The Dream
Chapter 4 of 6
FerencThe Second War is in a stalemate. After drastic reforms, the Ministry has only just managed to keep pace with the Dark Lord’s followers.
Scrimgeour is still firmly in the Ministry’s chief seat, yet an unrelenting obsession and almost unlimited authority have transformed him into a relentless tyrant.
Against a background of Wizarding society’s slow decent into anarchy, small bands of Aurors try to stop the flood of Death Eaters and their vile allies. One such band or Aurors —the Order of the Phoenix commanded by Harry Potter— is send on a confidential mission as the armies of the Ministry and Lord Voldemort meet…
ReviewedHarry opened his eyes.
The sun blazed directly overhead. He lifted a hand to shield himself from the light and, blinking, slowly rose to a standing position. The carpet of lush sward felt springy underfoot.
Before him stood a distant range of softly rolling hills. Above them, pure-white clouds drifted serenely across a sky of flawless blue. The landscape was verdant, uncorrupted. It somehow reminded Harry of Mrs. Weasley's garden.
Off to his right the view was dominated by the brim of an immense forest. On his left a shallow stream flowed down an incline before curving around a bend and out of sight.
It occurred to Harry to wonder, in an abstract sort of way, what had happened to the night. And he had no idea where the others of the Order might be. But these questions did not more than mildly stroke some small corner of his mind.
Then it seemed to him that he could hear other sounds beyond the tumbling water. Sounds resembling voices, laughter, and the faint, rhythmic pounding of a drum. Their source was either in his head or at a brook's destination.
He followed the stream, walking in it, his boots crunching on the shingle washed smooth by its endless polishing. His sloshing descent inspired rustling in the undergrowth on either side as tiny, furtive creatures darted from his path.
A pleasantly warm breeze caressed his face. The air was fresh and clean. It made him feel light-headed.
He reached the point where the rivulet turned. The voices were louder, more distinct, as he rounded the creek.
Before him was the mouth of a small valley. The stream ran on, snaking through a cluster of wooden houses. Most of them looked very unusual. Some of them had the shape of a diamond, balancing on the very tip of its end. Others were oval, and some had shapes that Harry did not even know how to name. Almost all of them seemed to be kept up by magic, like the Weasleys' house.
There were tethered Thestrals, roaming livestock, and strutting fowl.
And wizards.
Wizards, witches, hatchlings. Some carried out chores, and others simply lounged, watching, talking. In the clearing outside the diamond-shaped house, a group of young wizards sparred with wands and staffs, the beating of a hide tambour harmonizing their mock dueling.
No one paid him any particular attention as he entered the settlement. All the wizards he saw bore wands, as was only fitting for their kind, but despite this group being unknown to him, Harry didn't feel threatened. Just curious.
Someone came towards him. She strode with easy confidence and made no move for the wand hanging at her belt. He judged her to be a head shorter than himself, though her flaming crimson headdress, shot through with streaks of gold, made up for the height. Her back was straight, her figure attractive.
She showed no surprise at his presence. Indeed her expression was almost passive or at least as passive as a face so beautiful and active could be. As she neared him, she smiled openly and with warmth. He was aware of a faint stirring in his loins.
'Hello,' she said.
Reflecting on her comeliness, he did not immediately respond. When he replied, it was hesitantly. 'Hello ... yourself.'
'I don't know you.'
'Nor I you.'
She asked, 'What village are you from?'
He told her.
'It means nothing to me. But there are so many.'
Harry glanced at the unfamiliar shapes of the buildings. 'Your village isn't known to me either.' He paused, captivated by her fetching eyes, before adding, 'Aren't you wary of greeting a stranger?'
She looked puzzled. 'Should I be? Is there a dispute between our villages?'
'Not that I know of.'
She flashed her appealing, white smile again. 'Then there is no need for caution. Unless you come with evil intent.'
'No, I come in peace. But would you be as welcoming if I were a troll? Or a goblin? Or a giant of unknown allegiance?'
Her mystified look returned. 'Troll? goblin? giant? What are they?'
'You do not know of goblins?'
She shook her head.
'Or gremlins, dwarfs, elves? Any other races?
'Other races? No.'
'Or ... Muggles?'
'I don't know what they are, but I'm sure there aren't any.'
'You mean there aren't any non-magic people?'
'I mean that your words are lost on me. You're odd.' She spoke without malice, but laughter ran across her delicate lips.
'And you speak in riddles,' he told her. 'Where are we in England that you do not know of the other races or of Muggles?'
