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LaiksMarei

10 Reviews | 5.8/10 (10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )

Romance Snapshot compliant post-DH/DH Weasley's Wizarding Wheezes 1,194 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Charlie Weasley Hermione Granger

Sometimes understanding can be found where you least expect it.

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Chapter 1: Beginnings

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LaiksMarei

Member Since 2006 | 7 Stories | Favorited by 19 | 86 Reviews Written | 112 Review Responses

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10/10

My favorite part is “Right. I saw you slip away from everyone after refusing Mum’s best pudding. Figured I’d better make sure you hadn’t gone completely barking,” What a beautiful begining to their relationship. It seems I like the idea of Charlie and Hermione. Have you been following the story Bambu & Tales of Snape are writing with HG/CW? Much fun.

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Beginnings)

Thank you, ma'am! I am glad you enjoyed it.This was written for a Hermione-centric exchange last summer. I had a wonderful time with it. It was meant to be a multi-chaptered monster (the outline was huge!), but time got away from me. This taste of their beginning was what came instead.Have you been following the story Bambu & Tales of Snape are writing with HG/CW? Much fun.Of course!

10/10

That new line you wrote for Charlie is perfect!!! I like how you leave this with lots of potential but not overdone on romance.

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Beginnings)

*big grins* I am so glad you liked it. I added it at the last minute after a nudge from Jane in that direction.

0/10

Nicely paced love the way you ease your reader in. Keep writing I like your style.

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Beginnings)

Thank you so very much. I wanted to make this as believable as possible.

0/10

Oh ... lovely!

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Beginnings)

Thank you! :)

0/10

I vastly prefer this pairing to Ron/Hermione. Nicely started, now, let's see the middles and the endings...

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Beginnings)

Try as I might, I have never been able to read or write Romione (and I am pretty open-minded). I wanted this little jaunt to give us a taste of the possibilities betwwen them.Thank you for reading and reviewing!

10/10

This was fabulous, dearest! Lovely imagery, beautiful phrasing, and a tender storyline. I love it. Well done!

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Beginnings)

*giggles*Thanks a million for reading and reviewing. I am so pleased you liked it.

8/10

I enjoyed this fic when I got to read it the first time. Rereading it has also been a treat. I've enjoyed how you made Charlie so compassionate, and Hermione ... well, she needy, but not in the sense it's usually meant.Well done. :-)

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Beginnings)

Thank you, my dear friend. You always bring out the best in me when I write.

10/10

This is lovely, darlin! Sweet, gentle, and evocative of summer nights and sexy Seekers. *happy sigh*

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Beginnings)

While I am utterly thrilled that you have read and reviewed my little story, another part of me wants to quirk my eyebrow and say, 'Who are you and what have done with

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Beginnings)

?' lolThank you for your kind words and for taking the time to read it. :)

10/10

Wow. This was beautiful. So emotional, yet ends on a hopeful note. I love it!

0/10

I think you should write more charlie/hermione. :)

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