics of their relationship but even more, it shows how committed both of them are to helping Snape. Then the history... I'm glad you gave us that. I like your Ginny. Nice last line!
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Not entirely nude, but pretty darn close! Thank you for taking the time to leave me another lovely review! And as you read, I'm sure you'll notice that I have a tendency to leave the end of a chapter on a high note :D. And I just felt that the history was needed--we have to know how they all got to be living in Snape's home! I hope you enjoy the third chapter, and the fourth should be up by tomorrow, as I sent it to the mods. Hugs and snark! <3
Wow, that's terrifying. Locked in his own mind, not knowing what was on the other side... Awful. I wonder how much time has passed, especially that he didn't recognize Hermione - or could she have changed that much in one year.
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
I'll post a timeline in Chapter Five to avoid any confusion for anyone. It hasn't been that long, but as you can guess, she is dressed in quite a different manner than Severus would ever see her in, hehe. Hope you enjoy the other chapters as well, and they should answer a bit of your questions! <3<3<3 Thank you soo much for reviewing! :D
love the way you write severus' internal dialogue. i'm panting to see how this continues (and ends). thanks so much!
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Thank you so much! It can be a bit daunting, trying to write the internal dialogue of such a beloved and complex man, but I am grateful and honored that you love my style! Chapter Four has been sent off to the mods, it's quite a bit longer (about four times!!!) and I hope you enjoy it. Here's a bit of water, dear, for your panting! teehee!!!! <3<3<3<3<3 Hugs and Snape for you!
Great story with wonderful humour. Theese are Hermione and Severus I like. :-)
And those strong accents at the end of each chapter... butterbeer to You! :-D
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Mmm... Butterbeer! :D 'm glad you enjoy my take on the characters and my fun little endings. It's something I love to do, It's just so much fun! Thank you for you fantastic review!!!!!! <3<3<3<3<3<3
Interesting story. Severus' little internal dialog is quite intertaining. I am looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Thank you so much! Chapter four should be up sometime tomorrow, I think! <3
I'm going to add this story to my favorites,You write very good,it almost fells as if i'm there.
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Thank you, I am honored to think that this story is a favorite of yours! I try to bring my readers in, and I am so glad that I have succeeded in your case! Hugs and Snape for you, darling! <3<3<3<3<3<3
I can't wait to see what Severus has to think about the latest turn of events!Ron acts like such a baby!But we all must remember hes always behind everyone else brain wise.
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Thank you for another review! <3 Believe me, I don't drink hater-ade when I think of Ronald. But in all honesty, he would not have stuck around and tried to help Snape. He really didn't have anything invested in the situation, except for being near Hermoine. I believe the call to fame and money, the glory and the women, would have changed him a bit. One thing Ron seems to be, even in canon to me, is kind of a chameleon. He wants to fit in, be cool, be rich... I respect Ron, but this is just the way my muse has taken me, I'm afraid! :D
I loved this chapter and at the end I laughed my head off! I know the next will be even better.
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Thank you so so much! I love funny little explosive endings hehe! <3
That was a brilliant chapter!It is quite interesting to get Severus' point of view. I wonder how long before Hermione realises he can hear everything?
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Yes, it's fun to write his POV. I get rather snarky with the people who bother me while I write him lol. Ahh, and when will she realize it? My darling reader, it won't be long! :D
That was hilarious, that there at the end. And I'd wanted to see what Severus was thinking about all this, and I was quite satisfied with what you showed him thinking. I loved how he analyzed everything and had thoughts that show his admiration of and attraction to Hermione. I also liked that line about being drawn in by a person's power, by Lily, Lucius, Voldemort, and Albus. I don't think I've ever seen it put quite that way before. Great story so far.
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
My beta adored that line about power as well, and I was rather shocked when I proof-read my own chapter--I admit it, it is my favorite line so far! Except for maybe hermione implying harry defeated Voldemort with his cock...teehee :D And I know a lot of people might have expect Severus to be totally pissed off, but lets face it, things are different now that he knows Voldemort is gone. But like you noticed, giving into appreciation and attraction isn't exactly easy for him to do. Chapter Four will be sent off to queue after I answer my reviews, because my awesome beta is super fast! Thank you again for all of you terrific feedback, it's really what can keep an author going with a story. You get lots of hearts! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
I can't wait to what Severus is thinking about all this. I was wondering what would be going on in his mind after their almost-successful attempt to revive him. It was good to see that Hermione had realized that Ron would never understand her and to see her break it off. I could definitely see Harry being so invested in finding a way to help Snape. His anger didn't surprise me, although I felt bad for the sake of their history and friendships.
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
I love your reactions to the chapters! It was a bit sad writing the break in the friendship, but I think in my story it was much needed. And I don't think Ron is all bad, but I don't think he could have stayed around on a selfless quest in that tiny little home. Thank you so much for the terrific review! Hugs and snark for you!!!! <3<3<3
I am so excited to see that this prompt has been written. When I read it, I thought it'd be interesting and also unique. I am enjoying it so far. I liked have insight into Severus' thought processes during all of that.
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Thank you so much!!! :D The prompt just jumped at me and I really liked the room it would give me as an author. I thought, what fun it would be for Severus to be off of his kilter, forced into a ridiculous situation! I'm glad it grabbed you and you liked it so much <3<3
Hahaha... I was wondering about this story... glad you updated. Looking forward to reading more.
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
I'm glad to see I hadn't lost you! As soon as my beta emails Chapter Four back, it'll be sent right off! Thank you so much for your glowing review, it means a whole lot to me :D <3<3<3<3
Hahaha, what a fun chapter!
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Thank you very much! :D I do love writing Hermione's humorous little outbursts. Hugs and snark! <3
nice to see an update to this, and especially nice since we get to see inside snape's head. i wonder when hermione will figure out snape can hear. soon, i hope!
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Hmm... I wonder... :D Thank you for your lovely review, and for sticking with the story! I hope that the content of this chapter made up for it's length!
ROFL! That's just great. What a wonderful update!
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Thank you so much! <3<3 I know it was a bit short, but Chapter Four (which my beta has now) is over twice as long to make up for it! I'm so glad you liked it! :D
Hmmm. tht seemed like a Freudian slip to me. Cant wait to see how Severus reacts when he sees all the people he professes to hate have invaded his home!
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Yes indeed, a rather frilly Freudian slip! Chapter Three is up! Four is on the way! Thanks sooo much for reviewing! <3<3
I can see Severus prefering to die rather than see a naked Harry!!
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Yes, as can I! :D Thank you for reviewing! <3<3<3
ohhhh, yes yes yes! love this story and the images of harry and hermione drumming and dancing!! thanks and i look forward to more!
Response from potionmastersmistress (Author of Revival)
Thank you! I'm so pleased to have pleased you enough to get that orgasmic exclamation out of you!!! And I just updated Chapter Three, and Chapter Four has been sent off to my beta!