'You must have journeyed a long way, stranger, if your land has a name I've never heard of.'
He was taken aback. 'Are you telling me you don't even know what this country is called?'
'No, I'm telling you it isn't called England. At least, not here. And I've never known another magician who spoke of us sharing it with these ... other races and ... Muggles.'
'You mean there is no war here? There are no Death Eaters or...'
She laughed. 'When was it otherwise?'
Harry furrowed his brow. 'Since before my dad was born, there has always been some dark wizard around,' he muttered. 'Or so I thought.'
'Perhaps you've walked too long in the heat,' she offered gently.
He gazed at the sun, and realization came to him. 'The heat ... No chill wind blows.'
'Why should it? This isn't the cold season.'
'And the fog,' Harry continued, ignoring her answer. 'I haven't seen the fog.'
'What fog?'
'From the Dementors, of course.'
Unexpectedly, she reached out and grasped his hand. 'Come.'
Even in his confusion he was aware that her touch was agreeably warm and soft. He allowed her to lead him.
They followed the downward path of the stream until they left the village behind. Eventually they came to a place where the land fell away, and Harry and the young woman stood on the edge of a granite cliff. Here the stream became a pool, slipping from its far lip as a waterfall, a foamy cascade that plunged to rocks far below in a greater valley. The silver thread of a river emerged from somewhere at the foot of the cliff, slicing across olive plains that stretched endlessly in all directions. Only the tremendous forest to their right curbed the ocean of grassland.
The young woman spread her arms and made an all encompassing gesture. 'There is no one else here, just us magicians,' she said.
Harry looked around himself. No dying trees, no looming slate sky. All he saw was more of the same: luxuriant foliage, an infinity of green, a thriving abundance of life.
Harry experienced a strange emotion. He could not explain why, but he had a nagging sensation that all this was somehow familiar, as though he had seen these wondrous sights and breathed deep of this unsullied air before.
'Is this ... Heaven?' He all but whispered the last word.
'Paradise?' She smiled enigmatically. 'Perhaps. If you choose to make it so.'
The alchemy of sunlight and airborne spray birthed an arcing rainbow. They silently marveled at its multicoloured splendor. And the soothing rush of water was balm to Harry's troubled spirit.
Harry opened his eyes.
Seamus was pissing into the ashes of the fire.
Harry snapped fully awake. Still muzzy from the dream, vision, or whatever it was, it took a moment for Harry to realize that the sun had risen. It was past dawn.
'Merlin's beard!' he cursed, scrambling to his feet.
He checked his belt for the cylinder, then quickly took in the scene. Hermione and Neville were unsteadily exploring wakefulness, but the rest, including the lookouts he'd posted, lounged all over the hill.
From the end of his wand, Harry exploded several purple firecrackers to wake everybody up.
Some startled from the sudden loud noise. Several came alive with wands in their hands, ready for a fight, then cowered on recognizing the source of the noise. Draco was among them, but less inclined to quail at his Commander's rage. He scowled, returning his wand to his belt with deliberate, insolent slowness.
'What ails you, Potter?' he rumbled sullenly.
'What ails me? The new day ails me, you idiot!' He jabbed a thumb skyward. 'The sun climbs and we're still here!'
'And whose fault is that?'
Harry's eyes narrowed dangerously. He moved closer to Draco, near enough to feel his fetid breath against his face.
'What?' He hissed.
'You blame us. Yet you're in charge.'
'You'd like to try changing that, wouldn't you?'
The other Order of the Phoenix members were gathering around them. At a distance.
Draco held Harry's gaze. His hand edged to his wand.
'Harry!'
Hermione was elbowing the Order members aside, Luna and Ron in tow.
'We don't have time for this,' she said sternly.
Harry and Draco paid her no heed.
'The Minister, Harry,' Ron put in. 'We have to get back to the Ministry. Scrimgeour...'
Mention of his name broke the spell.
'I know, Ron!' Harry barked. He gave Draco a last, contemptuous look and turned away from him.
Sullenly, Draco backed off, directing a venomous glare at Ron by way of compensation.
Harry addressed the Order. 'We'll fly to London immediately. Ron, Neville, Ginny, round up the Thestrals. Make sure all the equipment is secured. Draco, Collin, make sure we don't leave any traces. Luna, Hermione, you two divide the Floo Powder equally among the Thestrals. Move!'
They all dispersed to carry out their orders.
