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Loss
sweetflag4 Reviews | 10.0/10 (4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )
Severus suffers the anguish of losing Lily for the third and last time.
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Member Since 2007 | 27 Stories | Favorited by 35 | 180 Reviews Written | 1,104 Review Responses
Hello. I love reading and writing... what more can I say?
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i'm always a sucker for a sad snilly, and you did a good job with this one. i think you did a nice job of getting inside his head.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Loss)
Thank you for the review and the rating. It took me a few moments to realise what 'snilly' meant... lol. The poem helped to set the scene and direct his thinking... at least, if I interperted the poem correctly. I enjoyed writing this short story, and I am glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you.
wow. my dear that was perhaps the best Snape i have ever read!! you have an amazing talent i can totally picture Snape reacting like that. *sniffles* that was so sad. Lilly shouldnt have left Snape...
Response from sweetflag (Author of Loss)
Thank you so much... I can't believe how generous people have been! I admit to a sniffle or two while writing it... and I am surprised by the response. It was really only written in response to a challenge as an exercise to try to improve on my floundering attempts... I am still grinning! My beta needs thanking too, her patience and advice have polished my potential submissions into something that is, hopefully, worthy. Thank you again, such reviews make me think that a hobby can be so much more.
so sweet and beautifully written I feel Severus pain clearly. This is why we love him so much because he is such an enigma.....
Response from sweetflag (Author of Loss)
Thank you. I am so thrilled that this story has been so well received; in fact, glowing would be a good word to use. I feel slightly more confident, and certainly feel as though writing is something that I could have a good stab at. I enjoyed responding to this challenge, and I am happy that you enjoyed the result.
What a wonderfully sad story. The imagery was fantastic, and it made my heart hurt for our dear Potions' Master.*sigh*GG
Response from sweetflag (Author of Loss)
I am overwhelmed... thank you so much for the wonderful review. I can't say how much I appreciate your words... I even have stars! Thank you.