Harry cursed again. They should have reported to Scrimgeour hours ago
They let behind the small village, and the trampled, deserted battlefield beneath it, and headed south-east. The Thestrals could only fly about sixty feat above the surface, for fear of more dragons. Here and there some of the freed Hippogriffs lingered. Some flew with them for a while, as if to give then an honorary escort in thanks of their regained freedom.
Flying beside Harry at the head of the column, Ginny indicated the magnificent animals and said, 'Don't you envy them?'
'What, Hippogriffs?'
'They're freer than us.'
The remark surprised him. It was the first time she'd made any comment, even indirectly, that referred to the situation the Order had been reduced to. But he restricted the temptation to agree with her. These days a wizard or witch did well not to speak too freely. Opinions had a way of reaching unintended ears.
He kept his response to a noncommittal snort.
Ginny regarded him with expression of curiosity and dropped the subject. They flew on in grim silence, maintaining as rapid a pace as they could, scanning the sky and the ground for Death Eater activity.
At midday they reached the outskirts of London. The Thestrals landed and continued on foot. They took a route through an old, partly abandoned industrial area. Nobody had worked here for a long time. Old, abandoned metal production factories and storage halls lined up next to the constricted roads. They could not ride more than two abreast. Most took it single-file. Careful not to be detected, they slowed down to a trot.
Frustrated at the delay, Harry cursed. 'We have to move faster than this!'
'Using any other route means going through Muggle suburbs,' Ginny reminded him. 'We cannot risk detection, not with what we're carrying.'
'Every passing minute is going to sour Scrimgeour's mood.'
'We've got what he wanted and a cargo of Floo Powder as bonus. Doesn't that stand for something?'
'With Scrimgeour? I think you know the answer to that, Ginny.'
'We can say we ran into strong opposition or had trouble finding the cylinder.'
'No matter the story we tell, we aren't there. That's enough.' Harry shivered. Wrapping himself in his Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Protection Cloak, he glanced over his shoulder. The others were far enough behind to be out of earshot. 'I wouldn't admit this to everybody,' he confided in a hushed tone, 'but Draco was right, blast his eyes. I let this happen.'
Ginny looked cold as well. She shivered slightly, goose bumps appearing on her arms.
'Don't be too hard on yourself. We all...'
'Wait! Ahead!'
Something was coming towards them from the opposite end of the road. Harry could not see it, but he could feel a presence. Something radiating sickness, cold and despair.
Harry held up a hand, halting the column. He squinted, trying to identify the small, black dots that were moving their way.
Down the line, Ron passed his the reins to Hermione and dismounted. He jogged to Harry. 'What is it, mate?' he asked.
'I'm not sure...' Then he recognized the eerie cold feeling. 'Bloody hell! Dementors!'
Floating towards them from the far end of the street was a wall of the black-hooded creatures. More and more came into view.
'Ambush!' Ron yelled.
Other voices were raised along the column. Neville pointed upwards. More Dementors were sweeping in from above. Standing in his saddle, Harry saw more of the creatures pouring in to block their exit.
'Classic trap.' He snarled.
Ginny drew her wand. 'And we walked right into it.'
The penetrating cold became stronger. Their surroundings seemed to become darker. Thestrals reared. Some of them spread their wings in a panicked way.
Everybody drew their wands and turned to face the enemy on every side.
Half befuddled from the alcohol of the night before, the Order were outnumbered with barely room to maneuver. Spreading their arms, the Dementors glided in for the attack.
Harry's mind went blank. He was furiously looking for that happy thought.
He could hear their long, hoarse, rattling breath.
Then the first wave was on them.
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Excellent story. Good, solid battle scenes are a rarity in this fandom, I'm glad to see someone writing it. Your version of Harry's world has me hooked too. You've set up some background that should really make for an interesting story as the plot progresses. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Response from Ferenc (Author of The Phoenix Command)
Thank you very much. There is much more duelling in store, and not only against wizards and witches. I hope you will enjoy the second chapter as well. Your servant,Ferenc
Hi! I was following this fic on another site, but I think it had a different title -- am I right? I think you were up to about 15 chapters or so, but I can't now recall where you were posting it. In any case I'm happy to see it here!
Response from Ferenc (Author of The Phoenix Command)
Hello! It’s true that my fic used to be on Mugglenet, but the moderators here are just as helpful but much more skillful and open minded about certain issues I’m dealing with in my fic. The general story will remain the same, though, but with a little extra spice here and there, and I hope you’ll enjoy the absence of the many typo’s as well.